Unit 7 Section B 1a-1d Writing 课件2025-2026学年人教版（2012）九年级英语全册

Writing Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. 1. Be able to talk about family rules . 2. Be able to know how to write a passage. Learning Objects Lead in I can’t____________________./ I am not allowed to_________ . drive What are the rules? watch TV play computer games use my mobile phone I can’t____________________./ I am not allowed to_________ . listen to music read books I can____________________./ I am allowed to_________ . I am asked to ___________. do homework sweep the floor family rules watch TV play computer games finish homework on time eat junk food stay up hang out with friend use mobile phones I can.../ I can’t ... I am not allowed to ... I am allowed to ... I am asked to ... Share your family rules. Do you agree with your family rules? Why? talk back make an agreement What if you disagree with some of the rules? Discussion No rules, no games. 无规矩，不成方圆。 Respect the rules, and they will respect you. 尊重规则，规则便会尊重你 What rules Why you agree or disagree How the rule should be changed can’t play computer games Agree ·pay less attention on study · be bad for eyes and health · may not be able to go to university can’t watch TV Disagree not all TV programs are bad for students need to relax sometimes ... I should be allowed to watch TV for 2 hours on weekends do housework Agree develop good habits look after themselves understand parents. 3a Communicate with them, explain oueselves reasonably and clearly. 3b Write a diary entry explaining which rule(s) you do not agree with at home and how you think the rule(s) should be changed. 审（体裁、人称、时态） 理（结构） 扩（拓展要点） 连（用过渡词、句连接句子和段落） 查（单词拼写、时态、主谓一致） 评（互评） How should we start the writing to tell opinions? Writing steps: Question Review审 The first step 审题 Style Tense Grammar Person Key points A diary entry Simple present tense, simple future tense Passive voice with modal verbs The first person(I), the third person (they) Rule(s) at home Manage理 opinion reasons explanations OREO opinion The rules you agree with. I like the rules that… Some rules are good for me… The rule is great because… The rules you disagree with. I do not agree with the rule that… I do not agree that… I do not think that… Expand扩 表因果 so, for, because 并列型 and, also, firstly , secondly , thirdly 比较型 as...as, than 归纳型 in a word, in the end, at last, finally all in all 举例型 for example, such as, and so on 转折型 however, but, though, although Connect连：Transitional words Check查 语态、时态要准确无误。 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 注意人称代词的宾格形式。 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。 My Family Rules There are many rules in my family. I like some rules because they are helpful. For example, I have to clean my bedroom every day. I agree with it. Because it is comfortable and relaxing for us to sleep in a clean bedroom. Besides, helping mother do chores makes her happy. However, there is one terrible rule which makes me unhappy. I am not allowed to watch TV before finishing my homework on weekdays.I disagree with it. In my opinion,I think I should be allowed to watch TV for a while when I get home.It could be easier for me to pay attention to my homework if I can relax myself. All in all, my parents make these rules to help me be better, but some of my family rules are too strict. I think they should be changed! Sample Writing tips Pay attention to the structure. Beginning—Family rules you disagree Body—Why you disagree Ending -- How it should be changed Try to make sentences differently. I think I should be allowed to … I would like to … I could … if … I do not agree with the idea that … Try to use some linking words First; next; however; what’s more; in a word; all in all … Summary Evaluate评 Evaluation chart Assessment Criteria(评价维度) Rating(1-5,5=Best)评分 （1-5分，5分为最佳） Content&Theme (内容与主题) Clear theme, sufficient details （主题明确，细节充分） Structure&Coherence (结构与连贯性) Logical organization,smooth transition （结构清晰，过度自然） Language Use (语言运用) Accurate vocabulary,correct grammar) （词汇准确，语法正确） Writing Skills（写作技巧） Approprivate sentence variety, neat handwriting （句式多样，书写工整） Homework Writing Write a passage about the rules at school. What things should not be allowed to do? What things should be allowed to do? $