内容正文:
广西
英 语
写作册
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第三部分 写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别四 做法建议类(6年4考)
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常见题目表述
①▶人与自我:恰当的学习方法与策略◀假设你是李华,你的英
国笔友Peter上次发邮件询问你如何学习英语。请你根据以下提
示给他回一封邮件,分享你的英语学习方法。内容包括:
1.记忆单词的方法(如制作单词卡片);
2.提高听力的方法(如听英语歌曲、看英语电影);
3.练习口语的方法(如参加英语角、和同学对话);
4.你的建议。
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②▶人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升◀本周你班将举
行一次班会,主题为“How to Develop Our Independence”。请
根据提示写一篇发言稿,谈谈你的看法。
Ways Things we
can do Ways Things we
can do
begin with
our own
things clean our
own rooms,… share housework cook,…
learn actively learn by
ourselves,… think about things
by ourselves …
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③▶人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活◀为缓解学习压力,
放松心情,本月底学校将举办一次户外活动。为了更好地开展这
次活动,校英语社团正在向同学们征集意见。假设你是李华,请
写一篇短文投稿,介绍你喜欢的户外活动。内容包括:
1.What outdoor activities do you like?
2.Why do you like them?
3.How do you arrange(安排) it? (When, Where,
What to do…, How to get there…)
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④▶人与自我:劳动实践,劳动品质与工匠精神◀在我们校园的
一隅,藏着一片充满生机与活力的菜园基地,那就是深受师生喜
爱的校园菜园基地。它不仅是校园里一道独特的风景线,更是同
学们亲近自然、实践学习、收获成长的重要场所。校英文报正在
以“School Vegetable Garden”为主题进行征稿,请你谈谈菜园
基地的概况。内容包括:
1.位置(靠近操场等);
2.你在菜园基地的活动(种菜、浇水等);
3.菜园基地的意义(学习农事技能、培养劳动习惯等)。
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高分模板
Dear ____,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on
how to ____(引出对方需要建议的话题).
Here are some suggestions. First, it is important to ____
(建议①). Then, it also helps to ____(建议②). Besides,
it should be a good idea to ____(建议③). You can also
____(建议④). As to ____(具体到某一方面), I suggest
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____(具体到某一方面的建议). In addition, ____(其他的建
议). I’m sure ____(预测可能出现的结果,给对方信心和决
心).
I hope ____(表达愿望). I’m looking forward to
hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua#1.5
优秀范文记背
Passage 1#1
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:
表明写作意
图,引出培
养独立性的
必要性 Hello, everyone! Now our parents do too many things for us. Hello, everyone!
Now our parents help
us do too many things.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:
表明写作意
图,引出培
养独立性的
必要性 This makes us
depend on them a
lot. So it’s necessary
for us to learn to be
independent. Here
are some ways. That makes us depend
on them too much. So
it’s necessary for us to
develop our independence. Here are some ways.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体阐述
写作内容。从自
身事、家务、主
动学习、独立思
考几方面说明培
养独立性的方法 First, start
with our own
things. We should
clean our rooms
and make the bed. First of all, let’s
begin with our own
things. It’s our duty to
clean our own rooms
and make the bed.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体阐述
写作内容。从自
身事、家务、主
动学习、独立思
考几方面说明培
养独立性的方法 Second, share the
housework. We
can help cook or
clean when we’re
free. It teaches us
to look after
ourselves. Second, share the
housework. We can
help cook or clean the
house in our free time.
Doing housework
teaches us how to look
after ourselves.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体阐述
写作内容。从自
身事、家务、主
动学习、独立思
考几方面说明培
养独立性的方法 Third, learn
actively. Study by
ourselves and
finish homework
on time. Third, learn actively.
We should learn by
ourselves and finish
our homework on
time.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体阐述
写作内容。从自
身事、家务、主
动学习、独立思
考几方面说明培
养独立性的方法 Finally, think
alone. Sometimes
we should make
plans or decisions
by ourselves. Don’t
always rely on
others. Finally, think about
things by ourselves.
We sometimes need to
make plans or
decisions on our own.
Don’t always depend
on others.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:书写结
语,表达期望 I think that if
we keep doing
these things, we’ll
become more
independent. I think that if we
keep on doing these
things, we’ll become
more and more
independent.
续表
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Passage 2#2
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:
表明写作
意图,引
入主题 Dear David,
I’m excited to
know you like our
school vegetable
garden. Let me tell
you about it. Dear David,
I’m really excited to
hear that you’re interested in our school vegetable garden, so I’d like to introduce it to you.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体
描述学校
菜园基地
的位置、
活动和
意义 Our school built
this garden near the
playground two years
ago. We do many
things there. Our school vegetable
garden was built near
the playground two years
ago. There are many
activities we can take
part in there:
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体
描述学校菜
园基地的位
置、活动和
意义 We plant different
vegetables. Then we
work with
classmates to water
and look after
them. we plant various types of
vegetables first, and then
work with my classmates
to water them and take
good care of them.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体
描述学校菜
园基地的位
置、活动和
意义 We get lots of
vegetables, like
tomatoes and
potatoes. It’s a bit
tiring, but we all
like it. Later, we can harvest
plenty of vegetables, such
as tomatoes and potatoes.
Though we may feel a bit
tired, all of us enjoy the
process.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:总
结全文,
表达感受 We learn
farming skills here.
Planting vegetables
also helps us get into
the habit of working. From this garden,
we’ve learned some useful
farming skills.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:总
结全文,
表达感受 It’s good for us
students.
Yours,
Li Hua What’s more, planting
vegetables helps us form
the habit of laboring,
which is very beneficial to
our growth.
Yours,
Li Hua
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