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标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 辽宁名校联盟高三联考11月Z老师定制 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Julie twirled in her white ballet costume. She couldn't believe, at 40, she was going to fulfil her dream of becoming a ballerina in tonight's show. Tying her ballet shoe ribbons(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she remembered that moment. When she was 11, she'd been fascinated by the graceful dancing and beautiful costumes in Swan Lake on TV. So she had decided to be a ballerina instead of a nurse when she grew up. Back then, her mum shook her head, “Sorry, love, we can't afford ballet lessons(伏笔).” Julie tasted disappointment. Next day, she peeked through the window of the local dance school and tried to follow the routines. But without a pole to hold on to, she fell over and hurt her knees(增加人物的冲突感). She struggled to get up and continued to copy the girls(刻画人物), stretching her arms in an arc(现在分词短语做伴随动作). She noticed Kirsty from her school in the class, “Will you teach me?” Julie begged. Kirsty blinked, “I'm not sure I'll remember the steps when the teacher isn't showing us what to do.” It turned out Kirsty was a hopeless teacher. But the girls giggled and became firm friends. Afterwards, they often practised in the park. Julie listened to ballet music in her bedroom every day, doing complex dance moves(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Julie, please turn down that music. It's giving me a sore head," her mum complained. Julie loved the music for the ballet. She couldn't understand how her mum didn't appreciate the emotions in it. Kirsty wasn't a fan either. “I'd rather listen to pop tunes. I asked grandma if you could take my lessons instead of me, but she said no. " Julie hugged her thoughtful friend, “Thanks for asking.” Kirsty pointed to a bruise on her arm(伏笔刻画人物),“Ballet may not help my clumsiness anyway," “What happened?" Julie asked, “I crashed into the piano at my ballet lesson”.They both burst out laughing. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Now, Julie peeked out behind the stage curtain and the theatre was full. Paragraph 2: Bowing at the end, she saw her family. 辽宁名校联盟高三联考11月Z老师定制 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Julie twirled (旋转) in her white ballet costume. She couldn't believe, at 40, she was going to fulfil her dream of becoming a ballerina in tonight's show. Tying her ballet shoe ribbons, she remembered that moment. When she was 11,she'd been fascinated by the graceful dancing and beautiful costumes in Swan Lake on TV, So she had decided to be a ballerina instead of a nurse when she grew up. Back then,her mum shook her head, “Sorry, love, we can't afford ballet lessons.” Julie tasted disappointment. Next day, she peeked (偷看) through the window of the local dance school and tried to follow the routines, But without a pole to hold on to, she fell over and hurt her knees, She struggled to get up and continued to copy the girls, stretching her arms in an arc (弧形)She noticed Kirsty from her school in the class, “Will you teach me?” Julie begged. Kirsty blinked, “I'm not sure I'll remember the steps when the teacher isn't showing us what to do.” It turned out Kirsty was a hopeless teacher, But the girls giggled and became firm friends. Afterwards, they often practised in the park, Julie listened to ballet music in her bedroom every day, doing complex dance moves, “Julie, please turn down that music. It's giving me a sore head," her mum complained, Julie loved the music for the ballet. She couldn't understand how her mum didn't appreciate the emotions in it, Kirsty wasn't a fan either,“I'd rather listen to pop tunes.I asked grandma if you could take my lessons instead of me, but she said no. " Julie hugged her thoughtful friend, “Thanks for asking. Kirsty pointed to a bruise(淤青)on her arm,“Ballet may not help my clumsiness(笨拙)anyway," “What happened?" Julie asked, “I crashed into the piano at my ballet lesson.They both burst out laughing. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Now, Julie peeked out behind the stage curtain and the theatre was full. Paragraph 2: Bowing at the end, she saw her family. 一、类型分析与构思思路 项目 内容 题材类型 个人成长励志/梦想实现类（梦想实现线 + 时间跨越线） 主题核心 追梦与坚持；友谊与感恩；圆梦与自我救赎 时间线结构 过去（童年追梦）→ 现在（40岁实现）→ 未来（圆梦后的情感升华） 情感线 童年的热爱与遗憾 → 友谊与坚持 → 现实的圆梦与感动 人物主线 Julie（主人公、追梦者）；Kirsty（童年好友、陪伴者）；母亲（阻力与温情并存） 续写重点任务 - 承接“Now, Julie peeked out…” 从上台前的紧张与回忆展开 - 体现梦想实现的情感高潮（表演时的投入与成长） - 结尾情感升华（看到家人、朋友→温情、感动、圆梦） 故事山结构（Story Mountain） ① 起因：童年梦想被现实阻碍 ② 发展：坚持练习、友情支持 ③ 高潮：40岁登台前的紧张期待 ④ 冲突解决：表演成功、获得家人认同 ⑤ 结尾：情感升华与梦想圆满 续写构思框架 第一段（表演前）：紧张+回忆+情感积蓄→上场 第二段（表演后）：表演成功→家人朋友感动→梦想圆满 二、续写衔接与原文分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 / 线索 人物刻画 Julie：执着、有梦想； 母亲：现实、爱女； Kirsty：友善、笨拙但真诚 “She had decided to be a ballerina...”“Sorry love, we can’t afford ballet lessons.” 情感层次 梦想 → 失落 → 坚持 → 感动与圆满 “Julie tasted disappointment.” / “She listened to ballet music every day.” 关键情节点 ① 童年立志 ② 受限无法上课 ③ 坚持自学 ④ 友情相伴 ⑤ 40岁圆梦 “She peeked through the window…” / “Now, Julie peeked out behind the curtain.” 语言特色 语言细腻、情感内敛；多用动作描写和内心独白 “She twirled in her white ballet costume.” / “She couldn’t believe...” 关键词分析 twirled, ballet, dream, disappointment, practice, friend, stage, bow 象征梦想、努力与实现 心理描写 梦想执念、紧张期待、自我肯定、感动落泪 “She couldn’t believe... she was going to fulfil her dream.” 动作描写 twirled, tied ribbons, peeked, fell, stretched arms, hugged, bowed “She peeked out behind the curtain…”（续写应延续舞台动作） 环境描写 儿时：窗外舞蹈学校、家中卧室、练习的公园 现在：剧院舞台、灯光、观众席 “Peeked through the window…” / “Now... the theatre was full.” 隐含主题 坚持梦想、时间不灭的热爱、亲情与友谊的温度 “At 40... fulfil her dream.” 情感转折 从遗憾→努力→紧张→感动→喜悦 续写应在表演时设置“情感爆发点” 空间转换 窗外→公园→舞台（从外部学习到自我实现） “Peeked through the window” → “Now, peeked out behind the stage curtain.” 时间过渡 童年回忆→成年舞台→当下实现 “She remembered that moment.” 伏笔处 她热爱音乐、痴迷舞蹈；朋友支持但无法帮助；母亲不理解 为“家人看演出感动”埋下伏笔 冲突点 家境贫困 → 无法学习 → 内心矛盾（母亲与梦想） “We can’t afford ballet lessons.” 隐含线索 音乐象征她的坚持；朋友象征支持；舞台象征圆梦 “She loved the music for the ballet.” 解决方案 以努力与时间弥补童年缺憾，通过舞台实现梦想与和解 续写中让母亲或好友出现在观众席 三、续写建议 段落一（Now, Julie peeked out behind the stage curtain...） 构思方向： 开头延续紧张心情与动作（peeked → twirled → deep breath） 内心独白（回忆童年梦碎片） 舞台氛围描写（灯光、观众席、音乐起） 情感转折点：下定决心走上舞台（“This was her moment.”） 句式技巧： 使用情感递进副词：nervously → softly → confidently 运用比喻：The music wrapped around her like an old friend. 段落二（Bowing at the end, she saw her family...） 构思方向： 表演完成后的心理描写（泪水、心跳） 观众掌声→母亲与朋友出现→情感升华 回忆与现实交叠：她仿佛又是那个小女孩 结尾点题：梦想不会过期，爱与坚持让她圆梦 结尾句示例： Tears blurred her eyes as she bowed again. After all those years, the little girl who once peeked through the window was finally dancing on her own stage. 四、续写技巧与注意事项 项目 注意点 衔接原文 保持语气一致（第三人称+细腻叙述） 呼应原文意象（window→curtain；peeked→bowed） 情感逻辑 回忆→紧张→表演→感动→升华 句法风格 多用短句与内心独白相间，语言自然不生硬 关键词延续 ballet, dream, music, light, stage, bow 结尾呼应开头 “peeked”与“bowed”形成结构对称，首尾呼应 避免 突兀加入新人物 / 夸张的奇迹式成功 / 脱离现实情节 五、动作环境心理描写 动作描写 She took a deep breath, trying to calm the butterflies in her stomach. 她深吸一口气，努力平复心中的紧张。 Her fingers trembled slightly as she adjusted the ribbon on her ballet shoes. 她在系芭蕾鞋带时，手指微微颤抖。 Julie stepped onto the stage, the spotlight wrapping her in a circle of warmth. 朱莉踏上舞台，聚光灯如温暖的光圈将她包围。 She lifted her arms gracefully, the music guiding every movement. 她优雅地举起双臂，音乐引领着她的每一个动作。 Her body swayed in rhythm, light as a feather. 她的身体随着节奏轻轻摆动，轻盈如羽。 She spun across the stage, every turn echoing her years of practice. 她在舞台上旋转，每一个转身都凝结着多年的坚持。 Her knees bent slightly as she landed, steady and composed. 她落地时膝盖微弯，姿态稳健而从容。 She bowed deeply, her chest rising and falling with excitement. 她深深鞠躬，胸口随着激动的呼吸起伏。 Tears welled up as she caught sight of her mother in the front row. 当她看到前排的母亲时，眼泪瞬间涌上眼眶。 She smiled through her tears, the applause washing over her like a wave. 她含泪微笑，掌声如潮水般涌来。 心理描写 Her heart raced like a drum before a battle. 她的心跳如战鼓般急促。 Doubt whispered in her mind, but the dream shouted louder. 疑虑在她脑海低语，但梦想的声音更为嘹亮。 She felt a surge of courage rising from deep within. 一股勇气从心底涌起。 Every note of the music carried her back to her childhood window. 每一个音符都把她带回童年那扇窗边。 For a moment, time seemed to stand still. 那一刻，时间仿佛静止。 She wondered if her younger self would be proud of her now. 她想，年少的自己此刻会不会为她骄傲。 Her heart ached with both joy and relief. 她的心同时被喜悦与释然填满。 She felt the years melt away, leaving only the girl who loved to dance. 岁月仿佛在那一刻融化，只剩那个热爱舞蹈的小女孩。 A sense of fulfilment replaced the long years of regret. 多年遗憾在这一刻化作圆满。 She realized that dreams don’t expire—they wait. 她明白了，梦想不会过期，只会等待。 环境描写 The theatre was bathed in golden light, the audience a sea of expectant faces. 剧院笼罩在金色灯光中，观众席是一片充满期待的面孔。 Soft music floated through the air like a whisper. 柔和的音乐在空气中轻轻流淌。 Dust sparkled under the spotlight, like stars on a tiny universe. 聚光灯下的尘埃闪闪发光，像微小宇宙中的星辰。 Backstage smelled faintly of makeup and nerves. 后台弥漫着淡淡的化妆品味和紧张气息。 The velvet curtain trembled slightly as she peeked through. 当她探出头时，天鹅绒幕布微微颤动。 A hush fell over the crowd as the lights dimmed. 灯光渐暗，观众席瞬间安静下来。 The polished floor reflected her white costume like a mirror. 光滑的地板映出她洁白的舞裙。 Outside the stage, silence was thick and waiting. 舞台之外，寂静浓得仿佛在等待。 The music swelled, filling the vast hall with emotion. 音乐渐强，情感充满整个大厅。 When the final note faded, the applause thundered through the room. 当最后一个音符消失时，掌声雷动。 高级替换词 情感类（Emotion） 常见词 高级替换 示例 happy delighted / thrilled / overjoyed / elated / radiant She felt elated as the curtain rose. sad sorrowful / downhearted / dejected / gloomy / wistful She smiled wistfully, recalling her past. nervous uneasy / tense / on edge / apprehensive / anxious She felt apprehensive before stepping out. proud fulfilled / gratified / content / dignified / triumphant She bowed with triumphant grace. touched moved / stirred / overwhelmed / heartened / emotional She was deeply moved by the applause. 动作类 常见词 高级替换 示例 walk step / pace / glide / stride / tiptoe She glided onto the stage. look glance / gaze / peer / glimpse / scan She glanced through the curtain. say whisper / murmur / remark / exclaim / confess She whispered a silent prayer. smile beam / grin / glow / smirk / flash a smile She beamed at the audience. cry weep / sob / shed tears / choke up / tear up She choked up as the applause grew. 心理活动类 常见词 高级替换 示例 think reflect / ponder / muse / wonder / recall She pondered how far she had come. remember recall / reminisce / bring back / be reminded of / think back The music brought back her childhood dreams. want long for / yearn for / desire / crave / aspire to She yearned for this moment. believe assume / be convinced / hold / trust / reckon She was convinced that dreams don’t fade. hope expect / look forward to / wish / pray / anticipate She anticipated the curtain rising. 固定搭配、词法解析与语料积累 peek through / peek out (of) —— 偷看、探出头 Julie peeked through the curtain. → peek 是“快速偷看”，语气轻快，比 look 更生动。 tie one’s ribbons / lace up shoes —— 系鞋带、整理服装 She tied her ballet shoe ribbons carefully. be fascinated by —— 被……吸引 She was fascinated by the graceful dancing. can’t afford to do sth. —— 承担不起做某事（经济或心理） Her mother said they couldn’t afford ballet lessons. turn out (to be) —— 结果是…… It turned out Kirsty was a hopeless teacher. burst out laughing —— 突然大笑 They both burst out laughing. be filled with emotion / joy / pride —— 充满情感 / 喜悦 / 自豪 bow to the audience —— 向观众鞠躬 fulfil one’s dream —— 实现梦想 every + 时间 + 介词短语：表示习惯动作 She listened to ballet music every day. 生词短语 (1) twirl (v.) 旋转 近义词：spin / whirl / rotate / pivot 反义词：stand / freeze 例句： She twirled in her white dress. The dancer spun gracefully across the stage. (2) bruise (n./v.) 淤青；受伤 近义词：injury / wound / mark 反义词：heal / recover 例句： She pointed to a bruise on her arm. The fall left her with a dark mark. (3) giggle (v.) 咯咯笑 近义词：chuckle / laugh / snicker 反义词：cry / sob / frown 例句： They giggled like children. She chuckled at the funny memory. (4) graceful (adj.) 优雅的 近义词：elegant / poised / refined 反义词：awkward / clumsy / rough 例句： Her graceful movements captured everyone’s eyes. He spoke with poised confidence. (5) fulfil (v.) 实现 近义词：achieve / realize / accomplish / complete 反义词：fail / abandon 例句： She finally fulfilled her childhood dream. Hard work helps us accomplish our goals. 主题句 Dreams may fade in time, but they never truly disappear. What seemed impossible once became a reality through perseverance. The little girl she once was finally smiled from within. 情感转折句 At that moment, fear melted into confidence. The applause drowned her doubts and filled her with pride. 收尾升华句 After all these years, the dream had come home. Sometimes, the best stage is the one you build yourself. 6、 Possible Versions(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1: Now, Julie peeked out behind the stage curtain and the theatre was full. Her hands felt clammy as she gazed at the crowd bathed in golden light. For a heartbeat, she was that 11-year-old girl again, watching others dance through a window(现在分词做后置定语). The music began, and she took a deep breath. Step by step, she floated onto the stage, the years of silent practice guiding her like an invisible hand(独立主格). Each spin carried the laughter of her childhood(无灵主语句), the friendship of Kirsty, and the echoes of her mother’s voice. Her heart pounded, not from fear, but from the thrill of finally belonging. When the music swelled, she danced as if her soul had wings, forgetting her age(现在分词短语做伴随动作), her mother’s doubts, her once bruised knees. As the final note lingered(无灵主语句), she froze mid-pose, eyes glistening(独立主格), knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) she had finally fulfilled her promise—to herself and to her dream. Paragraph 2: Bowing at the end, she saw her family. Her mother was in the front row, hands trembling(独立主格刻画人物), eyes red with pride(独立主格刻画情绪). Julie’s vision blurred(无灵主语句) as applause thundered around her. For years, she had believed her mother never understood her love for ballet, but now she saw the tears tracing her mother’s cheeks. When Julie bowed again, she caught Kirsty’s grin beside her mother, cheering like the girl in the park decades ago(现在分词短语做伴随动作). A wave of emotion flooded her heart(无灵主语句)—gratitude, relief, and quiet triumph. As she straightened up, she whispered to herself, “We made it.” Outside the spotlight, her mother stood, still clapping above her head(现在分词短语做伴随动作). In that glowing moment, the little girl who once peeked through a dance-school window had finally found her place under the light. 逻辑说明： 段一承接“peeked”→心理紧张+上场→动作渐进→情感爆发 段二承接“bowing”→视觉聚焦家人→母女情升华→圆梦收束 亮点搭配与表达积累 clammy hands（汗湿的手） float onto the stage（轻盈登台） invisible hand guiding her（隐喻努力与时间） eyes glistening（眼中闪光） applause thundered around her（掌声雷动） wave of emotion flooded（情感涌上心头） 动作 & 情绪描写 take a deep breath → steady her nerves heart pounded / raced tears tracing her cheeks whispered to herself froze mid-pose gratitude flooded her 升级词汇 & 同义替换 基础词 升级表达 例句 nervous tense / on edge / apprehensive She felt apprehensive before stepping on stage. happy elated / thrilled / radiant She felt radiant as the music began. cry tear up / choke up / burst into tears She choked up at the sight of her mother. see catch sight of / glimpse / notice She caught sight of her family in the crowd. proud gratified / fulfilled / moved Her mother looked gratified beyond words. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Now, Julie peeked out behind the stage curtain and the theatre was full. Her heart fluttered like a trapped bird. She could almost hear Kirsty’s laughter from years ago, echoing in her mind(现在分词短语做后置定语). “Will you teach me?”—the innocent voice of her younger self whispered back(无灵主语句). Gathering her courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Julie adjusted her ribbon, white ballet costume and stepped into the light. The first notes of Swan Lake floated through the air(无灵主语句), soft yet commanding(adj做补语). She moved with elegance, her arms forming the same arc(独立主格) she once practised in the park. Each graceful turn erased the years of waiting and wanting(无灵主语句). She wasn’t performing for fame but for the friendship and faith that had carried her here. As the melody built to its climax, she felt a tear slip down her cheek—a tear for the girl who never gave up, and the friend who always believed in her. Paragraph 2: Bowing at the end, she saw her family. Beside them sat Kirsty, eyes shining like the stage lights(独立主格). Julie froze for a second, disbelief mixing with joy(独立主格). When their eyes met, both smiled—a silent conversation of decades fulfilled(独立主格). The applause swelled, wrapping Julie in warmth(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Her family stood up, clapping (现在分词短语做伴随动作) until their palms turned red(无灵主语句), pride written all over their faces. Julie’s chest heaved with relief and gratitude. She bowed once more, this time not as a dreamer, but as a dancer who had become her own teacher. As the curtain fell, she felt peace descend like soft snow—the friendship, the music, the years—all merging into one perfect moment(独立主格). 地道搭配积累 fluttered like a trapped bird（比喻紧张） float through the air（音乐轻盈流动） the melody built to its climax（音乐渐强） tear slip down her cheek（单泪滑落） clapping until their palms turned red（掌声热烈） peace descend like soft snow（比喻情感落定） 动作 & 情绪亮点短语 adjusted her ribbon moved with elegance eyes shining like lights disbelief mixing with joy chest heaved with relief bowed once more 词汇升级与例句 普通词 高级替换 例句 music melody / tune / rhythm / symphony The melody floated softly. friend companion / partner / soulmate Her childhood companion was in the crowd. feel sense / perceive / experience / undergo She sensed peace settling in. look gaze / glance / meet eyes / catch a glimpse Their eyes met for a silent second. quiet tranquil / serene / peaceful / calm A serene smile spread across her face. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Now, Julie peeked out behind the stage curtain and the theatre was full. For a moment, her breath caught in her throat. The years she had spent practising alone flashed before her(无灵主语句)—the wooden floor, the little Swan music, her mother’s voice calling from the past(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Tonight wasn’t just a performance; it was proof that dreams, though delayed(过去分词做方式), never die. When the spotlight touched her, Julie stepped forward, spine straight, eyes fixed(独立主格). Every motion felt like a dialogue with her past. The audience faded away(环境描写); she was dancing for the little girl who once fell and stood up again. When the music reached its final note, she twirled one last time, arms wide, heart open(独立主格刻画人物). The theatre erupted into applause(环境描写), but all she heard was the echo of her own heartbeat whispering(现在分词短语做伴随动作): You made it. Paragraph 2: Bowing at the end, she saw her family. Her mother’s smile shone brighter than any spotlight. Tears blurred Julie’s vision(无灵主语句), yet she saw everything clearly—her childhood disappointment, her lonely practice, her unwavering dream—all woven into this moment(独立主格刻画人物). She bowed deeply gain, her chest trembling with gratitude. As she straightened up, Kirsty mouthed two words: Well done. The simplicity of it broke her. The stage lights seemed to dim, leaving only the glow of fulfillment(现在分词短语做结果状语). She waved softly, knowing(现在分词做伴随动作) this was not the end but the beginning of believing again. Somewhere within, the music still played—the song of perseverance, love, and time. 地道搭配积累 breath caught in her throat（屏住呼吸） dreams, though delayed, never die（主题句） dialogue with her past（内心对话） twirled one last time, arms wide（象征开放与完成） mouthed two words（口型表达） the song of perseverance（象征精神） 动作 & 情绪 breath caught / heart whispered arms wide / eyes fixed / bowed deeply chest trembling with gratitude waved softly / smiled through tears 词汇升级与例句 原词 高级替换 示例 dream aspiration / ambition / vision Her childhood aspiration finally came true. believe be convinced / hold faith / trust in She held faith that dreams never fade. shine glow / beam / radiate / glimmer Her mother’s smile radiated pride. happy content / gratified / fulfilled / pleased She felt utterly fulfilled. begin commence / start / embark on / initiate She was ready to embark on a new journey. 情感递进句型： Her heart swelled with both fear and hope. Each step carried the weight of her past. The applause drowned her doubts. Tears blurred her vision, yet her heart saw clearly. Sometimes, dreams wait for the right time to bloom. 常见短语升级： 基础表达 高级替换 very nervous on edge / tense / anxious / uneasy very happy overjoyed / thrilled / elated / radiant very tired exhausted / worn out / drained very beautiful graceful / exquisite / stunning very sad heartbroken / sorrowful / downcast 象征类写作句式： The stage became a mirror reflecting her years of persistence. The music carried her back to where it all began. In the rhythm of dance, she found the rhythm of life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $