内容正文:
Unit 5:The Value of Money金钱的价值
应用文写作精练
写作主题
识
主题语境:人与社会
话题:电影和戏剧
写作词汇短语:
一、核心必背单词
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1. adapt v. 改编
2. explore v. 探讨;探究
3. theme n. 主题
4. character n. 角色;人物
5. plot n. 情节
6. impressive adj. 令人印象深刻的
7. memorable adj. 难忘的
8. inspiring adj. 鼓舞人心的
9. perform v. 表演
10. recommend v. 推荐
11. popular adj. 受欢迎的
12. attitude n. 态度
13. honesty n. 诚实
14. dignity n. 尊严
15. comment n./v. 评论
二、高分写作短语
1.
1. 影片简介
be adapted from… 根据…… 改编
be based on/upon… 基于……
explore the theme of… 探讨…… 的主题
enjoy great popularity 深受欢迎
2. 剧情描述
make a bet 打赌
to one’s surprise 令某人惊讶的是
judge people by appearance 以貌取人
change one’s attitude 改变某人的态度
eventually 最后;终于
twists and turns 曲折起伏
3. 人物与场景
the main character 主角
by accident 偶然;意外地
be stuck in… 被困在……
earn an honest income 靠诚实劳动获得收入
the most impressive scene 最令人印象深刻的场景
4. 评价与推荐
moving and inspiring 感人且鼓舞人心
be worth seeing 值得一看
win one’s respect 赢得某人的尊重
as a matter of fact 事实上
to be honest 说实话
写作句型:
(一)开头:介绍影片基本信息
基础版
The Million Pound Bank Note is a great movie.
《百万英镑》是一部很棒的电影。
It is about a young man’s experience in London.
它讲述了一个年轻人在伦敦的经历。
提高版
The movie The Million Pound Bank Note, adapted from Mark Twain’s story, tells us an interesting experience.
改编自马克・吐温小说的电影《百万英镑》,向我们讲述了一段有趣的经历。
The film mainly explores the theme of money and human nature in our life.
这部电影主要探讨了我们生活中金钱与人性的主题。
(二)中间:描述剧情、人物与核心场景
基础版
1. The main character is Henry Adams. He is stuck in London by accident.
主角是亨利・亚当斯,他意外被困在伦敦。
2. People judge him by his old clothes at first.起初人们以他的旧衣服来评判他。
3. Their attitudes change quickly after seeing the bank note.看到钞票后,他们的态度迅速改变。
提高版
1. The main character is Henry Adams, who is a poor young man stuck in a foreign country without money or friends.主角是亨利・亚当斯,他是一个被困在异国他乡、身无分文也没有朋友的贫穷年轻人。
2. To our surprise, people around him become polite immediately only because of the million-pound bank note.
令我们惊讶的是,仅仅因为这张百万英镑的钞票,他身边的人立刻变得彬彬有礼。
3. The most impressive scene is that people look down on him at first but show great respect later.
最令人印象深刻的场景是,人们起初看不起他,后来却对他毕恭毕敬。
(三)结尾:评价感悟 + 推荐
基础版
1. The movie is very meaningful. It is worth seeing.这部电影很有意义,值得一看。
2. We should not judge people by their looks.我们不应该以貌取人。
3. I strongly recommend this movie to you.我强烈向你们推荐这部电影。
提高版
1. Not only is the movie moving and inspiring, but it also teaches us a valuable lesson about life.
这部电影不仅感人且鼓舞人心,还给我们上了一堂宝贵的人生课。
2. We should never judge a person by his appearance, for kindness and honesty are more important than money.
我们绝不应该以貌取人,因为善良和诚实比金钱更重要。
3. Considering its great educational value, I highly recommend this classic movie to every student.
考虑到它极高的教育价值,我强烈向每位学生推荐这部经典电影。
(四)与金钱有关的谚语
1. Money is a good servant but a bad master.金钱是好仆人,却是坏主人。
2. Money is not everything.金钱不是万能的。
3. Money can’t buy happiness.金钱买不来幸福。
4. Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。
5. All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。
6. The best things in life are free.生命中最美好的事物都是免费的。
7. Honesty is more valuable than money.诚实比金钱更宝贵。
8. Wealth is nothing without health.没有健康,财富一文不值。
9. Money doesn’t grow on trees.金钱来之不易。
10. Time is money.时间就是金钱。
(2020·全国III卷·高考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介;
2. 指导内容;
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构:总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的;第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题;第三段表达感谢,并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
write to;according to ;combine ; adaption ;challenge;attached to ;convenient
第三步:连词成句
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
(25-26高一上·江苏连云港·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 John来信说,他因学业压力倍感焦虑,希望你能推荐一部电影帮助他放松并获得启发。请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)表示理解与安慰;
(2)推荐一部适合的电影;
(3)阐述推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear John,
Sorry to hear that you’re feeling anxious lately. Don’t be too hard on yourself. It’s completely normal to feel stressed when we have a lot on our plates.
For a gentle escape, I’d like to suggest one of my favorite movies: Forrest Gump. Beyond its heartwarming story, the movie carries a quiet message: life’s uncertainties can lead to beautiful surprises if we meet them with sincerity and steady effort. Whenever I feel weighed down, Forrest’s simple determination reminds me to focus on the step, not the whole journey.
I hope it can help you see things in a new light.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给John写一封回信,表示理解与安慰、推荐一部适合的电影以及阐述推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完全:completely→totally
推荐:suggest→recommend
压垮:weigh down→overwhelm
遇到:meet→encounter
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For a gentle escape, I’d like to suggest one of my favorite movies: Forrest Gump.
拓展句:If you want a gentle escape, I’d like to suggest one of my favorite movies: Forrest Gump.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sorry to hear that you’re feeling anxious lately.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope it can help you see things in a new light.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
1.(25-26高一上·湖南衡阳·期末)假设你是阳光中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友David在邮件中提到,他最近观看了中国动画电影《哪吒之魔童降世》和科幻片《流浪地球》,对中国电影产生了浓厚的兴趣,想请你再另外推荐一部值得观看的中国电影,内容包括:
1. 你推荐的电影;
2. 你推荐的理由。
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【范文】
Dear David,
I’m thrilled that you’re into Chinese films after watching Ne Zha and The Wandering Earth. I’d like to recommend Hi, Mom to you.
It’s a heartwarming comedy which focuses on the deep mother-daughter bond. The story mixes humor and sincere emotions perfectly, making you laugh and cry at the same time. Besides, it vividly shows ordinary Chinese life in the 1980s, offering you a great chance to learn about Chinese culture. Different from the fantasy or sci-fi movies you’ve watched, it’s full of down-to-earth warmth.
Hope you’ll enjoy it and share your thoughts with me soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友David写一封邮件,再另外推荐一部值得观看的中国电影,并说明推荐的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
专注于:focus on → concentrate on
真诚的:sincere → genuine
融合:mix → blend
生动地:vividly → graphically
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The story mixes humor and sincere emotions perfectly, making you laugh and cry at the same time.
拓展句:The story mixes humor and sincere emotions perfectly, which makes you laugh and cry at the same time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s a heartwarming comedy which focuses on the deep mother-daughter bond. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Different from the fantasy or sci-fi movies you’ve watched, it’s full of down-to-earth warmth. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
2.(25-26高二上·河南焦作·月考)假定你是李华,你校电影爱好者协会正在筹备电影周。请你给该协会负责人Jacob写一封邮件,向他推荐一部在电影周展播的电影。要点如下:
1、简述电影信息;
2、推荐理由。
注意:1、写作词数应在80个左右;
2、请按照如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Jacob,
I hope this message finds you well.
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Look forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jacob,
I hope this message finds you well. I’m writing to recommend Hi, Mom for the upcoming film week. Directed by Jia Ling, it’s a heartwarming comedy-drama about a daughter who accidentally travels back to the 1980s and bonds with her young mother.
This film deserves to be shown for three reasons. First, its touching plot about family love easily resonates with viewers of all ages. Second, it blends humor with emotion, offering an enjoyable viewing experience. Third, it showcases Chinese family values and 1980s culture, helping international students understand China better.
Look forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给电影爱好者协会的负责人Jacob写一封邮件,向他推荐一部在电影周展播的电影,简述电影信息,并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将到来的:upcoming → forthcoming
建立联系:bond with → establish a connection with
融合:blend → integrate
提供:offer → provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, it blends humor with emotion, offering an enjoyable viewing experience.
拓展句:Second, it blends humor with emotion, which offers an enjoyable viewing experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Directed by Jia Ling, it’s a heartwarming comedy-drama about a daughter who accidentally travels back to the 1980s and bonds with her young mother.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Third, it showcases Chinese family values and 1980s culture, helping international students understand China better.(运用了现在分词短语helping作状语,省略to的不定式understand作宾语补足语)
3.(25-26高一上·江苏徐州·月考)假设你是李华,你校英文报发起了一个“Which matters More in a Movie: Plot or Special Effects?”的讨论,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你的看法;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Which matters More in a Movie: Plot or Special Effects?
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【范文】
Which matters More in a Movie: Plot or Special Effects?
In my opinion, plot matters far more than special effects when it comes to a movie.
A good plot is the soul of a movie, which can touch viewers deeply and leave a lasting impression. It conveys true feelings and meaningful ideas that make people think. Special effects only bring temporary visual fun but can’t make people remember the movie long. Without a great plot, even amazing effects will make the movie empty and boring.
Thus, a movie with a wonderful plot is always more valuable and moving.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Which matters More in a Movie: Plot or Special Effects?”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:convey→express
思考:think→ponder
宝贵的:valuable→precious
感人的:moving→affecting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, plot matters far more than special effects when it comes to a movie.
拓展句:What I firmly believe is that plot matters far more than special effects when it comes to a movie.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A good plot is the soul of a movie, which can touch viewers deeply and leave a lasting impression.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It conveys true feelings and meaningful ideas that make people think.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
4.(25-26高一上·江苏泰州·月考)假定你是李华,你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏,请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《哪吒之魔童降世》的影评。
片名
Ne Zha: Birth of the Demon Child
导演
饺子
剧情
影片讲述了哪吒因一场失误而降生为“魔童”的故事。他总是遭到村民的惧怕与憎恨,但在父母的关爱和与敖丙的友情支撑下,他拒绝向不公的命运屈服,努力改变人生,彰显了影片抗争命运的主题。
评论
推荐这部优秀动画电影并简述理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:命运 fate
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【范文】
Ne Zha: Birth of the Demon Child is a remarkable animated masterpiece directed by Jiao Zi with the theme of fighting against fate.
The film follows Ne Zha, who is born as a" demon child" due to a mistake. Because of this label, Ne Zha is feared and hated by villagers, but it is thanks to his parents’ love and friendship with Ao Bing that he refuses to submit to the unfair fate and rewrites his life with unshakable determination.
What makes the film impressive is that not only does it bring me visual pleasure, but it also encourages me to reflect on the meaning of life. Undoubtedly, this film is well worth recommending.
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。要求考生根据表格提示,为学校英语报的影视作品专栏写一篇关于电影《哪吒之魔童降世》的影评。
【详解】1.词汇积累
杰出的:remarkable→outstanding
由于:due to→ owing to
屈从于:submit to→ yield to
不公平的:unfair→unjust
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Undoubtedly, this film is well worth recommending.
拓展句:There is no doubt that this film is well worth recommending.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Because of this label, Ne Zha is feared and hated by villagers, but it is thanks to his parents’ love and friendship with Ao Bing that he refuses to submit to the unfair fate and rewrites his life with unshakable determination.(运用了强调句型以及but连接的转折句)
【高分句型2】What makes the film impressive is that not only does it bring me visual pleasure, but it also encourages me to reflect on the meaning of life.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句,且表语从句中使用了“not only...but also...”的并列结构以及部分倒装句式)
5.(25-26高三上·福建·期中)口语课上外教组织同学们讨论:为学校戏剧节准备节目时,你更倾向于对经典剧本进行现代化改编还是忠于原著?请你发言,内容包括:
1. 你的观点:
2. 你的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Should We Modernize Classics or be Faithful to Them
Good morning, everyone.
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Thank you for listening.
【范文】
Good morning, everyone.
I strongly support modernizing classic scripts for school drama festivals. Firstly, contemporary adaptations make timeless stories more relatable to young audiences by incorporating modern language and settings. Secondly, creative reinterpretations encourage students to think critically about how historical themes apply to today’s world. For example, setting Romeo and Juliet in rival tech companies could spark discussions about modern conflicts. While preserving original messages, fresh approaches stimulate artistic innovation and audience engagement. I hope my speech can prompt everyone to think.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对经典剧本进行现代化改编还是忠于原著的讨论,进行发言,陈述观点和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
坚决地:strongly→firmly
永恒的:timeless→permanent
鼓励:encourage→inspire
主题:theme→subject
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For example, setting Romeo and Juliet in rival tech companies could spark discussions about modern conflicts.
拓展句:For example, we set Romeo and Juliet in rival tech companies, which could spark discussions about modern conflicts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, contemporary adaptations make timeless stories more relatable to young audiences by incorporating modern language and settings.(运用了动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】Secondly, creative reinterpretations encourage students to think critically about how historical themes apply to today’s world.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
6.(25-26高三上·河北·期中)假定你是李华,外教老师Miss Evans要求在口语课上分享你最近看的一场电影,请你写一篇英语短文和同学们分享。内容包括:
1. 简单介绍电影;
2. 你的收获和感悟。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80词;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【范文】
My Favorite Movie: Wonder
Hi everyone,
Today I’d like to share the movie Wonder. It tells Auggie’s story — a boy with facial differences starting middle school. At first, classmates stare at him, but slowly, friendship changes everything. His sister, Via, also learns courage through her own struggles.
This film teaches me true strength comes from kindness and acceptance. We shouldn’t judge others by appearances. Everyone deserves respect and love. After watching, I promised myself to be braver and more understanding. I highly recommend it!
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇英语短文和同学们分享自己最近看的一场电影。
【详解】1.词汇积累
盯着:stare at→fix one’s eyes on
改变:change→transform
值得:deserve→be worth
爱:love→affection
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:His sister, Via, also learns courage through her own struggles.
拓展句:His sister, whose name is Via, also learns courage through her own struggles.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This film teaches me true strength comes from kindness and acceptance.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
After watching, I promised myself to be braver and more understanding.(运用了动名词作宾语)
7.(25-26高二上·河南南阳·月考)假定你是李华,在学校组织的校园电影艺术节上,同学们观看了Rowan Atkinson罗温·艾金森主演的Mr. Bean的相关视频,现在向校英语报社投稿,内容包括:1、视频主要内容。2、评价与推荐。
注意:100词左右。
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【范文】Possible Version 1
The Mr. Bean series, starring Rowan Atkinson, remains a beloved classic that never fails to entertain audiences.
Set in an elegant French restaurant, a classic scene unfolds where Mr. Bean tries to fit in but ends up in one funny mess after another. Shocked to discover what he has ordered is actually raw, Mr. Bean busies himself getting rid of it desperately, by hiding it in absurd places like the sugar bowl, a vase, a bread roll, and even into a nearby lady's purse and the violinist's trousers.
Mr. Bean’s unique humor and amusing creativity convey an evident message to students under pressure — to approach challenges with a lighter heart, to laugh at mistakes, and to find creative solutions outside the box. So I recommend it to all of you.
Possible Version 2
The Mr. Bean series, starring Rowan Atkinson, is a timeless masterpiece of physical comedy, turning everyday chaos into laugh-out-loud moments.
Set in an elegant French restaurant, a classic scene unfolds where Mr. Bean tries to fit in but ending up in one funny mess after another. Shocked to discover what he has ordered is actually raw, Mr. Bean busies himself getting rid of it desperately, by hiding it in absurd places like the sugar bowl, a vase, a bread roll, and even into a nearby lady's purse and the violinist's trousers.
Rowan Atkinson's masterful performance successfully portrays Mr. Bean as a clumsy and amusing character, using brilliant expressions and gestures to create endless laughter without a single word, and therefore keeps the episodes loved by audiences across generations. I strongly recommend it to you all.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生就观看了Rowan Atkinson罗温·艾金森主演的Mr. Bean的相关视频,现在向校英语报社投稿,介绍视频主要内容;评价与推荐。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
深受喜爱的:beloved→popular
推荐:recommend→suggest
荒唐的:absurd→ridiculous
传达:convey→express
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:Shocked to discover what he has ordered is actually raw, Mr. Bean busies himself getting rid of it desperately.
拓展句:When Mr. Bean is shocked to discover what he has ordered is actually raw, he busies himself with desperately getting rid of it.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The Mr. Bean series, starring Rowan Atkinson, remains a beloved classic that never fails to entertain audiences.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】Shocked to discover what he has ordered is actually raw, Mr. Bean busies himself getting rid of it desperately.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
8.(24-25高一下·江苏无锡·期末)假定你是李华,校文学社(the School Literature Club)即将于本周五在校报告厅举行第十二届戏剧节(Drama Festival),请你就此在校英文网站写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 欢迎参加。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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The School Literature Club
【范文】One possible version:
NOTICE
Aimed at bringing classic literary works to life and inspiring a deeper appreciation for drama, the upcoming 12th Drama Festival is scheduled for 2:00 p.m. this Friday in our school performers.
This year’s performances include adaptations of renowned literary masterpieces like Thunderstorm and Hamlet, carefully prepared and performed by our talented club members. Besides, there will be interactive sessions where you can engage with the performers.
Whether you are simply curious, a literature enthusiast, or a drama lover, this festival promises to be an unforgettable experience. Don't miss the chance to witness the magic of literature coming alive on stage!
The School Literature Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为第十二届戏剧节在校英文网站写一则通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有才华的:talented→gifted
此外:besides→in addition
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Besides, there will be interactive sessions where you can engage with the performers.
拓展句:Besides, there will be interactive sessions so that you can engage with the performers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at bringing classic literary works to life and inspiring a deeper appreciation for drama, the upcoming 12th Drama Festival is scheduled for 2:00 p.m. this Friday in our school performers.(运用了过去分词短语作状语和动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】Whether you are simply curious, a literature enthusiast, or a drama lover, this festival promises to be an unforgettable experience.(运用了“whether…or...”引导的让步状语从句句型)
9.(24-25高一下·四川·月考)假定你是李华,你校校刊“英语天地”将在你校电影周期间进行征文比赛,主题为“My Favourite Movie”,请你用英语写一篇投稿,主要内容包括:
(1)影片内容简介;(2)你对这部电影的评价;(3)你的感悟/所获得的启示。
注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favourite Movie
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【范文】
My Favourite Movie
My favourite movie is “Coco”. It tells the story of a boy named Miguel who enters the Land of the Dead to find his great-great-grandfather, a famous musician.
I think it’s a touching movie that explores family bonds and dreams. What I like most is the plot where Miguel discovers the true meaning of family while pursuing his music dream. The movie, which is filled with colorful scenes and beautiful songs, makes me realize that family is always there to support us.
From it, I’ve learned that we should cherish our family and never forget where we come from.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“我最喜欢的电影”为主题,为校刊“英语天地”的电影周征文比赛写一篇投稿,内容涵盖影片简介、个人评价及感悟启示。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感人的:touching → moving
追寻:pursue → chase
意识到: realize → become aware of
珍惜:cherish → treasure
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I think it’s a touching movie that explores family bonds and dreams.
拓展句:I think it’s a touching movie, exploring family bonds and dreams.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It tells the story of a boy named Miguel who enters the Land of the Dead to find his great-great-grandfather, a famous musician.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The movie, which is filled with colorful scenes and beautiful songs, makes me realize that family is always there to support us.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句、that引导的宾语从句)
10.(24-25高一下·黑龙江鸡西·月考)假定你是某高中学生李华,目前你校英文网站正在举行有关影评的征文活动,主题是“评论我喜欢的一部电影”内容包括:
1. 电影简介;
2. 主要情节和场景;
3. 给予评论。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My comments on a movie I like
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【范文】
My comments on a movie I like
Last weekend, I watched a movie named Forrest Gump《阿甘正传》, which I like very much and from which I have learned a lot about life lessons. It is a 1994 American comedy-drama movie based on the 1986 novel of the same name by Winston Groom.
The movie tells the story of a man with low IQ but good intentions. The movie follows his life from childhood to adulthood. Through his life, Forrest encounters many people, experiences the Vietnam War, meets President Kennedy, and even becomes a table tennis champion. He also finds his true love, Jenny.
I am really fond of this movie, because it sends a message to viewers that no matter what challenges we face in our life, we can always strive to do our best to overcome them. It also shows that friendship and love are the most important things in our life.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。目前考生校英文网站正在举行有关影评的征文活动,主题是“评论我喜欢的一部电影”。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
遇到:encounter→meet
重要的:important→vital
喜欢:like→be fond of
意图:intention→purpose
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:I am really fond of this movie, because it sends a message to viewers that no matter what challenges we face in our life, we can always strive to do our best to overcome them.
拓展句:I really like this movie due to the fact that it conveys a message to viewers that regardless of what challenges we meet in our life, we can always make efforts to do our best to get over them.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Last weekend, I watched a movie named Forrest Gump《阿甘正传》, which I like very much and from which I have learned a lot about life lessons.(运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型 2】I am really fond of this movie, because it sends a message to viewers that no matter what challenges we face in our life, we can always strive to do our best to overcome them.(运用了 that 引导的同位语从句以及 no matter what 引导的让步状语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句)
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应用文写作精练
写作主题
识
主题语境:人与社会
话题:电影和戏剧
写作词汇短语:
一、核心必背单词
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1. adapt v. 改编
2. explore v. 探讨;探究
3. theme n. 主题
4. character n. 角色;人物
5. plot n. 情节
6. impressive adj. 令人印象深刻的
7. memorable adj. 难忘的
8. inspiring adj. 鼓舞人心的
9. perform v. 表演
10. recommend v. 推荐
11. popular adj. 受欢迎的
12. attitude n. 态度
13. honesty n. 诚实
14. dignity n. 尊严
15. comment n./v. 评论
二、高分写作短语
1.
1. 影片简介
be adapted from… 根据…… 改编
be based on/upon… 基于……
explore the theme of… 探讨…… 的主题
enjoy great popularity 深受欢迎
2. 剧情描述
make a bet 打赌
to one’s surprise 令某人惊讶的是
judge people by appearance 以貌取人
change one’s attitude 改变某人的态度
eventually 最后;终于
twists and turns 曲折起伏
3. 人物与场景
the main character 主角
by accident 偶然;意外地
be stuck in… 被困在……
earn an honest income 靠诚实劳动获得收入
the most impressive scene 最令人印象深刻的场景
4. 评价与推荐
moving and inspiring 感人且鼓舞人心
be worth seeing 值得一看
win one’s respect 赢得某人的尊重
as a matter of fact 事实上
to be honest 说实话
写作句型:
(一)开头:介绍影片基本信息
基础版
The Million Pound Bank Note is a great movie.
《百万英镑》是一部很棒的电影。
It is about a young man’s experience in London.
它讲述了一个年轻人在伦敦的经历。
提高版
The movie The Million Pound Bank Note, adapted from Mark Twain’s story, tells us an interesting experience.
改编自马克・吐温小说的电影《百万英镑》,向我们讲述了一段有趣的经历。
The film mainly explores the theme of money and human nature in our life.
这部电影主要探讨了我们生活中金钱与人性的主题。
(二)中间:描述剧情、人物与核心场景
基础版
1. The main character is Henry Adams. He is stuck in London by accident.
主角是亨利・亚当斯,他意外被困在伦敦。
2. People judge him by his old clothes at first.起初人们以他的旧衣服来评判他。
3. Their attitudes change quickly after seeing the bank note.看到钞票后,他们的态度迅速改变。
提高版
1. The main character is Henry Adams, who is a poor young man stuck in a foreign country without money or friends.主角是亨利・亚当斯,他是一个被困在异国他乡、身无分文也没有朋友的贫穷年轻人。
2. To our surprise, people around him become polite immediately only because of the million-pound bank note.
令我们惊讶的是,仅仅因为这张百万英镑的钞票,他身边的人立刻变得彬彬有礼。
3. The most impressive scene is that people look down on him at first but show great respect later.
最令人印象深刻的场景是,人们起初看不起他,后来却对他毕恭毕敬。
(三)结尾:评价感悟 + 推荐
基础版
1. The movie is very meaningful. It is worth seeing.这部电影很有意义,值得一看。
2. We should not judge people by their looks.我们不应该以貌取人。
3. I strongly recommend this movie to you.我强烈向你们推荐这部电影。
提高版
1. Not only is the movie moving and inspiring, but it also teaches us a valuable lesson about life.
这部电影不仅感人且鼓舞人心,还给我们上了一堂宝贵的人生课。
2. We should never judge a person by his appearance, for kindness and honesty are more important than money.
我们绝不应该以貌取人,因为善良和诚实比金钱更重要。
3. Considering its great educational value, I highly recommend this classic movie to every student.
考虑到它极高的教育价值,我强烈向每位学生推荐这部经典电影。
(四)与金钱有关的谚语
1. Money is a good servant but a bad master.金钱是好仆人,却是坏主人。
2. Money is not everything.金钱不是万能的。
3. Money can’t buy happiness.金钱买不来幸福。
4. Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。
5. All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。
6. The best things in life are free.生命中最美好的事物都是免费的。
7. Honesty is more valuable than money.诚实比金钱更宝贵。
8. Wealth is nothing without health.没有健康,财富一文不值。
9. Money doesn’t grow on trees.金钱来之不易。
10. Time is money.时间就是金钱。
(2020·全国III卷·高考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介;
2. 指导内容;
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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(25-26高一上·江苏连云港·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 John来信说,他因学业压力倍感焦虑,希望你能推荐一部电影帮助他放松并获得启发。请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)表示理解与安慰;
(2)推荐一部适合的电影;
(3)阐述推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1.(25-26高一上·湖南衡阳·期末)假设你是阳光中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友David在邮件中提到,他最近观看了中国动画电影《哪吒之魔童降世》和科幻片《流浪地球》,对中国电影产生了浓厚的兴趣,想请你再另外推荐一部值得观看的中国电影,内容包括:
1. 你推荐的电影;
2. 你推荐的理由。
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2.(25-26高二上·河南焦作·月考)假定你是李华,你校电影爱好者协会正在筹备电影周。请你给该协会负责人Jacob写一封邮件,向他推荐一部在电影周展播的电影。要点如下:
1、简述电影信息;
2、推荐理由。
注意:1、写作词数应在80个左右;
2、请按照如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Jacob,
I hope this message finds you well.
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Look forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
3.(25-26高一上·江苏徐州·月考)假设你是李华,你校英文报发起了一个“Which matters More in a Movie: Plot or Special Effects?”的讨论,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你的看法;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Which matters More in a Movie: Plot or Special Effects?
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4.(25-26高一上·江苏泰州·月考)假定你是李华,你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏,请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《哪吒之魔童降世》的影评。
片名
Ne Zha: Birth of the Demon Child
导演
饺子
剧情
影片讲述了哪吒因一场失误而降生为“魔童”的故事。他总是遭到村民的惧怕与憎恨,但在父母的关爱和与敖丙的友情支撑下,他拒绝向不公的命运屈服,努力改变人生,彰显了影片抗争命运的主题。
评论
推荐这部优秀动画电影并简述理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:命运 fate
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5.(25-26高三上·福建·期中)口语课上外教组织同学们讨论:为学校戏剧节准备节目时,你更倾向于对经典剧本进行现代化改编还是忠于原著?请你发言,内容包括:
1. 你的观点:
2. 你的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Should We Modernize Classics or be Faithful to Them
Good morning, everyone. __________________________________________________________________
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Thank you for listening.
6.(25-26高三上·河北·期中)假定你是李华,外教老师Miss Evans要求在口语课上分享你最近看的一场电影,请你写一篇英语短文和同学们分享。内容包括:
1. 简单介绍电影;
2. 你的收获和感悟。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80词;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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7.(25-26高二上·河南南阳·月考)假定你是李华,在学校组织的校园电影艺术节上,同学们观看了Rowan Atkinson罗温·艾金森主演的Mr. Bean的相关视频,现在向校英语报社投稿,内容包括:1、视频主要内容。2、评价与推荐。
注意:100词左右。
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8.(24-25高一下·江苏无锡·期末)假定你是李华,校文学社(the School Literature Club)即将于本周五在校报告厅举行第十二届戏剧节(Drama Festival),请你就此在校英文网站写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 欢迎参加。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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The School Literature Club
9.(24-25高一下·四川·月考)假定你是李华,你校校刊“英语天地”将在你校电影周期间进行征文比赛,主题为“My Favourite Movie”,请你用英语写一篇投稿,主要内容包括:
(1)影片内容简介;(2)你对这部电影的评价;(3)你的感悟/所获得的启示。
注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favourite Movie
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10.(24-25高一下·黑龙江鸡西·月考)假定你是某高中学生李华,目前你校英文网站正在举行有关影评的征文活动,主题是“评论我喜欢的一部电影”内容包括:
1. 电影简介;
2. 主要情节和场景;
3. 给予评论。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My comments on a movie I like
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