内容正文:
With the help of mishaan, i've become more confident. I am going to practice more. I'm looking forward to join the school basketball team. I will always be thankful to her.
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Unit 14
I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
Section B (3a-Self check)
读写结合写作课优质课
人教新目标版 九年级(全册)
Learning Objectives
1.通过观看视频和图片,能够正确地回答问题,能够说出视频里的以及自己的初中生活的记忆;通过观看视频,能够正确地回答问题,能够根据问题的答案写成一篇初中生活难以忘记的人的文章。
2.综合运用多种时态,学会借助思维导图列举作文要点,通过写作范例展示,由简入难,使学生逐步掌握写作技巧,梳理成文,让学生学会描写过去的回忆和经历,学会写一个难忘的人,学会写一件难忘的事。
3.根据写作提示和要求,能够写一篇回忆初中生活记忆的演讲辞,和大家分享初中生活的记忆和经历,懂得珍惜友情,学会感恩并展望美好未来。
01 Revision
Watch and say
Let's enjoy a video and answer the question.
What memories of junior high school life does the video talk about?
Do you have any special memories about school days?
Look and say
What is the event from junior high school that you will never forget?
We _________ for the sports day.
trained
Look and say
What is the event from junior high school that you will never forget?
We had a __________________ and had fun.
New Year’s party
Look and say
What is the event from junior high school that you will never forget?
We took part in a __________________ and we _________________ in a row.
soccer competition
scored two goals
Look and say
What is the event from junior high school that you will never forget?
We took part in the _______________ in Grade 8.
art festival
Look and say
What is the event from junior high school that you will never forget?
I did my homework __________ to meet the __________ of a strict teacher.
carefully
standards
Look and say
The reporter from DDTV is coming to NO.3 middle school and interviewing students about their memories.
The reporter from DDTV is coming to NO.3 middle school and interviewing students about their memories.
Boys and girls, your school life will be over. How do you feel about your junior high school life?
proud.
colorful but busy.
shy,sad
......
happy but tired.
Look and say
The reporter from DDTV is coming to NO.3 middle school and interviewing students about their memories.
The reporter from DDTV is coming to NO.3 middle school and interviewing students about their memories.
Looking back at the past three years, Please think of a person or an event that you never forget.What can you think of?
Yes,I have some special memories. One of them is about my English teacher-Miss Li. In my heart, he is the nicest teacher. He is tall and....
Even if the time passes quickly, I still remember the class that changed me. It was ...... My teacher got me to answer ...... but I was too nervous to say a word ......
How to talk about
an unforgettable person/event?
02 Lead in
Watch and say
Let's enjoy another video and answer the questions.
1.Who is the person that Jack will never forget?
2.What is Miss Huang like?
3.When did Jack meet his teacher?
4.What did Jack take part in once?
5.What happened at first?
How did he feel?
6.What happened later?
How did he feel?
8.What happened finally?
7.How did his teacher help him?
Watch and say
1.Who is the person that Jack will never forget?
2.What is Miss Huang like?
3.When did Jack meet his teacher?
4.What did Jack take part in once?
5.What happened at first? How did he feel?
6.What happened later? How did he feel?
8.What happened finally?
Miss Huang.
Kind and patient
He met his P.E.teacher in Grade 8.
Once he took part in a basketball game.
At first, he scored two goals in a row. He felt excited.
Later, he missed scoring that goal and lost the game. He felt sad.
7.How did his teacher help him?
His teacher talked to him and encouraged him to work harder.
Finally, he improved his basketball skills.
Can you write a passage about Jack's memories?
Look and learn
Writing Strategy(写作方法)提问式写作法,是指在写作前,围绕主题提出一系列问题,问题的答案就可以构成文章的框架。
一般过去时
Body(正文)
experience
The person that Jack will never forget is Miss Huang.She is kind and patient. He met his teacher in Grade 8. Once, he took part in a basketball game. At first, he scored two goals in a row. He felt excited. Later, he missed that goal and lost the game. He felt sad. Miss Huang talked to him and encouraged him to work harder. Finally, he improved his basketball skills.
answers to the questions 问题的答案
what
when
how
Watch and say
Let's enjoy the last video about Jack and answer the questions.
1.With the teacher’s help, how has Jack changed?
2.What is Jack’s plan for the future?
With Miss Huang’s help, I have become
more confident.
I am going to practice more. I am looking
forward to joining the school basketball
team. I will always be thankful to her.
With Miss Huang’s help, he has become more confident. He is going to practice more. He is looking forward to joining the school basketball team. He will always be thankful to her.
ending(结尾)
change
plan
Have you learned how to write a passage about your unforgettable person?
03 Pre-writing
Look and say
Who is the person from junior high school that you will never forget? How did the person help you?
My English teacher _______________ me to answer questions in class.
encouraged
Look and say
Who is the person from junior high school that you will never forget? How did the person help you?
My deskmate helped me with my _____________.
homework
Look and say
Who is the person from junior high school that you will never forget? How did the person help you?
My classmates helped me to ____________ my schoolbag.
look for
Look and say
Who is the person from junior high school that you will never forget? How did the person help you?
My neighbor ___________________ to school.
gave me a ride
Look and say
Who is the person from junior high school that you will never forget? How did the person help you?
My mother ___________ meals for me every day.
cooked
Think and say
3a
Think of a person or an event from junior high school that you will never forget. Make some notes about how this person or event changed your life in some way.
Who is the person? / What is the event?
When and where did you first meet this person? / When and where did this event happen?
How did you feel when you met this person? / How did you feel when this event happened?
How did this person help you? / What happened later?
How has this person’s advice / event changed your life?
04 While writing
Look and write
Write a passage about the person or event you thought about in 3a.
Describe the person/event.
Explain how you feel about this person/event.
Describe how this person/event has changed your life.
1. 写中学生活中的难忘的人/事。
2. 事件的五要素:when, where, who, what, how, why
3. 最后阐述这件事对自己所产生的影响。
Writing skills
3b
Look and write
Write a passage about the person or event you thought about in 3a.
Describe the person/event.
Explain how you feel about this person/event.
Describe how this person/event has changed your life.
3b
1. 难忘的人 体裁
时态
人称
要点
记叙文
一般过去时为主
第一人称 + 第三人称
描述这个人、事件、你的看法和感受。
Look and write
Write a passage about the person or event you thought about in 3a.
Describe the person/event.
Explain how you feel about this person/event.
Describe how this person/event has changed your life.
3b
Unforgettable person
开头
正文
结尾
简单介绍你最难忘的人。
介绍你们第一次见面的时间、他/她对你的帮助、对你产生的影响。
对人物的评价、情感。
Look and write
3
How did you feel when you met this person?
An unforgettable
person
4
How did this person help you?
1
Who is the person?
5
How has this peson's advicechanged your life?
2
When and where did you meet this person?
How to talk about a person?
Influence
(Ending)
The topic
(Beginning)
(Body)
一般现在时
/一般过去时
Look and write
开头:简单介绍你最难忘的人。
我不能相信今天是初中的最后一天。关于初中,我有很多美好的记忆。我永远不会忘记我的英语老师,她帮了我很多。
I can’t believe that this is the ______________ of junior high school. There are many _____________________ about it. I will never forget my English teacher who ______________________.
last day
wonderful memories
helped me a lot
正文:介绍你们第一次见面的时间、他/她对你的帮助、对你产生的影响。
过去我很害羞,害怕在公众场合讲话。所以我从不会在课堂上回答问题。有一天下课后,我的英语老师和我谈话。
I ______________ shy and be ___________ of speaking in front of the __________. I never _________________ in class. One day, my English teacher spoke to me ______________.
used to be
afraid
public
answer questions
after class
Look and write
正文:介绍你们第一次见面的时间、他/她对你的帮助、对你产生的影响。
她鼓励我要说出来,并且告诉我如果我练习得更多,我会学得好。我被她的话感动了,所以我尽力在课堂上回答问题。She ___________ me to speak and also told me that I could learn well if I _____________. I was ______ by her words, so I ______ answer questions in class.
encouraged
practiced more
moved
tried to
正文:介绍你们第一次见面的时间、他/她对你的帮助、对你产生的影响。
我发现,在公众面前说话并不那么困难。在那之后,我的成绩提高了很多,我也变得越来越活跃了。I found that it was not that _______ to speak ___________________. After that, my grades ___________ a lot, and I became ____________________.
difficult
in front of the public
improved
more and more active
结尾:对人物的评价、情感。
她是我生活中的一道光。我会一直感谢她的建议和鼓励。
She is just like the ___________ in my life. I will always be __________ to her __________ and ______________.
bright light
thankful
advice
encouragement
Look and write
3a
Think of a person or an event from junior high school that you will never forget. Make some notes about how this person or event changed your life in some way.
Who is the person?
When and where did you first meet this person?
How did you feel when you met this person?
How did this person help you?
How has this person’s advice ?
Mrs.Wang, my English teacher
One day Miss Chang talked to me after class.
I was touched by her words.
I used to be shy and be afraid of speaking in front of the public..
I never answer questions in class.
She encouraged me to speak .
She also told me that I culd learn well if I practice more.
Look and write
Sample writing
I can’t believe that this is the last day of junior high school. There are many wonderful memories about it. I will never forget my English teacher ---Mrs Wang who helped me a lot.
I used to be shy and be afraid of speaking in front of the public. I never answer questions in class. One day, my English teacher spoke to me after class. She encouraged me to speak and also told me that I could learn well if I practiced more. I was moved by her words, so I tried to answer questions in class. I found that it was not that difficult to speak in front of the public. After that, my grades improved a lot, and I became more and more active.
She is just like the bright light in my life. I will always be thankful to her advice and encouragement.
Look and write
Write a passage about the person or event you thought about in 3a.
Describe the person/event.
Explain how you feel about this person/event.
Describe how this person/event has changed your life.
3b
2.难忘的事 体裁
时态
人称
要点
记叙文
一般过去时为主
第一人称 + 第三人称
描述这个事件、你的看法和感受。
Look and write
Write a passage about the person or event you thought about in 3a.
Describe the person/event.
Explain how you feel about this person/event.
Describe how this person/event has changed your life.
3b
Unforgettable event
开头
正文
结尾
引出事件,介绍时间、地点。
事件的经过和结果。
表达你对此事的看法、感受。
Look and write
3
How did it make you feel ?
An unforgettable
event
4
What happened later?
1
What is the event ?
5
How has this event changed your life?
2
When and Where did it happen?
How to talk about an event?
Influence
(Ending)
The topic and
the event
一般过去时
Look and write
开头:引出事件,介绍时间和地点。
我不能相信今天是初中的最后一天。我始终记得初一我参加英语演讲比赛的那天。
I can’t believe that this is the _______of junior high school. I still remember the day when I ___________ the English speaking ___________ in Grade 7.
last day
took part in
competition
正文:事件的经过和结果。
过去我很害羞,害怕在公众场合讲话。然而我想做出改变,所以我在初一参加了学校的英语演讲比赛。
I ______________ shy and be ___________ of speaking in front of the __________. I wanted to _________________, so I entered the school _____________________________ in the first year of junior high school.
used to be
afraid
public
make a change
English speaking competition
Look and write
正文:事件的经过和结果。
那天,我太紧张以至于不敢去学校礼堂。但我的英语老师鼓励了我。她说我足够好做好这件事。我所有的同班同学都在学校礼堂等着我。
On that day, I was too ________ to __________________. But my English teacher ____________ me. She said that I was ___________________________. All my classmates were _____________ me in the school hall.
nervous
go to the school hall
encouraged
good enough to make it
waiting for
他们都是我的后援。最终,我不仅赢得了比赛,还赢得了自信。自那以后,我的生活就变了。我再也不害怕在公众面前说话了。They’re all my backup. Finally, ________ did I win a prize, _______ won confidence. My life ______ _______ since then. I am not ________ speaking in front of the public _____.
not only
but also
has
scared of
anymore
正文:事件的经过和结果。
changed
结尾:表达你对此事的看法、感受。
勇敢做自己。你会发现世界比你想象的更美好。Be __________ and be ___________. You’ll find the world is a _________________ than you thought.
brave
yourself
better place
Look and write
Sample writing
I can’t believe that this is the last day of junior high school. I still remember the day when I took part in the English speaking competition in Grade 7.
I used to be shy and be afraid of speaking in front of the public. I wanted to make a change, so I entered the school English speaking competition in the first year of junior high school. On that day, I was too nervous to go to the school hall. But my English teacher encouraged me. She said that I was good enough to make it. All my classmates were waiting for me in the school hall. They’re all my backup. Finally, not only did I win a prize, but also won confidence. My life has changed since then. I am not scared of speaking in front of the public anymore.
Be brave and be yourself. You’ll find the world is a better place than you thought.
05 Post writing
Look and say
Appreciate the past!
Cherish the present!
Look ahead to the future!
感悟校园生活
Look and say
What did you learn in this class?
What did you learn in this class?
To cherish the time and life with all of the people in your junior high school.
To communicate more with your teachers.
To develop true friendship with your classmates.
Look and say
Every person you met, every thing you did makes a part of you now. No matter happy or sad, you should thank the person and event that help you grow up.
感恩过去,感恩亲友,感恩师长… …
Look ahead to the future
graduate from ….
yesterday is history
tomorrow is a mystery
today is a gift !
Look and say
Self Check
1 What happened in junior high that made you have these feelings? Complete the chart.
Feelings Memories/Experiences
excited
happy
worried
sad
tired
proud
shy
Our class won the first prize in the the sports meeting.
I was happy when pur math teacher praised me.
I didn’t finish my homework and my teachers were strict.
When I had a fight with my best friend and we didn’t talk to each other for a week.
I was tired after staying up late at night to study.
I got first in the final examination.
I felt shy on the first day of Grade 7 and did not dare to talk to anyone.
Look and say
Self Check
2 Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
I can’t __________ (believe) that today is the last day of junior high school. I still ___________ (remember) the first day of Grade 7 like it was yesterday. I used to _____ (be) a really shy person, so on the first day of junior high, I _______ (be) so scared and nervous. I _________ (think) that I would never make any friends. But now, I _______(realize) that I was just being silly. Since then, I __________ (make) so many good friends and I ________________ (share) so many good memories with them. Even though I ________ (be) sad that junior high is over, I _____________ (look) forward to new experiences in senior high!
believe
remember
be
was
thought
realize
have made
share/have shared
am
look/am looking
06 Exercises
Class test
一、用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空
1. We are ________(set) out for the airport tomorrow.
2. The news caused great __________(excite)among her friends.
3. Never fail to be ________(thank) to the people around you.
4. I'm not sure whether the watches are those _____________ (gentleman).
5. I remembered ________(get) a letter from my good friend last year.
setting
excitement
thankful
gentle men's
getting
Class test
二、根据提示完成句子
1. 这些贫穷的孩子仍然渴望知识。
The poor children are still _____ ______ knowledge.
2. 我们需要对我们的环境负责。
We need to _____ ______ _____ our environment.
3. 如果你弄乱了,得自己收拾干净。
If you_____ _____ _____,you clean it up yourself.
4. 你得保持镇静,才不会伤着自己。
You have to _____ ______ ______ in case you hurt yourself.
5. 我很感激张老师,因为她帮了我很多。
I _____ ______ ______Mrs. Zhang because she helped me a lot.
thirsty for
be responsible for
make a mess
keep your cool
was thankful to
Homework
Redraft your passage.
Make a plan for your senior high school.
Give the speech in front of your classmates.
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