Unit 1 Section B 2a～2b（单元话题写作讲练）-【精品课】2025-2026学年七年级英语下册同步精品课件（新教材人教版）

Unit One Animal Friends SectionB Writing (2a-2b) After watching the video，answer the questions What is Alice’s favourite animal？ What is its name？ What colour is it？ What does Alice think of it？ A dog is always a part of the family. A dog is always a part of the family. WWW.Animals Forum.com Let’s find out more informations 4 Qing The roars of tigers and lions. ...... My Favourite Animal: The Elephant An unlucky peacock Look at my cute dog! Qing The roars of tigers and lions. ...... My Favourite Animal: The Elephant An unlucky peacock Look at my dog! BlindWithHua Qing Look at my cute dog! 2 hours ago Can you complete this post? Post-reading 2a ❑Complete the passage with the words in the box. close friendly big great beautiful big beautiful friendly great close ...的一部分 相当，非常 help sb. do sth帮助某人做某事 走路去 一点也不 和...一起玩 7 Pre-writing Read again and complete the mind map. 1. What does it look like? 2. What is it like? 3. What can it do? 4. Why does she like it so much? quite a ______ dog have ________ fur really ____ but not _____ love to _________ everyone help Xiaohua ______ _____ around can see and have great _________ help Xiaohua walk to school and ________ big scary play with friendly beautiful find her way hearing stay safe Xiaohua is _______. She’s her _____. She helps her a lot. eyes special My dog, Xiaohua, is part of the family. She is quite a big dog, but she is not scary at all. She has beautiful fur. She is really friendly and loves to play with everyone. She is also very special. You see, I am blind, Xiaohua is my eyes. She helps me find my way around. She can see and has great hearing. She helps me walk to school and stay safe. I love her very much. We are close friends. What can you talk about when you describe(描述) your favourite animal? 1. What does it look like? 2. What is it like? 3. What can it do? 4. Why does she like it so much? Pre-writing Pre-writing Writing Framework Favorite Animal What does it look like? What can it do? What is it like? Why do you like it so much? It is tall / strong / huge / ... It has big eyes / beautiful fur It can help ... It’s good at ... It is kind / friendly / playful / lazy / scary ... I like it because ... It makes me feel happy / ... What’s the structure of the passage? Pre-writing My dog, Xiaohua, is part of the family. She is quite a big dog, but she is not scary at all. She has beautiful fur. She is really friendly and loves to play with everyone. She is also very special. You see, I am blind, Xiaohua is my eyes. She helps me find my way around. She can see and has great hearing. She helps me walk to school and stay safe. I love her very much. We are close friends. Beginning Body Ending Finish the outline about your favorite animal. What’s it（动物种类介绍） What does it look like（外貌特征） What can it do（能力） Why do you like it so much What is it like（性格特征） My favorite animal is... They are from... They live in... They are... They have... They can... They are good at... They are... Because... My favorite animal Beginning Body Ending 本单元写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群，涉 及子主题“常见的动物，动物的特征与生活环境”和“热爱与敬畏自然，与自 然和谐共生”。常见的写作任务是介绍自己喜欢的动物，表达对动物的关爱 和保护。体裁多为说明文。 13 ◆开头句 ①Of all the animals,dogs are my favourite animals. ②I have a lovely pet bird. I like it very much. ◆中间句 ①I like pandas best because they’re interesting. ②They can do many amazing things. ③They look like big cats. ④Some dogs can help blind people in many ways and even save their lives when they are in danger. 14 ◆结尾句 ①Animals are our best friends. ②Elephants are now in great danger,so we must save them. ③I hope we all love animals and they can live happily. 【谚语积累】 ①Love me,love my dog.爱屋及乌。 ②Don’t let our children see today’s animals only in museums.不要让我们 的孩子只能在博物馆里见到现在的动物。 15 假如你是李华，你们班本次英语口语课的主题是“让大家介绍自己喜欢 的动物”。请以“My Favourite Animal”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍一下自己最 喜欢的动物，为这次英语口语课做好准备。词数不少于70。 内容提示： 1.What’s your favourite animal and what do they look like? 2.Why do you like them? 3.How should you treat（对待） them? 参考词汇：guard 保卫 16 审题指导 1.文体：说明文 2.人称：以第三人称为主 3.时态：一般现在时 17 思路点拨 18 优秀范文 My Favourite Animal Of all the animals,dogs are my favourite animals. There are many different kinds of dogs. They come ①in different sizes and colours.They have beautiful fur. They can do many amazing things. For example,some can walk on two legs,and others can open the door. I like 点评： 用①in different sizes and colours表示体型和颜色不同，使 表达更丰富。 19 dogs best ②because they can ③not only help guard our houses,but also be our good friends. They are ④so clever that they can understand us when we talk to them. Some dogs can help blind people in many ways and even save their lives when they are in danger. ②because 引导原因状语从句， 贴合本单元所学新知识,提升句子 档次；③“not only…but also…” 连接两个并列成分，使文章语言 简洁流畅；④“so…that…”结构的 使用,使句式更高级,增加文章的 亮点。 续表 20 ⑤In a word,dogs are my favourite animals,and they are our best friends. So we should take good care of them. ⑤In a word 总结全文,使文章脉 络清晰、结构完整。 本篇范文语言流畅，句式高级， 同时能运用本单元所学内容 because，for example，in danger，take good care of等。 续表 21 假如你是李华,你校广播站“自然”栏目正在开展以“爱护动物”为主题的 征文活动。你想选择老虎作为你写作的主题动物。请你根据下面的要点提 示，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文来介绍老虎。 内容提示： 1.简单介绍老虎的基本信息（如外形特点、食物、栖息地、能力等）； 2.号召大家积极行动起来保护老虎。 参考词汇：kind of 有点儿 22 审题指导 1.文体： ________ 2.人称： __________和 __________ 3.时态： ____________ 说明文 第一人称 第三人称 一般现在时 23 思路点拨 （温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲） 点明喜欢的动物 As for me,tigers are my favourite animals. 介绍老虎的基 本信息 orange and black;look like big cats from Asia;like eating meat good at swimming;run quite fast 呼吁人们保护老虎 Tigers now are in great danger,so we must save them. 24 小试身手 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ There are many kinds of animals. Some people like pandas. Some like lions…As for me，tigers are my favourite animals. I like tigers best,because they are strong and kind of beautiful. Tigers are orange and black and they look like big cats. They come from Asia. They like eating meat. They are good at swimming and they can run quite fast. Tigers now are in great danger,so we must save them. We shouldn’t buy things made of their fur. 25 My favorite animal is the panda. They have soft black-and-white fur, round faces with black eye patches, and black ears. Pandas are large but move slowly and calmly, giving them a peaceful appearance. They mostly eat bamboo and spend their days eating, resting, and playing. Pandas are gentle and solitary animals. I love pandas because of their calm nature and unique charm. They remind me of the importance of slowing down, enjoying life's simple pleasures, and living in harmony with nature. My favorite animal is the dog. Dogs are friendly and loyal. They come in different sizes and colors, but all dogs love to play and be with people. Dogs enjoy going for walks, playing fetch, and cuddling. They are always happy to see you and make great friends. I love how dogs are always there for you, giving love and support. They make life better with their fun and caring nature. Having a dog feels like having a best friend by your side. What’s your favourite animal? I like my pet cat best. How to write a passage about your favourite animals? 1. What does it look like? 2. What is it like? 3. What can it do? 4. Why does she like it so much? While-writing 开门见山：引出最喜欢的动物 Beginning Body Ending 细节描写：从各方面介绍 情感表达：呼吁保护/表达喜爱… How to write a passage about your favourite animals? While-writing 开门见山：引出最喜欢的动物 Beginning Body Ending My favorite animal is my pet cat, Mimi. She’s part of my family. 细节描写：从各方面介绍 情感表达：呼吁保护/表达喜爱… How to write a passage about your favourite animals? While-writing Beginning Body Ending 细节描写：从各方面介绍 开门见山：引出最喜欢的动物 情感表达：呼吁保护/表达喜爱… She has soft fur and beautiful eyes. She is cute and playful. She loves to play with a ball. She can catch mice and keep the house safe. When I come home from school. Mimi always runs to me. We play together and she makes me happy. How to write a passage about your favourite animals? While-writing Beginning Body Ending 细节描写：从各方面介绍 开门见山：引出最喜欢的动物 情感表达：呼吁保护/表达喜爱… I love her very much. We are close friends. How to write a passage about your favourite animals? While-writing Beginning Body Ending 细节描写：从各方面介绍 开门见山：引出最喜欢的动物 I love her very much. We are close friends. She has soft fur and beautiful eyes. She is cute and playful. She loves to play with a ball. She can catch mice and keep the house safe. When I come home from school. Mimi always runs to me. We play together and she makes me happy. My favorite animal is my pet cat, Mimi. She’s part of my family. Checklist (写作评价表) Content Describe what the animal looks like. ___ Yes ___ No Describe the animal's nature or behavior. ___ Yes ___ No Explain the animal's abilities. Explain why you like it. ___ Yes ___ No Language Use different sentence patterns. ___ Yes ___ No Use adjectives to describe the animal. ___ Yes ___ No Use conjunctions and pronouns to make the article more cohesive. ___ Yes ___ No Level ___ Excellent ___ Good ___ Not bad ___ Need improvement ___ Yes ___ No Suggestion: Post-reading ❑Watch and think: Do you know about these animals? They are all endangered animals!! 35 Many kinds of animals are in great danger or even extinct（灭绝） now. 36 Post-reading ❑Work in groups and discuss: What should we do? No trade, no pains. No buying, no killing! （没有买卖，就没有伤害） ride elephants Don’t animal shows Say “No” to eat wild animals Don’t cut down trees Plant more trees As students 37 $