专题09 读后续写之遇困脱险类（2026年高考二轮复习）

遇困脱险类 必备词汇 1． be trapped in/by... 被困在…… 中 2． find oneself in a dilemma 发现自己陷入困境 3． be caught in a dangerous situation 陷入危险的境地 4． be stuck in a difficult position 陷入艰难的处境 5． in a desperate situation 处于绝望的境地 6． with no way out 无路可走 7． struggle to escape 努力逃脱 8． try hard to find a way out 努力寻找出路 9． take risks to break free 冒险挣脱 10． manage to escape 设法逃脱 11． succeed in getting out 成功出去 12． find a way to safety 找到通往安全的路 必备句子 1. 陷入困境描述 ①Suddenly, they found themselves trapped in a deep cave with no obvious way out. 突然，他们发现自己被困在一个很深的洞穴里，没有明显的出路。 ②Caught in a violent storm, they were in a desperate situation, not knowing what to do. 被困在一场猛烈的暴风雨中，他们处于绝望的境地，不知道该怎么办。 ③It was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.We had no idea where we were.除了几颗星星发出微弱的光外，天完全黑了。我们不知道我们在哪里。 ④When we reached deep into the forest, suddenly the smog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other clearly and lost our way. 当我们到达森林深处时，突然烟雾弥漫，我们看不清彼此，迷了路。 ⑤When buried under snow, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend Paul was not buried so deep.He held on to that faint possibility like a rope which could pull him to safety. 当斯科特被埋在雪下时，他惊恐万分，希望他的朋友保罗没有被埋得那么深。他紧紧抓住这个渺小的可能性，就像抓住一根能把他拉到安全地带的绳子。 2. 努力脱险过程 ①Desperate to get out, they tried every possible means, even taking great risks. 他们不顾一切地想出去，尝试了每一种可能的方法，甚至冒了很大的风险。 ②In the face of the difficult situation, they remained calm and made every effort to find a way to escape. 面对困境，他们保持冷静，竭尽全力寻找逃脱的方法。 ③He shook off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out. 他抖掉雪，徒手把雪弄开，然后设法爬了出来。 ④He painstakingly took only tiny breaths, fighting to stay positive by focusing on this breathing. 他费力地做着微小的呼吸，努力把注意力集中在这种呼吸上，以保持乐观的心态。 ⑤Time ticked away slowly.Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. 时间慢慢流逝。就在他感觉要死了的时候，救援队赶到了。 3. 脱险后的感慨 ①Finally breaking free from the danger, they breathed a sigh of relief and felt an overwhelming sense of joy. 终于摆脱了危险，他们松了一口气，感到一种强烈的喜悦。 ②After a long and tough struggle, they were rescued and realized the value of life and friendship. 经过漫长而艰苦的挣扎，他们被营救了，并且意识到了生命和友谊的价值。 ③Frightened and tired as I was, I congratulated myself on returning safe and sound. 尽管我又害怕又累，我还是庆幸自己安然无恙地回来了。 主题升华句 1. The accident enabled them to cherish every moment and treasure meaningful connections. 事故让他们珍惜每一刻并重视有意义的人际关系。 2. October 20 was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 10月20日是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 3. It occurred to me that helping others is priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard. 我突然意识到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。 4. One simple act of kindness is a blessing for both the giver and the receiver. 一个简单的善举是给予者和接受者的祝福。 5. She felt warmth in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner. 她在寒冷的日子里感受到了温暖，她相信世界充满善意。 6. I realized how lucky I was to be rescued and how blessed I am to have such supportive friends. 我意识到能够被营救、能够有这样支持我的朋友是多么幸运。 7. I will be always careful when I go outdoors. After all, safety always comes first. 以后外出时我会注意安全。毕竟安全总是第一位的。 8. The story shows that everyone should have a good knowledge of first aid, for every second will count in an emergency. 这个故事表明，每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。 9. Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties. 直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。 10. This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour, because after every night there is a day. 这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。 11. “Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” these words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation. “救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。 12. This unforgettable experience forever reminds me to cherish those who shower us with boundless love. 这段难忘的经历永远提醒我要珍惜那些给我们带来无限爱的人。 13. When they learned I was safe, they were relieved. What an unforgettable experience! 当他们得知我很安全时，他们松了一口气。多么难忘的经历啊！ 14. It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn't lose heart. 正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。 典例分析：2024年T8第二次联考——电梯惊魂 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day, the students streamed out of the classrooms. It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet another uneventful day, I thought. Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse. The lift lobby（电梯间）of my flat was old and dirty. The walls，which were painted white, had been dirtied over many years. I reached my flat's lobby, and pressed the lift button and went in. Just then， Mrs Lim，my elderly neighbour，hobbled（蹒跚）in.She looked ancient with tissue paper white hair, wearing a faded old-fashioned dress. I held the lift door open. flashing a friendly smile, and politely greeted her. I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons. She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride. The lift fell down increasingly fast. There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower. My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat. Unfortunately, the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor. I pressed the buttons hard several times, but it was of no help. The lights on the buttons had gone out. It soon dawned on me that we were trapped. An icy fear crept up my spine. Mrs Lim was hysterical（歇斯底里）. “We will never get out!” she cried with her face pale. It had become a colourless mask. I had no time to lose. I pressed the bell in the lift immediately. The sound was surely deafening, but what other choice did I have? Mrs Lim burst into tears. I tried my very best to comfort her,telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely. Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing, and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came. Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. · 解读故事（5R） Read for characters I，Mrs Lim，my elderly neighbour，the firefighters Read for plot After school, when the author went home and entered the elevator, he met his neighbor, Mrs.Lin, who also went in. The elevator suddenly broke down and they were trapped. Mrs.Lin was very afraid. 放学后，作者回家进入电梯时遇到邻居林太太也进了，电梯突然坏了，他们被困。林太太非常害怕。 Read for conflict 如何从电梯中逃脱？ How to escape from the elevator？ Read for emotional changes bored（无聊）→panicked（惊慌）→calm（冷静）→worried（担忧） Read for theme The story shows the author and a neighbor trapped in a faulty elevator. The author tries to comfort the neighbor, reflecting calmness and care in adversity. 文章讲述电梯故障后作者与邻居被困，作者努力安慰邻居，体现了在困境中保持冷静与关爱他人的品质。 · 写作思路(十句五定法) 第一段思路 (5句) 呼喊救命 “救命啊！！! "我声嘶力竭地尖叫，一次又一次地按响紧急警报，试图引起某人的注意但所有的努力都是徒劳的。 电梯一片寂静，只有林女士的抽泣声 似乎过了几个小时，电梯里一片寂静，只有林女士的抽泣声打破了寂静。 老太太害怕和惊慌 老太太是如此的害怕和惊慌，以至于她的脸变得苍白，她的手不停地颤抖，泪水不受控制地顺着她的脸流下来。 我的安慰 我把她搂在怀里，拍拍她的背，告诉他一切都会好的。 担心救援是否会来 当我们等待有人来救我们时，时间似乎停止了，不知道救援是否会来。 第二段思路(5句) 消防员的救援 随着他们的声音越来越大，伴随着工具敲击门的声音，一种如释重负的感觉淹没了我。 我的指引：呼救 带着重新燃起的希望，我大声呼救，指引他们到了我们的位置。 成功获救 门刚被撞开，明亮的光线就射了进来，驱散了电梯里的黑暗，也驱散了我们心中的黑暗。 表达感谢 “谢谢你”我们对消防队员重复道，感激的泪水模糊了我们的双眼。 主题升华 在我内心深处，我知道这平静的一天，变成了如此奇迹的一天，将永远扎根在我的记忆中。 小试牛刀（十大语法句式） 1.“救命啊！！! " 我声嘶力竭地尖叫，一次又一次地按响紧急警报，试图引起某人的注意（非谓语作状语）但所有的努力都是徒劳的。 "Help!!!" I screamed at the top of my lungs and rang the emergency alarm again and again,trying to get someone's attention but all my efforts were in vain. 2.似乎过了几个小时（宾语从句），电梯里一片寂静，只有林女士的抽泣声打破了寂静（非谓语作状语）。 After what seemed like hours,the silence in the elevator was overwhelming, broken only by the sound of Mrs Lim's sobs. 3.老太太是如此的害怕和惊慌（倒装），以至于她的脸变得苍白，她的手不停地颤抖，泪水不受控制地顺着她的脸流下来。（with复合结构） So frightened and panicked was the old lady that her face turned pale and her hands kept trembling with tears rolling down her face without control. 4.我把她搂在怀里，拍拍她的背，告诉他一切都会好的（三连动）。 I gathered her into my arms,patted her on the back and told him that everything would be OK. 5.当我们等待有人来救我们时（状语从句），时间似乎停止了，不知道救援是否会来（非谓语作状语）。 Time seemed to stand still as we waited for someone to rescue us, not knowing if help would come. 6.随着他们的声音越来越大（状语从句），伴随着工具敲击门的声音（非谓语作状语），一种如释重负的感觉淹没了我（无灵主语）。 A sense of relief flooded over me since their voices grew louder,accompanied by the sound of the tools hitting the door. 7.带着重新燃起的希望，我大声呼救，指引他们到了我们的位置（非谓语作状语）。 With rekindled hope,I shouted for help,guiding them to our location. 8.门刚被撞开（倒装），明亮的光线就射了进来，驱散了电梯里的黑暗（非谓语作状语），也驱散了我们心中的黑暗。 No sooner had the door been hit open than bright light streamed in,wiping out the darkness in the lift as well as our heart. 9.“谢谢你” 我们对消防队员重复道，感激的泪水模糊了我们的双眼。（with复合结构） “Thank you “we repeated to the firefighters with tears of gratitude blurring our eyes. 10.在我内心深处，我知道这平静的一天，变成了如此奇迹的一天（定语从句），将永远扎根在我的记忆中。 Deep in my heart,I know the uneventful day,which turned to be such a miraculous one,will be rooted in my memory forever. 练习 1 Early one weekend morning, I was sleeping like a log when the telephone rang. When I answered, I heard my Grandma’s voice, “Hey, sweetheart. I have missed you so much lately. Why don’t you come to the countryside and enjoy some fine views?” she asked. “Dad, Grandma is inviting us to her home,” I shouted to my father who was busy in the kitchen. “Fine with me,” he responded in a casual tone. After a quick breakfast, we drove to Grandma’s. Once we arrived, we were both thrilled by the breathtaking landscape. The plum trees in the backyard were ripe with fruit, while millions of wildflowers colored the valley. Grandma prepared delicious lunch including her special homemade apple jam, which was my favorite. Talking and laughing, we didn't even notice that it was late in the afternoon. Though somewhat cooler than it had been that morning, Grandma suggested that we take her homemade wooden boat for a tour along the nearby river. Seated in the boat, looking up at the sky, I felt like the clouds were greeting us cheerfully from above. In the vast fields, the golden trees were like brides in the sun. The breeze skimmed over the surface of the field, carrying the sweet smell of the flowers. “It is so nice to spend some quality time with family,” Dad murmured. “It feels like we're on an adventure,” I added. While we were admiring the splendid setting around us, the weather started getting hot and humid again. At first, we ignored this change, but when Dad looked up at the sky, he saw dark, low clouds were approaching us. Then a fierce gale sprang up. Lightning flashed within the black clouds, followed by a roar of thunder. “Row!” Dad shouted, trembling, “A tornado is coming!” Para1: There was no time to think. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2:Grandma opened the door for us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写范文 Para1: There was no time to think. We rowed as fast as we could. Although I didn't dare to look, I could feel the tornado getting closer as hail started to fall, hitting the creaky old boat hard. Chased by the relentless nightmare, I couldn't afford to let up for a moment. The oar felt heavy in my hands, and my arms ached sharply, but I kept rowing desperately. Sweat streamed down my face, mixing with the icy hail that bounced off my forehead and blurred my view. Finally, the outline of Grandma’s house emerged through the dark clouds. We stumbled out of the boat the second it hit the shore and sprinted toward the house, pounding on the door frantically. Para 2: Grandma opened the door for us. We stumbled inside, dripping water all over the wooden floor, our clothes clinging tightly to our bodies. Without a word, Grandma grabbed two thick blankets and wrapped them around us. She urged us to follow her to the cellar quickly, saying tornadoes could destroy houses in seconds. Dad helped her seal the cellar door with a heavy plank while I huddled in the corner, still shaking with fear. After what felt like an eternity, the howling wind faded away. When we climbed upstairs, we saw the backyard fence blown down, but we were safe. As Grandma served us hot ginger tea, I hugged her tightly, realizing that family warmth is the most precious shelter in every storm. 练习2 A Reason to Run Justin and his friend David had known each other before they became classmates. David didn’t seem to mind that Justin was small for his age. But on the first day of school, when David and Justin had lunch with the rest of the fifth- grade boys, Steven asked when David had started playing with babies. David laughed out loud and Justin felt uneasy. Several weeks later, David called to invite Justin to his birthday party at his grandfather’s farm. Justin didn’t want to go. He had wanted to spend the day running. When he ran, the problems at school didn’t matter, and being the smallest kid in his class didn’t matter, either. So every day after school he practiced. And Saturday morning was the best time to run. This Saturday, however, he reached the farm with Steven and the rest of David’s friends. David’s mother suggested that David show the boys around, so David asked his grandfather, Mr. Hamilton, to drive them to the foot of a hill. Mr. Hamilton left to prepare for the party. The boys decided to enter a cave, go out from a hole at its top, climb the hill and then hike back. The entrance to the cave was a big stone room with huge wooden beams (梁) bordering the doorway. About thirty feet in was a wall of rocks blocking further entrance. From the hole in the ceiling, light shone on the back wall. David started to show the boys how to climb up the hack wall. “Let me go first,” Steven demanded. He grabbed David’s belt and pulled him off the rock, throwing him into Rafael. “Watch it!” shouted David. But it was too late. He and Rafael fell hard against a beam and the wood started to crack. A second later the beam fell. Then part of the ceiling collapsed. Dust filled the air. When the dust finally settled, the six boys found themselves trapped in the cave and the only exit was the hole in the ceiling, which became smaller — too small for anyone to go out. Worse still, a stream of water was flowing into the cave. Paragraph 1： Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文: Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” His companions' eyes lit up with hope upon hearing this. Despite his fear, Justin took a deep breath and prepared to face the challenge. The boys quickly got to work. The taller ones crouched down, allowing others to step on their shoulders to form an unsteady human ladder. Justin stepped on it carefully, trying his best to keep his balance and struggling to get out of the small hole. The rough rocks scratched his hands and feet, causing him great pain, but he never gave up. Once he got out, he told his friends not to worry, he would save them. He ran towards the farm as quickly as possible, feeling the wind and branches brush his face. His friends below kept encouraging him, cheering him on and giving him the strength to persevere. Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. A surge of joy and hope welled up in his heart. Ignoring the pain in his body, he rushed towards the farmhouse with all his might. Along the way, he shouted for help at the top of his lungs, and his voice echoed across the open farm. Mr. Hamilton, who was preparing for the party, heard the cries for help and rushed out of the house immediately. Justin, gasping for breath, described the situation of his trapped friends to him. Mr. Hamilton wasted no time in gathering the nearby villagers and taking rescue tools to rush to the cave. With the joint efforts of everyone, they found the trapped boys. The boys were successfully rescued. Although they were all frightened, fortunately, there were no life - threatening injuries. This experience deepened the friendship between Justin and his friends and made Justin understand the power of courage and unity. 练习3： Jake, Leo and Tom had been fascinated by the legend of the "Square Treasure" ever since Mr. Higgins, the elderly librarian of Willow Town, shared it with them during storytime. The tale went that a notorious pirate named Captain Blackbeard had hidden a chest of priceless treasure in the town’s central square a century ago, with a riddle: "Only those who value loyalty more than greed shall uncover what’s hidden." The boys had spent weeks poring over old library books, finally copying a tattered map from a 1920s 航海日志 (nautical journal) that marked the treasure’s possible location. On a crisp Saturday morning, the three 12-year-olds set off, their backpacks bulging with peanut butter sandwiches, apple slices, water bottles, and a first-aid kit Tom’s mom had insisted on. They followed the map through the overgrown woods behind Willow Town, their laughter echoing as they pushed aside thorny branches and hopped over gurgling brooks. Jake, the oldest, led the way, while Leo, the most adventurous, kept checking the map, and Tom, the careful one, trailed slightly behind, watching for obstacles. Just as they emerged from the woods and stepped onto the gravel path leading to the central square—only ten minutes away—Tom’s foot slipped on a moss-covered stone. He let out a sharp cry and crumpled to the ground, clutching his right ankle. Jake and Leo spun around, their grins fading as they saw Tom’s face twist in pain. When he tried to stand, a wave of agony washed over him, and tears pooled in his eyes. Leo knelt down and gently touched Tom’s ankle, which was already swelling rapidly. "It’s definitely twisted," he said solemnly. Jake bit his lip, glancing at the path ahead then back at Tom. "We’re so close," he muttered. "But we can’t leave him here alone." The two boys fell into a tense silence, torn between their long-awaited treasure hunt and their friend in need. Para1：Jake knelt down to examine Tom’s ankle gently while Leo rummaged through his backpack for the elastic bandage.____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para2:When they finally stumbled into the central square, the sun was already setting, painting the sky pink and orange. __________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Para 1: Jake knelt down to examine Tom’s ankle gently while Leo rummaged through his backpack for the elastic bandage. “We can’t turn back now—we’ve come so far,” Leo said firmly. Jake nodded and took off his jacket, rolling it into a thick pad. They helped Tom sit up, propped his injured leg on the pad, and wrapped the bandage tightly around the swollen area. Then Jake squatted down, “Hop on my back.” Tom hesitated, but Leo pushed him softly, saying it was teamwork that made adventures meaningful. Tom climbed on Jake’s back, and Leo held the map in one hand and supported Tom’s waist with the other. They moved slowly, Jake grunting occasionally under the weight, but none of them complained. The path seemed longer than before, but their steps never stopped. Para2. When they finally stumbled into the central square, the sun was already setting, painting the sky pink and orange. They scanned every corner eagerly—flower beds, benches, and the fountain—but found nothing that looked like treasure. Tom slid off Jake’s back and limped to the square’s center, where a weathered stone statue of a little boy stood. Suddenly, he pointed at the statue’s base. Carved there were the same words Mr. Higgins had quoted: “The treasure lies where courage meets friendship.” The three boys stared at each other, then grinned. They realized the “treasure” wasn’t gold or jewels. It was the time they’d spent together, the way they’d helped Tom through the pain, and the bond that had grown stronger during the adventure. As they sat on the steps of the statue eating snacks, Tom’s ankle didn’t hurt so much anymore. 练习4 Uncle Jed, a 68-year-old retired carpenter, had lived in the small town for forty years. He was a quiet man who spent most of his time tending to his flower bed or mending things for neighbors. One summer afternoon, he was watering roses in his yard when thick black smoke suddenly billowed from the house next door. The house belonged to the Carters, whose parents had left for the city that morning, leaving 10-year-old Lila and 7-year-old Milo at home. “Fire! Help!” A shrill cry from Lila cut through the air. Uncle Jed dropped his watering can and rushed over. The front door was blocked by flames, and the windows were glowing red. He banged on the door frantically, but only frightened sobs came from inside. Without a second thought, he grabbed a wet blanket from his porch, wrapped it around his shoulders, and smashed a side window with a nearby shovel. The scorching heat and smoke made him cough violently, but he climbed through the window without hesitation. Inside, the house was filled with choking smoke. He called out the kids’ names loudly. A weak “We’re here!” came from the staircase. He stumbled toward the sound, his eyes stinging from the smoke. When he found Lila and Milo huddled on the steps, trembling with fear, he knelt down and pulled them close. “Hold onto me tightly, don’t let go!” he said hoarsely. He lifted Milo in one arm and held Lila’s hand tightly, heading for the broken window. Para 1. Just as they were about to reach it, a burning beam creaked and fell from the ceiling. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para2. Neighbors who had gathered around quickly carried Uncle Jed away from the burning house._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写范文 Para 1. Just as they were about to reach it, a burning beam creaked and fell from the ceiling. Uncle Jed instinctively twisted his body, shielding the two kids with his back. The beam crashed down, grazing his shoulder and setting his blanket on fire. He let out a low groan but didn’t stop moving. Lila screamed and helped pat out the flames on his coat while Milo buried his face in his chest, sobbing. Uncle Jed stumbled forward, every step feeling heavy as the smoke seeped into his lungs. He pushed the kids out the window first, then climbed out himself. As soon as the kids landed safely on the grass, he collapsed to his knees, coughing uncontrollably. His vision blurred, and he felt his body go limp. Para2. Neighbors who had gathered around quickly carried Uncle Jed away from the burning house. Someone called the emergency number, and an ambulance arrived within ten minutes. Lila and Milo, who were being comforted by a neighbor, cried as they watched Uncle Jed being lifted onto the stretcher. At the hospital, the doctor said Uncle Jed had suffered burns and smoke inhalation, which caused his coma. Three days later, he finally opened his eyes. The first thing he saw was Lila and Milo holding a drawing they’d made—him carrying them through the fire. “Thank you, Uncle Jed,” they whispered. Uncle Jed managed a weak smile. Even though his body ached, he knew that saving the two kids was the most important thing he’d ever done. 练习5 As mountains go, 1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn't particularly impressive. But its inviting views of western Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming content among its steep, slippery cliffs, resulting in countless injuries and even deaths. Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak's record. As such, he stayed a good ten feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day in August 2019. He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the splendid view; one hiker, around 60 and dressed in pink, was peeking over the lip of the high cliff with her husband, busy taking photos of the distant valleys. When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two headed down the trail. Suddenly, he heard something frightening: “Paula! Paula!" a man yelled. Grant wheeled around. The woman in pink was nowhere to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain. Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees. Grant decided to lend a hand. After assuring his mother that he would be safe, Grant walked off the trail alone. After 15 minutes of climbing over very large rocks, pushing past sharp brush, and slipping down patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in pink and crumpled in a kneeling position on a small rock outcropping. The woman had fallen about 75 feet. Incredibly, she was alive. “Paula!” Grant shouted. “Paula! Is that you?” The woman hardly responded. He called 911 to report her location. He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more. Para 1: She was moaning and hardly making sense. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: About 45 minutes later, the rescuers arrived on the top of the mountain. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写范文 Para 1. She was moaning and hardly making sense. Grant crawled on all fours up the narrow path, digging his fingers and toes into the dirt to keep from slipping. When he reached Paula, he gently held her shoulders and told her to stay still softly. He noticed her left leg was swollen badly and her elbow was bleeding. Taking out the band-aid and water from his backpack—his mother always made him carry a mini first-aid kit—he cleaned her wound carefully and wrapped it up. To keep her awake, he kept chatting with her, asking about her family and hobbies. Paula gradually calmed down and stopped trying to move, only occasionally groaning in pain. Para 2. About 45 minutes later, the rescuers arrived on the top of the mountain. Guided by Grant’s location message, they lowered a stretcher down the cliff with ropes. Grant helped the rescuers secure Paula onto the stretcher, warning them of her injured leg. When Paula was slowly lifted up, her husband rushed over, tears streaming down his face. He grabbed Grant’s hands tightly and kept saying thank you. Grant’s mother also ran over and hugged him tightly, proud yet relieved. Later, Paula’s family sent Grant a photo of her recovering in the hospital. Every time he looked at it, Grant felt proud of his courage to act in that critical moment. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 遇困脱险类 必备词汇 1． be trapped in/by... 被困在…… 中 2． find oneself in a dilemma 发现自己陷入困境 3． be caught in a dangerous situation 陷入危险的境地 4． be stuck in a difficult position 陷入艰难的处境 5． in a desperate situation 处于绝望的境地 6． with no way out 无路可走 7． struggle to escape 努力逃脱 8． try hard to find a way out 努力寻找出路 9． take risks to break free 冒险挣脱 10． manage to escape 设法逃脱 11． succeed in getting out 成功出去 12． find a way to safety 找到通往安全的路 必备句子 1. 陷入困境描述 ①Suddenly, they found themselves trapped in a deep cave with no obvious way out. 突然，他们发现自己被困在一个很深的洞穴里，没有明显的出路。 ②Caught in a violent storm, they were in a desperate situation, not knowing what to do. 被困在一场猛烈的暴风雨中，他们处于绝望的境地，不知道该怎么办。 ③It was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.We had no idea where we were.除了几颗星星发出微弱的光外，天完全黑了。我们不知道我们在哪里。 ④When we reached deep into the forest, suddenly the smog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other clearly and lost our way. 当我们到达森林深处时，突然烟雾弥漫，我们看不清彼此，迷了路。 ⑤When buried under snow, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend Paul was not buried so deep.He held on to that faint possibility like a rope which could pull him to safety. 当斯科特被埋在雪下时，他惊恐万分，希望他的朋友保罗没有被埋得那么深。他紧紧抓住这个渺小的可能性，就像抓住一根能把他拉到安全地带的绳子。 2. 努力脱险过程 ①Desperate to get out, they tried every possible means, even taking great risks. 他们不顾一切地想出去，尝试了每一种可能的方法，甚至冒了很大的风险。 ②In the face of the difficult situation, they remained calm and made every effort to find a way to escape. 面对困境，他们保持冷静，竭尽全力寻找逃脱的方法。 ③He shook off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out. 他抖掉雪，徒手把雪弄开，然后设法爬了出来。 ④He painstakingly took only tiny breaths, fighting to stay positive by focusing on this breathing. 他费力地做着微小的呼吸，努力把注意力集中在这种呼吸上，以保持乐观的心态。 ⑤Time ticked away slowly.Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. 时间慢慢流逝。就在他感觉要死了的时候，救援队赶到了。 3. 脱险后的感慨 ①Finally breaking free from the danger, they breathed a sigh of relief and felt an overwhelming sense of joy. 终于摆脱了危险，他们松了一口气，感到一种强烈的喜悦。 ②After a long and tough struggle, they were rescued and realized the value of life and friendship. 经过漫长而艰苦的挣扎，他们被营救了，并且意识到了生命和友谊的价值。 ③Frightened and tired as I was, I congratulated myself on returning safe and sound. 尽管我又害怕又累，我还是庆幸自己安然无恙地回来了。 主题升华句 1. The accident enabled them to cherish every moment and treasure meaningful connections. 事故让他们珍惜每一刻并重视有意义的人际关系。 2. October 20 was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 10月20日是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 3. It occurred to me that helping others is priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard. 我突然意识到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。 4. One simple act of kindness is a blessing for both the giver and the receiver. 一个简单的善举是给予者和接受者的祝福。 5. She felt warmth in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner. 她在寒冷的日子里感受到了温暖，她相信世界充满善意。 6. I realized how lucky I was to be rescued and how blessed I am to have such supportive friends. 我意识到能够被营救、能够有这样支持我的朋友是多么幸运。 7. I will be always careful when I go outdoors. After all, safety always comes first. 以后外出时我会注意安全。毕竟安全总是第一位的。 8. The story shows that everyone should have a good knowledge of first aid, for every second will count in an emergency. 这个故事表明，每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。 9. Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties. 直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。 10. This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour, because after every night there is a day. 这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。 11. “Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” these words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation. “救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。 12. This unforgettable experience forever reminds me to cherish those who shower us with boundless love. 这段难忘的经历永远提醒我要珍惜那些给我们带来无限爱的人。 13. When they learned I was safe, they were relieved. What an unforgettable experience! 当他们得知我很安全时，他们松了一口气。多么难忘的经历啊！ 14. It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn't lose heart. 正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。 典例分析：2024年T8第二次联考——电梯惊魂 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day, the students streamed out of the classrooms. It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet another uneventful day, I thought. Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse. The lift lobby（电梯间）of my flat was old and dirty. The walls，which were painted white, had been dirtied over many years. I reached my flat's lobby, and pressed the lift button and went in. Just then， Mrs Lim，my elderly neighbour，hobbled（蹒跚）in.She looked ancient with tissue paper white hair, wearing a faded old-fashioned dress. I held the lift door open. flashing a friendly smile, and politely greeted her. I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons. She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride. The lift fell down increasingly fast. There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower. My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat. Unfortunately, the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor. I pressed the buttons hard several times, but it was of no help. The lights on the buttons had gone out. It soon dawned on me that we were trapped. An icy fear crept up my spine. Mrs Lim was hysterical（歇斯底里）. “We will never get out!” she cried with her face pale. It had become a colourless mask. I had no time to lose. I pressed the bell in the lift immediately. The sound was surely deafening, but what other choice did I have? Mrs Lim burst into tears. I tried my very best to comfort her,telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely. Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing, and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came. Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. · 解读故事（5R） Read for characters I，Mrs Lim，my elderly neighbour，the firefighters Read for plot After school, when the author went home and entered the elevator, he met his neighbor, Mrs.Lin, who also went in. The elevator suddenly broke down and they were trapped. Mrs.Lin was very afraid. 放学后，作者回家进入电梯时遇到邻居林太太也进了，电梯突然坏了，他们被困。林太太非常害怕。 Read for conflict 如何从电梯中逃脱？ How to escape from the elevator？ Read for emotional changes bored（无聊）→panicked（惊慌）→calm（冷静）→worried（担忧） Read for theme The story shows the author and a neighbor trapped in a faulty elevator. The author tries to comfort the neighbor, reflecting calmness and care in adversity. 文章讲述电梯故障后作者与邻居被困，作者努力安慰邻居，体现了在困境中保持冷静与关爱他人的品质。 · 写作思路(十句五定法) 第一段思路 (5句) 呼喊救命 “救命啊！！! "我声嘶力竭地尖叫，一次又一次地按响紧急警报，试图引起某人的注意但所有的努力都是徒劳的。 电梯一片寂静，只有林女士的抽泣声 似乎过了几个小时，电梯里一片寂静，只有林女士的抽泣声打破了寂静。 老太太害怕和惊慌 老太太是如此的害怕和惊慌，以至于她的脸变得苍白，她的手不停地颤抖，泪水不受控制地顺着她的脸流下来。 我的安慰 我把她搂在怀里，拍拍她的背，告诉他一切都会好的。 担心救援是否会来 当我们等待有人来救我们时，时间似乎停止了，不知道救援是否会来。 第二段思路(5句) 消防员的救援 随着他们的声音越来越大，伴随着工具敲击门的声音，一种如释重负的感觉淹没了我。 我的指引：呼救 带着重新燃起的希望，我大声呼救，指引他们到了我们的位置。 成功获救 门刚被撞开，明亮的光线就射了进来，驱散了电梯里的黑暗，也驱散了我们心中的黑暗。 表达感谢 “谢谢你”我们对消防队员重复道，感激的泪水模糊了我们的双眼。 主题升华 在我内心深处，我知道这平静的一天，变成了如此奇迹的一天，将永远扎根在我的记忆中。 小试牛刀（十大语法句式） 1.“救命啊！！! " 我声嘶力竭地尖叫，一次又一次地按响紧急警报，试图引起某人的注意（非谓语作状语）但所有的努力都是徒劳的。 2.似乎过了几个小时（宾语从句），电梯里一片寂静，只有林女士的抽泣声打破了寂静（非谓语作状语）。 3.老太太是如此的害怕和惊慌（倒装），以至于她的脸变得苍白，她的手不停地颤抖，泪水不受控制地顺着她的脸流下来。（with复合结构） 4.我把她搂在怀里，拍拍她的背，告诉他一切都会好的（三连动）。 5.当我们等待有人来救我们时（状语从句），时间似乎停止了，不知道救援是否会来（非谓语作状语）。 6.随着他们的声音越来越大（状语从句），伴随着工具敲击门的声音（非谓语作状语），一种如释重负的感觉淹没了我（无灵主语）。 7.带着重新燃起的希望，我大声呼救，指引他们到了我们的位置（非谓语作状语）。 8.门刚被撞开（倒装），明亮的光线就射了进来，驱散了电梯里的黑暗（非谓语作状语），也驱散了我们心中的黑暗。 9.“谢谢你” 我们对消防队员重复道，感激的泪水模糊了我们的双眼。（with复合结构） 10.在我内心深处，我知道这平静的一天，变成了如此奇迹的一天（定语从句），将永远扎根在我的记忆中。 练习 1 Early one weekend morning, I was sleeping like a log when the telephone rang. When I answered, I heard my Grandma’s voice, “Hey, sweetheart. I have missed you so much lately. Why don’t you come to the countryside and enjoy some fine views?” she asked. “Dad, Grandma is inviting us to her home,” I shouted to my father who was busy in the kitchen. “Fine with me,” he responded in a casual tone. After a quick breakfast, we drove to Grandma’s. Once we arrived, we were both thrilled by the breathtaking landscape. The plum trees in the backyard were ripe with fruit, while millions of wildflowers colored the valley. Grandma prepared delicious lunch including her special homemade apple jam, which was my favorite. Talking and laughing, we didn't even notice that it was late in the afternoon. Though somewhat cooler than it had been that morning, Grandma suggested that we take her homemade wooden boat for a tour along the nearby river. Seated in the boat, looking up at the sky, I felt like the clouds were greeting us cheerfully from above. In the vast fields, the golden trees were like brides in the sun. The breeze skimmed over the surface of the field, carrying the sweet smell of the flowers. “It is so nice to spend some quality time with family,” Dad murmured. “It feels like we're on an adventure,” I added. While we were admiring the splendid setting around us, the weather started getting hot and humid again. At first, we ignored this change, but when Dad looked up at the sky, he saw dark, low clouds were approaching us. Then a fierce gale sprang up. Lightning flashed within the black clouds, followed by a roar of thunder. “Row!” Dad shouted, trembling, “A tornado is coming!” Para1: There was no time to think. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2:Grandma opened the door for us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习2 A Reason to Run Justin and his friend David had known each other before they became classmates. David didn’t seem to mind that Justin was small for his age. But on the first day of school, when David and Justin had lunch with the rest of the fifth- grade boys, Steven asked when David had started playing with babies. David laughed out loud and Justin felt uneasy. Several weeks later, David called to invite Justin to his birthday party at his grandfather’s farm. Justin didn’t want to go. He had wanted to spend the day running. When he ran, the problems at school didn’t matter, and being the smallest kid in his class didn’t matter, either. So every day after school he practiced. And Saturday morning was the best time to run. This Saturday, however, he reached the farm with Steven and the rest of David’s friends. David’s mother suggested that David show the boys around, so David asked his grandfather, Mr. Hamilton, to drive them to the foot of a hill. Mr. Hamilton left to prepare for the party. The boys decided to enter a cave, go out from a hole at its top, climb the hill and then hike back. The entrance to the cave was a big stone room with huge wooden beams (梁) bordering the doorway. About thirty feet in was a wall of rocks blocking further entrance. From the hole in the ceiling, light shone on the back wall. David started to show the boys how to climb up the hack wall. “Let me go first,” Steven demanded. He grabbed David’s belt and pulled him off the rock, throwing him into Rafael. “Watch it!” shouted David. But it was too late. He and Rafael fell hard against a beam and the wood started to crack. A second later the beam fell. Then part of the ceiling collapsed. Dust filled the air. When the dust finally settled, the six boys found themselves trapped in the cave and the only exit was the hole in the ceiling, which became smaller — too small for anyone to go out. Worse still, a stream of water was flowing into the cave. Paragraph 1： Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习3： Jake, Leo and Tom had been fascinated by the legend of the "Square Treasure" ever since Mr. Higgins, the elderly librarian of Willow Town, shared it with them during storytime. The tale went that a notorious pirate named Captain Blackbeard had hidden a chest of priceless treasure in the town’s central square a century ago, with a riddle: "Only those who value loyalty more than greed shall uncover what’s hidden." The boys had spent weeks poring over old library books, finally copying a tattered map from a 1920s 航海日志 (nautical journal) that marked the treasure’s possible location. On a crisp Saturday morning, the three 12-year-olds set off, their backpacks bulging with peanut butter sandwiches, apple slices, water bottles, and a first-aid kit Tom’s mom had insisted on. They followed the map through the overgrown woods behind Willow Town, their laughter echoing as they pushed aside thorny branches and hopped over gurgling brooks. Jake, the oldest, led the way, while Leo, the most adventurous, kept checking the map, and Tom, the careful one, trailed slightly behind, watching for obstacles. Just as they emerged from the woods and stepped onto the gravel path leading to the central square—only ten minutes away—Tom’s foot slipped on a moss-covered stone. He let out a sharp cry and crumpled to the ground, clutching his right ankle. Jake and Leo spun around, their grins fading as they saw Tom’s face twist in pain. When he tried to stand, a wave of agony washed over him, and tears pooled in his eyes. Leo knelt down and gently touched Tom’s ankle, which was already swelling rapidly. "It’s definitely twisted," he said solemnly. Jake bit his lip, glancing at the path ahead then back at Tom. "We’re so close," he muttered. "But we can’t leave him here alone." The two boys fell into a tense silence, torn between their long-awaited treasure hunt and their friend in need. Para1：Jake knelt down to examine Tom’s ankle gently while Leo rummaged through his backpack for the elastic bandage.____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para2:When they finally stumbled into the central square, the sun was already setting, painting the sky pink and orange. __________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习4 Uncle Jed, a 68-year-old retired carpenter, had lived in the small town for forty years. He was a quiet man who spent most of his time tending to his flower bed or mending things for neighbors. One summer afternoon, he was watering roses in his yard when thick black smoke suddenly billowed from the house next door. The house belonged to the Carters, whose parents had left for the city that morning, leaving 10-year-old Lila and 7-year-old Milo at home. “Fire! Help!” A shrill cry from Lila cut through the air. Uncle Jed dropped his watering can and rushed over. The front door was blocked by flames, and the windows were glowing red. He banged on the door frantically, but only frightened sobs came from inside. Without a second thought, he grabbed a wet blanket from his porch, wrapped it around his shoulders, and smashed a side window with a nearby shovel. The scorching heat and smoke made him cough violently, but he climbed through the window without hesitation. Inside, the house was filled with choking smoke. He called out the kids’ names loudly. A weak “We’re here!” came from the staircase. He stumbled toward the sound, his eyes stinging from the smoke. When he found Lila and Milo huddled on the steps, trembling with fear, he knelt down and pulled them close. “Hold onto me tightly, don’t let go!” he said hoarsely. He lifted Milo in one arm and held Lila’s hand tightly, heading for the broken window. Para 1. Just as they were about to reach it, a burning beam creaked and fell from the ceiling. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para2. Neighbors who had gathered around quickly carried Uncle Jed away from the burning house._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习5 As mountains go, 1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn't particularly impressive. But its inviting views of western Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming content among its steep, slippery cliffs, resulting in countless injuries and even deaths. Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak's record. As such, he stayed a good ten feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day in August 2019. He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the splendid view; one hiker, around 60 and dressed in pink, was peeking over the lip of the high cliff with her husband, busy taking photos of the distant valleys. When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two headed down the trail. Suddenly, he heard something frightening: “Paula! Paula!" a man yelled. Grant wheeled around. The woman in pink was nowhere to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain. Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees. Grant decided to lend a hand. After assuring his mother that he would be safe, Grant walked off the trail alone. After 15 minutes of climbing over very large rocks, pushing past sharp brush, and slipping down patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in pink and crumpled in a kneeling position on a small rock outcropping. The woman had fallen about 75 feet. Incredibly, she was alive. “Paula!” Grant shouted. “Paula! Is that you?” The woman hardly responded. He called 911 to report her location. He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more. Para 1: She was moaning and hardly making sense. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: About 45 minutes later, the rescuers arrived on the top of the mountain. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $