专题08 读后续写之人与动物类（2026年高考二轮复习）

人与动物类 必备短语 1． with shiny fur 有着闪亮的皮毛 2． have sharp claws有锋利的爪子 3． a long tail 一条长尾巴 4． soft feathers 柔软的羽毛 5． crawl slowly 缓慢爬行 6． fly high 高飞 7． bark loudly 大声吠叫 8． develop a deep bond with 与…建立深厚的联系 9． have a special connection with 有特殊的联系 10． feed regularly 定期喂养 必备句子 1.人与凶兽 ①With the bear chasing behind, we waved our hands wildly screaming “Help”.We were running and were trapped to a narrow corner, where I could almost hear the gasps of it. 熊在后面追，我们疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着“救命”。我们跑着跑着被困在一个狭窄的角落里，在那里我几乎可以听到它的喘息声。 ②When a tiger was approaching me, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 当一只老虎向我靠近时，我吓呆了，一动也不敢动。 ③When I saw the wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 当我看到狼时，我感到非常害怕，我的喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。 2.人与可爱型动物 ①The puppy turned his head, looked into my eyes, and licked my face with his wet，warm tongue. 小狗转过头来，看着我的眼睛，用它湿润温暖的舌头舔我的脸。 ②Appearing to be feeling better, the deer slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Lucy’s hand as if to express thanks.What a warm scene!鹿似乎感觉好些了，它慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻露西的手，好像在致谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！ ③Just then, a beautiful bird with colorful feathers flew down and landed in front of them. 就在那时，一只有着彩色羽毛的美丽鸟儿飞落下来，落在他们面前。 ④Out of nowhere, a small kitten with big eyes and a tiny nose appeared. 不知从哪儿冒出来一只大眼睛小鼻子的小猫。 3.描述对动物的喜爱 ①Instantly, she was charmed by the adorable animal and couldn't take her eyes off it. 瞬间，她就被这可爱的动物迷住了，眼睛无法从它身上移开。 ②He fell in love with the friendly dog at first sight and knew they would become great companions. 他第一眼就爱上了这只友好的狗，并且知道他们会成为很棒的伙伴。 4.人与动物互动 ①As she stroked the soft fur of the rabbit, it closed its eyes in contentment. 当她抚摸兔子柔软的皮毛时，兔子满足地闭上了眼睛。 ②He played fetch with the dog, laughing as it ran back and forth excitedly. 他和狗玩接球游戏，看着狗兴奋地来回跑，他笑了起来。 5.动物带来的影响 ①The presence of the animal brought a sense of peace and happiness to their lives. 动物的出现给他们的生活带来了一种平和与幸福的感觉。 ②Thanks to the loyal animal by his side, he found the courage to face difficulties. 多亏了身边忠诚的动物，他找到了面对困难的勇气。 主题升华句 1. Through this experiences, they realize that the bond between humans and animal is built on love, trust, and mutual respect. 通过这次经历，他们意识到人类与动物之间的纽带建立在爱、信任和相互尊重的基础上。 2. This taught them an invaluable lesson that treating animals with kindness and respect creates a world of love and harmony. 这教给他们宝贵的一课，善待动物并尊重它们创造了一个充满爱和和谐的世界。 3. Only then did I realize that animals also know how to extend their appreciation. 直到那时，我才意识到动物也知道如何表达它们的感激之情。 4. It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better. 我突然意识到，一瞬间的善意对另一个人来说意义重大，一个简单的举动就能让世界变得更好。 5. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 在看到这个感激的生物时，我感到一股宽慰和敬畏之情。当我爬上车驾车离开时，我知道我会永远珍惜我们共享的回忆。 6. This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning. 这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是开始。 7. From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals. 我不时地看这张照片，以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。 8. (2020浙江卷）Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion. 尽管冬风凛冽，他们家里的两只可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。 9. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky's hand as if to express thanks. What a warm scene! 狼似乎感觉好些了，它慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻贝基的手，好像在致谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！ 典例分析：2023年1月高考浙江卷——蜂鸟报恩 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. 解读故事（5R） Read for characters I，a hummingbird，my friends Read for plot The author was invited to a farm for a cookout. The author found a hummingbird stuck in spider-webs and saved it. After looking into the author's eyes, the hummingbird flew away. 作者受邀去朋友的农场参加野餐，发现被蛛网缠住的蜂鸟，解救被蛛网缠住的蜂鸟，与作者对视后飞走。 Read for conflict I rescued the hummingbird. The hummingbird reappeared. How can it repay my kindness?我解救蜂鸟，蜂鸟再次出现，如何报恩？ Read for emotional changes curious（好奇）→pitying（怜悯）→worried（担忧）→surprised（惊喜）→touched（感动） Read for theme Through the author's experience of rescuing the hummingbird, it reflects the warmth between humans and animals as well as respect and love for life, emphasizing the beauty of harmonious coexistence between humans and nature. 通过作者救助蜂鸟的经历，体现了人与动物之间的温情以及对生命的尊重和爱护，强调了人与自然和谐共处的美好。 · 写作思路(十句五定法) 第一段思路 (5句) 驾车回忆 当我的车靠近它时，我的思绪回想起我从蜘蛛网里救出蜂鸟的那一刻。 好奇和担心 如此好奇和担心，以至于我迫不及待地想看看窗户是否被修好了。 来到故地 我毫不犹豫地下了车，冲进了那个被遗弃的房子。 欣慰发现 令人欣慰的是，原来窗户上的洞已经找不到了。 想知道蜂鸟情况 离开房子时，我不禁想知道现在情况怎么样了。 第二段思路(5句) 意外重逢 我的心因激动而怦怦直跳，我转过身来，看见同一只蜂鸟悬停在空中。 蜂鸟动作 她拍打着翅膀，看着我的眼睛，发出一声尖锐的叫声，在我面前欢快地鸣叫。 蜂鸟落在手掌， 表达感激 我一伸出手，她就落在了我的手掌上，似乎想表达某种深深的、未说出口的感激.. 我的反应：喂水+满足 我喂她一些食物和水，看着她，直到她消失在视线之外，一种满足感涌上我的心头。 主题升华 我会永远珍惜我们一起分享的回忆，当我爬进我的车，开车离开。 小试牛刀（十大语法句式） 1.当我的车靠近它时（状语从句），我的思绪回想起我从蜘蛛网里救出蜂鸟的那一刻（定语从句）。 As my car got close to it,my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. 2.如此好奇和担心，以至于我迫不及待地想看看窗户是否被修好了。（倒装） So curious and worried that I couldn't wait to see if the window had been fixed. 3.我毫不犹豫地下了车，冲进了那个被遗弃的房子。 Without a second thought, I got off my car and rushed into the deserted house. 4.令人欣慰的是，原来窗户上的洞已经找不到了。（it 作形式主语） It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. 5.离开房子时（非谓语作状语），我不禁想知道现在情况怎么样了。 Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. 6.我的心因激动而怦怦直跳（with复合结构），我转过身来，看见同一只蜂鸟悬停在空中。 With my heart beating/thumping with thrill，I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. 7.她拍打着翅膀，看着我的眼睛，发出一声尖锐的叫声（三连动），在我面前欢快地鸣叫（非谓语作状语）。 She flapped its wings，looked into my eyes and let out a high-pitched squeak,chirping merrily in front of me. 8.我一伸出手（倒装），她就落在了我的手掌上，似乎想表达某种深深的、未说出口的感激。 Hardly had I extended my cupped hand when she landed in my palms,as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude.. 9.我喂她一些食物和水，看着她，直到她消失在视线之外，一种满足感涌上我的心头（with复合结构）。 I fed her some food and water and eyed her until she vanished from sight,with a sense of contentment welling up in my heart. 10.我会永远珍惜我们一起分享的（定语从句）回忆，当我爬进我的车，开车离开。（状语从句） I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 练习 1 Standing at the Police Outpost Lake’s edge, I was fishing with Isaiah, my cousin, our fishing tackle box nearby on the shore. Actually, I’d learned to fish from my dad. He’d taught more to fish alone, in silence, lost in my own thoughts. Like meditation. He’d taught me everything I knew about fishing. Then, he passed away. “Jacob, where should I stand?“ asked Isaiah. “Be quiet or else we won’t catch any fish,” I whispered. Isaiah frowned，pouting(撅嘴)，but it was＂message received.” ”Why do I have to be so quiet? "asked quietly Isaiah. “All those birds are making way more noise than I ever could!” I ignored him. Pulling back on my rod, squinting(眯着眼睛看) into the glare of the sun. Out of the corner of my eye，I caught a glimpse of a few great northern loons(潜鸟) gathering together not far from the shoreline. My mind traveled back to the past. My dad had been a fish and wildlife officer. He loved his job, especially the part where he protected nature from humans. When he returned, we sat on the couch together, and he amused me with stories of life on the road. He once mentioned the loon could easily stab(刺) people to death with its beak! Suddenly, Isaiah’s voice brought me back, “Look, something was coming.” Following the direction, he was pointing, I saw a loon, wailing and making sounds, swam away from the group, toward us. Walking into the water, getting closer to the loon, we both saw thin wire wrapped around its neck and blood spots by its wing. Fishing line maybe? Was it the hook(钩)on the line that made it bleed? Was the loon asking us for help? 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Reaching down, I touched its head, my heart racing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Afraid, I held it out at arm’s length, and Isaiah cut away the fishing line using the scissors. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Para1: Reaching down, I touched its head, my heart racing. I could see there was a shiny red hook embedded in its body, and the fishing line was wrapped tightly around its neck. Left like this, the loon couldn’t survive. It was asking us to help! But if freed, would it stab us to death with its beak? I hesitated. Somehow I felt my dad’s presence, “Jacob, the bird won’t hurt you. It needs your help. Be brave!” Taking a deep breath, I closed my eyes for a second to calm myself. “Isaiah, go grab the scissors from the fishing tackle box.” I said firmly. Soon he came back with the tiny pair of scissors and I bent down to pick up the loon. Para2: Afraid, I held it out at arm’s length, and Isaiah cut away the fishing line using the scissors. Luckily, the loon was silent and things went well. “Now take out the hook, Isaiah. Hurry! ” “All right! I will.” Isaiah bit on his lower lip. Slowly, his slim fingers worked to loosen the hook and pulled it out. Finally, the loon was freed. Isaiah and I breathed a sigh of relief. As I set it down on the water, it slapped its wings down slightly on the surface of the lake, seeming to be saying, “Thank you, boys.” Big smiles formed on our faces with a sense of accomplishment filled with our heart. I decided to protect wildlife like my father and felt it our duty to protect nature. 练习2： Ben was awakened by a gunshot. The sharp noise came through the thick stone walls of the house. It was cold in the bedroom and Ben was shaking as he got out of bed. He put on his eyeglasses and went over to the window. The field was covered with white frost. Nothing moved out there in the deep quiet just before sunrise. Ben wondered where the shot had come from. He thought perhaps he had dreamed he heard a gunshot. He looked out toward the frozen lake. Near the trees he saw a shining piece of metal. When it moved, Ben saw that it was a long gun. A minute later, a man came out of the woods. He wore hunting clothes. Suddenly a bird flew upward. The man quickly put the gun to his shoulder and shot. Ben watched the bird, praying it had not been hurt. It flew near the ground and went into some tall grass. Safe, Ben thought. The hunter did not move for a moment, and then he began to follow the bird. Hate for the hunter burned inside Ben. Opening the window, he shouted, "Hey!" His voice cut through the stillness. The hunter stopped, but then continued to follow the bird. Ben shouted again, but this time the hunter did not stop. Then Ben rushed out and moved toward him. The hunter looked back at Ben. Ben had just bought this house in the woods. He wanted to protect everything on his land. He thought that everyone would obey the signs "No Hunting”. However, he heard another gunshot. This troubled him deeply. How could he stop this hunter? He walked toward the lake. He did not want to fight, but the man must go. He walked quietly. He wanted to surprise the hunter. But then, what would he do? He could not fight the hunter. 注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly he heard a bird's wings beating the dry grass. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ There was something threatening in the hunter's cool quiet voice.________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Suddenly he heard a bird's wings beating the dry grass. Ben took a deep breath and thought that the bird exposed its spot to the hunter, who was watching over these grass land. Just at the very moment, the hunter was targeting the bird and was about to shoot when Ben shouted at the top of his voice “Stop!” It startled(惊吓) both the bird and the hunter--the bird soared up to the sky and the hunter put down the gun. He turned around toward the direction where Ben stood, asking, "What are you doing here?” There was something threatening in the hunter's cool quiet voice. Ben straightened his back and replied the intruder's confrontation(对峙) with as much courage as he could summon up, firmly said, “I am the landlord of this place. You step into my private property.And now I demand you leave.” The hunter gave a snort of contempt(轻蔑). “I have claimed this property! LEAVE!” Hearing what Ben said, the hunter swung his gun and whistled, leaving at last. Ben relieved a sigh. The frost on the dry grass started to melt when the rising sun popped out from the east with sunlight dancing on the signs “No hunting”. 练习3. As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over the animal shelter, Sarah walked through the rows of cages until her eyes landed on a small, trembling dog huddled in the corner. "I think I've found the one," Sarah whispered softly to herself as she looked into the dog's sad eyes. This timid, abandoned dog had no idea that a journey of transformation with friendly people lay in store for him. The shelter staff explained that the dog, named Buddy, had a difficult past and was very shy and scared. Sarah extended a hand, offering a soothing tone, "Hey sweetie, you must have a story to tell, but from now on, you've got a buddy in me." Bringing Buddy home was just the beginning of their journey, which was rocky at first for him. Everything was strange and new, causing him to hide under furniture and startle at every sound. Therefore, Sarah provided a cozy bed, delicious meals, and most importantly, heaps of love and comfort. Slowly but surely, he started to emerge from his shell, wagging his tail tentatively and gazing at Sarah with a glimmer of hope in his eyes. Under Sarah's patient and loving guidance, Buddy flourished, even learning tricks and commands, and forming a deep bond with his new owner. The journey of healing turned out to be a success. But Sarah had never expected it would bring about another one. One day, while scrolling through social media, Sarah came across a heartwarming story about dogs being trained to assist children with autism. Those children had social communication difficulties and had few facial expressions and gestures. Without hesitation, she inquired about the program and soon, Buddy was enrolled in training to become a certified therapy dog. But she was unsure whether Buddy would be comfortable with the new challenge. Their first day at the therapy center was filled with uncertainty.______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the weeks progressed, ...__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Their first day at the therapy center was filled with uncertainty. Most kids sat silently, some staring blankly at the floor, others clutching toys tightly. Buddy froze at first, ears drooping when a boy let out a sudden cry. But when Sarah squatted and patted its head gently, it wagged its tail slowly. A little girl named Lila hesitated, then stretched out her hand. To everyone's surprise, Buddy nuzzled her palm softly. Lila's eyes widened, and she let out a tiny giggle—the first sound she’d made all week, the teacher whispered to Sarah with tears in her eyes. As the weeks progressed, Buddy and the kids formed beautiful bonds. It learned to lie quietly beside anxious kids when they upset, and fetch toys to draw shy ones into play. Lila even started talking to Buddy, sharing her snacks. Once, a boy who never communicated had a tantrum. Buddy walked over and rested its head on his lap. Miraculously, he calmed down and stroked Buddy’s fur. Sarah smiled, realizing the beauty of their connection: she’d saved Buddy from loneliness, and Buddy was saving these children from isolation. This is the true magic of human-animal bonds—a circle of rescue, where kindness and love heal both sides equally.. 练习4. That December morning, I decided to take Apple to pay a visit to my aunt. I’d had Apple only a couple of weeks, but we’d become nearly inseparable. I opened the car door. Apple jumped in and settled down on the passenger seat. I started the car and set off．It’s always tricky turning around. I live in a remote area up in the hills, surrounded by woods. I have to drive up the mountain to get to my driveway, which is hardly wide enough for one car and ends at a steep valley．I twisted around and backed up slowly. Just then, a flash of sunlight blinded me. I put my hand up to cover my eyes. I felt a shake as the left rear part of the car dropped. Oh, no! The car slipped and rolled. We landed upside down. I felt a sharp pain in my chest and my legs. I couldn’t move. I looked over to find Apple. She was still in the passenger seat and fortunately she was okay． I grabbed my cell phone and dialed 911. But just as I’d feared; there was no signal at the bottom of this valley. Now what? Robert, my closest neighbor, lived a quarter mile uphill from me, and had his own driveway. It was unlikely that he or anyone else would drive up to my house．Apple barked nervously. At least I could get her out of here. There was a hole in the driver’s side rear window. “Come on, Apple,” I said. Painfully, I reached over, picked her up and gently put her head through the hole. “Go home, baby.” She jumped to the ground and raced up the side of the valley．As the sun set, it turned cold. I trembled with cold and pain. My pulse was weakening. I closed my eyes. Suddenly I was awakened by loud barks． “Help!” I shouted with all my strength.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later, Robert told me that when he got home from work, Apple was waiting for him.___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 “Help!” I shouted with all my strength. My voice cracked midway, worn out by pain and cold. The barks grew louder, mingling with a familiar voice calling my name—it was Robert! I strained to tap the car body with my fist, making dull thuds. Soon, his face appeared. He gasped at the upside - down car and rushed down with a rope. He tied the rope around a nearby tree first, then carefully climbed down to check my condition, whispering reassuring words while trying not to move me roughly. Luckily, I was saved and rushed to the nearest hospital. Later, Robert told me that when he got home from work, Apple was waiting for him. The dog kept tugging at him trousers and barking towards the mountain. Sensing something urgent, he followed Apple. The dog ran fast, never slowing down until they reached the valley. As I lay in the hospital, Apple curled up beside my bed, her head resting on my hand. I finally understood: Apple wasn’t just a dog to me. In the quiet, lonely mountains, she was my family, my connection to the world. The bond between us wasn’t just companionship—it was trust, loyalty, and a promise to look out for each other, no matter what happened. 练习5. I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in Western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention，so I entered it. It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟)，desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand，I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside，closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand，the bird did not fly away；she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still，she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle，she began to move. I stopped，and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering(悬停)，she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment，this tiny creature looked into my eyes，turning her head from side to side. hen she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout，I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing，my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes，then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment，all were speechless. Then someone said，“She must have come to say goodbye.” A few weeks later，I went to the farm again._______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. Invited by my friends, I gladly agreed. As I walked near the milking house, my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s webs. I opened the door to check whether their hole was mended. What comforted me greatly was that the broken window was replaced by a new one. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how the hummingbird was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive？With these thoughts lingering in my mind, a day slowly rolled away. I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. Hovering in the air, it seemed that the bird was waiting for me, with its bright eyes locking on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I couldn’t help but smile. A surge of movement and awe welled up from my heart at the sight of this grateful creature. I stretched out my hand, wondering if it would land. What shocked me again was that she flew closer and stopped in my palm. It was at this moment that I became convinced there exists emotional connections between human and animals and pure attempt to protect them would be rewarding and worthwhile.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 人与动物类 必备短语 1． with shiny fur 有着闪亮的皮毛 2． have sharp claws有锋利的爪子 3． a long tail 一条长尾巴 4． soft feathers 柔软的羽毛 5． crawl slowly 缓慢爬行 6． fly high 高飞 7． bark loudly 大声吠叫 8． develop a deep bond with 与…建立深厚的联系 9． have a special connection with 有特殊的联系 10． feed regularly 定期喂养 必备句子 1.人与凶兽 ①With the bear chasing behind, we waved our hands wildly screaming “Help”.We were running and were trapped to a narrow corner, where I could almost hear the gasps of it. 熊在后面追，我们疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着“救命”。我们跑着跑着被困在一个狭窄的角落里，在那里我几乎可以听到它的喘息声。 ②When a tiger was approaching me, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 当一只老虎向我靠近时，我吓呆了，一动也不敢动。 ③When I saw the wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 当我看到狼时，我感到非常害怕，我的喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。 2.人与可爱型动物 ①The puppy turned his head, looked into my eyes, and licked my face with his wet，warm tongue. 小狗转过头来，看着我的眼睛，用它湿润温暖的舌头舔我的脸。 ②Appearing to be feeling better, the deer slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Lucy’s hand as if to express thanks.What a warm scene!鹿似乎感觉好些了，它慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻露西的手，好像在致谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！ ③Just then, a beautiful bird with colorful feathers flew down and landed in front of them. 就在那时，一只有着彩色羽毛的美丽鸟儿飞落下来，落在他们面前。 ④Out of nowhere, a small kitten with big eyes and a tiny nose appeared. 不知从哪儿冒出来一只大眼睛小鼻子的小猫。 3.描述对动物的喜爱 ①Instantly, she was charmed by the adorable animal and couldn't take her eyes off it. 瞬间，她就被这可爱的动物迷住了，眼睛无法从它身上移开。 ②He fell in love with the friendly dog at first sight and knew they would become great companions. 他第一眼就爱上了这只友好的狗，并且知道他们会成为很棒的伙伴。 4.人与动物互动 ①As she stroked the soft fur of the rabbit, it closed its eyes in contentment. 当她抚摸兔子柔软的皮毛时，兔子满足地闭上了眼睛。 ②He played fetch with the dog, laughing as it ran back and forth excitedly. 他和狗玩接球游戏，看着狗兴奋地来回跑，他笑了起来。 5.动物带来的影响 ①The presence of the animal brought a sense of peace and happiness to their lives. 动物的出现给他们的生活带来了一种平和与幸福的感觉。 ②Thanks to the loyal animal by his side, he found the courage to face difficulties. 多亏了身边忠诚的动物，他找到了面对困难的勇气。 主题升华句 1. Through this experiences, they realize that the bond between humans and animal is built on love, trust, and mutual respect. 通过这次经历，他们意识到人类与动物之间的纽带建立在爱、信任和相互尊重的基础上。 2. This taught them an invaluable lesson that treating animals with kindness and respect creates a world of love and harmony. 这教给他们宝贵的一课，善待动物并尊重它们创造了一个充满爱和和谐的世界。 3. Only then did I realize that animals also know how to extend their appreciation. 直到那时，我才意识到动物也知道如何表达它们的感激之情。 4. It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better. 我突然意识到，一瞬间的善意对另一个人来说意义重大，一个简单的举动就能让世界变得更好。 5. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 在看到这个感激的生物时，我感到一股宽慰和敬畏之情。当我爬上车驾车离开时，我知道我会永远珍惜我们共享的回忆。 6. This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning. 这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是开始。 7. From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals. 我不时地看这张照片，以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。 8. (2020浙江卷）Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion. 尽管冬风凛冽，他们家里的两只可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。 9. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky's hand as if to express thanks. What a warm scene! 狼似乎感觉好些了，它慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻贝基的手，好像在致谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！ 典例分析：2023年1月高考浙江卷——蜂鸟报恩 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. 解读故事（5R） Read for characters I，a hummingbird，my friends Read for plot The author was invited to a farm for a cookout. The author found a hummingbird stuck in spider-webs and saved it. After looking into the author's eyes, the hummingbird flew away. 作者受邀去朋友的农场参加野餐，发现被蛛网缠住的蜂鸟，解救被蛛网缠住的蜂鸟，与作者对视后飞走。 Read for conflict I rescued the hummingbird. The hummingbird reappeared. How can it repay my kindness?我解救蜂鸟，蜂鸟再次出现，如何报恩？ Read for emotional changes curious（好奇）→pitying（怜悯）→worried（担忧）→surprised（惊喜）→touched（感动） Read for theme Through the author's experience of rescuing the hummingbird, it reflects the warmth between humans and animals as well as respect and love for life, emphasizing the beauty of harmonious coexistence between humans and nature. 通过作者救助蜂鸟的经历，体现了人与动物之间的温情以及对生命的尊重和爱护，强调了人与自然和谐共处的美好。 · 写作思路(十句五定法) 第一段思路 (5句) 驾车回忆 当我的车靠近它时，我的思绪回想起我从蜘蛛网里救出蜂鸟的那一刻。 好奇和担心 如此好奇和担心，以至于我迫不及待地想看看窗户是否被修好了。 来到故地 我毫不犹豫地下了车，冲进了那个被遗弃的房子。 欣慰发现 令人欣慰的是，原来窗户上的洞已经找不到了。 想知道蜂鸟情况 离开房子时，我不禁想知道现在情况怎么样了。 第二段思路(5句) 意外重逢 我的心因激动而怦怦直跳，我转过身来，看见同一只蜂鸟悬停在空中。 蜂鸟动作 她拍打着翅膀，看着我的眼睛，发出一声尖锐的叫声，在我面前欢快地鸣叫。 蜂鸟落在手掌， 表达感激 我一伸出手，她就落在了我的手掌上，似乎想表达某种深深的、未说出口的感激.. 我的反应：喂水+满足 我喂她一些食物和水，看着她，直到她消失在视线之外，一种满足感涌上我的心头。 主题升华 我会永远珍惜我们一起分享的回忆，当我爬进我的车，开车离开。 小试牛刀（十大语法句式） 1.当我的车靠近它时（状语从句），我的思绪回想起我从蜘蛛网里救出蜂鸟的那一刻（定语从句）。 2.如此好奇和担心，以至于我迫不及待地想看看窗户是否被修好了。（倒装） 3.我毫不犹豫地下了车，冲进了那个被遗弃的房子。 4.令人欣慰的是，原来窗户上的洞已经找不到了。（it 作形式主语） 5.离开房子时（非谓语作状语），我不禁想知道现在情况怎么样了。 6.我的心因激动而怦怦直跳（with复合结构），我转过身来，看见同一只蜂鸟悬停在空中。 7.她拍打着翅膀，看着我的眼睛，发出一声尖锐的叫声（三连动），在我面前欢快地鸣叫（非谓语作状语）。 8.我一伸出手（倒装），她就落在了我的手掌上，似乎想表达某种深深的、未说出口的感激。 9.我喂她一些食物和水，看着她，直到她消失在视线之外，一种满足感涌上我的心头（with复合结构）。 10.我会永远珍惜我们一起分享的（定语从句）回忆，当我爬进我的车，开车离开。（状语从句） 练习 1 Standing at the Police Outpost Lake’s edge, I was fishing with Isaiah, my cousin, our fishing tackle box nearby on the shore. Actually, I’d learned to fish from my dad. He’d taught more to fish alone, in silence, lost in my own thoughts. Like meditation. He’d taught me everything I knew about fishing. Then, he passed away. “Jacob, where should I stand?“ asked Isaiah. “Be quiet or else we won’t catch any fish,” I whispered. Isaiah frowned，pouting(撅嘴)，but it was＂message received.” ”Why do I have to be so quiet? "asked quietly Isaiah. “All those birds are making way more noise than I ever could!” I ignored him. Pulling back on my rod, squinting(眯着眼睛看) into the glare of the sun. Out of the corner of my eye，I caught a glimpse of a few great northern loons(潜鸟) gathering together not far from the shoreline. My mind traveled back to the past. My dad had been a fish and wildlife officer. He loved his job, especially the part where he protected nature from humans. When he returned, we sat on the couch together, and he amused me with stories of life on the road. He once mentioned the loon could easily stab(刺) people to death with its beak! Suddenly, Isaiah’s voice brought me back, “Look, something was coming.” Following the direction, he was pointing, I saw a loon, wailing and making sounds, swam away from the group, toward us. Walking into the water, getting closer to the loon, we both saw thin wire wrapped around its neck and blood spots by its wing. Fishing line maybe? Was it the hook(钩)on the line that made it bleed? Was the loon asking us for help? 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Reaching down, I touched its head, my heart racing. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Afraid, I held it out at arm’s length, and Isaiah cut away the fishing line using the scissors. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习2： Ben was awakened by a gunshot. The sharp noise came through the thick stone walls of the house. It was cold in the bedroom and Ben was shaking as he got out of bed. He put on his eyeglasses and went over to the window. The field was covered with white frost. Nothing moved out there in the deep quiet just before sunrise. Ben wondered where the shot had come from. He thought perhaps he had dreamed he heard a gunshot. He looked out toward the frozen lake. Near the trees he saw a shining piece of metal. When it moved, Ben saw that it was a long gun. A minute later, a man came out of the woods. He wore hunting clothes. Suddenly a bird flew upward. The man quickly put the gun to his shoulder and shot. Ben watched the bird, praying it had not been hurt. It flew near the ground and went into some tall grass. Safe, Ben thought. The hunter did not move for a moment, and then he began to follow the bird. Hate for the hunter burned inside Ben. Opening the window, he shouted, "Hey!" His voice cut through the stillness. The hunter stopped, but then continued to follow the bird. Ben shouted again, but this time the hunter did not stop. Then Ben rushed out and moved toward him. The hunter looked back at Ben. Ben had just bought this house in the woods. He wanted to protect everything on his land. He thought that everyone would obey the signs "No Hunting”. However, he heard another gunshot. This troubled him deeply. How could he stop this hunter? He walked toward the lake. He did not want to fight, but the man must go. He walked quietly. He wanted to surprise the hunter. But then, what would he do? He could not fight the hunter. 注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly he heard a bird's wings beating the dry grass. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ There was something threatening in the hunter's cool quiet voice.________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习3. As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over the animal shelter, Sarah walked through the rows of cages until her eyes landed on a small, trembling dog huddled in the corner. "I think I've found the one," Sarah whispered softly to herself as she looked into the dog's sad eyes. This timid, abandoned dog had no idea that a journey of transformation with friendly people lay in store for him. The shelter staff explained that the dog, named Buddy, had a difficult past and was very shy and scared. Sarah extended a hand, offering a soothing tone, "Hey sweetie, you must have a story to tell, but from now on, you've got a buddy in me." Bringing Buddy home was just the beginning of their journey, which was rocky at first for him. Everything was strange and new, causing him to hide under furniture and startle at every sound. Therefore, Sarah provided a cozy bed, delicious meals, and most importantly, heaps of love and comfort. Slowly but surely, he started to emerge from his shell, wagging his tail tentatively and gazing at Sarah with a glimmer of hope in his eyes. Under Sarah's patient and loving guidance, Buddy flourished, even learning tricks and commands, and forming a deep bond with his new owner. The journey of healing turned out to be a success. But Sarah had never expected it would bring about another one. One day, while scrolling through social media, Sarah came across a heartwarming story about dogs being trained to assist children with autism. Those children had social communication difficulties and had few facial expressions and gestures. Without hesitation, she inquired about the program and soon, Buddy was enrolled in training to become a certified therapy dog. But she was unsure whether Buddy would be comfortable with the new challenge. Their first day at the therapy center was filled with uncertainty.______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the weeks progressed, ...__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习4. That December morning, I decided to take Apple to pay a visit to my aunt. I’d had Apple only a couple of weeks, but we’d become nearly inseparable. I opened the car door. Apple jumped in and settled down on the passenger seat. I started the car and set off．It’s always tricky turning around. I live in a remote area up in the hills, surrounded by woods. I have to drive up the mountain to get to my driveway, which is hardly wide enough for one car and ends at a steep valley．I twisted around and backed up slowly. Just then, a flash of sunlight blinded me. I put my hand up to cover my eyes. I felt a shake as the left rear part of the car dropped. Oh, no! The car slipped and rolled. We landed upside down. I felt a sharp pain in my chest and my legs. I couldn’t move. I looked over to find Apple. She was still in the passenger seat and fortunately she was okay． I grabbed my cell phone and dialed 911. But just as I’d feared; there was no signal at the bottom of this valley. Now what? Robert, my closest neighbor, lived a quarter mile uphill from me, and had his own driveway. It was unlikely that he or anyone else would drive up to my house．Apple barked nervously. At least I could get her out of here. There was a hole in the driver’s side rear window. “Come on, Apple,” I said. Painfully, I reached over, picked her up and gently put her head through the hole. “Go home, baby.” She jumped to the ground and raced up the side of the valley．As the sun set, it turned cold. I trembled with cold and pain. My pulse was weakening. I closed my eyes. Suddenly I was awakened by loud barks． “Help!” I shouted with all my strength.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later, Robert told me that when he got home from work, Apple was waiting for him.___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习5. I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in Western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention，so I entered it. It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟)，desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand，I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside，closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand，the bird did not fly away；she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still，she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle，she began to move. I stopped，and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering(悬停)，she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment，this tiny creature looked into my eyes，turning her head from side to side. hen she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout，I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing，my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes，then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment，all were speechless. Then someone said，“She must have come to say goodbye.” A few weeks later，I went to the farm again._______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $