专题05 读后续写之家庭亲情类（2026年高考二轮复习）

家庭亲情类 必备短语 1． strong family bond 牢固的亲情纽带 2． tender family love 温柔的亲情之爱 3． unbreakable family ties 牢不可破的家庭关系 4． give unconditional love 给予无条件的爱 5． offer support and encouragement 提供支持和鼓励 6． give a warm hug 给予温暖的拥抱 7． share joys and sorrows 分享快乐和悲伤 8． a heartwarming family moment温暖人心的家庭时刻 9． a harmonious family atmosphere 和谐的家庭氛围 a haven of love and comfort 爱的避风港 必备句子 1. 描述亲情的力量 ①Family love is like a warm fire on a cold winter night, giving us comfort and strength. 亲情就像寒冷冬夜里的一团温暖火焰，给予我们安慰和力量。 ②The power of family affection can overcome any difficulties and challenges. 亲情的力量可以克服任何困难和挑战。 2. 表达对家人的爱 ①No matter what happens, my family will always be there to show me love and support. 无论发生什么，我的家人总是在那里给我关爱和支持。 ②My parents' love is like a guiding light, leading me through the darkest moments. 父母的爱就像一盏指路明灯，引领我度过最黑暗的时刻。 3. 描写家庭支持 ①In times of trouble, my family is always there to support me and encourage me to move forward. 在困难的时候，我的家人总是在那里支持我，鼓励我前进。 ②With the support of my family, I am brave enough to face any difficulties and pursue my dreams. 有了家人的支持，我有足够的勇气面对任何困难，追求我的梦想。 4.亲情类的有关冲突、解决冲突 ①“Why are you so hard on me ？” I shouted at mom, slamming the door.I threw myself onto my bed and sobbed. “你为什么对我这么苛刻？”我冲着妈妈大喊，砰的一声关上了门。我扑倒在床上，抽泣起来。 ②The fault had been mainly on Richard’s side but he was too stubborn to admit it. 主要是理查德错了，但他太固执了而没有承认。 ③That day, I walked home with my father.The setting sun shone on us, casting our shadows on the road.We talked a lot that day, and it seemed that the journey from home to school had also been shortened. 那天，我和父亲一起步行回家。夕阳照在我们身上，把我们的影子投在路上。那天我们聊了很多，从家到学校的路似乎也变短了。 5. 回忆美好家庭时光 ①Looking back on those beautiful family moments, I feel a surge of warmth and happiness. 回顾那些美好的家庭时光，我感到一股温暖和幸福涌上心头。 ②The memories of family gatherings are like precious jewels, shining brightly in my heart. 家庭聚会的回忆就像珍贵的宝石，在我心中闪闪发光。 主题升华句 1. A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently. 一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两个姐妹。 2. The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love. 清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。 3. The warm golden sunlight flooded in through the window and warmed us up. 温暖的金色阳光透过窗户的照进来温暖了我们。 4. From my father's words, I have realized that family matters the most in the world. 从父亲的话中，我意识到家庭是世界上最重要的。 5. It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family. 正是在那一刻，我对家庭的意义有了充分的认识。 6. Not until then did I become aware of the significance of family. 直到那时我才意识到家庭的重要性。 7. It is love that makes the world go round and Tom felt it deep in his little heart. 汤姆深深地感觉到是爱让世界运转。 8. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was she that showed me the true meaning of giving. 是妈妈让我的童年多彩绚丽。也是妈妈向我展示了“给与”的真正意义。 10． Since then, my father's words have always sounded in my ears from time to time, guiding the way of my life. 从那时起，我父亲的话时不时在我耳边响起，指引着我生活的方向。 10. It occurred to me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of my future. 我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。 11． It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。 12. Approaching his brother, he gently stroked Jackson's hair, murmuring, “Sorry for losing my temper.” 他走到弟弟身边，轻轻地摸着杰克逊的头发，说：“对不起我发脾气了。” 13. Mother's Day is a heartfelt reminder to honor and appreciate the selfless sacrifices and boundless love that mothers give. 母亲节是一个衷心的提醒，要尊重和感激母亲们无私的奉献和无尽的爱。 14.Family love, like a lighthouse in a stormy sea, guides us back to safety and reminds us that we are never truly alone. 亲情就像暴风雨海洋中的灯塔，引导我们回到安全之地，提醒我们永远不会真正孤单。 15.As we journey through life, we come to realize that nothing is more precious than the love and bonds we share with our family. 在人生的旅途中，我们逐渐意识到没有什么比我们与家人之间的爱和纽带更珍贵。 典例分析:2021年6月新高考全国1卷（母亲节的惊喜） 第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 解读故事（5R） Read for characters The twins(Jenna and Jef),their father,mother Read for plot The twins planned a surprise for Mother's Day. They wanted to make French toast and chicken porridge. But there were many problems. Still, they tried to continue. 双胞胎为母亲节准备惊喜，计划做法式吐司和鸡肉粥。过程中状况不断，面包煎糊、粥溢出，还烫伤了手，但他们仍努力继续。 Read for conflict 想为母亲做完美早餐可实际操作中不断出现问题 Wanting to make a perfect breakfast for their mother, but problems keep arising in the actual operation. Read for emotional changes excited（兴奋的） → panicked（恐慌的） Read for theme 通过双胞胎为母亲准备母亲节惊喜过程中的波折，体现孩子对母亲的爱以及在面对困难时的成长。 Through the twists and turns in the process of the twins preparing a Mother's Day surprise for their mother, it reflects the children's love for their mother and their growth when facing difficulties. 写作思路(十句五定法） 第一段思路 (5句) 爸爸生气 父亲一看到脏乱的厨房，就被一股强烈的恼怒淹没了。 双胞胎的解释 双胞胎用颤抖的声音解释道:“我们只是想在母亲节给妈妈一个惊喜。” 父亲的原谅与帮助 令他们宽慰的是，父亲拍拍他们的肩膀，安慰他们，并决心帮助他们。 早餐的完成 最后，在父亲的指导下，孩子们成功地做了一顿非常精致的早餐。 双胞胎的兴奋 盯着早餐，双胞胎兴奋地跳了起来。 第二段思路(5句) 母亲的反应 看到早餐，她的母亲惊讶得瞪大了眼睛，高兴地眨着眼睛。 双胞胎的祝福 随即，双胞胎激动地大声喊道:“母亲节快乐！” 母亲的感动 听到这里，母亲几乎要哭了，因为这是她第一次收到孩子的礼物。 全家一起享用早餐 母亲向他们表示了衷心的感谢，眼里噙满了泪水。与此同时，父亲默默地走了进来，一起享用早餐。 主题升华 是孩子们对母亲的爱让她度过了一个如此难忘的母亲节。 小试牛刀（十大语法句式） 1.父亲一看到脏乱的厨房（状语从句），就被一股强烈的恼怒淹没了。 2.双胞胎用颤抖的声音解释道:“我们只是想在母亲节给妈妈一个惊喜。” 3.令他们宽慰的是，父亲拍拍他们的肩膀，安慰他们，并决心帮助他们（三连动）。 4.最后，在父亲的指导下，孩子们成功地做了一顿非常精致的早餐。 5.盯着早餐（非谓语作状语），双胞胎兴奋地跳了起来。 6.看到早餐（非谓语作状语），她的母亲如此惊讶以至于瞪大了眼睛，高兴地眨着眼睛（倒装）。 7.立刻，双胞胎激动地大声喊道:“母亲节快乐！” 8.听到这（非谓语作状语），母亲几乎要哭了，因为这是她第一次收到孩子的礼物。 9.母亲向他们表示了衷心的感谢，眼里噙满了泪水（独立主格），与此同时，父亲默默地走了进来，一起享用早餐（非谓语作状语）。 10.是孩子们对母亲的爱让她度过了一个如此难忘的母亲节。（强调句） 练习： 1（2025年新高考1卷） My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. Para. 1：I realized it was me who was at fault. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 Mr Lim had been in a bad mood ever since he lost his job three months ago. His efforts to find another job had been fruitless as well. To make ends meet, his wife, Mrs Lim, had to take on an overseas job offer. This meant that Mr Lim was left to tend to his two children, Luke and Lisa, all by himself. Seeing their father being so unhappy every day, Luke and Lisa wanted badly to cheer him up. On the day of Mr. Lim’s birthday, the children decided to turn their intention into action. “Hurry, Luke! Dad will be home any time now! Let’s hide to surprise him!” Lisa said. After placing the birthday cake they had bought on the table, something that Luke and Lisa were sure Mr Lim would not have expected, they hid under it. It had taken the children many weeks to save enough money to buy their father’s favourite cake. They smiled at each other when the smell of fresh paint reached their nose. Luke and Lisa had painted on their dining area’s wall, intending that to be decoration for Mr Lim’s surprise birthday party. Moments later, the main door creaked open. Suddenly, a loud shout filled the air! “Who messed up the wall on purpose?” Mr Lim shouted angrily. On hearing those words, Luke and Lisa stared at each other in shock. As the elder brother, Luke knew he had to protect Lisa. Taking a deep breath, Luke slowly moved out from under the table. Before he could say a word, Mr Lim gave him an earful. Hoping to clear up the misunderstanding, Luke said, “Dad, you’re wrong. We just wanted to...” “Don’t you dare give me excuses!” Mr Lim raised his voice. Then, with great force, he threw the newspaper he had been holding at the dining table. It hit the birthday cake, ruining it! Seeing that, Luke’s heart broke. He cried. “Dad...we...we’re sorry! We wanted to give...give you a birthda y sur...surprise,” Lisa explained in between cries, after moving out from her hiding spot. Para. 1：Hearing that, Mr Lim fell silent for a moment before approaching Luke. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2：After the tension eased, Luke and Lisa sang a birthday song for Mr Lim. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 The first time we set eyes on the beautiful dress “Big Red”, Father, Mother and I were walking slowly through the freshly fallen snow on our way to Hubble's Hardware store on Main Street. The colorfully decorated window display held the best toys ever and some other things. And they were all placed pleasantly beneath the breathtaking dress of Big Red. Mother's eyes were glued to the massive flame of red satin, dotted with twinkling stars. “My goodness,” she managed to say in dreamlike wonder. “Would you just look at that dress!” Then, totally out of character, Mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy, grey wool coat that she had worn every winter for as long as I could remember, Mother lost her balance and fell clumsily. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, Mother blamed dad for laughing. “Oh, stop that!” she ordered, as my father swept the snow from her coat. “What a silly dress to be displayed there in the window of Eaton's!” she shook her head in disbelief. “Who on earth would want such a brightly-colored dress? It is too expensive.” As we continued to walk down the street, Mother turned back for one more look. “My goodness! You'd think they'd display something that a person could use!” Christmas was around the corner and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother was not the one to wish for, or spend money on things that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this,” she'd always say, or, “There are things we need more than that.” Father, on the other hand, liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional spending like this, but it was all done with the best intention. On our last trip to town before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly exclaimed in surprise, “Would you just look at that!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's. “That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief. “It's actually gone.” Para 1：Dad looked quickly and smiled, “Yes, it is not there!” He glanced at me with a playful wink that I instantly understood. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2：I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 Everyone loved Cinderella, but I loved her ugly stepsister. The sidewalk was filled with shoppers as my mother and I hurried to the department store. I raised my neck for a look at the holiday window display, but at the age of six I was too small to see around the grown-ups with their winter coats and packages. When at last we reached the store, I stood with my eyes widened. “Look, Mother,” I shouted, pressing my hands against the glass, “Cinderella.” Before my eyes was the most beautiful doll I had ever seen! She wore a fairy princess suit made of shining red silk. I knew if I lifted her skirt I would see her crystal shoes. The tiny tiara fastened to her silky golden hair shone. “If only she were mine,” I dreamed. “We’d have tea parties, share secrets and dance with a handsome prince.” But to my disappointment, my mother guided me away from the window, explaining that she and my father could not afford such an expensive doll. “But there will be a very special gift under the tree for you on Christmas morning, Madge,” she said. “I promise.” Later that week I leaned against Mother’s sewing machine, watching the needle flash up and down. “Bet you don’t know what it is!” She joked, holding up the cloth for me to see. “My Christmas doll!” I yelled. It was still in the early stages but I could make out the head, neck and body. “So much to my surprise!” Mother laughed as I danced around the room, already pretending Cinderella and I were at the ball. It wouldn’t be long now. My excitement grew with each passing day. Mother continued to work on the doll, and whenever I walked into the room she would hide it under a pillow. I could tell by her smile she was pleased with her progress. On Christmas morning I jumped out of bed, ran down the hall and quickly arrived at the living room where the Christmas tree was placed. Para. 1：There, underneath the tree, was a beautifully packed gift box. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2：But I could see Mother watching me, with an eager look on her face. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 家庭亲情类 必备短语 1． strong family bond 牢固的亲情纽带 2． tender family love 温柔的亲情之爱 3． unbreakable family ties 牢不可破的家庭关系 4． give unconditional love 给予无条件的爱 5． offer support and encouragement 提供支持和鼓励 6． give a warm hug 给予温暖的拥抱 7． share joys and sorrows 分享快乐和悲伤 8． a heartwarming family moment温暖人心的家庭时刻 9． a harmonious family atmosphere 和谐的家庭氛围 a haven of love and comfort 爱的避风港 必备句子 1. 描述亲情的力量 ①Family love is like a warm fire on a cold winter night, giving us comfort and strength. 亲情就像寒冷冬夜里的一团温暖火焰，给予我们安慰和力量。 ②The power of family affection can overcome any difficulties and challenges. 亲情的力量可以克服任何困难和挑战。 2. 表达对家人的爱 ①No matter what happens, my family will always be there to show me love and support. 无论发生什么，我的家人总是在那里给我关爱和支持。 ②My parents' love is like a guiding light, leading me through the darkest moments. 父母的爱就像一盏指路明灯，引领我度过最黑暗的时刻。 3. 描写家庭支持 ①In times of trouble, my family is always there to support me and encourage me to move forward. 在困难的时候，我的家人总是在那里支持我，鼓励我前进。 ②With the support of my family, I am brave enough to face any difficulties and pursue my dreams. 有了家人的支持，我有足够的勇气面对任何困难，追求我的梦想。 4.亲情类的有关冲突、解决冲突 ①“Why are you so hard on me ？” I shouted at mom, slamming the door.I threw myself onto my bed and sobbed. “你为什么对我这么苛刻？”我冲着妈妈大喊，砰的一声关上了门。我扑倒在床上，抽泣起来。 ②The fault had been mainly on Richard’s side but he was too stubborn to admit it. 主要是理查德错了，但他太固执了而没有承认。 ③That day, I walked home with my father.The setting sun shone on us, casting our shadows on the road.We talked a lot that day, and it seemed that the journey from home to school had also been shortened. 那天，我和父亲一起步行回家。夕阳照在我们身上，把我们的影子投在路上。那天我们聊了很多，从家到学校的路似乎也变短了。 5. 回忆美好家庭时光 ①Looking back on those beautiful family moments, I feel a surge of warmth and happiness. 回顾那些美好的家庭时光，我感到一股温暖和幸福涌上心头。 ②The memories of family gatherings are like precious jewels, shining brightly in my heart. 家庭聚会的回忆就像珍贵的宝石，在我心中闪闪发光。 主题升华句 1. A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently. 一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两个姐妹。 2. The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love. 清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。 3. The warm golden sunlight flooded in through the window and warmed us up. 温暖的金色阳光透过窗户的照进来温暖了我们。 4. From my father's words, I have realized that family matters the most in the world. 从父亲的话中，我意识到家庭是世界上最重要的。 5. It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family. 正是在那一刻，我对家庭的意义有了充分的认识。 6. Not until then did I become aware of the significance of family. 直到那时我才意识到家庭的重要性。 7. It is love that makes the world go round and Tom felt it deep in his little heart. 汤姆深深地感觉到是爱让世界运转。 8. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was she that showed me the true meaning of giving. 是妈妈让我的童年多彩绚丽。也是妈妈向我展示了“给与”的真正意义。 10． Since then, my father's words have always sounded in my ears from time to time, guiding the way of my life. 从那时起，我父亲的话时不时在我耳边响起，指引着我生活的方向。 10. It occurred to me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of my future. 我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。 11． It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。 12. Approaching his brother, he gently stroked Jackson's hair, murmuring, “Sorry for losing my temper.” 他走到弟弟身边，轻轻地摸着杰克逊的头发，说：“对不起我发脾气了。” 13. Mother's Day is a heartfelt reminder to honor and appreciate the selfless sacrifices and boundless love that mothers give. 母亲节是一个衷心的提醒，要尊重和感激母亲们无私的奉献和无尽的爱。 14.Family love, like a lighthouse in a stormy sea, guides us back to safety and reminds us that we are never truly alone. 亲情就像暴风雨海洋中的灯塔，引导我们回到安全之地，提醒我们永远不会真正孤单。 15.As we journey through life, we come to realize that nothing is more precious than the love and bonds we share with our family. 在人生的旅途中，我们逐渐意识到没有什么比我们与家人之间的爱和纽带更珍贵。 典例分析:2021年6月新高考全国1卷（母亲节的惊喜） 第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 解读故事（5R） Read for characters The twins(Jenna and Jef),their father,mother Read for plot The twins planned a surprise for Mother's Day. They wanted to make French toast and chicken porridge. But there were many problems. Still, they tried to continue. 双胞胎为母亲节准备惊喜，计划做法式吐司和鸡肉粥。过程中状况不断，面包煎糊、粥溢出，还烫伤了手，但他们仍努力继续。 Read for conflict 想为母亲做完美早餐可实际操作中不断出现问题 Wanting to make a perfect breakfast for their mother, but problems keep arising in the actual operation. Read for emotional changes excited（兴奋的） → panicked（恐慌的） Read for theme 通过双胞胎为母亲准备母亲节惊喜过程中的波折，体现孩子对母亲的爱以及在面对困难时的成长。 Through the twists and turns in the process of the twins preparing a Mother's Day surprise for their mother, it reflects the children's love for their mother and their growth when facing difficulties. 写作思路(十句五定法） 第一段思路 (5句) 爸爸生气 父亲一看到脏乱的厨房，就被一股强烈的恼怒淹没了。 双胞胎的解释 双胞胎用颤抖的声音解释道:“我们只是想在母亲节给妈妈一个惊喜。” 父亲的原谅与帮助 令他们宽慰的是，父亲拍拍他们的肩膀，安慰他们，并决心帮助他们。 早餐的完成 最后，在父亲的指导下，孩子们成功地做了一顿非常精致的早餐。 双胞胎的兴奋 盯着早餐，双胞胎兴奋地跳了起来。 第二段思路(5句) 母亲的反应 看到早餐，她的母亲惊讶得瞪大了眼睛，高兴地眨着眼睛。 双胞胎的祝福 随即，双胞胎激动地大声喊道:“母亲节快乐！” 母亲的感动 听到这里，母亲几乎要哭了，因为这是她第一次收到孩子的礼物。 全家一起享用早餐 母亲向他们表示了衷心的感谢，眼里噙满了泪水。与此同时，父亲默默地走了进来，一起享用早餐。 主题升华 是孩子们对母亲的爱让她度过了一个如此难忘的母亲节。 小试牛刀（十大语法句式） 1.父亲一看到脏乱的厨房（状语从句），就被一股强烈的恼怒淹没了。 The moment the father caught sight of the messy kitchen, he was overwhelmed by a strong wave of annoyance. 2.双胞胎用颤抖的声音解释道:“我们只是想在母亲节给妈妈一个惊喜。” The twins explained in a trembling voice,“ we just want to give mom a surprise for Mother's Day. ” 3.令他们宽慰的是，父亲拍拍他们的肩膀，安慰他们，并决心帮助他们（三连动）。 To their relief, the father patted them on the shoulder, comforted them and determined to give them a hand. 4.最后，在父亲的指导下，孩子们成功地做了一顿非常精致的早餐。 Finally,under their father’s guidance, the kids succeeded in making a very delicate breakfast. 5.盯着早餐（非谓语作状语），双胞胎兴奋地跳了起来。 Staring at the breakfast, the twins leapt to their feet with excitement. 6.看到早餐（非谓语作状语），她的母亲如此惊讶以至于瞪大了眼睛，高兴地眨着眼睛（倒装）。 Seeing the breakfast, so surprised was her mother that her eyes widened up and twinkled with pleasure. 7.立刻，双胞胎激动地大声喊道:“母亲节快乐！” Immediately, the twins yelled aloud with excitement, "Happy Mother's Day!" 8.听到这（非谓语作状语），母亲几乎要哭了，因为这是她第一次收到孩子的礼物。 Hearing this, the mother was on the verge of tears because this was the first time for her to receive a gift from her kids. 9.母亲向他们表示了衷心的感谢，眼里噙满了泪水（独立主格），与此同时，父亲默默地走了进来，一起享用早餐（非谓语作状语）。 Their mom offered heartfelt gratitude to them, tears welling up in her eyes. and meanwhile, the father silently came in, enjoying the breakfast together. 10.是孩子们对母亲的爱让她度过了一个如此难忘的母亲节。（强调句） It was the kids' love for the mother that enabled her to spend such an unforgettable Mothers’ Day. 练习： 1（2025年新高考1卷） My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. Para. 1：I realized it was me who was at fault. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Para. 1：I realized it was me who was at fault. I’d been so focused on my own worries about the gathering that I ignored my brother’s greatest need. He wasn’t just upset about Toby — he felt abandoned when I pushed him away in his darkest days. I recalled how he’d stayed up with me all night when I lost my job years ago. Grabbing my phone, I left a voice message, my voice trembling as I apologized for my selfishness. I admitted I’d forgotten that family isn’t about perfect gatherings, but about standing by each other, even when it’s inconvenient. Para. 2：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. The door opened slowly, and Toby bounded out first, licking my hand excitedly. My brother stood there, eyes softening at the sight of us. I handed him the biscuits and said, “I’m sorry I made you feel unwelcome.” He sighed and let me in. As we sat together, he talked about how Toby comforted him on lonely nights. That day, we didn’t just mend a quarrel. We rediscovered that true brotherhood lies in forgiving mistakes and cherishing the people who stick by you, no matter what. 2 Mr Lim had been in a bad mood ever since he lost his job three months ago. His efforts to find another job had been fruitless as well. To make ends meet, his wife, Mrs Lim, had to take on an overseas job offer. This meant that Mr Lim was left to tend to his two children, Luke and Lisa, all by himself. Seeing their father being so unhappy every day, Luke and Lisa wanted badly to cheer him up. On the day of Mr. Lim’s birthday, the children decided to turn their intention into action. “Hurry, Luke! Dad will be home any time now! Let’s hide to surprise him!” Lisa said. After placing the birthday cake they had bought on the table, something that Luke and Lisa were sure Mr Lim would not have expected, they hid under it. It had taken the children many weeks to save enough money to buy their father’s favourite cake. They smiled at each other when the smell of fresh paint reached their nose. Luke and Lisa had painted on their dining area’s wall, intending that to be decoration for Mr Lim’s surprise birthday party. Moments later, the main door creaked open. Suddenly, a loud shout filled the air! “Who messed up the wall on purpose?” Mr Lim shouted angrily. On hearing those words, Luke and Lisa stared at each other in shock. As the elder brother, Luke knew he had to protect Lisa. Taking a deep breath, Luke slowly moved out from under the table. Before he could say a word, Mr Lim gave him an earful. Hoping to clear up the misunderstanding, Luke said, “Dad, you’re wrong. We just wanted to...” “Don’t you dare give me excuses!” Mr Lim raised his voice. Then, with great force, he threw the newspaper he had been holding at the dining table. It hit the birthday cake, ruining it! Seeing that, Luke’s heart broke. He cried. “Dad...we...we’re sorry! We wanted to give...give you a birthda y sur...surprise,” Lisa explained in between cries, after moving out from her hiding spot. Para. 1：Hearing that, Mr Lim fell silent for a moment before approaching Luke. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2：After the tension eased, Luke and Lisa sang a birthday song for Mr Lim. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Para. 1：Hearing that, Mr Lim fell silent for a moment before approaching Luke. His angry expression faded, replaced by a look of shock and then guilt. He knelt down, gently wiping the tears off Luke’s cheeks and pulling Lisa into a tight hug. Tears swelled up in his eyes as he stared at the painted wall — little handprints and clumsy drawings of their family were scattered across it. “I’m so sorry,” he whispered. He admitted he’d been so caught up in his own frustration that he’d lashed out at the two people who loved him most. He held their small hands, promising to be more patient and share his worries with them from then on. Para. 2：After the tension eased, Luke and Lisa sang a birthday song for Mr Lim. Their voices were a little shaky at first, but soon grew loud and clear, filling the room with warmth. Mr Lim clapped along, his heart swelling with love. Though the cake was ruined, he cut a piece anyway and fed it to the kids, laughing as cream dotted their faces. Later, he took a photo of the painted wall. That day, Mr Lim realized the best birthday gift wasn’t a fancy cake, but the love that turned a messy wall into a precious memory. It taught him that family’s warmth is the strongest support when life gets tough. 3 The first time we set eyes on the beautiful dress “Big Red”, Father, Mother and I were walking slowly through the freshly fallen snow on our way to Hubble's Hardware store on Main Street. The colorfully decorated window display held the best toys ever and some other things. And they were all placed pleasantly beneath the breathtaking dress of Big Red. Mother's eyes were glued to the massive flame of red satin, dotted with twinkling stars. “My goodness,” she managed to say in dreamlike wonder. “Would you just look at that dress!” Then, totally out of character, Mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy, grey wool coat that she had worn every winter for as long as I could remember, Mother lost her balance and fell clumsily. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, Mother blamed dad for laughing. “Oh, stop that!” she ordered, as my father swept the snow from her coat. “What a silly dress to be displayed there in the window of Eaton's!” she shook her head in disbelief. “Who on earth would want such a brightly-colored dress? It is too expensive.” As we continued to walk down the street, Mother turned back for one more look. “My goodness! You'd think they'd display something that a person could use!” Christmas was around the corner and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother was not the one to wish for, or spend money on things that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this,” she'd always say, or, “There are things we need more than that.” Father, on the other hand, liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional spending like this, but it was all done with the best intention. On our last trip to town before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly exclaimed in surprise, “Would you just look at that!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's. “That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief. “It's actually gone.” Para 1：Dad looked quickly and smiled, “Yes, it is not there!” He glanced at me with a playful wink that I instantly understood. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2：I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Para 1：Dad looked quickly and smiled, “Yes, it is not there!” He glanced at me with a playful wink that I instantly understood. On our way home, Mother kept chattering about how the dress was too flashy and impractical, but her fingers kept twisting the strap of her bag unconsciously. That night, I passed the living room and saw Dad huddled over the phone, his voice soft as he confirmed something with the store. Later, he rummaged through his toolbox and mended an old radio to sell, which he’d been keeping for years. I realized then that he was quietly making room in the budget for the dress that Mother pretended to dislike. Para 2：I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box. Her hands trembled slightly as she unwrapped it, and when the big red dress unfolded, her breath caught. The satin shimmered like fire in the morning light, and the star decorations sparkled. Mother stroked the fabric gently, tears welling up in her eyes. She put it on and twirled around, looking more radiant than I’d ever seen her. “You silly man,” she laughed through tears, hugging Father tightly. That day, I learned that love isn’t always in grand words. Sometimes it’s a secret trip to the store, a mended radio, and a red dress that holds a lifetime of quiet affection from a husband to his wife. 4 Everyone loved Cinderella, but I loved her ugly stepsister. The sidewalk was filled with shoppers as my mother and I hurried to the department store. I raised my neck for a look at the holiday window display, but at the age of six I was too small to see around the grown-ups with their winter coats and packages. When at last we reached the store, I stood with my eyes widened. “Look, Mother,” I shouted, pressing my hands against the glass, “Cinderella.” Before my eyes was the most beautiful doll I had ever seen! She wore a fairy princess suit made of shining red silk. I knew if I lifted her skirt I would see her crystal shoes. The tiny tiara fastened to her silky golden hair shone. “If only she were mine,” I dreamed. “We’d have tea parties, share secrets and dance with a handsome prince.” But to my disappointment, my mother guided me away from the window, explaining that she and my father could not afford such an expensive doll. “But there will be a very special gift under the tree for you on Christmas morning, Madge,” she said. “I promise.” Later that week I leaned against Mother’s sewing machine, watching the needle flash up and down. “Bet you don’t know what it is!” She joked, holding up the cloth for me to see. “My Christmas doll!” I yelled. It was still in the early stages but I could make out the head, neck and body. “So much to my surprise!” Mother laughed as I danced around the room, already pretending Cinderella and I were at the ball. It wouldn’t be long now. My excitement grew with each passing day. Mother continued to work on the doll, and whenever I walked into the room she would hide it under a pillow. I could tell by her smile she was pleased with her progress. On Christmas morning I jumped out of bed, ran down the hall and quickly arrived at the living room where the Christmas tree was placed. Para. 1：There, underneath the tree, was a beautifully packed gift box. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2：But I could see Mother watching me, with an eager look on her face. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Para. 1：There, underneath the tree, was a beautifully packed gift box. My hands trembled as I tore off the wrapping paper. When I lifted the lid, my heart skipped a beat—not because of joy, but surprise. The doll wore no shining red silk suit, nor a tiny tiara. Its dress was a plain brown linen one, the fabric a little rough. Its hair was short and curly like wool, and there were no crystal shoes, just a pair of scuffed cloth boots. It didn’t look like the elegant Cinderella in the window at all. Instead, it reminded me of Cinderella’s stepsister in the storybook, the one everyone laughed at for being clumsy and plain. I stared at it, my excitement fading away. Para. 2：But I could see Mother watching me, with an eager look on her face. I suddenly noticed the faint dark circles under her eyes and the calluses on her fingers—she’d stayed up late every night after doing housework to sew the doll. I thought of how she’d saved every penny and searched through old cloth piles to make this gift. I hugged the doll tightly to my chest and smiled brightly. “Mom, she’s perfect! I love her more than the store’s Cinderella!” I exclaimed. Mother’s face lit up. That Christmas, I learned that the stepsister wasn’t ugly at all, and the doll made by Mother wasn’t plain either. Love sewn into every stitch is the most precious decoration, making even the simplest gift shine brighter than any crystal shoe. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $