内容正文:
@针对训练
14.She wants to eat delicious something.
句子改错
15.She has a red beautiful dress.
例:My uncle is play basketball now.
play改为playing
16.This book is real interesting.
1.My father a doctor in the hospital.
17.My mom bought I a new bag.
2.I want to buy book.
18.This is mine book.
3.There are five child in the classroom.
19.There are any apples on the table.
4.He bought two tomato just now.
20.I'm interesting in English.
5.The girl with two cats are playing in the yard.
21.He arrived to London last night.
22.She is afraid from dogs.
6.They was late for class yesterday.
23.We'll have a party on next Friday.
7.We aren't have a meeting today.
24.I'll wait you at the bus station.
8.She can sings very well.
25.He is a honest boy.
9.She apologized for his mistake.
26.There is an university in this city.
10.He has lunch at 12 o'clock yesterday.
27.He plays piano very well.
28.He is one of best students in our class.
11.The letter was wrote by my sister.
29.My birthday is on July five.
12.Many trees plant every spring.
30.Thousand of students joined the volunteer activity.
13.I have a cat black.
微技能三
如何组织段落
句子类型
位置
作用
示例
主题句
段落开头第明确段落核心
Reading is my favorite hobby.It lets me travel around the world through
定方向
一句
内容
pages.
Every day,I read for half an hour.I love funny storybooks,like Cat in
衔接段落内不同
支持细节
过渡句
the Hat.It makes me laugh with the cat's silly tricks.(支持细节1)
内容,或为下段
之间/段落
Reading not only makes me laugh with funny stories,but also helps me
搭桥梁
作铺垫,让行文
末尾
solve real---life problems.(过渡句l:段落内衔接,从“阅读的快乐”转
更流畅
到“阅读的实用帮助”)Once,my little sister was crying because of a
broken toy.I told her an interesting story from my book.It made her
支持细节
用例子、原因等
smile again!(支持细节2)But wait-一reading has another super
主题句之后
给支撑
充实内容
power!It even helps me face my fears bravely.Let's talk about it next.
(过渡句2:段尾为下段作铺垫,为“阅读让我变得勇敢”作铺垫)
支持细节之
and,what's more,besides,so,therefore,in order that,however,
逻辑连接
增强句子连贯性
间
first(ly),then,next,for example,in a word,all in all
直接总结型:in short,reading is like a magic key..It unlocks fun
stories,new knowledge,and good times with friends.Ill never stop
结论句→段落最后
reading
总结段落内容
收闭环
句
情感升华型:Reading isn't just a hobby-一it's my best friend!It stays
with me when I'm happy or sad,teaching me and making me laugh.It's
a friend that grows up with me!
例:
My Loving Family Time
Family dinner time is the best part of my day.It warms my heart.()Every evening,we sit around the
table.Mom cooks delicious food,like fried chicken and tomato soup.Dad tells funny work stories.Once,he told us a
story about a“silly boss'”we laughed so hard(支持细节)Family dinner isn't just about delicious meals and
jokes-一when troubles come,it becomes our“problem-solving corner'”L(过渡句)Last week,the sadness I felt from
the text disappeared right here(支持细节)Alin.alL,.family dinner is love onplate.Il keep loving this warm
time forever..(结论句)
©针对训练
根据所给的主题句,写出过渡句、支持细节和结论句。
训练一:Summer holiday is coming!
训s练二:Good morning,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How to Be Happy”"
Thank you!
训练三:
Learning Some Skills Is Important
It's important for us to learn some skills.
微技能四
拓展写作内容
技巧1巧用高级表达
在确保正确的前提下,使用高级词汇可以提升作文档次,以下为初中阶段常用的初阶词汇与高阶词汇转换表。
初阶词汇
高阶词汇
help帮助
give..a hand帮助…;make a big difference to...对…产生重大影响,起重要作用
hope希望
look forward to sth./doing sth.期待某物/做某事
be interested in./have a strong interest in..对.非常感兴趣
like喜欢
fall in love with..爱上…
remember记得
keep..in mind将…牢记在心中
use使用
make good/full use of sth./put sth.to good use充分利用某物
visit参观
pay a visit to参观
should应该
be supposed to应该
decide to do sth.
make a decision to do sth.决定做某事
决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth.某人下定决心做某事
try to do sth.
try one''s best to do sth.某人尽全力做某事
尽力做某事
make every effort to do sth./spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
8微技能二写出正确的句子
针对训练
1.father后加is2.book前加a/the3.child改为children
4.tomato改为tomatoes5.are改为is6.was改为were7.
aren't改为dont8.sings改为sing9.his改为her10.has改
为hadl1.wrote改为written12.plant改为are planted 13.cat
black改为black cat 14.delicious something改为something deli-
cious 15.red beautiful改为beautiful red16.eal改为really
17.I改为me18.mine改为my19.any改为some20.inter-
esting改为interested
21.to改为in22.fom改为of23.删除on24.wait后加for
25.a改为an26.an改为a27.piano前加the28.best前加
the29.five改为ffth30.Thousand改为Thousands
微技能三如何组织段落
针对训练
训练一:Summer holiday is coming!I would like to make it
meaningful and fun
First,I plan to take part in community activities.I will volunteer
at the local library.This will teach me responsibility and allow me to
help others.
Second,I want to learn a basic life skill.I'm going to leam how
to cook some simple Chinese dishes from my grandma.I believe it's
important to know this skill and I can also make delicious food for my
family!
I'm sure my summer holiday will be both colorful and meaning-
fl!
训练二:Good moming.,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How
to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
First of all,we must keep healthy.Without good health,we will
lose everything.So we should have good living habits and try our best
to take exercise every day.Next,we should have good hobbies.Some
colorful hobbies can also bring us joy.Finally,we are supposed to be
ready to help others.When we help those in trouble,we can get much
happiness.
I believe if we do so,we can have a happy life.That's what I
want to share with you.
Thank you!
训练三:Learning Some Skills Is Important
It's important for us to leam some skills.As for me,I always
cook for my parents when I'm free.
A year ago,my parents always went out for work,so I decided
to cook a meal for them.First,I washed all kinds of vegetables and
cut them into pieces.And then after watching some videos on the
Internet,I followed the steps carefully.Finally,I did it well.My par
ents were very happy.
From this experience,I knew that we should always try
something new to enrich our life.
第二部分
课标高步
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in Binhai Park.
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微技能四拓展写作内容
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my learning.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
3.We should make good use of time.
4.They would like to watch a movie.
5.You are supposed to finish your homework first.
6.She made a decision to learn dancing.
7.My friend is a hard-working student in our school
8.Technology is important.For example,it helps us study online easily.
9.He was late for school today because there was a heavy traffic jam
on the road.
10.She saves money every month to buy a special gift for her mom's
birthday.
11.He leams English by watching English movies.
12.I'm Lucy,a middle school student who loves painting.
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
针对训练
1.We not only have classes but also take part in clubs.
2.I love English because it opens a window to know different cultures
around the world.
3.I believe that hard work leads to success in the coming exam.
4.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
down.
5.There is a small garden behind the library.
6.It's important for us students to balance our study and hobbies.
7.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
8.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communicate
with foreigners confidently.
9.The summer camp that I joined last year changed me a lot.
10.How wonderful the journey of growing up is!
11.Not only did I get knowledge,but I also built my character during
the process
12.I wonder how we can spread Chinese culture to the world widely.
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
-1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax
2.I didn't understand the problem until he explained it clearly.
3.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in the
park.
4.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,health is
more important.
5.I started to leam painting this term.It makes me feel relaxed.What's
more,it helps me find the beauty in daily life.
二、主题1:l.because2.Compared with3.For example4.h
my opinion
主题2:1.First of all2.Then3.not only4.but also5.
Finally 6.All in all
顶主题三阶写作指导
2.I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it makes me
feel relaxed.
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends to get
close to nature.