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微技能二写出正确的句子
技巧1熟悉句子成分
成分
作用
位置
示例
动作的执行者、事物或被
主语
放在句首,动词之前
Maria and her sister go to the piano
描述的对象
class every week
对主语的行为或状态加以
They can create and play beautiful
谓语
主语后
陈述
music.
Maria's brother plays the guitar and the
宾语
动作的对象或动作承受者
动词或介词后
violin.
宾语补补充说明宾语的动作、身
宾语后
I find this story interesting.
足语
份、性质或状态等
说明主语的性质、状态或
表语
系动词之后
She is my mother.
特征等
一般放在所修饰的成分之前;不定
对名词或代词进行修饰或
The woman with a baby in her arms is
定语
式、短语或从句放在所修饰的成分
限定的词、词组或句子
my mother.
之后
位置灵活:一般修饰形容词或副词
表示动作的时间、地点、方
时放在其前;修饰动词时,通常放
式、原因、目的等,用于修
状语
在其后,如果是不及物动词,副词
I love my mother deeply.
饰动词、形容词、副词或
可放在句首或句末;若修饰整个句
句子
子,通常放在句子的开头或末尾
个名词对另一个名词或
同位语
名词或代词之后
We students should study hard.
代词进行解释或补充说明
技巧2排查常见错误
1.检查句子成分是否完整
错误原因
X
缺主语
John is my brother.Works at Ames Bank.
John is my brother.He works at Ames Bank.
缺谓语
Many people white cars.
Many people have white cars
缺宾语
She always carries in her pocket.
She always carries a pen in her pocket.
缺宾补
She found the room very.
She found the room very cold.
2.检查名词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
可数名词单数形式
Jill made sandwich.
Jill made a sandwich./Jill made sandwiches.
不能单独出现
可数名词复数形式错误
I saw some sheeps.
I saw some sheep.
将不可数名词用作可数名词I will give you two advices.
I will give you two pieces of advice.
续表
错误原因
X
不可数名词误用不定
Sara has an information.
Sara has information.
冠词/复数形式
Sara has informations.
集合名词主谓一致错误
His family are very big.
His family is very big.
3.检查动词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
易混动词误用
There have a book on the desk.
There is a book on the desk.
He call his parents every day.
He calls his parents every day.
主谓一致错误
There is ten people in my
There are ten people in my office.
office.
be动词形式错误
I is a student.
I am a student.
You not at school today.
You were not at school today.
否定形式错误
Ella not wrote a report for her
Ella did not write a report for her boss.
boss.
情态动词使用错误
We might to play football
(情态动词后跟动词原形)
We might play football tomorrow.
tomorrow.
She
tried
to avoid
to
动词用法错误
She tried to avoid meeting him.
meet him.
We call our parents yesterday.
We called our parents yesterday.
They will not to come
时态错误
They will not come to the party.
to the party.
The environment in our school is becoming better
The environment in our school
and better.
is become better and better.
语态错误
The book wrote by Mo Yan.
The book was written by Mo Yan.
4.检查形容词和副词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
形容词位置错误
I have a car red.
I have a red car.
多个形容词修饰同一名词,顺
序混乱(形容词顺序一般是限
I bought a wooden big table.
I bought a big wooden table.
定词/描述类/大小V形状/新
He has a blue new car.
He has a new blue car.
旧/颜色/国籍/材料/用途)
The flower smells sweetly.
The flower smells sweet.
形容词、副词混用
She looks happily today.
She looks happy today.
She sings beautiful.
She sings beautifully.
5.检查代词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
Her and I are good friends.
She and I are good friends.
主格/宾格混淆
Mom gave he a new book.
Mom gave him a new book.
续表
错误原因
X
物主代词错用
Their classroom is big.Our is small.
Their classroom is big.Ours is small.
some/any错用
I don't have some books.
I don't have any books.
They are five people in my family.
There are five people in my family
相似词错用
Piano keys have two colors.There
Piano keys have two colors.They are black and
are black and white.
white.
6.检查介词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
I was born on 2010.
I was born in 2010.
介词错用
She is at Beijing now.
She is in Beijing now.
He is waiting to the bus.
He is waiting for the bus.
介词遗漏
He is good playing basketball.
He is good at playing basketball.
介词多余
I will go to home at 5 o'clock.
will go home at 5 o'clock.
7.检查冠词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
a/an混用
I have an useful book.
I have a useful book.
(看单词首字母发音
It was raining hard,and she didn't
It was raining hard,and she didn't have an
音素,不是首字母)》
have a umbrella.
umbrella.
I saw elephant in the zoo.
I saw an elephant in the zoo.
冠词的缺失或多余
Pass me book on the desk.
Pass me the book on the desk.
He plays the basketball well.
He plays basketball well.
8.检查数词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
☑
序数词前忘加
She is first student to arrive.
She is the first student to arrive.
the/其他限定词
基数词当序数词用
Tomorrow is my ten birthday.
Tomorrow is my tenth birthday.
There are two thousands students in
our school
There are two thousand students in our school.
概数词是否加-s
There are
thousand of birds in
There are thousands of birds in the sky.
the sky.
9.检查是否被母语干扰出现错误
错误原因
X
I very much like English.
I like English very much.
句子结构顺序颠倒
He yesterday went to the park.
He went to the park yesterday
Because he was ill,so he didn't go
Because he was ill,he didn't go to school./He
直译思维
to school.
was ill,so he didn't go to school.
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@针对训练
14.She wants to eat delicious something.
句子改错
15.She has a red beautiful dress.
例:My uncle is play basketball now.
play改为playing
16.This book is real interesting.
1.My father a doctor in the hospital.
17.My mom bought I a new bag.
2.I want to buy book.
18.This is mine book.
3.There are five child in the classroom.
19.There are any apples on the table.
4.He bought two tomato just now.
20.I'm interesting in English.
5.The girl with two cats are playing in the yard.
21.He arrived to London last night.
22.She is afraid from dogs.
6.They was late for class yesterday.
23.We'll have a party on next Friday.
7.We aren't have a meeting today.
24.I'll wait you at the bus station.
8.She can sings very well.
25.He is a honest boy.
9.She apologized for his mistake.
26.There is an university in this city.
10.He has lunch at 12 o'clock yesterday.
27.He plays piano very well.
28.He is one of best students in our class.
11.The letter was wrote by my sister.
29.My birthday is on July five.
12.Many trees plant every spring.
30.Thousand of students joined the volunteer activity.
13.I have a cat black.
微技能三
如何组织段落
句子类型
位置
作用
示例
主题句
段落开头第明确段落核心
Reading is my favorite hobby.It lets me travel around the world through
定方向
一句
内容
pages.
Every day,I read for half an hour.I love funny storybooks,like Cat in
衔接段落内不同
支持细节
过渡句
the Hat.It makes me laugh with the cat's silly tricks.(支持细节1)
内容,或为下段
之间/段落
Reading not only makes me laugh with funny stories,but also helps me
搭桥梁
作铺垫,让行文
末尾
solve real---life problems.(过渡句l:段落内衔接,从“阅读的快乐”转
更流畅
到“阅读的实用帮助”)Once,my little sister was crying because of a
broken toy.I told her an interesting story from my book.It made her
支持细节
用例子、原因等
smile again!(支持细节2)But wait-一reading has another super
主题句之后
给支撑
充实内容
power!It even helps me face my fears bravely.Let's talk about it next.
(过渡句2:段尾为下段作铺垫,为“阅读让我变得勇敢”作铺垫)
支持细节之
and,what's more,besides,so,therefore,in order that,however,
逻辑连接
增强句子连贯性
间
first(ly),then,next,for example,in a word,all in all
直接总结型:in short,reading is like a magic key..It unlocks fun
stories,new knowledge,and good times with friends.Ill never stop
结论句→段落最后
reading
总结段落内容
收闭环
句
情感升华型:Reading isn't just a hobby-一it's my best friend!It stays
with me when I'm happy or sad,teaching me and making me laugh.It's
a friend that grows up with me!微技能二写出正确的句子
针对训练
1.father后加is2.book前加a/the3.child改为children
4.tomato改为tomatoes5.are改为is6.was改为were7.
aren't改为dont8.sings改为sing9.his改为her10.has改
为hadl1.wrote改为written12.plant改为are planted 13.cat
black改为black cat 14.delicious something改为something deli-
cious 15.red beautiful改为beautiful red16.eal改为really
17.I改为me18.mine改为my19.any改为some20.inter-
esting改为interested
21.to改为in22.fom改为of23.删除on24.wait后加for
25.a改为an26.an改为a27.piano前加the28.best前加
the29.five改为ffth30.Thousand改为Thousands
微技能三如何组织段落
针对训练
训练一:Summer holiday is coming!I would like to make it
meaningful and fun
First,I plan to take part in community activities.I will volunteer
at the local library.This will teach me responsibility and allow me to
help others.
Second,I want to learn a basic life skill.I'm going to leam how
to cook some simple Chinese dishes from my grandma.I believe it's
important to know this skill and I can also make delicious food for my
family!
I'm sure my summer holiday will be both colorful and meaning-
fl!
训练二:Good moming.,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How
to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
First of all,we must keep healthy.Without good health,we will
lose everything.So we should have good living habits and try our best
to take exercise every day.Next,we should have good hobbies.Some
colorful hobbies can also bring us joy.Finally,we are supposed to be
ready to help others.When we help those in trouble,we can get much
happiness.
I believe if we do so,we can have a happy life.That's what I
want to share with you.
Thank you!
训练三:Learning Some Skills Is Important
It's important for us to leam some skills.As for me,I always
cook for my parents when I'm free.
A year ago,my parents always went out for work,so I decided
to cook a meal for them.First,I washed all kinds of vegetables and
cut them into pieces.And then after watching some videos on the
Internet,I followed the steps carefully.Finally,I did it well.My par
ents were very happy.
From this experience,I knew that we should always try
something new to enrich our life.
第二部分
课标高步
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in Binhai Park.
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微技能四拓展写作内容
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my learning.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
3.We should make good use of time.
4.They would like to watch a movie.
5.You are supposed to finish your homework first.
6.She made a decision to learn dancing.
7.My friend is a hard-working student in our school
8.Technology is important.For example,it helps us study online easily.
9.He was late for school today because there was a heavy traffic jam
on the road.
10.She saves money every month to buy a special gift for her mom's
birthday.
11.He leams English by watching English movies.
12.I'm Lucy,a middle school student who loves painting.
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
针对训练
1.We not only have classes but also take part in clubs.
2.I love English because it opens a window to know different cultures
around the world.
3.I believe that hard work leads to success in the coming exam.
4.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
down.
5.There is a small garden behind the library.
6.It's important for us students to balance our study and hobbies.
7.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
8.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communicate
with foreigners confidently.
9.The summer camp that I joined last year changed me a lot.
10.How wonderful the journey of growing up is!
11.Not only did I get knowledge,but I also built my character during
the process
12.I wonder how we can spread Chinese culture to the world widely.
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
-1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax
2.I didn't understand the problem until he explained it clearly.
3.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in the
park.
4.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,health is
more important.
5.I started to leam painting this term.It makes me feel relaxed.What's
more,it helps me find the beauty in daily life.
二、主题1:l.because2.Compared with3.For example4.h
my opinion
主题2:1.First of all2.Then3.not only4.but also5.
Finally 6.All in all
顶主题三阶写作指导
2.I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it makes me
feel relaxed.
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends to get
close to nature.