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七年级英语下册单元主题作文高分思路点拨+实战演练
Unit 2 No Rules, No Order
高分思路点拨
假如你是某国际学校七(2)班的班长刘娜,你班新来的美国交换生Linda想去学校的图书馆看书,她想了解一下图书馆的规章制度。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一篇短文,向她介绍图书馆的规则。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨
第一步:审题。文体:说明文人称 时态
第二步:列提纲。
第三步:列出主要的短语。
(1)在……的中间
(2)在……和……之间
(3)各种各样的
(4)例如
(5)遵守规则
(6)保持安静
(7)而且
(8)享受阅读
第四步:重点句子仿写。
(1)结构:There are all kinds of animals in the zoo, such as monkeys, lions and tigers.
动物园里有各种各样的动物,例如猴子、狮子和老虎。
仿写:我们图书馆有各种各样的书,例如故事书、教科书、图画书和历史书。
_________________________________________________________________________________(2)结构 :First, you must get up on time.首先,你必须按时起床。
仿写:首先,你必须保持安静。
_________________________________________________________________________________第五步:用 first,second,third,whatˈs more等连接词将以上要点连成文章,并注意句型多样化。
第六步:小试牛刀
Hi, Linda! Our library is in the middle of our school.
【答案】第一步:第二人称,一般现在时
第三步:in the middle of,between ... and ...,all kinds of,such as,follow the rules,keep quiet/be quiet,whatˈs more,enjoy reading
第四步:There are all kinds of books in our library, such as storybooks, textbooks, picture books and history books.
First, you must be quiet./First, you must keep quiet.
第六步:范文
Hi, Linda! Our library is in the middle of our school. It is open from Monday to Friday. There are all kinds of books in our library.(图书馆简介)
You can borrow books or read there, but you must follow the library rules. First, you must be quiet.(规则一)Don't be noisy. Second, you can't eat in the library and you can't listen to music either.(规则二)Third, don't run in the library.(规则三)What's more, you have to take good care of all the books.(规则四)Don't write or draw in the books.
All the rules are important and I hope you will enjoy reading there.(希望)
实战演练
1.随着经济的发展,越来越多的人都成了有车一族。汽车给我们带来方便的同时也带来了很多问题,如堵车和车祸。请根据下面的图片及文字提示,写一篇有关交通安全的英语短文并提出合理化的建议。注意要用上must / mustn't / have to / can / can't。
walk on the sidewalk and take the zebra crossing
play on the street
drive after drinking
run the red lights
要求:(1)语句通顺,条理清晰,详略得当,书写工整;
(2) 60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:cross the street (过马路)
Today there are so many cars in the street. ________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Today there are so many cars in the street. So when we go out, we must follow the rules.
We must walk on the sidewalk and take the zebra crossing when we have to cross the street. We mustn't play on the street. And we should tell our parents not to drive after drinking and not to run the red lights. When we go out, we can take the bus or walk to school. And we can go to school by bike. You know rules can help to make the world better. Remember: No rules, no order.
2.无规矩不成方圆。父母常常会给我们制订一些规则,以便我们在生活中能够约束和规范自己,使我们更好地成长。假设你是Amy,有很多家规,但有些你并不是很赞同。请你根据以下提示内容,给学校的心理老师Ms King写一封邮件,告诉她你的一些家规,并谈谈你的感受以及寻求帮助。
要求:
(1) 邮件必须包含提示内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2) 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(3) 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(4) 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms King,
Can you help me? My parents make a lot of rules for me. ____________________________
Yours,
Amy
【答案】范文
Dear Ms King,
Can you help me? My parents make a lot of rules for me. Every day, I must get up at six oˈclock. Then I have to practice the piano for half an hour. I have to read before going to bed. I love ping-pong, but I canˈt play it after school. And I canˈt go out to have fun with my friends on school nights, either. On the weekend, I have to do some housework, like doing the dishes and cleaning my room.
I live a healthy life because of these rules. But I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes, I feel terrible at home. I need some time to relax. What can I do, Ms King?
Yours,
Amy
【解析】
思路点拨
3.通过阅读理解A篇,我们了解了一些班规。请你根据表格内容写一篇短文,先介绍阅读理解A篇中你最赞同的班规并给出理由,然后参照阅读理解A篇中的规定自己拟定一至两条班规,最后谈谈你对规章制度的看法。
写作要点
参考句型
What's your favourite rule in Text A? Why?
My favourite rule in Text A is ...
I prefer (较喜欢) …
That's why ...
Make your own class rules (1~2 rules)
The first rule I want to make is about ...
First of all, ...
Your understanding about rules
In my opinion, ...
Itˈs necessary ...
Rules make us ...
注意:(1)短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)不可抄袭阅读理解A篇中的班规;
(3)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(4)词数80左右;短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
As the saying goes, "Nothing can be achieved without rules."
【答案】One possible version:
As the saying goes, "Nothing can be achieved without rules."
My favourite rule in Text A is be friendly to all students. If we can get along well with others, we can live and study better. The first rule I want to make is about no talking when someone is speaking. We should listen to others carefully and respect them. Besides, we mustnˈt eat or drink in class. We should keep our classroom clean and tidy.
In my opinion, it is very important for us to have some class rules. Rules make us develop good habits and study better.
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