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Unit 12 The Treasure of Books单元写作必备句式 (高分作文句式清单)
一、 写作必备基础句式
本单元的主题是“探讨文学作品与阅读(The Treasure of Books)”,以下是介绍作品背景、描述人物特征以及结合本单元核心语法“if/whether及疑问词引导的宾语从句”、“-ed与-ing形容词”的必备基础句式结构:
· 1. 介绍作品背景与类型的句式:... is a ... (novel/fairy tale/drama) written by ...含义:……是由……写的一部……(小说/童话/戏剧)。 例句:The Old Man and the Sea is an interesting novel written by Ernest Hemingway.
· 2. 表达阅读感受的句式:sb. be interested in / excited about ... (或 sth. is interesting / exciting)含义:某人对……感兴趣 / 感到兴奋(-ed修饰人,-ing修饰物)。 例句:I am interested in the book because the story is very exciting.
· 3. 探讨作品情节与人物的句式:I wonder / want to know + 疑问词引导的宾语从句含义:我想知道……。 例句:I want to know what happens to him and how he gets out of troubles.
· 4. 描述人物特征与事迹的句式:sb. is brave enough to fight against / deal with difficulties含义:某人足够勇敢去对抗…… / 处理困难。 例句:Harry Potter is brave enough to fight against bad people and deal with difficulties.
二、 写作高分必备句式
在分享读书体会、推荐文学作品时,使用以下高分句式可以深化文章内涵,突出从阅读中获得的启发:
· 1. 评价作品地位的高分句式:be well-known for / be one of the classics of ...用法解析:用于高度评价某位作家或某部作品在文学史上的地位,提升文章格调。 例句:Lu Xun is well-known for his novels, and his works are the classics of Chinese literature.
· 2. 阐述作品寓意的高分句式:The story tells us that ... / From him/it, I learn the importance of ...用法解析:用于读后感的结尾部分,总结故事的中心思想或个人学到的品质(如诚实、勇敢等)。 例句:The story tells us that a kindness is never wasted. From him, I learn the importance of being honest and brave.
· 3. 表达个人见解的高分插入语:In my opinion / In a word, ...用法解析:意为“在我看来 / 总而言之”,使文章逻辑更加严密,论述更加清晰。 例句:In my opinion, she is the most attractive woman in the book. In a word, Sun Wukong is a popular hero.
· 4. 升华主题的情感句式:... holds a special place in my heart. / ... mirrors the society of its time.用法解析:常用于文章结尾,表达某本书或某个角色对自己深远的影响,或者高度赞扬作品的社会价值。 例句:Literature often mirrors the society of its time. This book will always hold a special place in my heart.
三、 限时提升训练
【训练要求】 请根据汉语提示,运用本单元的重点短语及宾语从句完成下列句子。(建议用时:10分钟)
1. 我想知道这本小说的主要人物是谁。
I wonder ________ ________ ________ ________ of the novel ________.
2. 这个故事太令人激动了,很多读者都发现它很鼓舞人心。
The story is very ________, and many readers find it quite ________.
3. 这部戏剧在国内外仍然很受欢迎。
The play is still popular both ________ ________ ________ ________.
4. 孙悟空总是能想出主意来处理困难。
Sun Wukong can always ________ ________ ________ ideas to ________ ________ difficulties.
5. 从皮诺曹身上,我懂得了诚实和勇敢的重要性。
From Pinocchio, I learn the ________ ________ ________ honest and brave.
【答案与解析】
1. 答案: who the main character; is解析: 考查 who 引导的宾语从句。注意宾语从句必须使用陈述句语序,所以谓语动词 is 放在主语 the main character 之后。
2. 答案: exciting; encouraging解析: 考查 -ing 结尾的形容词修饰物。修饰 story 用 exciting(令人激动的);鼓舞人心的为 encouraging。
3. 答案: at home and abroad解析: 考查固定搭配 at home and abroad(在国内外),常用于评价文学作品的影响力。
4. 答案: come up with; deal with解析: 考查核心词组 come up with(想出、提出)和 deal with(处理、应付)。
5. 答案: importance of being解析: 考查短语 the importance of(……的重要性)。介词 of 后接动名词,故用 being 加上形容词 honest and brave。
四、 单元话题作文训练
【写作任务】
学校英语俱乐部正在举办以“My Favorite Story Character (我最喜欢的故事人物)”为主题的阅读分享周活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿,向大家介绍你最喜欢的文学人物。
内容包括:1. 点明你最喜欢的人物是谁,以及他/她出自哪部文学作品;2. 描述该人物的主要性格特征(如:勇敢、聪明、诚实等)以及他/她的相关事迹(如:对抗坏人、克服困难等);3. 总结你从这个人物身上学到了什么,并表达你的喜爱之情。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 至少使用1个疑问词引导的宾语从句或含有 -ed/-ing 的形容词;3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
1. 谋篇布局(三段论):第一段(开门见山,引出人物):直接指出最喜欢的人物及其出处。可使用句型 My favorite story character is... He/She is the main character of the novel...。第二段(详细介绍,说明原因):说明喜欢他/她的原因,主要描写性格特征和标志性行为。推荐使用 I like... for many reasons. He is brave enough to fight against... / He always comes up with ideas to deal with...。可穿插使用宾语从句,如 I want to know how he gets out of troubles.第三段(总结升华,表达情感):一句话总结人物精神,升华主题。可使用 From him, I learn... / In a word, he holds a special place in my heart.。
2. 时态运用: 描述文学作品中的人物性格和客观内容通常使用一般现在时;若回顾自己当初阅读的心情可使用一般过去时。
【高分范文】
My Favorite Story Character
Hello, everyone! My favorite story character is Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King. He is the main character of the novel Journey to the West, one of the four classics of Chinese literature.
I like him for many reasons. First, he has magical power and can change into anything, which is very exciting to read. Second, he is very brave and smart. He is never afraid of danger and always comes up with ideas to deal with difficulties. When I read the book, I always want to know how he fights against bad people to protect his master.
In my opinion, Sun Wukong is a great hero. From him, I learn the importance of being brave and loyal. He will always hold a special place in my heart.
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Unit 12 The Treasure of Books单元写作必备句式 (高分作文句式清单)
一、 写作必备基础句式
本单元的主题是“探讨文学作品与阅读(The Treasure of Books)”,以下是介绍作品背景、描述人物特征以及结合本单元核心语法“if/whether及疑问词引导的宾语从句”、“-ed与-ing形容词”的必备基础句式结构:
· 1. 介绍作品背景与类型的句式:... is a ... (novel/fairy tale/drama) written by ...含义:……是由……写的一部……(小说/童话/戏剧)。 例句:The Old Man and the Sea is an interesting novel written by Ernest Hemingway.
· 2. 表达阅读感受的句式:sb. be interested in / excited about ... (或 sth. is interesting / exciting)含义:某人对……感兴趣 / 感到兴奋(-ed修饰人,-ing修饰物)。 例句:I am interested in the book because the story is very exciting.
· 3. 探讨作品情节与人物的句式:I wonder / want to know + 疑问词引导的宾语从句含义:我想知道……。 例句:I want to know what happens to him and how he gets out of troubles.
· 4. 描述人物特征与事迹的句式:sb. is brave enough to fight against / deal with difficulties含义:某人足够勇敢去对抗…… / 处理困难。 例句:Harry Potter is brave enough to fight against bad people and deal with difficulties.
二、 写作高分必备句式
在分享读书体会、推荐文学作品时,使用以下高分句式可以深化文章内涵,突出从阅读中获得的启发:
· 1. 评价作品地位的高分句式:be well-known for / be one of the classics of ...用法解析:用于高度评价某位作家或某部作品在文学史上的地位,提升文章格调。 例句:Lu Xun is well-known for his novels, and his works are the classics of Chinese literature.
· 2. 阐述作品寓意的高分句式:The story tells us that ... / From him/it, I learn the importance of ...用法解析:用于读后感的结尾部分,总结故事的中心思想或个人学到的品质(如诚实、勇敢等)。 例句:The story tells us that a kindness is never wasted. From him, I learn the importance of being honest and brave.
· 3. 表达个人见解的高分插入语:In my opinion / In a word, ...用法解析:意为“在我看来 / 总而言之”,使文章逻辑更加严密,论述更加清晰。 例句:In my opinion, she is the most attractive woman in the book. In a word, Sun Wukong is a popular hero.
· 4. 升华主题的情感句式:... holds a special place in my heart. / ... mirrors the society of its time.用法解析:常用于文章结尾,表达某本书或某个角色对自己深远的影响,或者高度赞扬作品的社会价值。 例句:Literature often mirrors the society of its time. This book will always hold a special place in my heart.
三、 限时提升训练
【训练要求】 请根据汉语提示,运用本单元的重点短语及宾语从句完成下列句子。(建议用时:10分钟)
1. 我想知道这本小说的主要人物是谁。
I wonder ________ ________ ________ ________ of the novel ________.
2. 这个故事太令人激动了,很多读者都发现它很鼓舞人心。
The story is very ________, and many readers find it quite ________.
3. 这部戏剧在国内外仍然很受欢迎。
The play is still popular both ________ ________ ________ ________.
4. 孙悟空总是能想出主意来处理困难。
Sun Wukong can always ________ ________ ________ ideas to ________ ________ difficulties.
5. 从皮诺曹身上,我懂得了诚实和勇敢的重要性。
From Pinocchio, I learn the ________ ________ ________ honest and brave.
【答案与解析】
1. 答案: who the main character; is解析: 考查 who 引导的宾语从句。注意宾语从句必须使用陈述句语序,所以谓语动词 is 放在主语 the main character 之后。
2. 答案: exciting; encouraging解析: 考查 -ing 结尾的形容词修饰物。修饰 story 用 exciting(令人激动的);鼓舞人心的为 encouraging。
3. 答案: at home and abroad解析: 考查固定搭配 at home and abroad(在国内外),常用于评价文学作品的影响力。
4. 答案: come up with; deal with解析: 考查核心词组 come up with(想出、提出)和 deal with(处理、应付)。
5. 答案: importance of being解析: 考查短语 the importance of(……的重要性)。介词 of 后接动名词,故用 being 加上形容词 honest and brave。
四、 单元话题作文训练
【写作任务】
学校英语俱乐部正在举办以“My Favorite Story Character (我最喜欢的故事人物)”为主题的阅读分享周活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿,向大家介绍你最喜欢的文学人物。
内容包括:1. 点明你最喜欢的人物是谁,以及他/她出自哪部文学作品;2. 描述该人物的主要性格特征(如:勇敢、聪明、诚实等)以及他/她的相关事迹(如:对抗坏人、克服困难等);3. 总结你从这个人物身上学到了什么,并表达你的喜爱之情。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 至少使用1个疑问词引导的宾语从句或含有 -ed/-ing 的形容词;3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
1. 谋篇布局(三段论):第一段(开门见山,引出人物):直接指出最喜欢的人物及其出处。可使用句型 My favorite story character is... He/She is the main character of the novel...。第二段(详细介绍,说明原因):说明喜欢他/她的原因,主要描写性格特征和标志性行为。推荐使用 I like... for many reasons. He is brave enough to fight against... / He always comes up with ideas to deal with...。可穿插使用宾语从句,如 I want to know how he gets out of troubles.第三段(总结升华,表达情感):一句话总结人物精神,升华主题。可使用 From him, I learn... / In a word, he holds a special place in my heart.。
2. 时态运用: 描述文学作品中的人物性格和客观内容通常使用一般现在时;若回顾自己当初阅读的心情可使用一般过去时。
【高分范文】
My Favorite Story Character
Hello, everyone! My favorite story character is Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King. He is the main character of the novel Journey to the West, one of the four classics of Chinese literature.
I like him for many reasons. First, he has magical power and can change into anything, which is very exciting to read. Second, he is very brave and smart. He is never afraid of danger and always comes up with ideas to deal with difficulties. When I read the book, I always want to know how he fights against bad people to protect his master.
In my opinion, Sun Wukong is a great hero. From him, I learn the importance of being brave and loyal. He will always hold a special place in my heart.
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Unit 10 A World Online单元写作必备句式 (高分作文句式清单)
一、 写作必备基础句式
本单元的主题是“探讨互联网及其使用(A World Online)”,以下是描写网络活动、阐述上网目的以及结合本单元核心语法“简单句的基本句型”的必备基础句式结构:
· 1. 描述网络活动的句式:use the internet to do sth. / do sth. on the internet含义:使用互联网做某事 / 在网上做某事(主谓宾结构)。 例句:We can use the internet to search for useful information and communicate with friends.
· 2. 表明目的的句式:in order to do sth.含义:为了 / 以便做某事(用作目的状语,常位于句首或句末)。 例句:In order to find something useful, we should look carefully on the internet.
· 3. 阐述优缺点的句式:have both advantages and disadvantages含义:既有优点也有缺点。 例句:As we all know, the internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
· 4. 描述心理感受与状态的句式:be amazed by... / find it + adj. + to do sth.含义:对……感到惊奇 / 发现做某事很……(主谓宾宾补结构)。 例句:Feiyang is amazed by lots of useful information online, but sometimes I find it difficult to open the links.
二、 写作高分必备句式
在讨论互联网的两面性、分享在线学习经验或提出安全建议时,使用以下高分句式可以使文章逻辑严密、论证充分,有效提升作文档次:
· 1. 阐述事物两面性的高分句式:On the one hand... On the other hand...用法解析:意为“一方面……另一方面……”,用于客观辩证地分析互联网带来的利与弊,使文章结构更对称、逻辑更严谨。 例句:On the one hand, it is useful in many ways. On the other hand, not everyone on the internet is friendly.
· 2. 表示补充说明与递进关系的过渡句式:What's more, ... / Besides, ...用法解析:意为“而且 / 此外”,用于逐层深入地列举互联网的多种用途或影响,增强语篇连贯性。 例句:What's more, Feiyang reads news on the internet. Besides, he uses it to communicate with his friends and teachers.
· 3. 强调负面影响与危害的高分句式:It is harmful to one's health to do sth.用法解析:使用“It作形式主语,真正的主语为动词不定式”的句型,强调不良上网习惯的危害。 例句:Firstly, it is harmful to your health to spend too much time on the internet.
· 4. 提出建议与求助的高分句式:You'd better do... / If..., turn to sb. / Ask for help from...用法解析:意为“你最好做…… / 向某人求助”,常用于文章结尾提出合理使用网络的建议和解决防范措施。 例句:If it happens again and again, you should report it to your teachers or turn to your parents.
三、 限时提升训练
【训练要求】 请根据汉语提示,运用本单元的重点短语及基本句型完成下列句子。(建议用时:10分钟)
1. 一方面,互联网在很多方面都很有用。另一方面,并非网上的每个人都是友善的。
_________________________, the internet is useful in many ways. _________________________, not everyone on the internet is friendly.
2. 首先,花太多时间上网对你的健康是有害的。
Firstly, it _________________________ your health _________________________ spend too much time on the internet.
3. 如果这种事情反复发生,把它报告给你的老师或者向你的父母求助。
If it happens again and again, report it to your teachers or _________________________ your parents.
4. 为了找到有用的东西,我们需要仔细查看。
_________________________ find something useful, we need to look carefully.
5. 而且,互联网为飞扬打开了一扇通往新世界的大门。
_________________________, the internet opens the door to a new world for Feiyang.
【答案与解析】
1. 答案: On the one hand; On the other hand解析: 考查高级逻辑连接词 On the one hand... On the other hand... (一方面……另一方面……),用于辩证分析事物的两面性。
2. 答案: is harmful to; to解析: 考查句型 It is harmful to sb./sth. to do sth. (做某事对……是有害的),其中 It 是形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式。
3. 答案: turn to解析: 考查核心短语 turn to sb. (向某人求助 / 转向),此处与前面的 report it to 构成选择并列关系。
4. 答案: In order to解析: 考查短语 in order to (为了;以便),表示目的,置于句首时其后常用逗号与主句隔开。
5. 答案: What's more / Besides解析: 考查表示递进或补充的过渡词 What's more (而且 / 更重要的是) 或 Besides (此外)。
四、 单元话题作文训练
【写作任务】
互联网在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。学校英语报正在开展以“My Online Learning Experiences (我的在线学习经历)”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 简述互联网对你学习和生活的影响(如:开启了新的学习旅程);2. 你通常在网上做哪些学习活动(如:上网课、搜索信息、与朋友用英语交流等);3. 你对合理使用互联网的看法与感悟(既有优点也有缺点,应该控制屏幕时间,不要向陌生人透露个人信息等)。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 使用恰当的过渡词(如 What's more, Besides 等)和逻辑连接词(如 On the one hand... On the other hand...);3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
1. 谋篇布局(三段论):第一段(开门见山,引出主题):点明互联网改变了我们的生活,引出自己在线学习的经历。第二段(列举事实,详细叙述):这是文章的主体部分。使用 first, besides, what's more 等连接词,详细描述自己的网络学习活动。可以结合单元词汇如 take online courses, search for information, communicate with 等。第三段(辩证分析,总结建议):使用 On the one hand... On the other hand... 总结互联网的优缺点,并使用 It is harmful to... 和祈使句提出合理使用网络的建议(如控制时间、不泄露隐私等)。
2. 时态运用: 描述日常的学习习惯、互联网的客观事实和普遍建议时,全文应以一般现在时为主。
【高分范文】
My Online Learning Experiences
The internet makes our life easier and more fun. My life changes a lot after I started a new journey of study on the internet.
I usually use the internet to explore online courses on weekends. I can learn interesting subjects from history to science. What's more, I often search for useful information when I have questions. I am always amazed by the quick answers. Besides, I use the internet to communicate with my friends in English, which helps improve my language skills.
The internet has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it opens the door to a new world. On the other hand, in order to keep safe, we should not share personal information with strangers. Also, it is harmful to our health to spend too much time on the internet, so we must limit our screen time. Let's use the internet in a better way!
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Unit 11 The Beauty of Chinese Culture单元写作必备句式 (高分作文句式清单)
一、 写作必备基础句式
本单元的主题是“中国文化之美(The Beauty of Chinese Culture)”,涵盖了传统服饰、中医药、特色美食、古商道与传统艺术等。以下是描写传统事物及其特点,以及结合本单元核心语法“宾语从句”的必备基础句式:
· 1. 描述文化象征与知名度的句式:... is a symbol of ... / be known as ...含义:……是……的象征 / 作为……而出名。 例句:The Tang suit is a symbol of the Chinese culture. / These routes are known as "the Silk Road".
· 2. 表达个人观点与认知的句式:I think / know / believe (that) ... (that引导的宾语从句)含义:我认为 / 知道 / 相信……。 例句:I know that it is a part of our traditional clothes.
· 3. 描述事物历史与特点的句式:... have a long history / ... has its own characteristics含义:有悠久的历史 / 有它自己的特征。 例句:Chinese calligraphy is one of the best-known traditional art forms and it has a long history.
· 4. 提出体验建议的句式:Why not do sth.? / How about doing sth.?含义:为什么不做某事呢? / 做某事怎么样?(常用于建议外国友人体验中国文化)。 例句:Why not visit Tian'anmen Square and watch the flag-raising ceremony?
二、 写作高分必备句式
在介绍中国传统文化、弘扬民族精神时,使用以下高分句式可以彰显文化自信、提升文章立意并使句式结构更加高级:
· 1. 强调双重价值与意义的并列句式:not only... but also...用法解析:意为“不仅……而且……”,用于强调中国文化(如美食、服饰、艺术等)除了表面的实用价值外,更具有深厚的文化底蕴,能极大提升文章语言的丰富度。 例句:Beijing roast duck is not only a meal but also a good example of Chinese cooking.
· 2. 阐述传承动机的高分句式:... is a good way to do sth. / to keep the tradition alive用法解析:动词不定式作表语或目的状语,表达人们喜爱某项事物背后的文化动机。 例句:For the old man, trading on this route was not only for making money, but also for keeping the family tradition alive.
· 3. 表达在他人看来/观点的介词短语高分句式:In the eyes of ...用法解析:意为“在某人看来;在某人眼里”,常用于引出外界(如外国人、长辈等)对中国文化的客观评价,增强说服力。 例句:In the eyes of many people, the Chinatown is a symbol of China and Chinese culture.
· 4. 升华文化自信与期盼的宾语从句:I am sure / hope that ...用法解析:在文章结尾处,运用宾语从句发出热情的邀请或表达对文化走向世界的祝愿,完美收尾。 例句:I hope that more people will know about Chinese zhenjiu. I am sure that you will enjoy it.
三、 限时提升训练
【训练要求】 请根据汉语提示,运用本单元的重点短语及宾语从句完成下列句子。(建议用时:10分钟)
1. 在许多外国人眼里,唐人街是中国和中国文化的一个象征。
________ ________ ________ ________ many foreign people, the Chinatown is a ________ of China and Chinese culture.
2. 我第一次吃北京烤鸭,它尝起来很美味。
I ate Beijing roast duck ________ ________ ________ ________. It tasted delicious.
3. 我知道这是我们传统服饰的一部分。
I know ________ it is a part of our ________ clothes.
4. 功夫不仅仅是一项运动,也是中国文化的重要组成部分。
Kung fu is ________ ________ a sport ________ ________ an important part of Chinese culture.
5. 很多人喜欢穿唐装,为了让家庭传统传承下去。
Many people like to wear Tang suits in order to ________ the family tradition ________.
【答案与解析】
1. 答案: In the eyes of; symbol解析: 考查介词短语 in the eyes of (在……看来) 以及核心词汇 symbol (象征)。
2. 答案: for the first time解析: 考查固定搭配 for the first time (第一次)。
3. 答案: that; traditional解析: 考查 that 引导的宾语从句(不可省略时填入),以及形容词 traditional (传统的) 修饰名词 clothes。
4. 答案: not only; but also解析: 考查高级并列连词 not only... but also... (不仅……而且……),用于句式升华。
5. 答案: keep; alive解析: 考查动词短语 keep sth. alive (让……存活 / 让……传承下去),是描写文化传承的高分表达。
四、 单元话题作文训练
【写作任务】
学校英语报正在举办以“Traditional Foods in My Hometown (我家乡的传统美食)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,向外国朋友介绍你家乡的一道传统美食(如:北京烤鸭、火锅、饺子等)。
内容包括:1. 这道美食的名称及历史(如:有悠久的历史等);2. 它的主要特点或大致做法(如:颜色、味道、烹饪方式等);3. 它的文化意义以及你对它的喜爱之情。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 至少使用1个宾语从句。
【写作指导】
1. 谋篇布局(三段论):第一段(开门见山,引出美食):直接点出家乡的传统美食名称,并运用 have a long history 或 is famous for 等短语说明其历史渊源。第二段(详细介绍,描述特点):这是文章的主体。描述食物的颜色、味道、做法或吃法。如描述烤鸭用 make a fire out of wood in an oven;强烈建议使用 not only... but also... 句型来提升句式水平,交代其不仅是食物也是文化的象征。第三段(总结升华,发出邀请):运用宾语从句 I believe/hope/am sure that... 表达自己对这道美食的喜爱和文化自豪感,并热情地邀请外国朋友来品尝。
2. 时态运用: 介绍传统食物的特点、做法和普遍真理时,全文应以一般现在时为主。
【高分范文】
Traditional Foods in My Hometown
There are many traditional foods in my hometown, but my favorite is Beijing roast duck. It is a famous Chinese dish and has a long history.
To cook it, people usually make a fire out of wood in an oven and then put the duck into it. The fire gives the duck a very special taste. On the table, the duck looks golden and tastes really delicious. The meat is soft and the skin is very thin. Beijing roast duck is not only a fantastic meal but also a good example of Chinese cooking.
I believe that everyone will fall in love with it. I hope you can come to my hometown and try it for yourself! I am sure that you will enjoy it.
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Unit 11 The Beauty of Chinese Culture单元写作必备句式 (高分作文句式清单)
一、 写作必备基础句式
本单元的主题是“中国文化之美(The Beauty of Chinese Culture)”,涵盖了传统服饰、中医药、特色美食、古商道与传统艺术等。以下是描写传统事物及其特点,以及结合本单元核心语法“宾语从句”的必备基础句式:
· 1. 描述文化象征与知名度的句式:... is a symbol of ... / be known as ...含义:……是……的象征 / 作为……而出名。 例句:The Tang suit is a symbol of the Chinese culture. / These routes are known as "the Silk Road".
· 2. 表达个人观点与认知的句式:I think / know / believe (that) ... (that引导的宾语从句)含义:我认为 / 知道 / 相信……。 例句:I know that it is a part of our traditional clothes.
· 3. 描述事物历史与特点的句式:... have a long history / ... has its own characteristics含义:有悠久的历史 / 有它自己的特征。 例句:Chinese calligraphy is one of the best-known traditional art forms and it has a long history.
· 4. 提出体验建议的句式:Why not do sth.? / How about doing sth.?含义:为什么不做某事呢? / 做某事怎么样?(常用于建议外国友人体验中国文化)。 例句:Why not visit Tian'anmen Square and watch the flag-raising ceremony?
二、 写作高分必备句式
在介绍中国传统文化、弘扬民族精神时,使用以下高分句式可以彰显文化自信、提升文章立意并使句式结构更加高级:
· 1. 强调双重价值与意义的并列句式:not only... but also...用法解析:意为“不仅……而且……”,用于强调中国文化(如美食、服饰、艺术等)除了表面的实用价值外,更具有深厚的文化底蕴,能极大提升文章语言的丰富度。 例句:Beijing roast duck is not only a meal but also a good example of Chinese cooking.
· 2. 阐述传承动机的高分句式:... is a good way to do sth. / to keep the tradition alive用法解析:动词不定式作表语或目的状语,表达人们喜爱某项事物背后的文化动机。 例句:For the old man, trading on this route was not only for making money, but also for keeping the family tradition alive.
· 3. 表达在他人看来/观点的介词短语高分句式:In the eyes of ...用法解析:意为“在某人看来;在某人眼里”,常用于引出外界(如外国人、长辈等)对中国文化的客观评价,增强说服力。 例句:In the eyes of many people, the Chinatown is a symbol of China and Chinese culture.
· 4. 升华文化自信与期盼的宾语从句:I am sure / hope that ...用法解析:在文章结尾处,运用宾语从句发出热情的邀请或表达对文化走向世界的祝愿,完美收尾。 例句:I hope that more people will know about Chinese zhenjiu. I am sure that you will enjoy it.
三、 限时提升训练
【训练要求】 请根据汉语提示,运用本单元的重点短语及宾语从句完成下列句子。(建议用时:10分钟)
1. 在许多外国人眼里,唐人街是中国和中国文化的一个象征。
________ ________ ________ ________ many foreign people, the Chinatown is a ________ of China and Chinese culture.
2. 我第一次吃北京烤鸭,它尝起来很美味。
I ate Beijing roast duck ________ ________ ________ ________. It tasted delicious.
3. 我知道这是我们传统服饰的一部分。
I know ________ it is a part of our ________ clothes.
4. 功夫不仅仅是一项运动,也是中国文化的重要组成部分。
Kung fu is ________ ________ a sport ________ ________ an important part of Chinese culture.
5. 很多人喜欢穿唐装,为了让家庭传统传承下去。
Many people like to wear Tang suits in order to ________ the family tradition ________.
【答案与解析】
1. 答案: In the eyes of; symbol解析: 考查介词短语 in the eyes of (在……看来) 以及核心词汇 symbol (象征)。
2. 答案: for the first time解析: 考查固定搭配 for the first time (第一次)。
3. 答案: that; traditional解析: 考查 that 引导的宾语从句(不可省略时填入),以及形容词 traditional (传统的) 修饰名词 clothes。
4. 答案: not only; but also解析: 考查高级并列连词 not only... but also... (不仅……而且……),用于句式升华。
5. 答案: keep; alive解析: 考查动词短语 keep sth. alive (让……存活 / 让……传承下去),是描写文化传承的高分表达。
四、 单元话题作文训练
【写作任务】
学校英语报正在举办以“Traditional Foods in My Hometown (我家乡的传统美食)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,向外国朋友介绍你家乡的一道传统美食(如:北京烤鸭、火锅、饺子等)。
内容包括:1. 这道美食的名称及历史(如:有悠久的历史等);2. 它的主要特点或大致做法(如:颜色、味道、烹饪方式等);3. 它的文化意义以及你对它的喜爱之情。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 至少使用1个宾语从句。
【写作指导】
1. 谋篇布局(三段论):第一段(开门见山,引出美食):直接点出家乡的传统美食名称,并运用 have a long history 或 is famous for 等短语说明其历史渊源。第二段(详细介绍,描述特点):这是文章的主体。描述食物的颜色、味道、做法或吃法。如描述烤鸭用 make a fire out of wood in an oven;强烈建议使用 not only... but also... 句型来提升句式水平,交代其不仅是食物也是文化的象征。第三段(总结升华,发出邀请):运用宾语从句 I believe/hope/am sure that... 表达自己对这道美食的喜爱和文化自豪感,并热情地邀请外国朋友来品尝。
2. 时态运用: 介绍传统食物的特点、做法和普遍真理时,全文应以一般现在时为主。
【高分范文】
Traditional Foods in My Hometown
There are many traditional foods in my hometown, but my favorite is Beijing roast duck. It is a famous Chinese dish and has a long history.
To cook it, people usually make a fire out of wood in an oven and then put the duck into it. The fire gives the duck a very special taste. On the table, the duck looks golden and tastes really delicious. The meat is soft and the skin is very thin. Beijing roast duck is not only a fantastic meal but also a good example of Chinese cooking.
I believe that everyone will fall in love with it. I hope you can come to my hometown and try it for yourself! I am sure that you will enjoy it.
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Unit 10 A World Online单元写作必备句式 (高分作文句式清单)
一、 写作必备基础句式
本单元的主题是“探讨互联网及其使用(A World Online)”,以下是描写网络活动、阐述上网目的以及结合本单元核心语法“简单句的基本句型”的必备基础句式结构:
· 1. 描述网络活动的句式:use the internet to do sth. / do sth. on the internet含义:使用互联网做某事 / 在网上做某事(主谓宾结构)。 例句:We can use the internet to search for useful information and communicate with friends.
· 2. 表明目的的句式:in order to do sth.含义:为了 / 以便做某事(用作目的状语,常位于句首或句末)。 例句:In order to find something useful, we should look carefully on the internet.
· 3. 阐述优缺点的句式:have both advantages and disadvantages含义:既有优点也有缺点。 例句:As we all know, the internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
· 4. 描述心理感受与状态的句式:be amazed by... / find it + adj. + to do sth.含义:对……感到惊奇 / 发现做某事很……(主谓宾宾补结构)。 例句:Feiyang is amazed by lots of useful information online, but sometimes I find it difficult to open the links.
二、 写作高分必备句式
在讨论互联网的两面性、分享在线学习经验或提出安全建议时,使用以下高分句式可以使文章逻辑严密、论证充分,有效提升作文档次:
· 1. 阐述事物两面性的高分句式:On the one hand... On the other hand...用法解析:意为“一方面……另一方面……”,用于客观辩证地分析互联网带来的利与弊,使文章结构更对称、逻辑更严谨。 例句:On the one hand, it is useful in many ways. On the other hand, not everyone on the internet is friendly.
· 2. 表示补充说明与递进关系的过渡句式:What's more, ... / Besides, ...用法解析:意为“而且 / 此外”,用于逐层深入地列举互联网的多种用途或影响,增强语篇连贯性。 例句:What's more, Feiyang reads news on the internet. Besides, he uses it to communicate with his friends and teachers.
· 3. 强调负面影响与危害的高分句式:It is harmful to one's health to do sth.用法解析:使用“It作形式主语,真正的主语为动词不定式”的句型,强调不良上网习惯的危害。 例句:Firstly, it is harmful to your health to spend too much time on the internet.
· 4. 提出建议与求助的高分句式:You'd better do... / If..., turn to sb. / Ask for help from...用法解析:意为“你最好做…… / 向某人求助”,常用于文章结尾提出合理使用网络的建议和解决防范措施。 例句:If it happens again and again, you should report it to your teachers or turn to your parents.
三、 限时提升训练
【训练要求】 请根据汉语提示,运用本单元的重点短语及基本句型完成下列句子。(建议用时:10分钟)
1. 一方面,互联网在很多方面都很有用。另一方面,并非网上的每个人都是友善的。
_________________________, the internet is useful in many ways. _________________________, not everyone on the internet is friendly.
2. 首先,花太多时间上网对你的健康是有害的。
Firstly, it _________________________ your health _________________________ spend too much time on the internet.
3. 如果这种事情反复发生,把它报告给你的老师或者向你的父母求助。
If it happens again and again, report it to your teachers or _________________________ your parents.
4. 为了找到有用的东西,我们需要仔细查看。
_________________________ find something useful, we need to look carefully.
5. 而且,互联网为飞扬打开了一扇通往新世界的大门。
_________________________, the internet opens the door to a new world for Feiyang.
【答案与解析】
1. 答案: On the one hand; On the other hand解析: 考查高级逻辑连接词 On the one hand... On the other hand... (一方面……另一方面……),用于辩证分析事物的两面性。
2. 答案: is harmful to; to解析: 考查句型 It is harmful to sb./sth. to do sth. (做某事对……是有害的),其中 It 是形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式。
3. 答案: turn to解析: 考查核心短语 turn to sb. (向某人求助 / 转向),此处与前面的 report it to 构成选择并列关系。
4. 答案: In order to解析: 考查短语 in order to (为了;以便),表示目的,置于句首时其后常用逗号与主句隔开。
5. 答案: What's more / Besides解析: 考查表示递进或补充的过渡词 What's more (而且 / 更重要的是) 或 Besides (此外)。
四、 单元话题作文训练
【写作任务】
互联网在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。学校英语报正在开展以“My Online Learning Experiences (我的在线学习经历)”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 简述互联网对你学习和生活的影响(如:开启了新的学习旅程);2. 你通常在网上做哪些学习活动(如:上网课、搜索信息、与朋友用英语交流等);3. 你对合理使用互联网的看法与感悟(既有优点也有缺点,应该控制屏幕时间,不要向陌生人透露个人信息等)。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 使用恰当的过渡词(如 What's more, Besides 等)和逻辑连接词(如 On the one hand... On the other hand...);3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
1. 谋篇布局(三段论):第一段(开门见山,引出主题):点明互联网改变了我们的生活,引出自己在线学习的经历。第二段(列举事实,详细叙述):这是文章的主体部分。使用 first, besides, what's more 等连接词,详细描述自己的网络学习活动。可以结合单元词汇如 take online courses, search for information, communicate with 等。第三段(辩证分析,总结建议):使用 On the one hand... On the other hand... 总结互联网的优缺点,并使用 It is harmful to... 和祈使句提出合理使用网络的建议(如控制时间、不泄露隐私等)。
2. 时态运用: 描述日常的学习习惯、互联网的客观事实和普遍建议时,全文应以一般现在时为主。
【高分范文】
My Online Learning Experiences
The internet makes our life easier and more fun. My life changes a lot after I started a new journey of study on the internet.
I usually use the internet to explore online courses on weekends. I can learn interesting subjects from history to science. What's more, I often search for useful information when I have questions. I am always amazed by the quick answers. Besides, I use the internet to communicate with my friends in English, which helps improve my language skills.
The internet has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it opens the door to a new world. On the other hand, in order to keep safe, we should not share personal information with strangers. Also, it is harmful to our health to spend too much time on the internet, so we must limit our screen time. Let's use the internet in a better way!
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