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考点十五
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题组一
Writing1(2024·新课标I卷,25分)
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头wallet..】flashed him an apologetic smile as I
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pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it
I
several times,but the card machine just did not
I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable
play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over
evening in September.I had planned to fly to
me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.
®
At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the
Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed waiting hall of the bus station.There,at the
by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna:entrance,was a cash machine.I jumped out of the
p
just 30 minutes before the departure of the last car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped
当
bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane,Imy card in,only to read the message:"Out of
order..Sorry.”
ran like crazy through the airport building and
李
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jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a
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second thought.
量
That was when I met Gunter.I told him
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad
弥
where I was going,but he said he hadn't heard of
news.
the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was
杯
the problem,so I explained again more slowly,
赵
but he still looked confused.When I was about to
give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and
rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that
▣
lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put
Four days later,when I was back in
his phone down and started the car.
Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.
Finally,with just two minutes to spare we
的
rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was
a long queue(队列)still waiting to board the
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bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,
turned around,and looked at me with a big smile
on his face..“We made it,”he said.
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Writing2(2023·新课标Ⅱ卷,25分)
a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the
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When I handed in the essay to my teacher,
When I was in middle school,my social he read it,laughed out loud,and said,"Great.
studies teacher asked me to enter a writing Now,write it again."I wrote it again,and again
contest.I said no without thinking.I did not love and again.When I finally finished it,the thought
writing.My family came from Brazil,so English of winning had given way to the enjoyment of
was only my second language.Writing was so writing.If I didn't win,I wouldn't care.
difficult and painful for me that my teacher had
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allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of
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the Titanic by acting out a play,where I played
all the parts.No one laughed harder than he did.
A few weeks later,when I almost forgot
So,why did he suddenly force me to do
the contest,there came the news.
something at which I was sure to fail?His reply:
"Because I love your stories.If you're willing to
apply yourself,I think you have a good shot at
this.Encouraged by his words,I agreed to give
it a try.
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject.
Paul Revere was a silversmith(银匠)in Boston
who rode a horse at night on April 18,1775 to
Lexington to warn people that British soldiers
I went to my teacher's office after the
were coming.My story would come straight from
award presentation.
the horse's mouth.Not a brilliant idea,but
funny;and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
What did the horse think,as he sped
through the night?Did he get tired?Have
doubts?Did he want to quit?I sympathized:
immediately.I got tired.I had doubts.I wanted to
quit.But,like Revere's horse,I kept going.I
worked hard.I checked my spelling.I asked my
older sister to correct my grammar.I checked out
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题组二
Writing1(2025·浙江1月,25分)
At that moment,the sounds of a police car
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panic,then ran through the house toward the
Kevin was pretty bored.His mother was at
window and jumped out.Kevin followed out and
work,and his father had been away on business.
told the arriving police officers what had
Therefore,he was left in the care of Mrs.Hill,an
happened.They pursued and arrested the man.
old lady who lived next door.His parents had
Kevin went back to Mrs.Hill's house.
raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy.He never
got into trouble,though sometimes he wanted to
Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right
do risky things.Mrs.Hill was asleep.Kevin thing."What if he has told the truth?"he thought
sighed )and hoped something exciting would to himself.The man's words sounded pretty
happen.Suddenly,a movement outside caught convincing.
his eye.
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Mrs.Hill's front window faced Mr.and Mrs.
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Green's house across the street.The couple had
When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin
both gone to work,so it was strange that
went to talk to them.
someone was over there.Kevin stared at the man
at their front door.Suddenly,the man jumped
through an open window into the house.With his
heart in his mouth,Kevin grabbed Mrs.Hill's
home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with
whatever he wanted before the police arrived,
Kevin decided to do something.He rushed out of
Mrs.Hill's house and crossed the street quickly.
Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree,he
jumped in through the window."Stop right there!
You must leave right now !"he called out,holding
Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they
the branch with both hands.
had found to the police station.
The man froze for a second,but when he saw
the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief."Hey,
kid,put that down.It was my home.My parents
used to live here and my father's watch was
here,"he explained,trying to lift a floorboard.
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Writing2(2025·全国Ⅱ卷,25分)
After that incident,I stopped acting as a
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"Chinese teacher."Instead of correcting others
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when they were struggling to pronounce my
“What's your name?”is a question most
name,I just smiled and nodded approvingly.This
frequently asked when people meet for the first
approach spared me the discomfort of having to
time.But for me,it was the first challenge I
over-explain.However,I soon found that by
encountered as an international student in
doing so,I might be losing something more
Ireland.
important:the opportunity to share a small part
The pronunciation system of the Chinese
of my cultural identity.
language is quite different from that of English.
、
For native speakers of English,some Chinese
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words are rather difficult to pronounce.My given
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name Qiuyu(秋雨),for instance,happened to be
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a great challenge for many of them.Every time I
In a class discussion,I was invited to
gave a self-introduction,I had to explain how to
explain the meaning of my name.
pronounce my name at least five times,yet they
still could not say it the way I did.
Once in a lecture,the professor tried
repeating my name after me over and over in front
of thirty classmates,I really did not know
whether I should continue correcting him or
simply drop the matter.I feared that my
classmates might grow tired of my efforts or even
Many of my classmates got interested and
the patience with me.After all,I did care about
came up to me after class.
how others would think of me.I realized that if I;
didn't stop,the entire lecture would be ruined.
“It's okay,professor,”I shrugged(耸肩).The
awkward moment ended with the class erupting
into laughter.I forced a smile,unsure how to
respond further.
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Writing3(2025·全国I卷,25分)
we had parted.After all,I had left him little
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头choice.Well,he'll get over it,I reasoned..
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Two months passed.My wife suggested I get
My wife and I wanted to share our new home in touch with my brother,but I resisted,thinking
with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in he should call first.However,my conscience(
the early summer.She had prepared lots of snacks,)kept bothering me.I tried to put myself in my
while my job was to have the backyard in order.
brother's shoes.He was facing health issues and
救
There was plenty of space for the kids to run his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a
and play.There was just one thing I hadn't
few
months earlier.Toby was his constant
園
counted on:My
companion,the one who kept him going.
brother chose to bring his dog Toby,a 50-pound
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p
ball of fire.Though friendly,he could easily
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knock over my niece's small boys and my six-
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month-old granddaughter.So,when my brother
I realized it was me who was at fault.
showed up,I asked him to watch Toby and keep
him outside.
蠻
My plan was working out just fine.Toby was
!
using up his energy by running back and forth in
弥
the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room.
Unexpectedly,after supper,the weather changed.
令
It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
烂
It was an awkward moment.I didn't want
Toby to be running around in the house,and my
brother wasn't happy with driving home with a
抵
wet dog.Eventually,my brother decided to leave
With the biscuits my wife had made,I
rather than force the issue.
arrived at my brother's door.
药
A few days passed,and I hadn't heard
anything from my brother.I texted him and
阳
expressed wishes for him to come out again.His
reply came as a surprise-a shock,actually:"Not
a chance."Clearly,he was unhappy over the way
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Writing4(2024·浙江卷1月,25分)
beginning,"she thought."I'll come in last for
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Soon Eva began to breathe hard,with her
Eva spent the first week of high school:heart pounding and legs shaking.Feeling
trying to keep her head above water.One of the desperate,Eva started using a mind trick on
major headaches for her was finding her way in herself.She stopped thinking about the word
the huge school building.It was a six-story "mile".Instead,she focused on reaching the
building.On each floor,hallways stretched in shadow cast on the track by an oak tree up
four directions,leading to classrooms,laboratories,ahead.Then she concentrated on jogging to the
and teachers'offices.Somewhere in the building,spot where the track curved ()After that,
there was also a library,a cafeteria,and a gym.
she tried to see if she could complete her first
Having a poor sense of direction,Eva found lap.One lap turned into two,then three,then
it impossible to get around in such a huge four.
building.All the different hallways and rooms
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were too much to think about,let alone commit
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to memory.She decided that she would memorize
When Coach Pitt said“Nice work!”to her
where her classes were and then pretend that the
at the finish line,Eva was surprised.
rest of the place didn't exist.
In her first P.E.class,Eva was shocked
when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to
run one mile around the track outside.She
searched the faces of her classmates for signs of
panic.There was nothing she feared more than
having to run a whole mile.To Eva,“a mile'”was
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal
used to describe long distances.It was ten miles
with the school building.
from her home to her grandfather's,and that
always seemed like a long way,even in a car!
When Coach Pitt blew his whistle(哨子),
Eva figured she would be left in the dust.
However,while some of her classmates edged
ahead,others actually fell behind."It's just the
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题组三
Writing(2024·全国甲卷,25分)
Development of Transport in China
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图
From the vehicle of horses to today's
片,以Development of Transport in China为题写
convenient transport,Chinese transport has an
enormous development.
一篇发言稿。
shared bicycle
high-speed train
new energy vehicle
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2.题目和首句已为你写好。
题组四
Writing(2023·浙江1月,25分)
With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头!around to see how she had gotten in.The broken
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window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a
piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's
closing the door securely behind me.
farm in western Washington.I parked my car
When I opened my hand,the bird did not fly
outside the farm and walked past a milking house
away;she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.
which had apparently not been used in many
I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her
years.A noise at a window caught my attention,
head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to
so I entered it..It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟),!
fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the
desperately trying to escape.She was covered in
window too long and was too tired?Or too
spider-webs(蛛网)and was barely able to move
thirsty?
her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I;
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path
picked her up.
toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she
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began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing
A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.
but did not immediately fly away.Hovering
停),she approached within six inches of my
face.For a very long moment,this tiny creature:
looked into my eyes,turning her head from side
to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout,I told my hosts about
the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix
the window.As I was departing,my friends:
I was just about to leave when the
walked me to my car.I was standing by the car;
hummingbird appeared.
when a hummingbird flew to the center of our
group and began hovering.She turned from
person to person until she came to me.She again
looked directly into my eyes,then let out a
squeaking call and was gone.For a moment,all
were speechless.Then someone said,"She must
have come to say good-bye.
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116vivid introduction,the idea that it is definitely Yuan
Longping's intense efforts that feed so many people on Earth
struck me deeply.
The activity lasted for the whole day and I felt greatly
lucky to have such a precious chance.
Writing 5
【参考范文】
Youth and Me
Three years ago,I fell in love with Youth at first sight.
Since then I have been reading it every day,which is an
excellent window for me to learn what is happening outside.
Of all the sections,what I like best is Reading,from
which not only have I raised the awareness of reading,but I
have also increased my knowledge.Much to my delight,I have
become a person passionate about reading,which is bound to
lay solid foundation for my future.
Youth has enjoyed a great success in the last 10 years.I
do hope it will develep better and become the best friend of
each student.
考点十五读后续写
题组一
Writing 1
【参考范文】
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.The
cash machine was also out of order!In other words,I
couldn't pay him now.I felt so depressed and sorry[心理描
写,沮丧且抱歉],an embarrassed smile creeping into(逐渐浮
现)my face(独立主格结构)[表情描写,体现尴尬处境].Then
an idea occurred to me..I pointed at[手部动作描写]my phone
and asked him to give his phone number to me so that I could
contact him when I came back here(目的状语从句,其中when
引导时间状语从句).Surprisingly,he comforted me that
everything was OK since he had known how anxious I was
(that引导宾语从句,其中since引导原因状语从句,how引导
宾语从句).After we said goodbye to each other,I rushed to
[肢体动作描写]the queue..Fortunately,I didn't miss the
whole arrangements for the conference.
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called
Gunter as promised.He didn't recognise me immediately
when I said hello to him.So I explained my intention.At first,
he refused to charge me the fare.But I insisted I owe him the
money(宾语从句十虚拟语气).Therefore,we made a deal to
meet at the bus station.When we met,I extended my gratitude
for his trust in me,gave him the fare and tipped(给小费)him
another sum of money[表达感激的心理以及付钱的动作链].
Satisfied,he gave me a thumbs-up,praised me a lot for my
honesty and also thanked me for the tipl[司机收到报酬后的反
应动作链],but I told him that he deserved it(that引导宾语
)Till now,every time I recall this experience(every time
引导时间状语从句),Ican't help wondering(不禁琢磨)if
there is more trust and honesty in the world,how charming
our world will be(how引导宾语从句,其中if引导条件状语
从句).
Writing 2
【参考范文】
A few weeks later,when I almost forgot the contest,
there came the news.I still remember it was a Monday
morning in spring,when my teacher called me to his office,
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telling me that I had taken first place in the writing contest,
and that I was the only winner whose native language wasn't
English.Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitemen
and pride at his words,I simply stood there dumbfounded,
and my feet,as if rooted to the ground,couldn't move a bit.
The next day,I was presented with my award and a
certificate at the ceremony.
I went to my teacher's office a fter the award
presentation.Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading
on his face,he told me that he was proud of my wonderful
performance.It was at that moment that a warm surge of
streams washed through my body,and the image of the horse
emerged in my mind,encouraging me to continue writing.
Indeed,I got a taste of victory and learned to pursue my
dream with perseverance,whatever difficulties might arise.
题组二
Writing 1
【参考范文】
When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk
to them.He explained everything and the Greens listened
carefully.No sooner had he finished the story than the Greens
both expressed their surprise.Meanwhile,they gave Kevin
credit (for his bravery and courage.Then,they
thoroughly checked the whole room to make sure if there was
anything lost and lifted the board to search for the watch.
Fortunately,everything was in order and to their
astonishment,there was a watch lying silently under the
floorboard,just as the man had described!
Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to
the police station.They showed the watch to the officer and
mentioned again what the man had said.The officer confirmed
that it matched the man's description and expressed that they
would do further investigation.Kevin felt a huge surge of
relief.The officer thanked them for their help and promised to
keep them updated.As they left the station,Kevin thought to
himself,"This time I did the right thing after all."Mr.Green
looked at him with a smile and patted him on the shoulder,
saying,"You are truly a brave and warm-hearted boy,
Kevin.”
Writing 2
【参考范文】
In a class discussion.I was invited to explain the
meaning of my name.As I rose to my feet,the classroom fell
silent."'Qiu'is autumn,the season of golden leaves and cool
winds.'Yu'means rain,which nourishes the earth,"I began,
my hands slightly trembling."In Chinese culture,autumn
symbolizes peace-a time to reflect."I shared how my parents
named me after a rainy autumn afternoon when they adopted a
stray cat,hoping I'd carry kindness in my heart.The professor
leaned forward,commenting,"That's beautiful-does it have
a poetic link?"I nodded,reciting a line about autumn rain
washing old stones.A few students wrote it down,their eyes
curious.
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to
me after class.Liam,a boy with a guitar slung over his
shoulder,grinned,saying,"Please teach me to say it right!"I
guided him,“Qiu-like‘chew',yu-like‘you'but softer,
He practiced,and when he got it,the group cheered.Ana
asked to take a photo of the Chinese characters in my
notebook.Even the professor smiled,"I'll get it right by next
class,I promise."As we laughed,I realized my name was no
longer a barrier.It was a story,a bridge-and today,I'd
shared a piece of my world.
Writing 3
【参考范文】
I realized it was me who was at fault.As I reflected on
what had happened that evening,shame washed over(情绪突
然而深刻地袭来)me.
My brother,already burdened with(被…困扰)grief
and loneliness,had only sought companionship in Toby,
while I had treated them both as inconveniences.Instead of
finding a compromise by setting up a space indoors for the
dog,I had prioritized(优先处理)my own comfort over his
feelings.The thought of him spending these months being
isolated filled me with deep regret.Seeing this,my wife
decided to do something,so she baked some biscuits for me to
bring to my brother.
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my
brother's door.Hesitating,I raised my hand to knock,my
heart pounding with uncertainty.When the door opened,my
brother's eyes widened in surprise.Before he could speak,I
handed him the biscuits,saying sorry to him sincerely.The
stiffness in his expression softened slightly.It was at this
moment that Toby bounced over,wagging his tail merrily(
)A faint smile touched my brother's lips,which spread
into a brilliant smile.The next few hours witnessed us taking
a walk outside and talking open-heartedly(善良诚恳地).
Writing 4
【参考范文】
When Coach Pitt said“Nice work!”to her at the finish
line,Eva was surprised.She had expected to be the last one
to cross the finish line,but instead she had come in the
middle of the pack.Eva realized that she had underestimated
(低估)her own abilities(宾语从句).She also learned a
valuable lesson:sometimes,the only way to overcome a
challenge is to break it into smaller,more manageable parts.
This experience gave her a new sense of confidence in her
abilities and laid a solid foundation(打下坚实的基础)for her
to face other challenges in the future.
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school
building.Confident and adventuroust(形容词作伴随状语)[心
理描写],she focused on(集中注意力于…)learning the
routes to her classes and the cafeteria instead of(trying
to memorize the entire layout()of the building at once.
She also made a point of(特意做…)exploring the building
during her free time,so that she could gradually become
familiar with the different hallways and rooms (so that
的结果状语从句).With this new strategy,Eva found that
the school building was no longer a source of stress for her
(宾语从句).In fact,she even began to enjoy exploring the
different parts of the building and discovering new places.
题组三
Writing
【参考范文】
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient
transport,Chinese transport has an enormous development.
Today I'd like to focus on some major developments,which
include shared bicycles,high-speed trains and new energy
vehicles(非限制性定语从句).
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As we all know,changes in transportation will bring
great changes to people's lives.Shared bicycles provide a
convenient and environmentally friendly(环保的)means of
transport for short trips.Besides,China's high-speed railway
network has connected various cities effectively,greatly
saving travel time and promoting economic development
在分词短语作结果状语).Currently,advanced new energy
vehicles have entered our lives(走进我们的生话),helping
reduce air pollution.
These developments in transportation have raised our
quality of life(提高我们的生活质量)and showed the power
of science.Therefore,we need to study hard and make a
contribution(做贡献)to the further development of
transportation.
Thank you for your listening!
题组四
Writing
【参考范文】
Possible version one:
A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.I still
remembered my friends'promise so I went past the
abandoned milking house to see if they had fixed the broken
window.To my satisfaction,no other tiny creatures would
meet this trouble any more.As I approached the farm,I was
greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue,urging me to walk
faster.We were totally immersed in the peaceful atmosphere,
enjoying the delicate cuisines,talking about our interesting
experiences and singing songs till the sun set.The evening
glow spreading across the farm,it was time for us to say
goodbye so we went to the parking lot together.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird
appeared.With a squeaking call,she dived towards me and
hovered before my face,looking at me with her bright eyes.
Then she stopped on my left shoulder.I patted her on the
back which was covered by colorful feathers.And I took out
my water bottle,trying to give her some water.Content and
joyful,she flew about 2 meters above the ground,turning her
head from side to side as if expressing her gratitude for saving
her life to me again.At that moment,happiness and the
feeling of being moved mingled,welling up into my heart,
tears rolling down my cheeks.
Possible version two:
A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.Having
finished visiting my friend,I wandered alone along the path,
kicking pebbles.Memories with the hummingbird occurred to
me when I walked to the blackberry-lined path.Was she
alright?Would she remember me?Unknowingly,the milking
house appeared in my vision,in which I spotted that the
broken window had been repaired.My head went blank.I
couldn't help missing her at the prospect of our precious
friendship.The sky seemed to turn cloudy then.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird
appeared.There she was delightedly,the clouds in my heart
soon cleared.Hands waving,I dashed towards the bird,
yelling to make myself noticed.She hovered cheerfully and
lowered to stand on my shoulder.It was not until the moment
she got closer that I saw the raspberries held in her sharp
mouth.What a kind bird!Even animals know returning.
Apparently,a good deed deserves another one.Solid bridges
can be built between species.