Unit 3 The world at one click 写作篇（“导”与“练”）-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册导练测同步（译林版2024）

Unit 3 The world at one click 写作篇（线上旅游） 【实践演练】1 假如你校英语社团网站举办了以 “My Wonderful Online Tour” 为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文投稿，介绍你的武陵源线上之旅。 内容包括：1. 你是如何知道并决定线上游览武陵源的； 2. 武陵源的地理位置和特色：位于中国湖南省，它以数千根高大的砂岩柱(sandstone pillars)、清澈的湖泊和茂密的森林而闻名，人们称之为 “现实生活中的仙境(real-life fairyland)”； 3. 你线上游览的经过和感受； 4. 你对线上旅行方式的看法。 要求：1. 词数100左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 内容连贯，逻辑清晰，书写工整。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Online Tour of Wulingyuan I watched a documentary about Wulingyuan last month. I got very interested and decided to explore it online. Wulingyuan is in Hunan Province, China. It is famous for its thousands of tall sandstone pillars, clear lakes, and deep forests. Many people call it a “real-life fairyland”. I took a 360-degree virtual tour and saw amazing views. I could “fly” over the mountains and look down at the green valleys. There were also beautiful pictures showing different seasons. I felt like I was walking between those stone pillars. Online travel is wonderful. I enjoyed the natural beauty without leaving home, and it didn’t cost anything. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步：介绍如何知道并决定线上游览武陵源； 第二步：介绍武陵源的地理位置和主要特色； 第三步：描述线上游览的经过和感受，并表达对线上旅行方式的看法。 【亮点词汇】 ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②be famous for以……闻名 ③thousands of成千上万的 【高分句型】 ①There were also beautiful pictures showing different seasons. (运用了there be句型) ②I felt like I was walking between those stone pillars. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 【实践演练】2 假设你上周在线游览了美国黄石国家公园，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，描述这次在线旅行的经历。 写作要点：1. 在线旅行工具(如：网站，手机应用程序)； 2. 特色景观(如：间歇泉向空中喷水，湖泊，野生动物等)； 3. 黄石国家公园是美国的第一个国家公园； 4. 在线旅行的感受以及对未来实地游览的期待。 要求：1. 条理清晰，语句通顺； 2. 包含所有写作要点； 3. 词数90-120。 参考词汇：virtual 虚拟的 geyser 间歇泉 shoot water喷水 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last week, I took a virtual tour of Yellowstone National Park through a website. The website provided interactive maps and 360-degree videos, making the experience feel almost real. I was amazed by the park’s unique landscapes. The most impressive sight was Old Faithful, a famous geyser that shoots water high into the sky. I also saw other amazing geysers, beautiful lakes, and even some deer walking in the forests. Learning that Yellowstone is America’s first national park made the tour even more meaningful. I felt excited and surprised at the beauty of nature. The 360-degree virtual experience made me feel like I was really there. I hope to visit it in person one day to feel its real beauty. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：材料作文 (在线旅行经历)； ②时态：一般过去时为主，表达感受和期待时用一般现在时； ③提示：需涵盖四个写作要点，按顺序描述工具、景观、公园地位、感受与期待。 【写作步骤】 第一步：开门见山说明时间、地点和在线旅行工具(网站)； 第二步：按要点描述特色景观，并补充公园的历史地位； 第三步：总结在线旅行感受，并表达对未来实地游览的期待。 【亮点词汇】 ①virtual tour虚拟旅行 ②geysers间歇泉 ③in person亲自 【高分句型】 ①I took a virtual tour of Yellowstone National Park through a website.(运用了“take a tour of”固定搭配) ②I hope to visit it in person one day to feel its real beauty.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语) 【实践演练】3 米莉曾在线参观过大英博物馆，请根据下内容，以米莉的口吻，为自己的参观经历写一篇文章。 Which place I visited The British Museum Why I visited it Be interested in history What I saw The Rosetta Stone(罗塞塔石碑) and Egyptian Mummies(埃及木乃伊) How I felt Amazing, convenient 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80左右。 My online tour of the British Museum I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. ___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My online tour of the British Museum I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. I became very interested in ancient civilizations, so I decided to explore it online through its official website. Located in London, it’s famous for its collection of historical artifacts. Through the virtual tour, I saw amazing exhibits like the Rosetta Stone and Egyptian Mummies. I could zoom in to see details clearly and read interesting descriptions. The experience was both educational and amazing. It felt almost like being there in person, and best of all, it was convenient! 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时(叙述探索古代文明的经历)和一般现在时(描述网站及展品特点)； ③提示：讲述自己对古代文明产生兴趣后，通过伦敦某机构官网在线探索的经历，包括该机构因历史文物收藏闻名，在线虚拟游览看到罗塞塔石碑、埃及木乃伊等展品，能放大看细节、读介绍，以及这次经历有教育意义、很棒且方便。   【写作步骤】 第一步：说明自己对古代文明产生兴趣，决定通过其官网在线探索； 第二步：介绍该机构位于伦敦、以历史文物收藏闻名，描述在线虚拟游览看到的展品及体验(放大看细节、读介绍)； 第三步：评价这次经历(有教育意义、很棒、方便，像亲临现场)。   【亮点词汇】 ①ancient civilizations古代文明 ②explore探索 ③artifact文物 ④virtual虚拟的 ⑤convenient方便的   【高分句型】 ①I became very interested in ancient civilizations, so I decided to explore it online through its official website.(运用了“so”连接兴趣与行动，逻辑清晰地引出事件起因) ②It felt almost like being there in person, and best of all, it was convenient! (运用了“and best of all”突出最显著的优点) 【实践演练】4 假如你在“八小时环游中国”的网站上浏览了中国的北京，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，可适当发挥，80词左右，开头已给出。 An Online Tour Today I took an online tour of Beijing on the website “Around China in Eight Hours”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An Online Tour Today I took an online tour of Beijing on the website “Around China in Eight Hours”. Tian’anmen Square is the biggest city square in the world. Every morning, people gather there to watch the flag-raising ceremony. The centre of the city is the Palace Museum. It is one of the five greatest palaces in the world. Beihai Park is one of the oldest parks in China. It has a history of almost 1,000 years. It is also a good place to relax after work. There are so many attractive places in Beijing. I dream of visiting it some day. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时介绍景点特点，辅以一般过去时叙述游览经历； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖天安门广场、故宫博物院、北海公园的核心信息，可适当补充感受，注意不要遗漏要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步：承接开头，介绍天安门广场的地位及升旗仪式； 第二步：介绍位于市中心的故宫博物院，说明其世界五大宫殿之一的地位； 第三步：介绍北海公园的历史及休闲功能； 第四步：总结北京的吸引力，表达对实地游览的向往。 【亮点词汇】 ①take an online tour进行线上游览 ②the flag-raising ceremony升旗仪式 ③one of the oldest parks最古老的公园之一 ④dream of梦想 【高分句型】 ①Tian’anmen Square is the biggest city square in the world. (形容词最高级作表语，突出广场的地位) ②It is also a good place to relax after work. (动词不定式作后置定语，修饰place) 【实践演练】5 你的朋友希望通过网络探索世界各地景点，向你咨询在线旅行经历。请你以“The Online Exploration I Recommend”为题，写一篇短文分享你的网络探索体验及使用的平台。 参考信息：1. 网络探索平台的基本信息(名称、覆盖景点范围、信息获取渠道)； 2. 核心特色(信息整合功能、跨文化对比工具、用户互动设计)； 3. 探索体验(信息搜索方法、跨文化发现、知识获取效率)。 要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称； 3. 重点使用一般现在时描述线上功能特征。 The Online Exploration I Recommend _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Online Exploration I Recommend I would like to recommend “Global Heritage Explorer”, an amazing online platform where you can visit world attractions and learn about different cultures. It provides virtual tours of over 500 landmarks in 50 countries. You can look up information, compare different architectural styles and read historical articles. I used its “Cultural Comparison Tool” to study similarities between Chinese and European palaces. Its easy-to-use design and rich content help broaden your horizons without leaving home. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：话题作文(推荐类短文)； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：需介绍平台基本信息、核心特色和个人探索体验，重点描述功能特征。 【写作步骤】 第一步：推荐具体平台并说明其覆盖范围和信息渠道； 第二步：用1-2句介绍核心特色； 第三步：简述个人体验。 【亮点词汇】 ①recommend推荐 ②architectural建筑学的 ③broaden one’s horizons开阔某人的眼界 【高分句型】 ①I would like to recommend “Global Heritage Explorer”, an amazing online platform where you can visit world attractions and learn about different cultures. (运用了where引导的定语从句) ②I used its “Cultural Comparison Tool” to study similarities between Chinese and European palaces. (运用了use ... to do ...结构) 【实践演练】6 网络旅游逐渐变得流行，有人认为它更安全便捷，也有人认为它无法替代真实旅行。你班本周即将开展主题为“Are online tours better than real tours?”的辩论赛,请你选择一方观点(网络旅游更好/真实旅行更好)，根据下面的要点和写作要求，结合自身经历用英文写一篇短文。 online tours are better real tours are better It saves money and time. We can use all five senses during real tours. It is safer. It helps us make friends. 写作要求：1. 文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 In my view, there’s no doubt that real tours are far superior to online tours. During real tours, we can immerse ourselves in the surroundings using all five senses. Once I went to the countryside. I could see the lush green fields, hear the chirping of birds, smell the fragrance of wildflowers, touch the rough bark of trees, and even taste the fresh fruits picked from the orchard. This kind of full-sensory experience is impossible with online tours. Also, real tours help us make friends. On a group tour to a museum, I met people with similar interests. We exchanged ideas and became friends. So, real tours offer unforgettable memories and rich experiences that online tours can’t replace. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥。 【写作步骤】 第一步：表明写作意图，直接阐述自己支持的观点； 第二步：具体阐述写作内容，依照提示信息的要点，分别说明真实旅行能让人运用五感体验以及有助于交友这两个优势，并结合自身经历进行说明； 第三步：书写结语，总结真实旅行能带来难忘回忆和丰富体验，强调其不可替代性。 【亮点词汇】 ①in my view在我看来 ②immerse oneself in沉浸在……中 ③unforgettable memories难忘的回忆 【高分句型】 ①In my view, there’s no doubt that real tours are far superior to online tours. (运用了there’s no doubt that...句型) ②So, real tours offer unforgettable memories and rich experiences that online tours can’t replace. (运用了that定语从句) 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 The world at one click 写作篇(线上旅游) 【话题解读】 本单元的书面表达任务要求学生围绕“线上游览一处旅游景点”展开，通过搜集相关信息，撰写一篇以个人体验为主线的短文。该文体属于“经历类记叙文”，是中考常见的拓展写作类型之一，常以“一次特别的旅游经历”“网上旅游的乐趣”“推荐一种新的旅游方式”或“谈谈对线上旅游和实地旅游的看法”等形式呈现。 本单元写作主题聚焦于“线上”这一新型旅游方式，突出其与实地游览的不同之处。学生需借助旅游官网、虚拟展厅、科普视频等网络平台，获取关于景点的历史文化、景观特色及游览攻略等信息，并以第一人称视角记录探索过程，分享所见所感。其核心在于引导学生将客观信息与主观体验相结合，实现“信息转化”与“体验呈现”的统一，既展现线上探索的便捷与趣味，也表达对景点的理解与评价。 本单元写作任务不仅考查学生对景点相关信息的梳理与整合能力，还注重语言表达的连贯性和真实感，契合本单元“网络应用”的核心话题。同时，有助于提升学生信息整合与书面输出的综合能力，重点考查其事件描述能力、时态运用水平以及与话题相关的词汇掌握等情况。 【审题要领】 首先，明确写作视角为第一人称，全文围绕自身线上探索体验展开，不可偏离“线上”核心，避免写成实地旅游记叙文；其次，需紧扣“景点信息”这一核心依据，文章内容需基于线上搜集的信息，不可凭空虚构景点细节；最后，结构上需包含探索的起因、过程(信息获取的途径、搜集到的核心内容)、结果(个人感受、收获)，确保逻辑完整，同时注意时态统一，以一般过去时记录探索过程，一般现在时描述景点客观特征。 本单元写作核心话题是介绍一次网上旅游经历，可涵盖网上游览博物馆、景点、主题公园等场景，阐述网上旅游的目的地、出发缘由、所见所感及独特优势，展现数字化旅游的魅力。具体要求为：需准确运用一般过去时描述网上旅游的过程与经历，一般现在时介绍目的地基本信息；文章条理清晰，至少从旅游缘由(包括时间及对象)、网上所见所感、收获和感受等几个维度展开；语言通顺，恰当使用连接词与固定搭配，逻辑连贯；写作字数须符合题目所规定的要求。 【写作框架】 三段式：开头(总述)——主体(分述)——结尾(总结) 1. 总述：点明线上旅游的时间的对象及起因，引出话题 Last weekend, I decided to explore the Palace Museum online because I have always been interested in Chinese ancient history and couldn’t visit it in person for the time being.上周末，我决定线上探索故宫，因为我一直对中国古代历史很感兴趣，且暂时无法亲自前往游览。 Last weekend, I decided to explore the Great Wall online because I love Chinese history and could not visit it myself.上周末，我决定线上探索长城，因为我热爱中国历史，而且无法亲自前往。 Yesterday, I decided to explore the Terracotta Army online because I am very interested in ancient Chinese culture.昨天，我决定线上探索兵马俑，因为我对中国古代文化非常感兴趣。 Last week, I took an online tour of West Lake because I heard it was a beautiful place in China. 上周，我线上游览了西湖，因为我听说它是中国一个美丽的地方。 2. 分述：描述线上探索途径、景点核心信息(历史、景观、特色等)及感受 第一层(探索途径) I visited the official website of the Palace Museum and watched some 3D virtual tour videos, which allowed me to “walk around” the museum freely.我访问了故宫的官方网站，还观看了一些3D虚拟游览视频，这让我能够自由地“漫步”在博物馆中。 I visited the official website and watched some virtual tour videos, which allowed me to “walk” along the wall easily.我访问了官方网站，观看了一些虚拟游览视频，这让我可以轻松地“行走”在长城上。 I used the online virtual tour and watched many short videos to see the special sights. 我使用了线上虚拟游览，观看了许多短视频来欣赏特别的景观。 I searched for information online and watched many videos to enjoy its beautiful views. 我在网上搜索信息，观看了许多视频来欣赏它美丽的景色。 第二层(景点信息与感受) I learned that the Palace Museum was built in the Ming Dynasty and has a history of over 600 years. It has many precious cultural relics, such as the Emperor’s Dragon Throne. I was deeply shocked by its magnificent architecture.我了解到故宫始建于明朝，已有 600 多年的历史，藏有许多珍贵文物，比如皇帝的龙椅。我被它宏伟的建筑深深震撼了。 I learned that the Great Wall has a history of over 2,000 years. It is very long and great, and I felt proud and excited.我了解到长城有 2000 多年的历史。它雄伟又绵长，我感到自豪又兴奋。 I learned that there are thousands of clay soldiers. They look amazing and I was deeply shocked by them. 我了解到这里有成千上万的陶俑士兵。它们看起来十分震撼，我被深深打动。 I learned that West Lake is famous for its clean water and nice hills. I felt relaxed and happy during the tour. 我了解到西湖以清澈的湖水和美丽的群山闻名。游览期间我感到放松又开心。 3. 总结：总结收获，表达感受 This online exploration was a wonderful experience. It not only let me know more about the Palace Museum but also made me eager to visit it in person one day.这次线上探索是一次美妙的经历，它不仅让我更多地了解了故宫，还让我渴望有一天能亲自去游览。 This online exploration was a wonderful experience. It not only helped me learn more but also made me hope to visit it in person one day.这次线上探索是一次美妙的经历。它不仅让我学到更多，也让我希望有一天能亲自游览。 It was a meaningful experience. I learned a lot and I really want to see them with my own eyes some day. 这是一次有意义的经历。我学到了很多，也真希望有一天能亲眼看见它们。 This online tour was great. It let me enjoy natural beauty and I hope to visit it myself in the future. 这次线上游览很棒。它让我欣赏到自然之美，我希望将来能亲自游览。 【必备词句】 与“线上旅游”主题相关的常用词汇 1. 线上探索相关词汇 online exploration线上探索 virtual tour/visit/platform虚拟游览/参观/平台 online tour线上旅游 digital travel数字化旅游 official website官方网站 internet/online platform网络/网上平台 online resource线上资源 video tour/clip视频导览/片段 digital exhibition数字展览 online tour guide在线导游 2. 动作与过程相关词汇 decide to do决定做 plan to do计划做 start with从……开始 explore online网上探索 click on点击 link and explore链接探索 search for information搜集信息 learn about了解 find out查明 collect收集 organize整理 read introductions阅读介绍 download下载 record 记录 share分享 enjoy享受 zoom in放大 see fantastic works of art欣赏精彩艺术品 feel like being there感觉身临其境 free from crowds不受人群干扰 get a vivid of ...真切体验…… lack face-to-face interaction缺乏面对面互动 3. 感受与评价相关词汇 amazing令人惊叹的 attractive有吸引力的 beautiful美丽的 charming迷人的 comfortable舒适的 colorful丰富多彩的 fantastic奇妙的 grateful感激的 impressive令人印象深刻的 interested感兴趣的 interesting有趣的 enjoyable令人愉快的 lovely可爱的，美好的 magnificent宏伟的 meaningful有意义的 relaxed放松的 shocked震惊的 special特别的 surprised惊讶的 unique独特的 unforgettable难忘的 valuable有价值的 wonderful美妙的；极好的worthy值得的 与“线上旅游”主题相关的常用句 一、开头引出话题 1. I learnt about the Louvre Museum in my Art lesson. I got very interested and decided to explore it online. 我在美术课上了解到卢浮宫，我非常感兴趣，于是决定线上探索它。 2. I would like to recommend “Global Heritage Explorer”, an amazing online platform where you can visit world attractions and learn about different cultures.我想推荐 “全球遗产探索者”，一个很棒的线上平台，你可以参观世界景点、了解不同文化。 3. Today I took an online tour of Beijing on the website “Around China in Eight Hours”. 今天我在 “八小时环游中国” 网站上线上游览了北京。 4. I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. I became very interested in ancient civilizations, so I decided to explore it online through its official website.我在历史课上了解到大英博物馆，我对古代文明很感兴趣，所以决定通过官网线上参观。 5. Recently, a survey about students’ favourite travel ways was carried out in Class 1, Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School.最近阳光中学八年级一班开展了一项关于学生最喜欢的旅行方式的调查。 6. Last week, I took a virtual tour of Yellowstone National Park through a website. 上周我通过一个网站线上虚拟游览了黄石国家公园。 7. Last Saturday, I decided to explore the Great Wall online because my parents told me it’s a symbol of China. 上周六，我决定线上探索长城，因为父母告诉我它是中国的象征。 8. With the help of the Internet, I had an online exploration of West Lake yesterday. 在网络的帮助下，我昨天线上探索了西湖。 9. I have always wanted to visit the Terracotta Army, so I chose to explore it online first. 我一直想去兵马俑，所以我选择先线上探索它。 10. To know more about the Palace Museum, I searched for a lot of information online and had a virtual tour. 为了更多地了解故宫，我线上搜集了很多信息并进行了虚拟游览。 二、探索过程描述 1. I toured all four floors and saw so many fantastic works of art. I could zoom in on the artwork to see every detail.我参观了所有四层展厅，看到了许多精彩的艺术品。我可以放大作品看清每个细节。 2. You can look up information, compare different architectural styles and read historical articles. 你可以查阅信息、对比不同建筑风格、阅读历史文章。 3. Through the virtual tour, I saw amazing exhibits like the Rosetta Stone and Egyptian Mummies. I could zoom in to see details clearly and read interesting descriptions.通过虚拟游览，我看到了罗塞塔石碑、埃及木乃伊等精彩展品，能放大看清细节并阅读有趣的介绍。 4. The website provided interactive maps and 360-degree videos, making the experience feel almost real. 该网站提供互动地图和 360 度视频，让体验非常逼真。 5. I also saw other amazing geysers, beautiful lakes, and even some deer walking in the forests. 我还看到了其他壮观的间歇泉、美丽的湖泊，甚至森林里散步的小鹿。 6. Students can “go” anywhere in the world through computers or phones. 学生可以通过电脑或手机“去”世界上任何地方。 7. I visited the official website of the Terracotta Army and watched some virtual tour videos. 我访问了兵马俑的官网，还观看了一些虚拟游览视频。 8. By clicking on the links on the page, I could “walk around” the Palace Museum freely. 通过点击页面上的链接，我可以自由地“漫步”在故宫中。 9. I browsed a lot of online resources and learned that West Lake has ten famous scenic spots. 我浏览了很多线上资源，了解到西湖有十大名胜。 10. I spent three hours exploring West Lake online, and every part of it attracted me. 我花了三个小时线上探索西湖，它的每一部分都吸引着我。 三、信息介绍 1. The Louvre lies in the heart of Paris, France. It used to be the home of French kings and queens and became a museum in 1793. It is well known for its rich collection of classical paintings and sculptures.卢浮宫位于法国巴黎市中心，曾是法国国王和王后的宫殿，1793 年成为博物馆，以丰富的古典绘画和雕塑藏品闻名。 2. It provides virtual tours of over 500 landmarks in 50 countries.它提供 50 个国家 500 多处地标的虚拟游览。 3. Tian’anmen Square is the biggest city square in the world. The Palace Museum is one of the five greatest palaces in the world. Beihai Park has a history of almost 1,000 years.天安门广场是世界上最大的城市广场。故宫是世界五大宫殿之一。北海公园有近千年历史。 4. Located in London, it’s famous for its collection of historical artifacts.它位于伦敦，以历史文物藏品闻名。 5. Yellowstone is America’s first national park.黄石是美国第一个国家公园。 6. In the past, offline travel was the main way. Now, online travel has become more popular. 过去线下旅行是主要方式，现在线上旅行更受欢迎。 7. West Lake is located in Hangzhou and is famous for its beautiful scenery. 西湖位于杭州，以其美丽的景色而闻名。 8. The Terracotta Army is one of the most famous historical sites in China.兵马俑是中国最著名的历史遗址之一。 9. The Great Wall has a long history and rich cultural connotations. It is a symbol of China. 长城历史悠久，文化内涵丰富，是中国的象征。 10. The architecture of the Palace Museum is very magnificent and unique.故宫的建筑非常宏伟独特。 四、感受与评价 1. There are also interesting introductions to the artworks so it is easy to learn more about them. 还有有趣的艺术品介绍，很容易了解更多相关知识。 2. Online travel is a great way to visit museums. The video tours and photos were excellent. 线上旅行是参观博物馆的好方式，视频导览和照片都很棒。 3. Its easy-to-use design and rich content help broaden your horizons without leaving home. 它操作简单、内容丰富，足不出户就能开阔眼界。 4. The experience was both educational and amazing. It felt almost like being there in person, and best of all, it was convenient!这次经历既有教育意义又很精彩，感觉身临其境，最棒的是非常方便。 5. I was amazed by the park’s unique landscapes. The most impressive sight was Old Faithful. 我被公园独特的景观震撼，最令人印象深刻的是老忠实泉。 6. I felt excited and surprised at the beauty of nature.我对大自然的美感到兴奋和惊叹。 7. Real tours offer unforgettable memories and rich experiences that online tours can't replace. 实地旅行能带来线上旅行无法替代的难忘回忆和丰富体验。 8. I was deeply shocked by the beauty of West Lake.我被西湖的美景深深震撼了。 9. The online exploration of the Terracotta Army was an unforgettable experience for me. 线上探索兵马俑对我来说是一次难忘的经历。 10. I felt very excited when I “visited” every corner of the Great Wall online. 当我线上“游览”长城的每个角落时，我感到非常兴奋。 五、结尾总结 1. I really had an amazing experience.我真的拥有了一次很棒的体验。 2. There are so many attractive places in Beijing. I dream of visiting it some day. 北京有很多迷人的地方，我梦想有一天能亲自去。 3. Both ways have their own advantages, and it seems students today enjoy the freedom to choose between them. 两种方式各有优势，现在的学生可以自由选择。 4. The 360-degree virtual experience made me feel like I was really there. I hope to visit it in person one day to feel its real beauty.360 度虚拟体验让我身临其境，我希望有一天能亲自感受它的美。 5. So, real tours offer unforgettable memories and rich experiences that online tours can't replace. 因此，实地旅行能带来线上旅行无法替代的难忘回忆和丰富体验。 6. I am looking forward to visiting the Terracotta Army in person one day.我期待有一天能亲自去游览兵马俑。 7. In short, the online exploration of West Lake brought me a lot of fun and knowledge. 总之，线上探索西湖给我带来了很多乐趣和知识。 8. Through this online exploration, I have a better understanding of the Great Wall. 通过这次线上探索，我对长城有了更深入的了解。 9. I will share my experience of exploring the Terracotta Army online with my classmates. 我会和同学们分享我线上探索兵马俑的经历。 10. I hope I can have more online explorations of different tourist attractions in the future. 我希望未来能有更多不同旅游景点的线上探索经历。 【写作通识】 一、认真审题，采集要点 审主题：书面表达体裁、题材不同，写法就有所不同。要通过仔细观察，认真审题，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行创作，以满足题目所规定的所有要求；审内容：审查题干，围绕主题，采集要点，务必做到要点全面。避免丢三落四要点不全的现象的发生，还要防止画蛇添足、节外生枝现象的发生。 二、理顺要点，挖掘要点 动笔写作前，先考虑文章的逻辑性，弄清先写什么，后写什么。若题干给出的提示层次清楚，可按提示的顺序进行表达；倘若提示层次凌乱，就要对题目所表达的要点顺序做适当的调整。书面表达不同于逐句翻译，如果只是对提示进行一一对应的翻译，而不考虑文章前后的连贯性，即使没有语法或拼写等错误，支离破碎的文章依然得不到高分。所以为了使表达得以连贯，有时(尤其是在做开放程度较大的书面表达题时)还需要挖掘要点去增加一些合理的细节。当然所加的内容一定要精略得当，否则会弄巧成拙； 三、合并要点，灵活表达 在“一刻千金”的考场上考生要想准确表达出所有内容，并非易事。首先考生要将关联的要点加上恰当的连词，放在一起进行表达，以体现上下文的逻辑性；其次，考生往往会遇到难以表述的内容，或一时想不起确切的习惯用语或句型来进行表达。面对这种情况有些考生不去认真考虑，进行变通表达，而是空着不写或是胡编乱造甚至用汉语拼音代替，其结果必然是答非所需、词不达意、甚至汉语式英语满天飞。正确的做法是要从另一个角度运用自己学过的熟悉的知识去灵活表达，达到异曲同工的效果。 四、逻辑清晰，过渡自然 一篇优秀的书面表达，逻辑是完整清晰的，并且句子与句子，段与段之间的衔接也是自然而然的。为达到这一效果，我们要注意连词和过渡句的运用。 我们将上述四个步骤简化为：采集要点、挖掘要点、表达要点和连贯表达(前两个步骤建议考生打腹稿，第三个步骤打草稿，第四个步骤规范书写到答题卡上)。 【以例佐证】 如今，我们可以通过网络进行线上旅游，探索世界各地的景点。请你以“My Online Travel Experience” 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一次你的线上旅游经历。 内容包括：1. 你是如何知道并决定线上游览故宫博物院(the Palace Museum)的； 2. 故宫博物院地理位置和特色：位于北京，曾是明清两代的皇宫(imperial palace)。 如今它是中国最著名的博物馆之一，以收藏大量珍贵文物而闻名。 3. 你线上游览的经过和感受； 4. 你对线上旅行方式的看法。 参考词汇：the Hall of Supreme Harmony太和殿 the Palace of Heavenly Purity乾清宫 porcelain瓷器 jade carvings玉雕 注意：1. 100词左右； 2. 不要逐条翻译提示内容。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【总体分析】 体裁与题材：本文是记叙文(兼顾说明)，主题为介绍一次线上旅游经历，属于“个人生活体验+景点介绍”类话题。 主体时态：以一般过去时描述线上游览起因、经过和感受；主要以一般现在时(有时会用到一般过去时) 介绍故宫地理位置、历史地位和特色。 温馨提示：整合各个核心要点(特别要关注参考词汇)，严禁逐条翻译，用恰当连接词串联；结尾适当抒发感受、升华主题。 【采集要点】 1. 核心起因： 2. 景点概况： 3. 游览经过： 4. 感受与评价： 【挖掘要点】 1. 补充衔接细节：用连接词串联内容，避免句式生硬。 2. 补充描述细节： 3. 补充情感细节： 4. 补充表达细节：将“线上游览”“放大看细节”等转化为地道英文 take an online tour、zoom in to see…，避免中式英语。 【表达要点】 1. 开篇点题：得知故宫+决定线上游览 ① ② ③ 2. 介绍故宫地理位置 ① ② ③ 3. 介绍故宫核心特色 ① ② ③ 4. 描写线上游览经过(含全部参考词汇) ① ② ③ 5. 表达游览感受 ① ② ③ 6. 表达对线上旅行的看法 ① ② ③ 【连贯表达（兼答案）】 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 The world at one click 写作篇(线上旅游) 【话题解读】 本单元的书面表达任务要求学生围绕“线上游览一处旅游景点”展开，通过搜集相关信息，撰写一篇以个人体验为主线的短文。该文体属于“经历类记叙文”，是中考常见的拓展写作类型之一，常以“一次特别的旅游经历”“网上旅游的乐趣”“推荐一种新的旅游方式”或“谈谈对线上旅游和实地旅游的看法”等形式呈现。 本单元写作主题聚焦于“线上”这一新型旅游方式，突出其与实地游览的不同之处。学生需借助旅游官网、虚拟展厅、科普视频等网络平台，获取关于景点的历史文化、景观特色及游览攻略等信息，并以第一人称视角记录探索过程，分享所见所感。其核心在于引导学生将客观信息与主观体验相结合，实现“信息转化”与“体验呈现”的统一，既展现线上探索的便捷与趣味，也表达对景点的理解与评价。 本单元写作任务不仅考查学生对景点相关信息的梳理与整合能力，还注重语言表达的连贯性和真实感，契合本单元“网络应用”的核心话题。同时，有助于提升学生信息整合与书面输出的综合能力，重点考查其事件描述能力、时态运用水平以及与话题相关的词汇掌握等情况。 【审题要领】 首先，明确写作视角为第一人称，全文围绕自身线上探索体验展开，不可偏离“线上”核心，避免写成实地旅游记叙文；其次，需紧扣“景点信息”这一核心依据，文章内容需基于线上搜集的信息，不可凭空虚构景点细节；最后，结构上需包含探索的起因、过程(信息获取的途径、搜集到的核心内容)、结果(个人感受、收获)，确保逻辑完整，同时注意时态统一，以一般过去时记录探索过程，一般现在时描述景点客观特征。 本单元写作核心话题是介绍一次网上旅游经历，可涵盖网上游览博物馆、景点、主题公园等场景，阐述网上旅游的目的地、出发缘由、所见所感及独特优势，展现数字化旅游的魅力。具体要求为：需准确运用一般过去时描述网上旅游的过程与经历，一般现在时介绍目的地基本信息；文章条理清晰，至少从旅游缘由(包括时间及对象)、网上所见所感、收获和感受等几个维度展开；语言通顺，恰当使用连接词与固定搭配，逻辑连贯；写作字数须符合题目所规定的要求。 【写作框架】 三段式：开头(总述)——主体(分述)——结尾(总结) 1. 总述：点明线上旅游的时间的对象及起因，引出话题 Last weekend, I decided to explore the Palace Museum online because I have always been interested in Chinese ancient history and couldn’t visit it in person for the time being.上周末，我决定线上探索故宫，因为我一直对中国古代历史很感兴趣，且暂时无法亲自前往游览。 Last weekend, I decided to explore the Great Wall online because I love Chinese history and could not visit it myself.上周末，我决定线上探索长城，因为我热爱中国历史，而且无法亲自前往。 Yesterday, I decided to explore the Terracotta Army online because I am very interested in ancient Chinese culture.昨天，我决定线上探索兵马俑，因为我对中国古代文化非常感兴趣。 Last week, I took an online tour of West Lake because I heard it was a beautiful place in China. 上周，我线上游览了西湖，因为我听说它是中国一个美丽的地方。 2. 分述：描述线上探索途径、景点核心信息(历史、景观、特色等)及感受 第一层(探索途径) I visited the official website of the Palace Museum and watched some 3D virtual tour videos, which allowed me to “walk around” the museum freely.我访问了故宫的官方网站，还观看了一些3D虚拟游览视频，这让我能够自由地“漫步”在博物馆中。 I visited the official website and watched some virtual tour videos, which allowed me to “walk” along the wall easily.我访问了官方网站，观看了一些虚拟游览视频，这让我可以轻松地“行走”在长城上。 I used the online virtual tour and watched many short videos to see the special sights. 我使用了线上虚拟游览，观看了许多短视频来欣赏特别的景观。 I searched for information online and watched many videos to enjoy its beautiful views. 我在网上搜索信息，观看了许多视频来欣赏它美丽的景色。 第二层(景点信息与感受) I learned that the Palace Museum was built in the Ming Dynasty and has a history of over 600 years. It has many precious cultural relics, such as the Emperor’s Dragon Throne. I was deeply shocked by its magnificent architecture.我了解到故宫始建于明朝，已有 600 多年的历史，藏有许多珍贵文物，比如皇帝的龙椅。我被它宏伟的建筑深深震撼了。 I learned that the Great Wall has a history of over 2,000 years. It is very long and great, and I felt proud and excited.我了解到长城有 2000 多年的历史。它雄伟又绵长，我感到自豪又兴奋。 I learned that there are thousands of clay soldiers. They look amazing and I was deeply shocked by them. 我了解到这里有成千上万的陶俑士兵。它们看起来十分震撼，我被深深打动。 I learned that West Lake is famous for its clean water and nice hills. I felt relaxed and happy during the tour. 我了解到西湖以清澈的湖水和美丽的群山闻名。游览期间我感到放松又开心。 3. 总结：总结收获，表达感受 This online exploration was a wonderful experience. It not only let me know more about the Palace Museum but also made me eager to visit it in person one day.这次线上探索是一次美妙的经历，它不仅让我更多地了解了故宫，还让我渴望有一天能亲自去游览。 This online exploration was a wonderful experience. It not only helped me learn more but also made me hope to visit it in person one day.这次线上探索是一次美妙的经历。它不仅让我学到更多，也让我希望有一天能亲自游览。 It was a meaningful experience. I learned a lot and I really want to see them with my own eyes some day. 这是一次有意义的经历。我学到了很多，也真希望有一天能亲眼看见它们。 This online tour was great. It let me enjoy natural beauty and I hope to visit it myself in the future. 这次线上游览很棒。它让我欣赏到自然之美，我希望将来能亲自游览。 【必备词句】 与“线上旅游”主题相关的常用词汇 1. 线上探索相关词汇 online exploration线上探索 virtual tour/visit/platform虚拟游览/参观/平台 online tour线上旅游 digital travel数字化旅游 official website官方网站 internet/online platform网络/网上平台 online resource线上资源 video tour/clip视频导览/片段 digital exhibition数字展览 online tour guide在线导游 2. 动作与过程相关词汇 decide to do决定做 plan to do计划做 start with从……开始 explore online网上探索 click on点击 link and explore链接探索 search for information搜集信息 learn about了解 find out查明 collect收集 organize整理 read introductions阅读介绍 download下载 record 记录 share分享 enjoy享受 zoom in放大 see fantastic works of art欣赏精彩艺术品 feel like being there感觉身临其境 free from crowds不受人群干扰 get a vivid of ...真切体验…… lack face-to-face interaction缺乏面对面互动 3. 感受与评价相关词汇 amazing令人惊叹的 attractive有吸引力的 beautiful美丽的 charming迷人的 comfortable舒适的 colorful丰富多彩的 fantastic奇妙的 grateful感激的 impressive令人印象深刻的 interested感兴趣的 interesting有趣的 enjoyable令人愉快的 lovely可爱的，美好的 magnificent宏伟的 meaningful有意义的 relaxed放松的 shocked震惊的 special特别的 surprised惊讶的 unique独特的 unforgettable难忘的 valuable有价值的 wonderful美妙的；极好的worthy值得的 与“线上旅游”主题相关的常用句 一、开头引出话题 1. I learnt about the Louvre Museum in my Art lesson. I got very interested and decided to explore it online. 我在美术课上了解到卢浮宫，我非常感兴趣，于是决定线上探索它。 2. I would like to recommend “Global Heritage Explorer”, an amazing online platform where you can visit world attractions and learn about different cultures.我想推荐 “全球遗产探索者”，一个很棒的线上平台，你可以参观世界景点、了解不同文化。 3. Today I took an online tour of Beijing on the website “Around China in Eight Hours”. 今天我在 “八小时环游中国” 网站上线上游览了北京。 4. I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. I became very interested in ancient civilizations, so I decided to explore it online through its official website.我在历史课上了解到大英博物馆，我对古代文明很感兴趣，所以决定通过官网线上参观。 5. Recently, a survey about students’ favourite travel ways was carried out in Class 1, Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School.最近阳光中学八年级一班开展了一项关于学生最喜欢的旅行方式的调查。 6. Last week, I took a virtual tour of Yellowstone National Park through a website. 上周我通过一个网站线上虚拟游览了黄石国家公园。 7. Last Saturday, I decided to explore the Great Wall online because my parents told me it’s a symbol of China. 上周六，我决定线上探索长城，因为父母告诉我它是中国的象征。 8. With the help of the Internet, I had an online exploration of West Lake yesterday. 在网络的帮助下，我昨天线上探索了西湖。 9. I have always wanted to visit the Terracotta Army, so I chose to explore it online first. 我一直想去兵马俑，所以我选择先线上探索它。 10. To know more about the Palace Museum, I searched for a lot of information online and had a virtual tour. 为了更多地了解故宫，我线上搜集了很多信息并进行了虚拟游览。 二、探索过程描述 1. I toured all four floors and saw so many fantastic works of art. I could zoom in on the artwork to see every detail.我参观了所有四层展厅，看到了许多精彩的艺术品。我可以放大作品看清每个细节。 2. You can look up information, compare different architectural styles and read historical articles. 你可以查阅信息、对比不同建筑风格、阅读历史文章。 3. Through the virtual tour, I saw amazing exhibits like the Rosetta Stone and Egyptian Mummies. I could zoom in to see details clearly and read interesting descriptions.通过虚拟游览，我看到了罗塞塔石碑、埃及木乃伊等精彩展品，能放大看清细节并阅读有趣的介绍。 4. The website provided interactive maps and 360-degree videos, making the experience feel almost real. 该网站提供互动地图和 360 度视频，让体验非常逼真。 5. I also saw other amazing geysers, beautiful lakes, and even some deer walking in the forests. 我还看到了其他壮观的间歇泉、美丽的湖泊，甚至森林里散步的小鹿。 6. Students can “go” anywhere in the world through computers or phones. 学生可以通过电脑或手机“去”世界上任何地方。 7. I visited the official website of the Terracotta Army and watched some virtual tour videos. 我访问了兵马俑的官网，还观看了一些虚拟游览视频。 8. By clicking on the links on the page, I could “walk around” the Palace Museum freely. 通过点击页面上的链接，我可以自由地“漫步”在故宫中。 9. I browsed a lot of online resources and learned that West Lake has ten famous scenic spots. 我浏览了很多线上资源，了解到西湖有十大名胜。 10. I spent three hours exploring West Lake online, and every part of it attracted me. 我花了三个小时线上探索西湖，它的每一部分都吸引着我。 三、信息介绍 1. The Louvre lies in the heart of Paris, France. It used to be the home of French kings and queens and became a museum in 1793. It is well known for its rich collection of classical paintings and sculptures.卢浮宫位于法国巴黎市中心，曾是法国国王和王后的宫殿，1793 年成为博物馆，以丰富的古典绘画和雕塑藏品闻名。 2. It provides virtual tours of over 500 landmarks in 50 countries.它提供 50 个国家 500 多处地标的虚拟游览。 3. Tian’anmen Square is the biggest city square in the world. The Palace Museum is one of the five greatest palaces in the world. Beihai Park has a history of almost 1,000 years.天安门广场是世界上最大的城市广场。故宫是世界五大宫殿之一。北海公园有近千年历史。 4. Located in London, it’s famous for its collection of historical artifacts.它位于伦敦，以历史文物藏品闻名。 5. Yellowstone is America’s first national park.黄石是美国第一个国家公园。 6. In the past, offline travel was the main way. Now, online travel has become more popular. 过去线下旅行是主要方式，现在线上旅行更受欢迎。 7. West Lake is located in Hangzhou and is famous for its beautiful scenery. 西湖位于杭州，以其美丽的景色而闻名。 8. The Terracotta Army is one of the most famous historical sites in China.兵马俑是中国最著名的历史遗址之一。 9. The Great Wall has a long history and rich cultural connotations. It is a symbol of China. 长城历史悠久，文化内涵丰富，是中国的象征。 10. The architecture of the Palace Museum is very magnificent and unique.故宫的建筑非常宏伟独特。 四、感受与评价 1. There are also interesting introductions to the artworks so it is easy to learn more about them. 还有有趣的艺术品介绍，很容易了解更多相关知识。 2. Online travel is a great way to visit museums. The video tours and photos were excellent. 线上旅行是参观博物馆的好方式，视频导览和照片都很棒。 3. Its easy-to-use design and rich content help broaden your horizons without leaving home. 它操作简单、内容丰富，足不出户就能开阔眼界。 4. The experience was both educational and amazing. It felt almost like being there in person, and best of all, it was convenient!这次经历既有教育意义又很精彩，感觉身临其境，最棒的是非常方便。 5. I was amazed by the park’s unique landscapes. The most impressive sight was Old Faithful. 我被公园独特的景观震撼，最令人印象深刻的是老忠实泉。 6. I felt excited and surprised at the beauty of nature.我对大自然的美感到兴奋和惊叹。 7. Real tours offer unforgettable memories and rich experiences that online tours can't replace. 实地旅行能带来线上旅行无法替代的难忘回忆和丰富体验。 8. I was deeply shocked by the beauty of West Lake.我被西湖的美景深深震撼了。 9. The online exploration of the Terracotta Army was an unforgettable experience for me. 线上探索兵马俑对我来说是一次难忘的经历。 10. I felt very excited when I “visited” every corner of the Great Wall online. 当我线上“游览”长城的每个角落时，我感到非常兴奋。 五、结尾总结 1. I really had an amazing experience.我真的拥有了一次很棒的体验。 2. There are so many attractive places in Beijing. I dream of visiting it some day. 北京有很多迷人的地方，我梦想有一天能亲自去。 3. Both ways have their own advantages, and it seems students today enjoy the freedom to choose between them. 两种方式各有优势，现在的学生可以自由选择。 4. The 360-degree virtual experience made me feel like I was really there. I hope to visit it in person one day to feel its real beauty.360 度虚拟体验让我身临其境，我希望有一天能亲自感受它的美。 5. So, real tours offer unforgettable memories and rich experiences that online tours can't replace. 因此，实地旅行能带来线上旅行无法替代的难忘回忆和丰富体验。 6. I am looking forward to visiting the Terracotta Army in person one day.我期待有一天能亲自去游览兵马俑。 7. In short, the online exploration of West Lake brought me a lot of fun and knowledge. 总之，线上探索西湖给我带来了很多乐趣和知识。 8. Through this online exploration, I have a better understanding of the Great Wall. 通过这次线上探索，我对长城有了更深入的了解。 9. I will share my experience of exploring the Terracotta Army online with my classmates. 我会和同学们分享我线上探索兵马俑的经历。 10. I hope I can have more online explorations of different tourist attractions in the future. 我希望未来能有更多不同旅游景点的线上探索经历。 【写作通识】 一、认真审题，采集要点 审主题：书面表达体裁、题材不同，写法就有所不同。要通过仔细观察，认真审题，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行创作，以满足题目所规定的所有要求；审内容：审查题干，围绕主题，采集要点，务必做到要点全面。避免丢三落四要点不全的现象的发生，还要防止画蛇添足、节外生枝现象的发生。 二、理顺要点，挖掘要点 动笔写作前，先考虑文章的逻辑性，弄清先写什么，后写什么。若题干给出的提示层次清楚，可按提示的顺序进行表达；倘若提示层次凌乱，就要对题目所表达的要点顺序做适当的调整。书面表达不同于逐句翻译，如果只是对提示进行一一对应的翻译，而不考虑文章前后的连贯性，即使没有语法或拼写等错误，支离破碎的文章依然得不到高分。所以为了使表达得以连贯，有时(尤其是在做开放程度较大的书面表达题时)还需要挖掘要点去增加一些合理的细节。当然所加的内容一定要精略得当，否则会弄巧成拙； 三、合并要点，灵活表达 在“一刻千金”的考场上考生要想准确表达出所有内容，并非易事。首先考生要将关联的要点加上恰当的连词，放在一起进行表达，以体现上下文的逻辑性；其次，考生往往会遇到难以表述的内容，或一时想不起确切的习惯用语或句型来进行表达。面对这种情况有些考生不去认真考虑，进行变通表达，而是空着不写或是胡编乱造甚至用汉语拼音代替，其结果必然是答非所需、词不达意、甚至汉语式英语满天飞。正确的做法是要从另一个角度运用自己学过的熟悉的知识去灵活表达，达到异曲同工的效果。 四、逻辑清晰，过渡自然 一篇优秀的书面表达，逻辑是完整清晰的，并且句子与句子，段与段之间的衔接也是自然而然的。为达到这一效果，我们要注意连词和过渡句的运用。 我们将上述四个步骤简化为：采集要点、挖掘要点、表达要点和连贯表达(前两个步骤建议考生打腹稿，第三个步骤打草稿，第四个步骤规范书写到答题卡上)。 【以例佐证】 如今，我们可以通过网络进行线上旅游，探索世界各地的景点。请你以“My Online Travel Experience” 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一次你的线上旅游经历。 内容包括：1. 你是如何知道并决定线上游览故宫博物院(the Palace Museum)的； 2. 故宫博物院地理位置和特色：位于北京，曾是明清两代的皇宫(imperial palace)。 如今它是中国最著名的博物馆之一，以收藏大量珍贵文物而闻名。 3. 你线上游览的经过和感受； 4. 你对线上旅行方式的看法。 参考词汇：the Hall of Supreme Harmony太和殿 the Palace of Heavenly Purity乾清宫 porcelain瓷器 jade carvings玉雕 注意：1. 100词左右； 2. 不要逐条翻译提示内容。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【总体分析】 体裁与题材：本文是记叙文(兼顾说明)，主题为介绍一次线上旅游经历，属于“个人生活体验+景点介绍”类话题。 主体时态：以一般过去时描述线上游览起因、经过和感受；主要以一般现在时(有时会用到一般过去时) 介绍故宫地理位置、历史地位和特色。 温馨提示：整合各个核心要点(特别要关注参考词汇)，严禁逐条翻译，用恰当连接词串联；结尾适当抒发感受、升华主题。 【采集要点】 1. 核心起因：从历史课堂了解故宫，被其历史文化吸引，决定线上游览。 (需要自己设计) 2. 景点概况：位于中国北京；曾是明清两代皇宫；中国最著名博物馆之一，以大量珍贵古代文物闻名。 3. 游览经过：线上参观太和殿、乾清宫；看到瓷器、玉雕、古画；通过使画面放大清晰查看艺术品精 美花纹。 (实际上仅仅考“采集”是不够的，结合参考词汇需要自己设计) 4. 感受与评价：游览令人兴奋、印象深刻；线上旅行免费、便捷、无人群；是足不出户欣赏美景、了解传统文化的好方式。(实际上仅仅考“采集”是不够的，还需要自己设计) 【挖掘要点】 1. 补充衔接细节：用连接词串联内容，避免句式生硬。 2. 补充描述细节：可简单描写文物精美、宫殿壮观，让内容更生动。 3. 补充情感细节：加入游览时的兴奋、难忘等感受，让文章更真实自然。 4. 补充表达细节：将“线上游览”“放大看细节”等转化为地道英文 take an online tour、zoom in to see…，避免中式英语。 【表达要点】 1. 开篇点题：得知故宫+决定线上游览 ①I learned about the Palace Museum from my history class. I was interested in its culture, so I decided to take an online tour. ②My history teacher introduced the Palace Museum to us. It sounded magnificent, so I made a decision to visit it online. ③I got to know the Palace Museum in history class. Attracted by its culture, I planned to have an online tour. 2. 介绍故宫地理位置 ①The Palace Museum is located in Beijing, China, a city with a long history. ②Located in Beijing, China, the Palace Museum is full of ancient charm. ③As a famous scenic spot, the Palace Museum lies in Beijing, China. 3. 介绍故宫核心特色 ①It used to be the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, and also one of China’s most famous museums, famous for precious ancient relics. ②The Palace Museum was once emperors’ home in the Ming and Qing dynasties. Besides, it is well-known for many ancient relics as a famous museum. ③It is both the Ming and Qing imperial palace and one of China’s famous museums, known for its ancient relics. 4. 描写线上游览经过(含全部参考词汇) ①During the online tour, I visited many halls, including the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the Palace of Heavenly Purity. I saw beautiful porcelain, jade carvings and ancient paintings, and could easily zoom in to see fine patterns on the screen. ②When I took the online tour, I explored halls such as the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the Palace of Heavenly Purity. I watched relics like porcelain and jade carvings, and I could zoom to see fine details on the screen. ③On the online platform, I visited halls, such as the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the Palace of Heavenly Purity. I saw porcelain, jade carvings and old paintings, and could zoom in to appreciate fine patterns on the screen. 5. 表达游览感受 ①This online tour was unforgettable. The Palace Museum’s beauty and culture made me excited. ②I felt excited and amazed throughout the tour. Every hall and relic showed Chinese culture, and I enjoyed this journey. ③I was shocked by the magnificent halls and precious relics. It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience. 6. 表达对线上旅行的看法 ①In my opinion, online travel is great. It is free, convenient and without crowds, helping us enjoy sights and culture at home. ②I believe online travel is beneficial. We don’t need to go out or worry about crowds, and it lets us explore places easily. ③From my point of view, online travel is wonderful. It allows us to appreciate beauty and feel culture at home conveniently and freely. 【连贯表达（兼答案）】 需要适当增加过渡词和细节，使上下文逻辑清晰、衔接自然。 My Online Travel Experience Last week, I learned about the Palace Museum from my history class. I was interested in its long history and rich culture, so I decided to take an online tour. The Palace Museum is in Beijing. It used to be the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties and is one of China’s most famous museums, famous for its ancient relics. During the online tour, I visited many halls, including the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the Palace of Heavenly Purity. I saw beautiful porcelain, jade carvings and ancient paintings. I could easily zoom in to see the fine patterns on the screen. I felt really excited. The tour was free, convenient and without crowds. I believe online travel is a wonderful way to enjoy beautiful places and learn about Chinese culture at home. 【该题来源】系整合网络之源而成，所以不提供【原题答案】和【原题详解】。 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 The world at one click 写作篇（线上旅游） 【实践演练】1 假如你校英语社团网站举办了以 “My Wonderful Online Tour” 为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文投稿，介绍你的武陵源线上之旅。 内容包括：1. 你是如何知道并决定线上游览武陵源的； 2. 武陵源的地理位置和特色：位于中国湖南省，它以数千根高大的砂岩柱(sandstone pillars)、清澈的湖泊和茂密的森林而闻名，人们称之为 “现实生活中的仙境(real-life fairyland)”； 3. 你线上游览的经过和感受； 4. 你对线上旅行方式的看法。 要求：1. 词数100左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 内容连贯，逻辑清晰，书写工整。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实践演练】2 假设你上周在线游览了美国黄石国家公园，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，描述这次在线旅行的经历。 写作要点：1. 在线旅行工具(如：网站，手机应用程序)； 2. 特色景观(如：间歇泉向空中喷水，湖泊，野生动物等)； 3. 黄石国家公园是美国的第一个国家公园； 4. 在线旅行的感受以及对未来实地游览的期待。 要求：1. 条理清晰，语句通顺； 2. 包含所有写作要点； 3. 词数90-120。 参考词汇：virtual 虚拟的 geyser 间歇泉 shoot water喷水 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实践演练】3 米莉曾在线参观过大英博物馆，请根据下内容，以米莉的口吻，为自己的参观经历写一篇文章。 Which place I visited The British Museum Why I visited it Be interested in history What I saw The Rosetta Stone(罗塞塔石碑) and Egyptian Mummies(埃及木乃伊) How I felt Amazing, convenient 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80左右。 My online tour of the British Museum I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. ___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实践演练】4 假如你在“八小时环游中国”的网站上浏览了中国的北京，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，可适当发挥，80词左右，开头已给出。 An Online Tour Today I took an online tour of Beijing on the website “Around China in Eight Hours”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实践演练】5 你的朋友希望通过网络探索世界各地景点，向你咨询在线旅行经历。请你以“The Online Exploration I Recommend”为题，写一篇短文分享你的网络探索体验及使用的平台。 参考信息：1. 网络探索平台的基本信息(名称、覆盖景点范围、信息获取渠道)； 2. 核心特色(信息整合功能、跨文化对比工具、用户互动设计)； 3. 探索体验(信息搜索方法、跨文化发现、知识获取效率)。 要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称； 3. 重点使用一般现在时描述线上功能特征。 The Online Exploration I Recommend _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实践演练】6 网络旅游逐渐变得流行，有人认为它更安全便捷，也有人认为它无法替代真实旅行。你班本周即将开展主题为“Are online tours better than real tours?”的辩论赛,请你选择一方观点(网络旅游更好/真实旅行更好)，根据下面的要点和写作要求，结合自身经历用英文写一篇短文。 online tours are better real tours are better It saves money and time. We can use all five senses during real tours. It is safer. It helps us make friends. 写作要求：1. 文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $