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2025-2026学年七年级英语下册单元话题作文思路点拨+经典演练
Unit 1 Animal Friends
写作思路
某英文杂志向中学生 征稿 (语篇类型:应用文),请同学们以“My Favourite Animal”为题,根据以下提示,介绍一下自己最喜欢的动物。人称:第三人称为主
(1) What animal (人称:第三人称为主) do you like best?
(2) Why do you (时态:一般现在时) like it?
(3) …
要求:
(1)词数60左右;
(2)短文意思连贯、符合逻辑;
(3) 所给提示词仅供选用。
提示词: cute, clever, helpful, friendly
My Favourite Animal
Step 1谋篇布局指导
开头:介绍自己最喜欢的动物
① Of/ Among all the animals , the … is my favourite animal.
② I like … best .
③ As for me , my favourite animal is …
正文:介绍喜欢这种动物的原因
①I like… best because… not only …, but also …
②They are so… that they can…
③And some… can help…, even…
④Their round faces make them look cute/ beautiful…
⑤I love their bright eyes…
结尾:总结全文
①In a word, I really like…
②… are really our good friends.
③Thatˈs why… are my favourite.
Step 2 高阶表达应用
(1)I like dogs best because they can help guard our houses and they are our good friends. (用“not only… but also…”升格)
(2)They are very clever and they can understand you when you talk to them. (用“so… that…”升格)
【答案】Step 1谋篇布局指导
My Favourite Animal
Of all the animals, the dog is my favourite animal.
I like dogs best because① they can not only help guard our houses, but also② be our good friends. They are so clever that③ they can understand you when you talk to them. And some dogs can help blind people in many ways , and even save their lives when they are in danger.
In a word④, dogs are my favourite animals, and they are our friends in my heart .
①because引导原因状语从句,贴合本单元所学新知,提升句子档次。
②“not only… but also…”用于连接两个并列成分, 可避免文章出现过多的简单句,使文章语言简洁流畅。
③“so… that…”结构的使用,凸显了文章高级句式的使用,增加了文章的亮点。
④In a word总结全文,使文章脉络清晰,结构完整。
本篇范文语言流畅、句式高级,多处使用状语从句,提高了文章的可读性。
Step 2 高阶表达应用
I like dogs best because they can not only help guard our houses, but also be our good friends.
They are so clever that they can understand you when you talk to them.
经典演练
1.熊猫花花荣升为成都文旅荣誉局长,吸引了大批游客到成都大熊猫繁育研究基地去参观。假如你是熊猫基地的一名导游,请你根据以下提示写一篇导游词向外国游客介绍一下花花。
要求:(1)内容须包括提示的所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等个人信息。
提示词:the honorary director of Chengdu Municipal Bureau of Culture, Broadcast-TV, and Tourism 成都文旅荣誉局长
Hello, everyone. Welcome to the Chengdu Research Base of Giant Panda Breeding. I'm your guide today.
【答案】范文
Hello, everyone. Welcome to the Chengdu Research Base of Giant Panda Breeding. I'm your guide today.
Here you can see a panda called Huahua. She is the honorary director of Chengdu Municipal Bureau of Culture, Broadcast-TV, and Tourism. She is 5 years old now. She's very young, but she can look after herself very well. She is very cute and friendly. She likes eating bamboo very much. Also, she sleeps a lot.
With the workers' help, a panda can live over 20 years! However, these days, tourists are always throwing food at them, which makes them sick. So, we should not give our food to them. It is not good for their health.
2. 假如你校英文报社正在举办征文大赛,主题为“Help Animals”。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文,参加此次征文活动。
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【答案】范文
Help Animals
Do you love animals? Animals give us countless joy and help. But do you know that many of them are in danger now? So itˈs necessary for us to help and save them.
Why are animals in danger? First, people cut down too many trees so animals lose their homes. Second, some people also kill animals for their meat, fur or ivory.
Animals are our friends. It is not right to kill animals or take away their homes. We should plant more trees and stop killing animals. Letˈs call on more people to save animals and make friends with them. If all of us try our best to protect animals, our home will become better and better.
3.假如你是李华,你在动物园里看到许多动物。请参考下面所给的提示内容写一篇英语短文,并在英语课上与同学们分享。
提示:
(1)你在动物园看到了哪些动物?
(2)你最喜欢什么动物?
(3)你为什么喜欢它们?
要求:
(1)语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确;
(2)包含所给提示,可适当发挥;
(3)不少于60词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi, my name is Li Hua. I see many animals in the zoo.
【答案】范文
Hi, my name is Li Hua. I see many animals in the zoo. They are penguins, tigers, monkeys, elephants, giraffes and so on.
Of all the animals, I like elephants best.They come from Thailand. They are very strong. They have large ears and long trunks. They can pick up and carry heavy things with their trunks. Elephants are one of the symbols of Thailand and they are an important part of Thai life and culture. They are friendly to people. So I like them best.
4.请结合下图内容及提示,以“The Animals in the Zoo”为题,根据写作要求,写一篇英文短文。
giant panda大熊猫; forest森林; camel骆驼; desert沙漠; kangaroo袋鼠; grassland草原; snake蛇; jungle丛林
Where are they from?
What do they like to eat?
要求:内容积极向上,不少于 60词;文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
The Animals in the Zoo
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【答案】范文
The Animals in the Zoo
There are many kinds of animals from all over the world in the zoo. First of all, we have giant pandas from China, Asia. They like eating bamboo and live in the forest. Besides, we also have camels from Africa, which used to live in the desert and eat grass and leaves. Kangaroos from Australia love eating grass too. They live in the grassland. Finally, there are some snakes from Europe, and they love
meat and live in the jungle. Animals are our friends and we should treat them well.
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