Unit 6 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一首英文诗歌-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版）

该高中英语课件围绕“自然主题英文诗歌写作”展开，通过分析范文排版与修辞（如树叶飘落的字母排版、水仙花拟人化描写）导入，从结构（引出主题、具体内容、升华主题）、语言（明喻、暗喻等修辞）到“四仿”步骤（结构布局、语言规范、句式高级、连句成篇）搭建学习支架，帮助学生掌握诗歌创作方法。 其亮点在于以“模仿写作”为核心，结合情境任务（如“赏雨”诗歌仿写），通过动词-ing/-ed形式改写、as从句运用等句式训练，提升学生语言能力（规范表达与高级句式运用）和思维品质（结构分析与情感升华）。提供精彩素材积累与学以致用任务，助力学生从模仿到创新，教师可直接使用系统教学流程与实例，提高教学效率。

Unit 6　Nature in words Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一首英文诗歌 模仿写作　学范文 原文呈现 名师圈点 学语言 第一首诗的排版既强化了它要传达的信息，又会加强读者的情感回应。有的诗行放了一个字母，有的诗行放了两个字母，以此表达一片树叶独自飘落的意向。 修辞手法上，三首诗中使用了明喻、暗喻和拟人等。如第二首诗歌中的Like a diamond in the sky使用了明喻的修辞手法；第三首诗作者以拟人的手法，为我们刻画了一个美丽、柔和的水仙花的形象，看似写水仙，其实已指向生活和生命，并给读者深刻的启示。 知结构 诗歌写作主要从三方面表达： 1．引出主题； 2．表达具体内容； 3．升华主题。 情境任务写作 结合你所学的诗歌知识，写一首80词左右的关于“赏雨”的英文诗歌。 注意：诗歌类型不限。 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①雨，愉快的，砰砰的，淋湿的雨， 我多么喜欢听你的歌！ Rain，glorious，pounding，soaking rain， ________________________________________________________________ ②在你的倾盆大雨中淹没我的世界， 我坐在这里，凝视着你在我窗台上疯狂的舞步， 迷失在你优美的动作中。 I ________________ in your torrential downpour， I sit here and stare at your frenzy dance moves upon my window panes. And I _______________________________． How I love to hear your song! drown my world am lost in your graceful movements ③当黎明在地平线上等待时，你在黑夜中翩翩起舞。 The dawn ___________________．You dance through the night. ④你挥舞着最后的舞步，太阳透过云层窥视着， “走开”，它嚷道， “因为现在是我用光明洗涤世界的时候了。” You walk your last moves and the sun peeks through the clouds， “Move on，” it cries， “For ___________________________________．” ⑤你的最后一滴水告别整个世界， “再见。” And your last drops _____________， “Goodbye.” awaits in the horizon it is my time to wash the world with light bid the world 3．三仿句式表达高级 ⑥用动词-ing形式和动词-ed形式改写句② ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ⑦请用as引导的时间状语从句改写句③ ________________________________________________________________ Drowning my world in your torrential downpour，I sit here and stare at your frenzy dance moves upon my window panes. Lost I am in your graceful movements. You dance through the night as the dawn awaits in the horizon. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 Watching the Rain Rain，glorious，pounding，soaking rain， How I love to hear your song! Drowning my world in your torrential downpour， I sit here and stare at your frenzy dance moves upon my window panes. Lost I am in your graceful movements. You dance through the night as the dawn awaits in the horizon. You walk your last moves and the sun peeks through the clouds， “Move on，” it cries， “For it is my time to wash the world with light.” And your last drops bid the world， “Goodbye.” 精彩素材积累 1．Living in a house towards the sea，with spring blossoms. 我有一座房子，面朝大海，春暖花开。 2．If winter comes，can spring be far behind? 冬天来了，春天还会远吗？ 3．Though the morning was cold，Tom was happy and warm； So，if all do their duty，they need not fear harm. 虽然早晨很冷，但汤姆很高兴，感到很温暖； 所以，如果所有人都尽了自己的责任，他们就不必害怕受到伤害。 4．Down by the Salley gardens my love and I did meet； she passed the Salley gardens with little snow-white feet. 在莎莉花园，吾爱与我曾相遇；她用雪白的小脚走过莎莉花园。 学以致用 写一首80词左右的关于自然的诗歌。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mother Nature Nature，the gentlest mother， Impatient of no child， The feeblest or the waywardest， Her admonition mild， In forest and the hill， By traveler is heard， Restraining rampant squirrel， Or too impetuous bird， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How fair her conversation， A summer afternoon， Her household，her assembly； And when the sun goes down， Her voice among the aisles， Incites the timid prayer， Of the minutest cricket， The most unworthy flower. When all the children sleep， She turns as long away， As will suffice to light her lamps； ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then，bending from the sky， With infinite affection， And infinite care， Her golden finger on her lip， Wills silence everywhere. $