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Unit 2 A life's work Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇说明文 模仿写作　学范文 原文呈现 What do the Summer Palace，Yuanmingyuan and the Chengde Mountain Resort all have in common? These Qing-dynasty architectural marvels, along with many others, were all built by members of the same family－the Lei family. For seven generations, the Lei family quietly dominated imperial architecture. Their designs were admirable, varying from grand buildings to public works，such as roads and dams. So incredible was their skill that many of their buildings survived earthquakes and remained standing over hundreds of years. The Lei family were also pioneering engineers，who used a grid system to plan their projects in minute detail. They took careful notes and made models of their projects, many of which have survived to this day and are registered as part of UNESCO's Memory of the World Programme. In addition to their architectural achievements, the Lei family showed diligence and humility.Each generation conscientiously learnt their craft and undertook ambitious projects，many of which took years to complete. Yet they did not seek fame, and even today, their great works are associated more with the imperial court than with them. With their remarkable skills, innovation，diligence and humility, the Lei family leave behind their buildings and the legacy that true craftwork is a treasure that can last beyond a lifetime. 名师圈点 学语言 用词上，第一段第一句使用have in common，通过对比引出本文的话题——雷氏家族。第五段使用高级词汇remarkable skills, innovation以及diligence和humility。 修辞上，第一段第一句使用设问的修辞手法，引出本文话题。 知结构 本文可以分为三部分：第一段为第一部分，借助一些清代的建筑奇迹引出它们的建造者——雷氏家族；第二、三、四段为第二部分，主要介绍了雷氏家族的建筑成就及其所表现出的优秀品质；第五段为第三部分，对全文进行了总结。 第二部分为文章的主体部分，作者分别使用also, in addition to将各个段落连接起来，使文章更加有条理。 情境任务写作 请根据下列的汉语提示，写一篇80词左右的说明文介绍“泥人张”。 1.“泥人张”制作的彩塑深受大家的欢迎。 2.张先生出生在一个贫困家庭，从小靠制作彩塑谋生。他很聪明、善于观察，且敢于打破常规去思考。他捏制出来的泥人个个非常生动。 3.经过数十年的辛勤努力，张先生共创作了一万多件作品。 4.张先生的工匠精神会永远流传下去的。 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①“泥人张”制作的生动活泼的泥人深受人们的欢迎。(be popular with) The vivid clay figures were made by “Clay Figure Zhang” and ___________ ______________________． ②张先生，出生在一个贫困家庭，靠制作泥人为生。(as a means of；earn one's living) Mr Zhang was born in a poor family and _______________________________ ______________． ③张先生经常出入市场和剧院，观察各行各业的人们。(all walks of life) Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres and ______________________ ____________． they were very popular with people he made clay figures as a means of earning a living observed people from all walks of life ④另外，他很聪明，经常不拘一格地思考。(think outside the box) In addition，he was so intelligent and __________________________． ⑤这使得他的泥人更加生动！(vivid) It made ________________________！ often thought outside the box his clay figures more vivid 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑥用定语从句改写句① ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑦用非谓语动词改写句② ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑧用非谓语动词改写句③ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The vivid clay figures，which were made by “Clay Figure Zhang”，were very popular with people. Mr Zhang，born in a poor family，made clay figures as a means of earning a living. Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres，observing people from all walks of life. ⑨用定语从句连接句④和句⑤ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In addition，he was so intelligent and often thought outside the box，which made his clay figures more vivid! 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The vivid clay figures，which were made by “Clay Figure Zhang”，were very popular with people. Mr Zhang，born in a poor family，made clay figures as a means of earning a living.Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres，observing people from all walks of life.In addition，he was so intelligent and often thought outside the box，which made his clay figures more vivid！He spent most of his time in the workshop.Through his hard work of several decades，Mr Zhang created more than ten thousand works. The spirit of “Clay Figure Zhang” as a craftsman is everlasting. 精彩素材积累 首段： 1．As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. 至于在中国历史上我最喜欢的人物，那一定是清末伟大的思想家魏源。 2．Deng Jiaxian is one of China's most respected outstanding scientists, who is known to the world as the founder and promoter of China's nuclear weapon cause. 邓稼先是中国最受尊敬的杰出科学家之一，他是世界公认的中国核武器事业的创始人和推动者。 主体： 1．He crafted exquisite curves by hand. 他用手工打造精美曲线。 2．In addition to their great achievements, they also showed diligence and patience. 除了辉煌的成就之外，他们还展现了勤奋和耐心。 3．They didn't seek fame and lived an indifferent life to fame and fortune. 他们不追求名利，过着淡泊名利的生活。 4．He became famous for his new craftsmanship. 他因他的新手艺而出名。 结尾： 1．He/She was highly thought of by many people. 他/她受到很多人的高度评价。 2. From him, I realize the secret of success is efforts. 从他身上，我意识到成功的秘诀是努力。 3．Having set a great example to me, she fully deserves my respect. 她为我树立了一个很好的榜样，完全值得我尊敬。 学以致用 假定你是李华，请根据下面的内容提示，为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科学家梁建英。 1.出生时间：1972年4月　出生地点：山东省 2.职务：中国高铁总设计师 3.主要经历 (1)1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作； (2)2007年研制出国内首列时速为300－350公里的动车组； (3)2017年，“复兴号”以350公里的时速正式投入运营，在高铁运营领域取得了新的突破。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：高速列车G-Series High-Speed Train ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Liang Jianying, general designer of China's High-speed Railway, was born in Shandong Province in April 1972. Since she graduated in 1995，she has been devoting herself to researching into the development of China's G-Series High-Speed Train. In 2007, she developed the first G-Series High-Speed Train in China which was operated at the speed of 300－350 kph. In 2017，Fuxing was officially put into service with the speed of 350 kph, which made a new breakthrough in the operation of the High-speed Railway. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. Inspired by her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation, we will study hard to contribute to the development of our country in the future. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ $