Unit 1 The Big Move 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语八年级上册

Unit 1 The Big Move 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“初到新环境，适应与成长”主题，围绕苏珊搬到中国后遇到语言、饮食等困难，在刘畅帮助下逐渐适应的核心故事，写一篇阐释“适应新环境”、描述个人搬迁/新环境经历或表达对“友谊与包容”理解的短文，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“新环境与适应”相关核心词汇（如move、adapt、foreign、culture、language、friendship、embarrassed、confused、comfortable、communicate等）及短语（get used to、laugh at、come up、thanks to、have trouble doing、as soon as、look forward to等）； 2.能熟练运用时间状语从句（when/while/before/after/as soon as引导），掌握“Could you speak more slowly, please?” “I had trouble doing sth.”等句型，正确使用“but” “however” “finally”等衔接表达； 3.能按“主题引入→核心细节（故事解读/经历描述/价值阐释）→感悟与践行”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“拥抱新环境，收获成长与友谊”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：生活经历类记叙文、主题阐释类说明文或成长感悟类短文，兼具真实性与感染力； 2.人称：第一人称（分享经历、表达感受）或第三人称（解读故事、阐释道理）为主； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1个核心角度（苏珊故事启示/个人新环境经历/友谊与适应解读）、2-3个关键细节（故事核心/经历过程/价值内涵）、1个核心感悟（适应的意义/友谊的价值）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，阐释准确深刻、描述真实具体或感悟真挚贴切，语言符合八年级学生水平，体现对“新环境适应”的深度思考。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“人生难免遇到新环境，苏珊的经历告诉我们，直面困难、珍惜友谊，就能在陌生中收获成长” “一次搬迁的经历让我懂得，新环境虽有挑战，但也藏着惊喜与成长，包容与帮助是适应的关键” “从陌生到熟悉，从困惑到从容，适应新环境的过程，也是见证友谊、提升自我的过程”），用简洁句式点明核心观点（如“新环境是挑战也是机遇，勇敢面对、真诚待人，便能收获温暖与成长” “友谊是跨越陌生的桥梁，包容是适应新环境的钥匙”），用引导性语言引出下文； 2.中间：若解读苏珊故事，按“初到困境→他人帮助→逐渐适应→收获成长”展开，结合苏珊因语言不通困惑、用不好筷子尴尬、在刘畅帮助下熟悉中国文化的细节，阐释“友谊与勇气”的内涵；若描述个人经历，聚焦“进入新环境→遇到的困难→获得的帮助→适应后的变化”，用具体事例（如转学后的陌生感、新同学的帮助、逐渐融入集体）传递真实体验；若阐释适应之道，围绕“适应新环境的方法→友谊的作用→包容的意义”，用具体场景（主动沟通、尊重差异、互帮互助）支撑观点，确保有说服力； 3.结尾：分享感悟（如“适应新环境不是被迫改变，而是在尊重差异中成长，在真诚相待中收获温暖” “友谊能驱散陌生的迷茫，勇气能克服未知的挑战，这是苏珊的故事教给我们的道理”）或表达行动意愿（如“我会以苏珊为榜样，面对新环境时勇敢主动，真诚对待他人，用包容与善意收获友谊与成长” “我会珍惜身边的友谊，在他人身处新环境时伸出援手，传递温暖与善意”），呼应单元“The Big Move”的核心主题，传递“拥抱变化，温暖同行”的积极态度。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：主题阐释——友谊暖陌生，适应促成长（Friendship Warms Strangers, Adaptation Promotes Growth） 第一段：故事引入与核心定位 基础句式：The story of Susan moving to China and adapting to life here teaches us a valuable lesson about friendship and adaptation. When facing a new environment, kindness and courage can help us get through difficulties. 示例：What helps us get used to a new environment? Susan’s experience gives us a clear answer—it’s the warmth of friendship and the courage to face challenges. 第二段：故事解读与细节支撑 基础句式：When Susan first moved to China, she had many problems. She couldn’t read the signs at the airport and felt confused. As soon as she went to a restaurant, she had trouble using chopsticks and dropped food, feeling embarrassed. Before her first class, she was too shy to talk to anyone. However, Liu Chang came up to her and helped her learn about Chinese life. Finally, Susan got used to living in China. 示例：Susan felt nervous and embarrassed when she first arrived in China. She couldn’t speak Chinese well and didn’t know how to use chopsticks. Nobody laughed at her, but she still felt uncomfortable. Luckily, Liu Chang introduced himself and spoke English with her. He told her many things about China. Thanks to Liu Chang, Susan soon adapted to life here and made a good friend. 第三段：感悟总结与践行 基础句式：Susan’s story tells us that moving to a new place is not easy, but friendship and courage can make it easier. We should learn to face challenges bravely and cherish the people who help us in new environments. 示例：From Susan’s journey, I understand that friendship is the bridge to adapt to a new environment. When we meet someone in a strange place, a kind smile or a helping hand can make a big difference. In daily life, I will be brave when facing new environments and kind to people around me. 模板二：生活经历——我的新环境适应之旅（My Journey of Adapting to a New Environment） 第一段：经历引入与背景铺垫 基础句式：I once moved to a new city with my family, just like Susan moved to China. That experience made me deeply understand the difficulty of adapting to a new environment and the value of friendship. 示例：Last year, my family moved to a new town, and I had to transfer to a new school. At first, I felt just like Susan—nervous, confused and lonely. But an unforgettable experience helped me adapt to the new life. 第二段：经历细节与过程描述 基础句式：When I first entered the new classroom, I didn’t know anyone and felt shy to talk. During the break, a girl came up to me and introduced herself. She showed me around the school and helped me with my homework. As time went by, I made more friends. Finally, I got used to the new school life and felt comfortable here. 示例：On my first day at the new school, I couldn’t find my classroom and felt confused. A boy noticed my trouble and helped me find the right room. In class, I didn’t understand some of the teacher’s words because of the local accent. After class, he explained them to me patiently. We often played together after school, and I learned many interesting things about the town from him. Slowly, I made more friends and got used to the new life. 第三段：经历感悟与收获 基础句式：This experience taught me that adapting to a new environment requires courage and openness. Making friends with kind people can help us feel at home faster. I will keep this in mind when facing new challenges in the future. 示例：That experience changed me. I realized that facing a new environment is not scary. As long as we are brave to communicate and cherish the help from others, we can soon adapt to it. Just like Susan and Liu Chang, friendship can make the unfamiliar become familiar. I will always be grateful to my friend who helped me and be ready to help others in need. 模板三：品质感悟——包容为翼，友谊为帆（Tolerance as Wings, Friendship as Sails） 第一段：品质引入与核心意义 基础句式：Adapting to a new environment is an important part of life. It requires not only courage to face differences but also the warmth of friendship. Susan’s story perfectly shows the importance of tolerance and kindness. 示例：In life, we often need to face new environments—new schools, new cities or even new countries. What helps us sail through the period of unfamiliarity? It’s tolerance for differences and friendship from others. 第二段：品质阐释与细节支撑 基础句式：First, we should be brave to face differences. Different cultures, languages and lifestyles may make us confused, but we should respect them. Second, we need to be open to make friends. A helping hand from a friend can make us feel warmer. Finally, we should learn to help others. Just like Liu Chang helped Susan, our kindness can help others adapt faster. These qualities make adapting to new environments easier. 示例：True adaptation is not about changing ourselves to fit others, but about respecting differences and building connections. Susan respected Chinese culture and tried to learn to use chopsticks. Liu Chang was tolerant of Susan’s language difficulties and helped her patiently. Their mutual kindness and understanding made the big move easier. In any new environment, tolerance helps us see the beauty of differences, and friendship gives us the strength to keep going. 第三段：感悟与行动呼吁 基础句式：Let’s learn from Susan and Liu Chang. When facing a new environment, be brave, tolerant and kind. Cherish the friends who help us, and be ready to help those in need. With these qualities, we can adapt to any new environment and收获 growth. 示例：New environments are full of challenges and opportunities. Let’s take Susan’s story as an example—face differences with tolerance, treat others with kindness, and cherish the friendship around us. I believe that with tolerance and friendship, we can turn every "big move" into a beautiful journey of growth. 范文 Adapt to New Environments with Friendship and Courage Susan’s story of moving to China and adapting to life here deeply inspires me. It shows that friendship and courage are the keys to overcoming difficulties in a new environment. When Susan first arrived in China, she faced many problems. She couldn’t read the airport signs and felt confused. She had trouble using chopsticks at restaurants and felt embarrassed. Before her first class, she was too shy to talk to anyone. However, Liu Chang came up to her, introduced himself and spoke English with her. He told her about life in China and helped her get used to the new culture. Finally, Susan made a good friend and adapted to living in China. This story makes me realize that moving to a new place is challenging, but friendship and courage can make it easier. When I face a new environment, I will be brave to communicate and cherish the people who help me. I will also be kind to those in need, just like Liu Chang helped Susan. 范文中文翻译 以友谊与勇气适应新环境 苏珊搬到中国并适应这里生活的故事深深启发了我。它表明，友谊和勇气是克服新环境中困难的关键。 苏珊刚到中国时，遇到了很多问题。她看不懂机场的标识，感到很困惑。她在餐厅里不会用筷子，觉得很尴尬。第一节课前，她太害羞了，不敢和任何人说话。然而，刘畅走到她面前，做了自我介绍，还用英语和她交流。他给她讲了中国的生活，帮助她适应新的文化。最后，苏珊交到了好朋友，也适应了在中国的生活。 这个故事让我明白，搬到一个新地方充满挑战，但友谊和勇气能让这一切变得更容易。当我面对新环境时，我会勇敢地去交流，珍惜帮助我的人。我也会对有需要的人友善，就像刘畅帮助苏珊那样。 素材积累 核心短语 get used to 习惯于 laugh at 嘲笑 come up 走近；出现 thanks to 多亏；由于 have trouble doing sth. 做某事有困难 as soon as 一……就…… look forward to 期待 adapt to 适应 face challenges 面对挑战 make friends 交朋友 show around 带领参观 learn about 了解 mutual understanding 相互理解 local accent 地方口音 transfer to a new school 转学到新学校 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 The story of Susan teaches us that ________. The story of Susan teaches us that friendship helps us adapt to new environments. When I ________, I felt ________. When I first transferred to the new school, I felt very lonely. As soon as ________, ________. As soon as she met Liu Chang, Susan felt much better. Thanks to ________, I ________. Thanks to my new friend, I got used to the new life quickly. I had trouble ________, but ________ helped me. I had trouble speaking the local language, but my classmate helped me. 好句集锦 1.新环境就像一扇陌生的门，勇气是推开它的手，友谊是门后温暖的光。（A new environment is like an unfamiliar door—courage is the hand that pushes it open, and friendship is the warm light behind it.） 2.适应不是被动妥协，而是主动接纳差异，在陌生中寻找熟悉，在挑战中收获成长。（Adaptation is not passive compromise, but active acceptance of differences, finding familiarity in strangeness and gaining growth in challenges.） 3.苏珊的故事告诉我们，最珍贵的不是从未遇到困难，而是在困难中遇到愿意伸出援手的人，以及敢于面对困难的自己。（Susan’s story tells us that the most precious thing is not never encountering difficulties, but meeting people who are willing to help in difficulties and being brave enough to face them ourselves.） 4.友谊能跨越语言的障碍，包容能化解文化的差异，这是适应新环境的两大法宝。（Friendship can cross language barriers, and tolerance can resolve cultural differences—these are two magic weapons for adapting to new environments.） 谚语 1.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.（入乡随俗——契合适应新环境主题） 2.A friend in need is a friend indeed.（患难见真情——呼应友谊的价值） 3.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.（世上无难事，只要肯登攀——强调勇气的重要性） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：主题阐释 Susan’s story reveals that friendship and courage help us adapt to new environments. When Susan first moved to China, she ________ (困境1，如couldn’t read the signs) and felt confused. She also ________ (困境2，如had trouble using chopsticks) and felt embarrassed. However, Liu Chang ________ (行动，如came up to her and helped her) . Finally, Susan got used to living in China. From this, I learn that ________ (感悟，如kindness can warm strangers). I will ________ (行动，如be brave and kind when facing new environments) in daily life. 版本二：生活经历 I once moved to a new place, and it was an unforgettable experience of adapting to a new environment. When I first arrived, I ________ (状态，如felt lonely and nervous) because I didn’t know anyone. One day, ________ (人物，如a classmate) came up to me and ________ (行动，如showed me around). He/She helped me ________ (具体帮助，如with my homework) . Slowly, I made friends and got used to the new life. This experience made me realize that ________ (感悟，如friendship is important for adapting to new environments). I will ________ (行动，如cherish my friends and help others in need) in the future. 版本三：品质感悟 Adapting to new environments requires tolerance and friendship. Susan’s story explains their true meaning. First, we should ________ (做法1，如respect cultural differences) like Susan. She tried to learn to use chopsticks. Second, we need to ________ (做法2，如be kind to others) instead of laughing at their difficulties. These qualities help us ________ (好处，如make new friends and adapt faster) . Let’s learn from Susan and Liu Chang. I believe that with ________ (品质，如tolerance and kindness), we can ________ (成果，如turn unfamiliar environments into warm homes) . 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $