Unit 2 Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一篇关于外星人的故事-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（译林版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦“写关于外星人的故事”这一核心写作任务，通过文体感知明确观察、想象、生动描写及情节冲突设置的要求，提供实用写作素材积累句型，并以典题示例为支架，分审题谋篇、基本句、高级句及衔接成篇四步引导学生完成写作。 该资料亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心，通过基本句到高级句的升级（如倒装句改写）提升表达准确性，结合思维品质培养，强调情节冲突设置以发展逻辑与创造思维。分步骤指导既便于课中教师系统教学，又助力课后学生自主回顾，有效查漏补缺。

Section Ⅲ　Integrated skills——写一篇关于外星人的故事 [文体感知] 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于外星人的故事。此类写作中，必须通过细致的观察和丰富的想象进行生动形象的描写，以给读者留下深刻的印象。在进行背景描写时，可使用一些形容词来烘托心情。情节是此类故事的核心，务必注意故事中的人物及各种冲突设置。 [写作素材] I was having supper when I caught sight of a shining UFO flying in the sky. 我正在吃晚饭，突然看见一个发光的不明飞行物在天空中飞行。 Out of the UFO came a strange creature with a big head and eyes. 从不明飞行物里出来一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛的奇怪生物。 Frightened by the strange creature，I ran away as fast as I could. 我被那个奇怪的生物吓坏了，飞快地跑开了。 Hardly had he seen me when he smiled and walked toward me. 他一看见我就微笑着向我走来。 It flew so fast that I was almost scared to death. 它飞得那么快，差点把我吓死了。 So fascinated was I by the beautiful scene of space that I forgot to return to the earth. 我被太空美丽的景色迷住了，以至于我忘记了回到地球。 What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was! 这是一次多么美好和难忘的经历啊！ Hope you can have a knowledge of the life in space. 希望你能了解太空生活。 学生用书第46页 As far as I am concerned，life in space is inconvenient but interesting. 在我看来，太空生活很不方便，但很有趣。 In my opinion，living in space will be turned into reality one day. 在我看来，太空生活总有一天会变成现实。 [典题示例] 假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇周记，记述你遇到外星人的一次经历。内容如下： 1．周四晚遇到一个外星人(个子矮、头和眼睛很大、棕色皮肤)； 2．乘坐飞碟，遨游太空，欣赏夜景； 3．你的感受。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　学会审题谋篇 写作类型 记叙文 人称时态 以第一人称为主；以一般过去时为主 写作要点 第一段：简述事件 第二段：详述过程 第三段：表达感受 第二步　保基础分——会写基本句 1．我正在做作业的时候，突然看到一个闪闪发光的UFO在天空中越来越近，最终降落在地面上。 I was doing my homework when suddenly I caught sight of a shining UFO in the sky coming nearer and nearer and eventually landed on the ground. 2．然后一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛，棕色皮肤的很矮的外星人从里面出来了。 Then a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin came out of it. 3．他一看见我，就向我挥手，邀请我乘飞碟去旅行。 As soon as he saw me，he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO. 4．它飞得如此之快，以至于我们很快就进入了太空。 It flew so fast that we were in space in a short time. 5．从不明飞行物向外看，我看到了我们生活的美丽的蓝色地球和其他闪亮的星星在黑暗的空间里转动。 Looking out of the UFO，I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space. 6．大概过了一个小时，我请求外星人把我送到地球上去。 After what seemed an hour，I asked the alien to send me to the earth. 7．这是一次多么美好和难忘的经历啊！ What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was! 第三步　创设亮点——试写高级句 8．将句2升级为倒装句 Then out of it came a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin. 9．将句3用hardly...when...升级为倒装句 Hardly had he seen me when he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO. 第四步　衔接成篇得高分 参考范文 　　On Thursday evening，I was doing my homework when suddenly I caught sight of a shining UFO in the sky coming nearer and nearer and eventually landed on the ground.Then out of it came a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin. 　　Hardly had he seen me when he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO and I agreed.Then we hurried into the UFO and then it took off from the ground.It flew so fast that we were in space in a short time.Looking out of the UFO，I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space.What a fantastic scene! After what seemed an hour，I asked the alien to send me to the earth. 　　What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $