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英语(WY)·选择性必修第三册
单元。写作研读
如何写有关诗歌改写类文章
[写作指导]
⑧meet the needs of the people满足人类的
◆[文体感知]
需要
诗歌是各种英语文体中最富有激情和感
⑨adopt effective measures采取有效措施
情色彩的一种。诗歌往往用高度凝练的语言
⑩social morality社会道德
来表达诗人的喜怒哀乐。那么怎样进行诗歌
2.经典句式
改写呢?需要注意一下几点:
1.He is one of the greatest poets in the histo-
1.改写的原则是基本上不改内容,而改表达形
ry of our country.
式。在内容上,要体现原作精神,也可对原
他是我国历史上的伟大诗人之一。
作酌情改变,但决不是另写一篇文章。
2.His poems are popular with among the peo-
2.在形式上,改写是多种多样的,可以改体裁、
ple.
表达方式;也可以改语言;还可以改文章结
他的诗在民间广受欢迎。
构、人称等。
3.The poem depicts a hard cultivator,work-
实际上,改写的过程是一个重新构思的过
ing in the field.
程,是一个重新剪裁,重新布局的过程。
诗中描绘了一位辛勤的耕耘者,正在田间
◆[审题谋篇]
劳作。
体裁:诗歌改写
4.We should respect the fruits of labor and
时态:一般现在时为主
cherish food.
人称:第三人称和第一人称
我们要尊重劳动者的劳动果实,珍惜粮食。
◆[文章构架]
5.We should cherish today's hard-won happy
第一部分:诗歌的作者、时代、地位
life
第二部分:介绍诗歌所表达的内容
我们要珍惜今天来之不易的幸福生活。
第三部分:诗歌的写作意图及现实意义
6.Chinese traditional culture is not only cer-
◆[词句积累]
tain to survive,but also is destined to
1.亮点词汇
thrive and prosper.
①traditional culture of China中国传统
中国传统文化不仅一定可以继续存在下去,
文化
而且一定会繁荣发展。
②the Chinese poetry competition中文诗词
7.No matter how great the demand to suc-
比赛
ceed,one shouldn't lose his moral and so-
③Chinese Poetry Conference中国诗词大会
cial consciousness.
④be popular with为…所喜欢;受…
无论一个人对成功的需求多么强烈,也永远
欢迎
不能丧失道德和社会觉悟。
⑤with living conditions improved随着生活
8.Only by adopting effective measures can
条件的改善
human society develop steadily and have a
⑥remind sb.of the importance..提醒某
bright future.
人的……重要性
只有通过采取有效的措施,人类社会才能
⑦the demand of the society社会需求
稳步发展并有一个灿烂的未来。
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Unit 6 Nature in words
9.We should enhance environmental aware-
◆[完成句子]
ness and live in harmony with nature.
1.这个夏天的中午,外面很热。
我们要增强环境意识,与大自然和谐相处。
at this summer
10.We should realize that protecting animals and
noon time.
plants is equal to protecting ourselves.
2.农民们仍在地里除草。
我们要意识到保护动植物就等于保护我们
The farmers
自己。
3.他们全身都湿了。
[典题示例]
They are wet
请根据唐朝诗人李
悯农
4.他们的汗水经常落在土里。
绅的《悯农》,用英语写
禾日当午
出这首诗的大意,并说
汗滴禾下土
Their sweat frequently
谁知盘中餐
粒粒皆辛苦
明诗中所蕴含的作者的
思想,以便向你的外国
5.庄稼在土壤里生长。
朋友解释。
The crops grow
Sympathy on the Farmers
6.我认为这很重要。
At noon,farmers are weeding,
I think it's
Down the field,sweat is dropping.
7.今天的年轻一代应该懂得这首诗,珍惜每一
Who knows rice on a dish,
粒粮食。
Every grain is full of moiling.
The young generation today
注意:
1.不得照抄短诗原文;
◆[句式升级]
2.必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开;
8.用as引导的让步状语从句改写句1、2
3.必须突出短诗的主题,结构完整,语义连贯;
4.短文不能写成诗歌形式;
5.词数80左右。
9.用with复合结构和where引导的定语从句
改写句3、4和5
10.用that引导的从句作真正宾语,改写句6、7
◆[要点词汇]
.
除草;剔除
◆[连句成篇]
2.
adv.
频繁地,经常地
ut.
珍爱;珍惜
4.
adj.
美味的;可口的
为…所喜欢;
受……欢迎
6
落入
7.
来自
C温馨提
8.
提醒;使记起
学习至此,请完成配套训练
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Section W Developing ideas Presenting ideas
课文篇章理解
I.A
II.1.causing 2.in addition to 3.killed 4.was banned
5.was regarded as 6.earned 7.more emotional
8.determined
Ⅲ.1-5 DABAC
IV.1.aiming 2.on 3.used 4.which 5.elegant 6.to
defend 7.alarming 8.was banned 9.a 10.awareness
新知点点突破
重点单词
1.ban 2.puzzled 3.backyard 4.tremble 5.chorus
6.marsh 7.alert 8.dozen 9.launch 10.marine
11.diamond 12.reputation 13.thorough thoroughly
14.passionate passionately 15.precise precisely
16.knowingly know knowledge 17.elegance elegant
重点短语
1.in particular 2.cause harm to 3.make sb.aware of
4.in addition to 5.dozens of 6.be regarded as 7.be/be-
come a target for 8.rather than 9.more..than..
10.stop...from doing 11.stand by 12.because of
13.so that
句式精析
1.尽管卡森的研究很有力,而且得到了大多数评论她工作
的科学家的支持,但这本书很快成为农药行业批评的目标。
2.她的书不仅改变了世界,在半个世纪后的今天,它仍然是
一本值得重读的书,这样我们就可以再次感受到它充满激
情的信息之火的温暖。
要点层层精析
词汇精讲
学以致用
1.①with
②tremble all over③trembling at the
thought of
2.①in②a bout/over③to④particularly⑤be parti-
cular about 6in particular
3.①awareness②of③made his students aware of
④As far as I'm aware⑤a lack of awareness
4.①by②Dozens③of④dozens of chicken
5.①about②precisely③to be precise
6.①on/against②under
③are banned
④are banned
from swimming
7.①for
②have a good reputation③earned a high repu-
tation Dlived up to his reputation
句式精析
l.①Excited②tired③Eager to see her friends④safe
and sound⑤full of fear
2.①reviews②not more difficult than③no more able to
read Spanish than more than 5more a lyric than a
folk story
单元写作研读
典题示例
要点词汇
1.weed 2.frequently 3.treasure 4.delicious 5.be
popular with 6.fall into 7.come from 8.remind...of
完成句子
1.It is hot outside 2.are still weeding in the fields 3.all
over 4.fall into the soil 5.in the soil 6.of great impor-
tance 7.should understand the poem and treasure every grain
句式升级
8.Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time,the farmers
are still weeding in the fields.
9.They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling
into the soil,where the crops grow.
10.I think it's of great importance that the young generation
today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.
连句成篇
[参考范文]
Here is a poem titled"Sympathy on the Farmers"by Li
Shen who is popular with Chinese readers.
It goes like this:Hot as it is outside at this summer
noon time,the farmers are still weeding in the fields.They
are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the
soil,where the crops grow.But who knows exactly all our
foods,the delicious dishes on our table,come from the hard
work of the farmers?
Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of
the importance of the farmers'hard work.I think it's of
great importance that the young generation today should un-
derstand the poem and treasure every grain.
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