Unit 5 Section Ⅴ Writing—写一张明信片-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版）

该高中英语课件聚焦“明信片写作”核心知识点，以范文《16 May》为导入，通过“名师视点”解析语言要素（如副词really、句式spend time doing sth）和结构框架（问候语、主体、结束语、署名），再以“四仿”步骤（结构布局、语言规范、句式表达、连句成篇）搭建学习支架，衔接从语言输入到独立写作的训练脉络。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过仿写步骤引导学生规范表达，如用定语从句合并句子提升句式复杂度，结合悉尼旅游、西溪湿地等情景任务实现学以致用。提供常用句型库和范文示例，助力学生掌握写作策略提升学习能力，也为教师提供系统教学资源，有效提高课堂效率。

Unit 5 On the road 主题语境：人与自然——通过旅行看世界 Section Ⅴ　Writing—写一张明信片 内容索引 模仿写作　学范文 1 模仿写作　学范文 返回 原文呈现 16 May Hi Emma， 　　I'm having a really great time in Yunnan, China！At the moment, we're at the foot of Yulong Snow Mountain. We spent the whole day hiking and I even saw some huge yaks! The landscape is so beautiful! Tomorrow we're going to visit the famous old town of Lijiang. Let's pray for good weather! It's going to be a lot of fun! 　　I've got to go, but miss you a lot. Alice 名师圈点 学语言 1．修饰语：副词really；so 2．句式：spend time (in) doing sth 3．衔接词：and, but 4．时态：使用了现在进行时、一般过去时和be going to结构。 学结构 1．问候语(Greeting)：自成一行，顶格写。 2．主体部分(Main body)：用简洁凝练的语言表述具体信息及要求。 3．结束语(Close)：总结上文，表达愿望及祝愿。 4．署名(Signature)：写信人的姓名。 情景任务写作 　　假定你是李华，正在悉尼旅游，请你给家乡的朋友韩静写一张明信片，简单介绍一下你在悉尼的旅游情况。内容包括以下几个方面： 1．住宿：唐人街附近的一个旅馆； 2．游览的景点：海滩、歌剧院、悉尼港等； 3．气候状况。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：游艇cruise；半球hemisphere Dear Han Jing， 　　This is a hello from Sydney._____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Bye for now. Yours， Li Hua 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一部分：________； 第二部分：________________________； 第三部分：___________________。 问候语 文章主体，介绍旅游情况 结束用语或祝福用语 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①我住在离唐人街不远的一家宾馆内。 I stay in a hotel ____________________． ②唐人街就位于这个城市的中心。(locate) Chinatown ____________________________． ③我非常想念你，回来后想尽快见到你。(as soon as possible) I miss you very much and ________________________________ when I come back. not far from Chinatown is located in the middle of the city I want to see you as soon as possible 3．三仿句式高级表达 ④请用定语从句将句①和句②合并成一句话 _____________________________________________________________________ ⑤请用省略句改写句③ __________________________________________________ I stay in a hotel not far from Chinatown，which is located in the middle of the city. Miss you and see you as soon as possible when I come back. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 Dear Han Jing， 　　This is a hello from Sydney. I have been here for two days and I have thoroughly enjoyed it. I stay in a hotel not far from Chinatown，which is located in the middle of the city. I have been to many places，like the beaches，the Opera House and Sydney harbor. The weather was very good and the scenery was beautiful. In the southern hemisphere，it is autumn now and it is probably the best time for travel. The mild weather and blue sky suit me very well. Miss you and see you as soon as possible when I come back. 　　Bye for now. Yours, Li Hua 精彩素材积累 常用开头句： 1．Hey! I haven't heard from you since you left. 嘿！自从你离开后，我就没有收到过你的信。 2．I've been in Hainan for two days. 我在海南已经两天了。 3．I'm having a really great time in Qingdao. 我在青岛玩得很开心。 常用中间句： 1．I'll take a two-week trip to Beijing with my parents in the summer holiday. 今年暑假我将与父母一起游览北京两周。 2．Once on the top of the hill, we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery. 一到达山顶，我们立刻被这里美丽的风景所吸引。 3．Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. 而且，沿江的景色令人惊奇，有很多著名的游览景点。 4．It was my first time to experience the sea and the beach in the sunshine. 这是我第一次在阳光下体验大海和海滩。 5．When sitting on the cruise, I could clearly see the ocean waves pushing the windows of the cruise. 坐在游轮上，我可以清楚地看到海浪拍打着游轮的窗户。 6．The sky is also brighter and clearer than that I had ever seen. 天空也比我所见过的更明亮、更清澈。 7．I can't wait. 我等不及了。 8．It's going to be a lot of fun! 这会很有趣的！ 常用结束句： 1．I've got to go, but miss you a lot. 我得走了，但是很想你。 2．Bye for now. Take care! 现在要说再见了。保重！ 3．Hope to hear from you soon. 希望很快收到你的来信。 4．Looking forward to your coming to China． 期待着你来中国。 学以致用 　　假定你是李华， 今年暑假你去了杭州西溪湿地公园， 请把你的经历写一张明信片给你的美国朋友Susan。要点如下： 　　1．见到的景色； 　　2．内心的感想。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 返回 10 Sept. Dear Susan， 　　I paid a visit to Xixi National Wetland Park this summer holiday. There is no doubt that I had a great time there. 　　The wetland is famous as“the kidney of the earth”， which plays an important role in protecting our environment. It is located in the west of Hangzhou, covering an area of 11.5 square kilometers. I participated in a variety of activities there. However, enjoying the beautiful scenery and tasting the delicious food attracted me most. I was strongly inspired by the rich and varied culture in our country. 　　Hope to hear from you soon. Yours， Li Hua 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $