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Unit 3 On the move
主题语境:人与社会——体育运动和健康的生活方式
Section Ⅴ Writing—写一篇关于体育运动的故事
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I was so proud when my team won the ice hockey competition. It made me feel like I could achieve anything. Only three years ago, I was terrified of sports like skiing and skating. To deal with this, I decided to join a skating club. I really envied the other club members, who were so confident and dynamic on the ice. But my teacher was great and before I knew it, I was able to skate. He then persuaded me to try ice hockey. I loved it and was soon practising with my local team almost every evening. We're now training for national competitions and hope to be champions one day, but my ultimate goal is to be an ice hockey teacher and help people learn to play this game.
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学语言
1.修饰语:副词so。
2.连接词:then, and, but。
3.高级表达:
①when引导时间状语从句;
②make sb do sth;
③before引导时间状语从句;
④动词不定式作目的状语和表语。
4.时态:一般过去时。
学结构
引出个人故事
叙述故事经过(经历与过程)
总结个人故事(取得的进步与以后的打算)
情景任务写作
请根据下表信息,写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍你最喜欢的运动。
最喜欢的运动 篮球
开始产生兴趣 九岁,那时父亲教我打篮球
现在练习情况 校篮球队成员;放学后或周末打球大约一小时
喜欢的原因 快乐;健康;交友
最喜欢的篮球明星 姚明
仿写程序步骤
1.一仿结构布局合理
第一部分:_____________;
第二部分:_____________________________________;
第三部分:_______________________。
简单介绍自己最喜欢的运动
对如何开始这项运动和练习情况进行描述
喜欢的原因,自己的偶像
2.二仿语言规范美观
①我喜欢很多运动,其中篮球是我的最爱。
I like many kinds of sports ________________________.
②我在九岁时第一次对篮球感兴趣,那时爸爸教我怎样打篮球。
I first became interested in basketball at the age of nine ___________________
_____________________.
③篮球可以给我带来很多快乐、健康和朋友,所以我非常喜欢它。
Basketball can bring me lots of happiness,health and friends,____________
______.
and basketball is my favorite
and then my father taught me how to play it
so I like it so much
3.三仿句式高级表达
④请用“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句改写句①。
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⑤请用定语从句改写句②。
_______________________________________________________________________________
⑥请用why引导的定语从句改写句③。
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I like many kinds of sports,of which basketball is my favorite.
I first became interested in basketball at the age of nine,when my father taught me how to play it.
The reason why I like basketball so much is that it can bring me lots of happiness,health and friends.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
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I like many kinds of sports,of which basketball is my favorite. I first became interested in basketball at the age of nine,when my father taught me how to play it.I have been practicing hard. Now I am a member of our school basketball team and I often play basketball for about an hour after school or on weekends. Sometimes we also have competitions with students from other schools. The reason why I like basketball so much is that it can bring me lots of happiness,health and friends. My favorite basketball star is Yao Ming.
精彩素材积累
1.表示“喜欢”:
I like... best.
Of all the... I like... best.
My favourite... is...
2.表示“喜欢的理由”:
I like it because...
There is no doubt that...
The reason why I like... is that...
3.表示“某项运动的优势”:
It plays an important role/part in...
It does us a lot of good.
It is of great benefit to me.
It can make us healthy and wealthy.
4.介绍某项运动的起源、发展:
... originated as...
... developed into a sport from...
5.表示“结论”:
In all...
In a word...
学以致用
目前,更多的人积极投身体育锻炼。请你以“My experience with sports”为题给校英语报投稿,内容包括:
1.接触过的运动;
2.这些运动带给你的改变。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My experience with sports
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Sports play an important part in our daily life. As for me, I've had different sports experiences, which contribute to what I am today.
My passion for basketball was from James Harden. It was his graceful moves and jumps that motivated me into basketball. I miss the days when I played basketball with my teammates. Trainings and matches shape me to be more persistent and wiser. Another sport is swimming, which helps me stay healthy and in shape. I've been swimming for years. Every time I finish swimming, I feel refreshed and energetic.
All in all, my experiences with sports have aroused my potential and greatly impacted my life in many ways.
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