内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Reading for Writing and the other parts
◎核心单词——练通
1.a herd of deer 一群鹿
2.due to her efforts 由于她的努力
3.insect species 昆虫种类
4.a net friend 一个网友
5.quiet neighbourhoods 安静的街区
6.skin color 肤色
◎拓展单词——用活
1.reduce vt.减少→reduction n.缩减;减少
2.emotion n.感情;情感;情绪→emotional adj.情绪(上)的;情绪激动的
3.unusual adj.特别的;不寻常的→(反义词)usual adj.平常的→usually adv.平常地
1.规律:动词+后缀-tion构成名词
示例:reduce vt.减少→reduction n.缩减;减少
如:educate v.教育→education n.教育
2.规律:否定前缀un-+形容词构成形容词
示例:usual adj.平常的→unusual adj.特别的;不寻常的
如:happy adj.幸福的→unhappy adj.不幸的
◎阅读单词——识记
1.a pair of powerful-looking binoculars
高倍双筒望远镜
2.Yangtze River Dolphin 白豚
3.the tree-hugging habits of the koala
考拉抱树的习惯
4.stir the imagination 激发想象力
◎重点短语——再现
第一组 汉译英
1.由于;因为 due to
2.搜索;查找 search for
3.激起 stir up
第二组 英译汉
4.pay attention to 注意
5.cut down 削减;砍倒
6.leave behind 留下;遗留
7.look up 仰望;查阅
8.carry out 执行;贯彻;完成
◎典型句式——默背
根据课文语境及汉语提示完成句子
句型公式 when it comes to...
教材原句 When it comes to wildlife protection (当谈到野生动植物保护时),all species—the good,the bad,and the ugly—should be treated equally.
典型句式讲透
句型公式:when it comes to... 一谈到……
(教材原句)When it comes to wildlife protection,all species—the good,the bad,and the ugly—should be treated equally.谈到野生动植物保护,所有的物种——好的、坏的和丑的——都应该得到平等的对待。
when it comes to意为“一谈到;就……而论;当说到……的时候;当涉及……时”,其中to为介词,后跟名词或动词-ing形式(短语)
【佳句】 When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that it should be advisable to talk more with your mom.(应用文写作之建议信)
当谈到这种情况时,我想建议你多和你妈妈谈谈。
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【练透】——单句语法填空/完成句子
①When it comes to traveling (travel) in China,Mount Tai is a popular tourist destination.
②说到英语,听和说是我的弱点所在。
Listening and speaking is where my weakness lies when it comes to English.
NO.1 单元写作——保护濒危物种的海报
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Give Ugly a Chance!
When it comes to wildlife protection,all species—the good,the bad,and the ugly—should be treated equally.Pandas,dolphins,and other cute wildlife are important,but we must pay attention to less cute animals,too.The world needs all kinds—without variety,our planet cannot survive.So if you want the future to be beautiful,you have to give ugly a chance.
Don't Make Paper with My Home!
Billions of trees are being cut down every year to make paper for humans.Every tree that is cut down is a part of the habitat of animals such as these koalas.In this way a lot of animal homes are being destroyed! Is it right to make animals homeless so that humans can have more paper?, ◎
学语言
海报一中的状语从句“When it comes to ...”和“if you want ...to ...”语气比较委婉含蓄。海报二中的最后一句使用了反问句,增强了句子的语气,引人深思,更加使读者产生共鸣,达到表意效果。
知结构
海报一的标题“Give Ugly a Chance!”以祈使句的方式呈现,并且使用了“丑陋者”这样的含蓄表达,既委婉真切,又引人深思。海报二的标题“Don't Make Paper with My Home!”也是祈使句,该标题使用了拟人的修辞手法,以考拉的声音发出呼吁,震撼人心。 同时,Home指代树木,属于借代修辞。
[情境任务写作]
根据下面提示制作一份关于保护华南虎的海报。
South China Tiger
Why is it endangered? (Hunted for its skin and fur) Population (0 in the wild;30-80 still living)
What is being done? (A plan is being carried out to increase the number of wild tigers).What can we do? (Do not buy fur or other tiger products!)
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[仿写程序步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
题目:给我机会,我会让地球更多彩
第一层:由于皮毛被猎杀;仅剩30到80只;生活在保护区里。
第二层:禁止购买。
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2.二仿语言规范美观
(1)给我机会,我会让地球更多彩。(祈使句+and;make+复合宾语)
Give me a chance and I will make the earth more colorful.
(2)我的名字叫华南虎。(主系表)
My name is South China Tiger.
(3)由于皮毛,我正在被猎杀。(现在进行时的被动语态)
I am being hunted for my skin and fur.
(4)我的家族仅剩30到80只。(主系表)
The population of my family is only 30-80.
(5)它们在人类的帮助下都生活在保护区里。(主谓状)
All of them live in the reserve with the help of human beings.
(6)任何老虎都不敢在野外生存。(主谓状)
No tigers dare to live in the wild.
(7)幸运的是,我知道我的朋友们正在执行一项计划来增加野生老虎的数量。(动词know+宾语从句)
Fortunately,I know my friends are carrying out a plan to increase the number of wild tigers.
(8)禁止购买虎皮及其他虎制品将对我们的家族有很大益处。(动词-ing形式短语作主语;be beneficial to)
Forbidding buying fur or other tiger products will be greatly beneficial to all of my family.
3.三仿句式高级表达
(9)用含有非限制性定语从句的句子合并句(4)和句(5)
The population of my family is only 30-80,all of whom live in the reserve with the help of human beings.
(10)在句(7)中“我的朋友们”后加入同位语“人类”
Fortunately,I know my friends,human beings,are carrying out a plan to increase the number of wild tigers.
(11)用“be+of+抽象名词”改写句(8)中的“beneficial”
Forbidding buying fur or other tiger products will be of great benefit to all of my family.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
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参考范文
Give me a chance and I will make the earth more colorful
My name is South China Tiger.I am being hunted for my skin and fur.The population of my family is only 30-80,all of whom live in the reserve with the help of human beings.No tigers dare to live in the wild.Fortunately,I know my friends,human beings,are carrying out a plan to increase the number of wild tigers.Forbidding buying fur or other tiger products will be of great benefit to all of my family.
NO.2 读后续写—— “划读”“构思”
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·重庆巴蜀中学高一检测)
One day my mom and I read a story on a magazine called Humane Society News.A wild dog named Solo died for lack of medical care after he was ill.I knew how sad the story was because my own dog,Kela,had recently died.My world had ended when I lost Kela.She had been my best friend since I could remember.The article continued to tell about wildlife rehabilitators(野生动物救护员).They nursed the sick animals back to health,but as more and more animals were rescued,the medical expense became a big burden for them.I immediately determined to do something for them.I may be a kid,but why can't I do a fundraiser to help save more dogs?
My mom thought it was hard for an eleven-year-old girl to raise,but she told me to go ahead and try it anyway.I realized that I needed a name for the fundraiser and thought since I was trying to protect dogs' life,I would call my program Help Dogs.I decided that pet stores would be really good places to go with donation boxes and Help Dogs flyers (传单).I used little green Chinese take-out boxes,decorated with a picture of Tiko,one of the dogs I chose to help,and me.I wrote on each box “Help protect the life of
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dogs by donating a dollar”.I thought my actions might not raise much money for the dogs,but they can at least increase people's awareness of wild animals protection.
One afternoon,after all the boxes had been distributed throughout our community,I got a call from a local newspaper reporter who had seen one of my flyers.The reporter decided to do an article about Help Dogs.After the article came out,I waited for a few days before checking to see if there were any donations.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I was really nervous when I finally went to collect the money.
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I realized many people feel the same way as I did but didn't know how to help.
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第一步:划读语篇(阅读文本,根据右栏中提示画出文中关键信息)
One day my mom and I read a story on a magazine called Humane Society News.A wild dog named Solo died for lack of medical care after he was ill.I knew how sad the story was because my own dog,Kela,had recently died.My world had ended when I lost Kela.She had been my best friend since I could remember.The article continued to tell about wildlife rehabilitators(野生动物救护员).They nursed the sick animals back to health,but as more and more animals were rescued,the medical expense became a big burden for them. I immediately determined to do something for them.I may be a kid,but why can't I do a fundraiser to help save more dogs?
My mom thought it was hard for an eleven-year-old girl to raise,but she told me to go ahead and try it anyway.I realized that I needed a name for the fundraiser and thought since I was trying to protect dogs' life,I would call my program Help Dogs.I decided that pet stores would be really good places to go with donation boxes and Help Dogs flyers (传单).I used little green Chinese take-out boxes,decorated with a picture of Tiko,one of the dogs I chose to help,and me.I wrote on each box “Help protect the life of dogs by donating a dollar”.I thought my actions might not raise much money for the dogs,but they can at least increase people's awareness of wild animals protection.
One afternoon,after all the boxes had been distributed throughout our community,I got a call from a local newspaper reporter who had seen one of my flyers. The reporter decided to do an article about Help Dogs.After the article came out,I waited for a few days before checking to see if there were any donations.
①开端:文章开始时,作者通过阅读一篇关于野狗Solo去世的报道,表达了自己对动物保护的关注,特别是在自己刚失去爱犬Kela之后。
②发展:作者决定通过组织募捐活动来帮助保护野生动物,尤其是帮助那些因为缺乏医疗照顾而濒临死亡的动物,尽管她只是一个十一岁的孩子。
③发展:她选择了合适的方式来筹集资金,创建了一个名为“Help Dogs”的募捐项目,并用装饰精美的盒子和传单来吸引人们的关注。
④情感起伏:虽然她对能否成功筹集到足够的资金感到不确定,但她依然坚持去做,并通过社区的支持开始有了初步的成效。
⑤伏笔:文章提到募捐活动的初步成功,并且通过报纸的报道,更多的人开始关注这个项目,作者还为自己未来的成功做了铺垫。
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第二步:续写构思
1.续写第一段首句:I was really nervous when I finally went to collect the money.
①上面第一段首句的衔接句:我不知道那些捐款箱里会不会有任何钱,心里充满了不安和疑虑。
②过渡句:然而,当我收集到第一个箱子时,我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛,箱子几乎装满了钞票!
③下面第二段首句的衔接句:我收到了超过三千美元的捐款,简直太令人激动和惊讶了。
2.续写第二段首句:I realized many people feel the same way as I did but didn't know how to help.
①上面第二段首句的衔接句:通过这次募捐活动,我意识到很多人和我一样关心动物的保护,但他们可能并不知道如何为此贡献自己的力量。
②过渡句:在我完成了募捐后,我决定创建一个网页,帮助别人也能像我一样组织募捐活动,支持保护动物。
③过渡句:这项工作非常辛苦,但我从中学到了一个重要的道理,那就是只要不断努力,就一定能够实现目标。
④主旨句:这次经历让我明白了:只要坚持不懈,我们每个人都可以为社会做出改变。
第三步:依据“构思”成文
I was really nervous when I finally went to collect the money.
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I realized many people feel the same way as I did but didn't know how to help.
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参考范文
I was really nervous when I finally went to collect the money.Would there be anything in the boxes? I wondered.I really wasn't sure that I could raise enough money.But when I collected the first box,I couldn't believe my eyes.The box was practically overflowing with dollar bills! It totaled over three thousand dollars! I was so excited and totally amazed at the amount of money that I had raised.I couldn't believe it!
I realized many people feel the same way as I did but didn't know how to help.Then,just when I had achieved what I thought was my highest goal,I created a web page to tell other people how to organize a fundraiser like the one that I did.People from all over the country began to call me to find out how to raise funds to help dogs in their areas.It was a lot of hard work but I learned that if you just keep going,you can accomplish anything.
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