内容正文:
英语·选择性必修第三册
写作。
书
[素养提升]
一、文体特点
书信属于应用文,包括自荐信、邀请信、投诉
信、感谢信、介绍信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信等。
写给编辑的信属于书信的一种。书信内容要具体
明确,必须将需要传达的信息表达清楚,以免对方
产生误解。语言要有礼貌且谦虚。
二、结构特点
此类文章分为五部分
(1)信头:写信人的姓名和地址要写在右上角,收
信人的姓名和地址要写在左上角。有时此部分可
省略。
(2)称呼:一般用Dear Editor。
(3)正文:信件的主要内容。首先提出问题,然后
分析问题并作决定,接下来写出自己的具体行动,
最后表明希望看到的改变后的结果并礼貌地结束
全文。
(4)信尾客套语:Sincerely/Truly yours,Yours
sincerely,/truly,Yours等。一般写在信的右下角
或左下角。
(5)签名:一般写在客套语的下面。
三、知识储备
常用表达句式
I didn't feel...
我感觉不……
I have difficulty/trouble(in)doing.../with...
我在…方面有困难。
I made up my mind to.../(was)determined to/
decided to...
我下定决心/决心/决定…
I realised that...
我意识到…
I stopped.·
我停止了…
I feel more...
我感觉更加…
I get...through...
我通过…变得…
[典题指导]
[写作任务]
假定你是李华,你校英语校报编辑正在就
“Healthy lifestyle'”这一主题面向全体学生征稿。请
你根据以下内容给编辑写一封信。
写作要点:
1.指出不良习惯:熬夜玩手机;
2.作出决定;
3.提出具体行动;
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表达升格
对应学生用书P52
信
4.表达预期结果。
注意:1.要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计人总
词数。
Dear Editor,
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
》[审题谋篇]
这是一封给编辑写的书信,围绕“Healthy lifes
tyle”主题,面向全体学生征稿,从内容上看本文应包
括四个主要内容;本文宜用一般现在时,一般过去时,
一般将来时,第一部分:介绍不良习惯,及造成的后
果。第二部分:作出决定,改掉不良习惯。第三部分:
制定具体措施。第四部分:坚定信心,定能成功。
[佳作展示]
Dear Editor,
I'm troubled by a serious problem.Recently I
have been very sleepy in class and have had no ener-
gy to do anything,which has greatly affected my
health and study.After starting high school,I felt
stressed out and always relaxed by staying up pla-
ying phone games.As a result,I lacked energy and
passion in the daytime.But now I have made up my
mind to change this situation.I will arrange the time
of using mobile phone reasonably.Instead,I will
read some relaxing books and take a warm bath be-
fore going to bed,which may help me get a sound
sleep.I believe I will become energetic again and en-
joy my study and life as before.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
》[名师点评]
本文要点齐全,结构完整,层次清晰,句式多样,
词汇丰富:
(1)本文使用了较高级的复杂句(含which引导的定
语从句)。
(2)本文使用了宾语从句。
(3)greatly affected,lacked energy,reasonably,a
sound sleep,energetic等词汇使用比较高档。
(4)as a result,instead,等过渡词汇的使用使句子连
贯流畅。
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UNIT 3 ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION
[学以致用]
[参考范文]
假设你是李华。最近,杂志HHealthy Life就中
Dear Editor,
学生的生活方式进行征稿。请你给编辑发一封电子
Here I would like to share my story with you.
As my study stress grew,there was a time when I
邮件投稿,包括以下内容:
couldn't sleep at night.Worst of all,I started
(1)过去你的生活方式以及问题所在;
smoking and became addicted.
(2)你做出改变的方法;
One day,I suddenly became aware that if left
(3)最后的结果。
unchecked,my bad habits would make me fail.
注意:(1)词数80左右:
Therefore,I decided to change myself.Whenever I
wanted to smoke,I chose to play basketball instead.
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Besides,I got up early to take exercise every day.
Now,there is no doubt that I am in high spir
its,concentrating on my study.
Yours,
Li Hua
UNIT 3
ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION
单元。新知预览
对应学生用书P54
重难预知]
starve
ecology
release
carbon
habitable
sustain
fuel
comprehensive
心
worldwide
trend
frequently
broadcast restrict
seize
reform
harmonious
词
submit
sensitive
conservation dozen
campaign
tolerate
l.have an impact/,effect on对…有影响
2.refer to参考;查阅:指的是
核3.be trapped in陷人
4.result in导致,结果是
5.in response to作为对…的回答/响应/反应
6.bring about引起
7.on behalf of代表
8.contribute to造成;促成;捐献
语9.dozens of很多,许多
10.carry out执行;贯彻;完成
1l.in effect有效,在实施中;实际上
12.make use of利用
单
直接引语和间接引语
法
重点句
1.There is little/,no doubt that...句型
2.with的复合结构
3.现在分词(短语)作状语,表示结果
[读图探新丁
绿水青訕
积极道与垃级分类
就是金山银山
明护色家园
子量获开服
Talk about the following questions in pairs and answer them.
1.How about the environment in your neibourhood in recent years?
(Various)Good-clear sky,green hills,no garbage...
2.Please translate the following into English.
绿水青山就是金山银山
Clear waters and green hills are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver.
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