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UNIT 1 ART
写作。表达升格
对应学生用书P27
参观艺术展的通告/通知
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The art exhibition will take place in,.这次艺术
一、文体特点
展览将在(某地)进行。
通告是上级对下级、组织对成员或平行单位之间
As we all know,it's a good chance/opportunity
部署工作、传达事情等所使用的一种应用文文体。
for us to get some art knowledge.正如大家所知,
这是一个让我们了解一些艺术知识的好机会。
通告内容主要包括通告的对象、事由、时间、地点、
The highlights of the exhibition are...这次展览
注意事项及要求等。通告以言简意赅为主要特
的亮点是…
点,用词表达比较口语化。通告中提及的事情都
We will exchange ideas after the visit.参观过后
是计划要做的,时态多用将来时。
我们会交流想法。
二、结构特点
Everyone should take..每个人都应该携带…
(1)开头写称呼语,即通告的对象(也可以省略)。常
Please turn off/shut off/switch off your cell-
Ladies and gentlemen,Boys and girls,Teach-
phone during the visit.请在参观过程中关闭
ers and students,Dear friends,Dear comrades
手机。
(2)通告的正文往往开门见山,直接说明通告的要点,
We will gather/meet at the school gate at...
即who,what,when,where,.why等;关于参观展
我们将于…(某时刻)在学校门口集合/见面。
Please tell it to each other and get there on time.
览的通告的主要内容常为:时间和地点、展览内
请互相转告,准时到达。
容、展览亮点及注意事项等。
That'sall.Thank you.就这些。谢谢。
三、知识储备
Everyone is required to attend it on time.每个人
常用表达句式
都必须按时参加。
Attention,please.请注意。
[典题指导]
May I have your attention,please?I have anan-
[写作任务]
nouncement to make..请大家注意听我讲话,好
你校的艺术俱乐部正在举行名家艺术展览,请根
吗?我有一个通告要宣布一下。
据以下内容,写一篇口头通知。
Please be quiet,everyone!I have something im-
(1)展出内容:徐悲鸿的名作,其中亮点是20世纪40
portant to tell you..大家请安静一下!我有重要
年代的作品《六马图》。
(2)本周六早上8点在学校门口集合。
的事情要告诉你们。
(3)观后要写艺术评论。
In order to...,the Students'Union has decided
注意:(1)词数80左右;
to organise some students to see an art exhibi-
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
tion.为了…,学生会决定组织一些学生去参观
艺术展览。
On...,we will go to see an art exhibition.
在…(时间),我们将去参观一次艺术展览。
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英语·选择性必修第三册
[审题谋篇]
⑤动词-ing形式作定语。
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题
⑥be required to write为被动形式,巧妙地表达了参
体裁:应用文一口头通知
观后的要求,句型具有多变性。
(主题:参观徐悲鸿艺术展
[学以致用]
(2)二定:确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关)
假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了让学生对中国
时态:主要使用一般现在时
传统艺术作品有所了解,你校将举办一个中学生艺术
(人称:以第一、三人称为主
作品展览会,请你以校学生会的名义用英文拟一则通
(3)三明确
告。内容包括:
明确写作要点:口头通知的开头→概括介绍展览
1.展览的时间和地点;
的内容→注意事项
2.展览内容;
(4)四分段(与写作要点息息相关)
3.参观时的注意事项。
结合写作要点分为三个段落。
注意:1.词数80左右;
●[佳作展示]
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数;
Attention,please.I have an announcement to
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
make
参考词汇:艺术作品展览会art exhibition
An exhibition on the works of Xu Beihong is
Boys and girls,
being held in our school art club.The highlight of
May I have your attention,please?
the works on display is The Six Horses,which was
paintedin the 1940s by Xu Beihong.There are six
horses running towards you in the painting,looking
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wonderfully alive.Therefore,you will feel they are
Boys and girls,
going out of the painting and into the room.
May I have your attention,please?
We are to get together at 8:00 a.m.this Satur-
In order to make us get some art knowledge,
day at the gate of our school.We are required to
our school has decided to hold a High School
write a review about the works.Hence,make sure
Students'Art Exhibition from next Monday to Fri-
to observe and admire them carefully.
day.It will take place in our school's exhibition
[名师点评]
hall.Some extraordinary artworks created by high
本文要点全面,结构流畅,词语多变,且句型使用
school students will be displayed,including Chinese
较为高档。
paintings,calligraphy works as well as delicate
①on the works of Xu Beihong,介词短语作定语,修
craftwork.The highlight of the exhibition is a paint-
饰an exhibition;
ing by a boy in Senior 2,which has won an interna-
②highlight“亮点”,为高档词汇;
tional prize.All of the works will definitely give a
③which was painted..为定语从句,使用恰到好处,
clearer picture of the charm of our Chinese culture.
避免了单句的枯燥罗列;
By the way,photos are not permitted to take during
④There be句型十非谓语动词running,.,,彰显了语
the visit.It is also bad manners to talk loudly in the
言功底。
exhibition hall.I'm sure you will enjoy it.
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