专题6 第4讲 绘制情节地图——续写故事6大模型（PPT课件）-【正禾一本通】2026年高考英语二轮专题复习高效讲义

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了家庭亲情、成长蜕变等6大核心情节模型，通过考点权重分析明确“情节逻辑连贯”“情感升华”等高频考查维度，构建了“情节地图绘制”的系统答题框架。 课件亮点在于“模型拆解+真题演练+思维建模”的备考策略，如以“人与自然——灵性动物”模型为例，结合高考真题案例解析“环境描写烘托”“情感线索贯穿”技巧，培养学生的思维品质和语言表达能力。特设“题型强化练”模块，帮助学生熟练掌握情节发展逻辑，教师可据此实施精准教学，提升复习效率。

高三二轮专题复习高效讲义 英 语 读后续写 专题六 模型(一)　人与自我——家庭亲情 绘制情节地图——续写故事6大模型 第四讲 01 02 03 06 07 模型(二)　人与自我——成长蜕变 模型(三)　人与社会——人间温情 模型(六)　人与自然——灵性动物 题型强化练 04 05 模型(四)　人与自我——比赛收获 模型(五)　人与社会——历险脱困 模型(一)　人与自我——家庭亲情 模型(二)　人与自我——成长蜕变 模型(三)　人与社会——人间温情 模型(四)　人与自我——比赛收获 模型(五)　人与社会——历险脱困 模型(六)　人与自然——灵性动物 ONTENT CONTENT 谢谢观看！ 二、构建微型情节 (一)困境描写 1.意外发现昏迷的邻居 情节线索：Mary发觉事情不对劲→带着孩子走到他们家→开门发现孩子的妈妈 昏迷 Something didn’t feel right (感觉有些事情不对劲).“Why would anyone leave their kids unattended on the shore？”Mary thought.She grabbed the kids’ hands and walked them to their home，across from her own house.As Mary opened the door，she found the young mother lying unconscious on the kitchen floor (发现年轻的母亲晕倒在厨房地板上). 2.家中失火，亲人被困 情节线索：我们把车停在社区→跳下车朝房子跑去→大喊Anna 在里面→试图进入被阻 We finally pulled into my neighbourhood which was full of fire trucks，police cars，and black ash (到处都是消防车、警车和灰烬).We jumped out of the car and started running to the father and I screamed at the top of my voice (扯着嗓子大叫)，“Anna is in the house！”We attempted to enter the house but the police officers grabbed our arms. (二)助人过程 1.寻找家人 情节线索：我抱着女孩穿过人群，让其回忆父母之前的位置→不断询问路人→询问无果仍不放弃 Tenderly，I picked the girl up，carrying her through the crowd as I patiently kept asking her to recall (我抱着那个女孩穿过人群，耐心地反复让她回忆)where her parents had been.I carried her to the fence，constantly asking the passers-by (不断询问路人)，“Is this your child？” Though numerous passers-by said no，I didn’t give up. 2.求助老师化解矛盾 情节线索：Sarah感到沮丧和绝望，找Katie 老师求助→了解Sarah的遭遇后，Katie感到很抱歉→Katie去Sarah的宿舍→与Sarah和Lily谈心 Depressed and hopeless，Sarah ran to the hall to seek help (跑到大厅寻求帮助) from their teacher Katie.After knowing what had happened to Sarah，Katie felt sorry.She went to Sarah’s dormitory and had a long conversation with (与……进行了长时间的交谈) Sarah and Lily.Katie shared her experience in getting on well with her roommate. As Holly tasted her cake，her face glowing with delight，a waiter approached Kate quietly and gestured for her to step aside.“Ma’am，the cost is going to double，” the waiter said.“Double？ Why？” she responded，panic bubbling up in her voice.“The recipe for the cake has changed，and you will have to pay $100 now，” the waiter explained.Her throat tightened.“$100 for a cake？！ But...I can’t afford it，” she whispered.“I’m sorry，ma’am.But you’ll have to pay，” the waiter said. With trembling hands，Kate returned to the table，forcing a smile for Holly.When it was time to leave，Kate felt her heart pounding as she asked Holly to wait by the door.Her mind raced，trying to figure out what she could do.Her hands were trembling as she spoke.But to her surprise，the waiter responded，“The bill has already been paid by a woman.” Tears of relief sprang to Kate’s eyes.“Do you know who she was？” Kate asked，her voice thick with emotion. 情节模型 一、模型整体架构 即时演练 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2025·山东省临沂市二模) A Life-Saving Hero My wife’s job took her out of town a lot and I needed some company.So one day，I went to the local animal-rescue center.The little cocker spaniel (可卡猎犬) trembling in a cage caught my eye right away.She had scared eyes and I could tell she longed to be picked up and hugged.I gently petted her soft fur，and to my surprise，she stopped shaking.That was that.I filled out the paperwork and took my new dog—Honey home. [参考范文] I knew I had to do something to save us.Blood was running down my leg from the branch that had pierced the roof.Pain shot through my body，but I couldn’t give up.I tried to move，but my leg was trapped.Honey barked loudly，her eyes full of fear and concern.She jumped out of the seat and started licking my face，as if trying to keep me awake.Then，she ran out through a broken window and disappeared into the woods.I didn’t know where she was going，but I prayed she would find help. [参考范文] Dear Ryan， Hope this email finds you well！I’m writing to share with you my experience of the science lecture on “Green Energy and Future Life” hosted in our school last week.The details are as follows. First of all，a wide range of images and videos were displayed to arouse our awareness of environmental protection and anticipation for future smart homes. Additionally，a distinguished expert delivered a fascinating speech，introducing various green energy sources like solar and wind power and demonstrating how they reshaped our daily life.Moreover，what impressed me most was the engaging Q&A session where we explored how green energy curbed environmental issues. 　　Two days later，Eleanor knocked on Eric’s door after being released from the hospital.Behind her was Maya，the dog whose tail wagged wildly with excitement. “Thanks，Eric.Without you，I wouldn’t be here，” Eleanor said，her eyes brimming with heartfelt gratitude.“Maya led you to me—she’s my little savior，and so are you.” Eric invited her in with a smile on his face，and after some tea，Eleanor revealed she had been feeding birds for years，unable to bear their suffering in winter. Touched，Eric offered to assist her in the future.From that day on，their bond grew stronger，united by mutual kindness and the unexpected companionship formed on a freezing morning. $