Unit 6 写作专项：Writing a Short Story About Wisdom 2025-2026学年沪教版英语八年级上册

沪教（牛津）英语八上 Unit 6 写作专项 Writing a Short Story About Wisdom 写作目标 结合本单元“古代故事与智慧”的核心目标，能写一篇关于智慧的短篇故事，清晰讲述情节并点明寓意。 1. 能正确区分并使用现在完成时（present perfect）与一般过去时（simple past）讲述故事； 2. 能运用本单元描述故事与智慧的词汇（如 capture, strategy, wisdom, celebrate）撰写叙事文； 3. 能遵循“场景铺垫—情节发展—结局升华”的三幕式结构，语言生动、逻辑连贯，贴合“讲故事”的写作场景，完成80–120词短文。 题目解析 1. 体裁：记叙文（短篇故事），要求讲述一个蕴含智慧的古代故事（如“田忌赛马”“空城计”），通过情节展现人物的智谋，并点明从中获得的启示，契合本单元“从古代故事中学习”的目标。 2. 人称：以第三人称（he, she, they）为主，客观讲述故事；也可采用第一人称（I）进行角色代入。 3. 时态：核心用一般过去时（描述故事的发生、发展和结局）；用现在完成时（在故事开头或结尾点明至今的影响或启示）。 4. 核心要求 · 内容：写清故事发生的时间、地点、人物，以及核心情节（如何运用智慧解决问题），最后点明寓意。 · 格式：包含开头（场景铺垫）、正文（情节发展）、结尾（结局与启示）等叙事文基本部分。 · 字数：80–120词，句子以简单句和复合句为主，适当运用本单元所学的时态对比。 典型例题 请你以 Tian Ji's Horse Race（田忌赛马）为题，写一篇80–120词的短篇故事，展现古代军事家孙膑的智慧。 思路点拨 1. 场景铺垫（Part 1）：首先交代故事发生的背景（战国时期、齐国大将田忌与齐王赛马），点明矛盾（田忌的马总是输）。 2. 情节发展（Part 2）：接着讲述核心情节——孙膑献策，用下等马对上等马，上等马对中等马，中等马对下等马，最终三局两胜。 3. 结局升华（Part 3）：最后点明结局（田忌获胜）和启示（懂得策略和取舍，就能以弱胜强）。 写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：场景铺垫（Part 1 ） 写作目的：交代背景，制造悬念。 必写要素：时间 + 地点 + 人物 + 矛盾 基础句式：Long ago, in the Warring States period, there lived a general named Tian Ji. He often raced horses with the king of Qi, but he always lost. 示例：Long ago, in ancient China, there lived a general named Tian Ji. He often raced horses with the king, but he always felt sad because he never won. 第二段：情节发展（Part 2 ） 写作目的：讲述核心情节，展现智慧，运用本单元语法。 必写要素：智者献策 + 具体策略 + 实施过程 基础句式：One day, his friend Sun Bin gave him a clever idea. He said, "Use your worst horse against the king's best horse..." Then, they won two out of three races. 示例：One day, his friend Sun Bin had a clever plan. He told Tian Ji to use his worst horse first, then his best, and finally his second-best. This way, they won two races and finally beat the king. 第三段：结局升华（Part 3 ） 写作目的：点明结局，升华寓意。 必写要素：结局 + 启示 基础句式：Tian Ji finally won! This story teaches us that wisdom and good strategy are more important than strength alone. 示例：Tian Ji finally won the race! This story has taught me that sometimes, using our brains is better than just being strong. 范文 英文 Tian Ji's Horse Race Long ago, in ancient China, there lived a general named Tian Ji. He often raced horses with the king, but he always felt sad because he never won.（场景铺垫，点明矛盾） One day, his friend Sun Bin had a clever plan. He told Tian Ji to use his worst horse first, then his best, and finally his second-best. This way, they lost the first race but won the next two.（情节发展，运用一般过去时） Tian Ji finally beat the king! This story has taught me that wisdom and good strategy are more important than just being strong.（结局升华，运用现在完成时点明启示） 中文翻译 田忌赛马 很久以前，在中国古代，有一位名叫田忌的将军。他经常和国王赛马，但他总是因为从未赢过而感到难过。 有一天，他的朋友孙膑想出了一个聪明的计划。他告诉田忌先用最差的马，然后是最好的马，最后是第二好的马。这样，他们输了第一场比赛，但赢了接下来的两场。 田忌终于打败了国王！这个故事告诉我，智慧和良好的策略比仅仅强壮更重要。 素材积累 短语 1. race horses — 赛马 2. a clever plan — 一个聪明的计划 3. beat the king — 打败国王 4. wisdom and good strategy — 智慧和良好的策略 5. more important than — 比……更重要 6. capture the city — 攻占城市 7. pretend to sail away — 假装扬帆离去 8. celebrate victory — 庆祝胜利 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 Long ago, there lived a ... named ... Long ago, there lived a wise man named Sima Guang. One day, he had a clever idea. One day, he had a clever idea to save the boy. This story has taught me that ... This story has taught me that we should never give up. Wisdom is more important than strength. Teamwork is more important than personal glory. 好句集锦 1. True wisdom is not just about knowing what to do, but also knowing when to do it.（真正的智慧不仅在于知道做什么，更在于知道何时去做。） 2. Sometimes, losing a battle can lead to winning the war, if you have the wisdom to see the bigger picture.（有时候，如果你有智慧看到大局，输掉一场战斗可能会赢得整场战争。） 3. The stories of the past are not just tales; they are mirrors that reflect the wisdom we need for the future.（过去的故事不仅仅是传说，它们是映照我们未来所需智慧的镜子。） 学生写作填空练习版 [Name of the Story] Long ago, in [time/place], there lived a [character] named [name]. He often [problem], but he always [feeling] because he never [result]. One day, his friend [wise character] had a clever plan. He told him to [strategy]. This way, they [action] and finally [result]. [Character] finally [outcome]! This story has taught me that [lesson]. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $