Unit 3 Growing Up单元话题写作思路点拨和写作专练-2025-2026学年人教版八年级英语下册

2025-2026学年八年级英语下册单元话题写作思路点拨和写作专练 Unit 3 Growing Up 写作思路 一、单元写作主题 Growing up / My growing up / How I grow up 主题：成长、变化、懂事、学会帮助、理解父母 二、标准三段式写作结构 1. 开头：点题——我长大了 I’m growing up day by day. I have changed a lot in the past few years. I’m not a little child anymore. 2. 中间：写2–3个变化（重点） 从这三类里选2点写： 1. 生活自理 I can look after myself. I can do housework, like cleaning and cooking. 2. 理解父母 I understand my parents better. I don’t argue with them anymore. 3. 学会担当/努力学习 I study harder than before. I know I should be responsible. 可用连接词： First,… Second,… Besides,… What’s more,… 3. 结尾：总结成长感悟 Growing up makes me happy and strong. I will keep trying to be a better person. I’m really proud of myself. 三、万能高分句型 I have changed a lot since I grew up. I used to be lazy, but now I’m hard-working. I learn to help my parents with housework. I understand love and responsibility. Growing up is a happy journey. 四、考场范文（60–80词，直接背） How I Grow Up I’m growing up and I have changed a lot. First, I can help my parents do housework now. I know they are tired. Second, I study harder than before. I don’t make them worry about me. Besides, I learn to be more patient and understand others. Growing up makes me better. I will keep trying to be a good kid. 写作专练 1．以My Experience of Growing Up为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，分享你成长中的一次经历。 要求：1.结合Unit 3核心词汇/短语（deal with、be proud of、control、not only…but also…等）； 2.运用本单元核心语法； 3.语句通顺，无超纲词汇，逻辑清晰。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 My Experience of Growing Up Last month, I argued with my best friend. I said hurtful words and felt very blue later. My coach told me to deal with the problem bravely. I controlled my temper and apologized to him. We cleared the air and became friends again. I learned that growing up means being responsible. Not only should I care about myself, but also I should consider others’ feelings. I am proud of myself for solving the problem wisely. This experience taught me a valuable lesson. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：围绕成长经历展开，需使用指定核心词汇、短语和语法，描述一次具体经历及感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点明经历（时间、事件）。 第二步：描述经历过程与困难，使用核心词汇。 第三步：总结收获与成长，运用指定句型。 [亮点词汇] ①argue with sb.和某人争吵 ②deal with处理 ③be proud of为……自豪 [高分句型] ①I learned that growing up means being responsible.（that引导的宾语从句） ②Not only should I care about myself, but also I should consider others’ feelings.（not only...but also...结构） 2．你是Tom，想给你的笔友Jack写一封信，分享你的成长变化。 内容包括： (1) 你过去的样子（比如害羞、不喜欢运动）； (2) 你现在的变化（比如变得开朗、喜欢打篮球、养成阅读习惯）； (3) 你对未来的期望（比如继续保持好习惯，学习新技能）。 作文要求： (1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (2) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my growth recently. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can share your growth stories with me soon! Yours, Tom 【答案】例文： Dear Jack, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my growth recently. In the past, I used to be shy and quiet. I didn’t like doing sports at all. But now, I am quite different. I have become outgoing and active. I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. Also, I have developed a good habit of reading books every day. In the future, I will keep these good habits and try to learn some new skills. I hope you can share your growth stories with me soon! Yours, Tom 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”、“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：描述过去的自己，性格内向且不喜欢运动； 第二步：介绍现在的变化，变得开朗活跃，喜欢打篮球并养成了阅读习惯； 第三步：表达对未来的展望，希望保持好习惯并学习新技能。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②be different from与……不同 ③outgoing开朗的 ④develop a habit养成习惯 ⑤in the future在未来 [高分句型] ①In the past, I used to be shy and quiet. (used to do sth.过去常常是) ②I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. (enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事) 3．在人生的道路上，谁都会遇到困难和挫折，只要勇敢地面对并且战胜它们，我们就是生活的强者。某英文网站正在开展以“Dealing with problems”为题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你曾经遇到过什么困难，你是怎样解决的，以及你解决困难后的感受。 要点： 1. What problem did you have? 2. What did you do to solve it? 3. How did you feel? 注意： 1.文章须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3.词数80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dealing with problems People always have some problems in their lives. __________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dealing with problems People always have some problems in their lives. I had a problem with my friends two years ago. I couldn’t get on well with them, so I felt very upset. I talked about my problem with my teacher and she gave me some advice. I followed her advice. First, I joined a club and met some new friends. Then in the class, I started to have some short conversations with my friends. It was difficult at first, but the more I tried, the easier it became. Finally, I solved my problem and I felt very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇话题作文 ； ②时态：一般过去时为主 ； ③提示：围绕个人遇到的困难、解决方法和感受展开，需包含三个要点并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用2-3句话描述遇到的困难（英语学习困难及情绪）。 第二步，用并列方式说明解决方法（制定计划、练习、求助）。 第三步，说明努力后的进步和感受，并总结感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①upset沮丧的 ； ②get on well with相处融洽； ③have some short conversations with与……有简短对话； [高分句型] ①I talked about my problem with my teacher and she gave me some advice.（并列结构） ②It was difficult at first, but the more I tried, the easier it became.（比较级） 4．假设你有一个影响你成长的重要人物（如老师、家人、朋友），请写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 这个人是谁，你们之间的关系； 2. 他/她对你产生了什么影响，具体经历是什么； 3. 你从这次影响中收获了什么。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Important Person in My Growth My English teacher Miss Li is the most important person who influenced my growth. I used to be poor at English and was afraid to speak it. One day, Miss Li noticed my problem. She asked me to talk with her after class and encouraged me not to give up. She spent extra time teaching me pronunciation and grammar every week. With her help, I became more confident. I started to take part in English competitions and even won a prize.   Miss Li taught me that perseverance leads to success. I will always remember her kindness and guidance. Now I love English and hope to become an English teacher like her in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍人物身份及关系； 第二步：描述具体经历，说明其影响； 第三步：总结个人收获与感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①used to过去常常 ②be poor at不擅长 ③confident自信的 [高分句型] ①My English teacher Miss Li is the most important person who influenced my growth.（who引导的定语从句） ②I understand that with effort, we can overcome any difficulty.（that引导的宾语从句） 5．假设你参加了学校的“成长转折点”主题征文活动，请写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 你的成长转折点是什么（如一次比赛、一位老师的帮助等）； 2. 这个转折点发生的过程及对你的影响； 3. 你从中获得的成长感悟。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Growth Turning Point The turning point in my growth was joining the school volunteer club. Before that, I was selfish and only cared about myself. Last year, I volunteered at a children’s home with my classmates. I helped the kids with their homework and played games with them. Seeing their happy smiles, I realized how meaningful it is to help others. Since then, I often help my parents with housework and care for my classmates. This experience taught me that growing up means learning to give. I used to be self-centered, but now I am kind and responsible. I know that helping others not only makes them happy but also helps myself grow into a better person. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开门见山点明转折点事件（加入学校志愿者俱乐部），并对比转折前后的自己（从自私到懂得付出）。 第二步、按时间顺序简述经历（在儿童之家做志愿的具体行动，如辅导作业、陪伴游戏），并点明感悟契机（看到孩子们的笑容意识到助人的意义）。 第三步、总结成长感悟（成长意味着学会付出，帮助他人既快乐别人也成就自己），呼应主题并升华主旨。 [亮点词汇] ①turning point转折点 ②rself-centered以自我为中心的 ③responsible有责任感的 [高分句型] ①Seeing their happy smiles, I realized how meaningful it is to help others.（运用了现在分词作状语的结构） ②This experience taught me that growing up means learning to give.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） ③I know that helping others not only makes them happy but also helps myself grow into a better person.（运用了“not only…but also…” 并列结构和宾语从句） 6．成长中你可曾有过一种深刻情绪（如开心、难过、紧张等）？请以“Emotions in my growth”为题，讲述一下引发这种情绪的具体事例，并谈一谈你从中学到的东西或带来的改变。 注意： （1）词数80左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Emotions in my growth _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Emotions in my growth One of the deepest emotions in my growth was anxiety before my first English speech. My heart raced, and my hands turned cold. However, I took a deep breath, stepped onto the stage, and began to speak. Though my voice trembled a little, I made it to the end. The warm applause from my classmates filled me with great joy and relief. This experience taught me that courage is not about having no fear, but about moving forward despite it. It helped me build confidence for future challenges. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”（描述经历）和“一般现在时”（总结感悟）为主； ③提示：需包含成长中经历的深刻情绪、引发情绪的事例、事件过程及从中得到的收获，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、完整，词数约80词，标题已给出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，说明成长中深刻的情绪是第一次英语演讲前的焦虑； 第二步，描述演讲前的紧张状态及自己的应对（深呼吸、登台演讲）； 第三步，讲述演讲的结果（虽声音颤抖但完成演讲，收获掌声），并总结从中得到的感悟（勇气是克服恐惧前行，提升了应对挑战的信心）。 [亮点词汇] ①heart raced心跳加速 ②warm applause热烈的掌声 ③despite尽管 [高分句型] ①Though my voice trembled a little, I made it to the end.（though引导让步状语从句） ②This experience taught me that courage is not about having no fear, but about moving forward despite it.（that引导宾语从句） 7．学习和生活的道路从来都不是一帆风顺，你一定曾因学习的问题、家人给予的压力等感到焦虑，但幸运的是你的朋友给予了你帮助和建议。假如你是李华，针对这些难忘的经历，请给你的朋友写一封感谢信。参考要点：1.曾经的压力或焦虑(成绩下降，人际关系差等)；           2.朋友给予的建议或帮助；           3.感谢；           4.…… 要求：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；       2.不能出现真实姓名和班级等信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tom,　 I am so lucky to have a friend like you. Last month, I felt really stressed because my grades dropped suddenly. My parents kept arguing about my study, and I even started to avoid talking to classmates. One day, you noticed I was upset and asked me to take a walk with you. You listened quietly as I cried and said, “It’s okay to feel tired. Let’s find a way together.” You helped me make a study plan and encouraged me to talk to my parents. When I was afraid to speak, you said, “I’ll be with you.” Thanks to you, I slowly improved my math and had a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. Tom, you’re not just a friend—you’re my sunshine. I’m so grateful to have you by my side!　                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,　 Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 书信作文 ②时态：一般过去时态+一般现在时态 ③提示：涵盖所有要点，并适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明压力原因 第二步：详述朋友帮助 第三步：表达感谢 [亮点词汇] ① avoid避免 ②notice注意 ③encourage鼓励 [高分句型] ① My parents kept arguing about my study, and I even started to avoid talking to classmates. （并列句） ②One day, you noticed I was upset and asked me to take a walk with you. （ask sb to do sth） 8．请以“My Growing-Up Story”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，讲述一件让你成长的事情，要求用上现在完成时、情态动词should，语句通顺、逻辑清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Growing-Up Story One unforgettable experience has really made me grow up, and it has changed me a lot. I used to be very shy and afraid to speak in public. My English teacher noticed this and encouraged me to take part in the school speech contest. I practiced hard every day after school and asked her for advice many times. Finally, I won the third prize. This experience tells me we should never be afraid of challenges. Facing difficulties bravely and keeping trying can make us become a better, more confident person step by step. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时； ③提示：根据题干要求完成写作，可适当补充细节，注意行文连贯，书写规范。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述过去的性格或情况； 第二步，叙述具体成长事件，突出行动过程； 第三步，说明变化结果，总结成长意义。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up成长 ②in public公开地 ③step by step逐步地 [高分句型] This experience tells me we should never be afraid of challenges. (宾语从句)   学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年八年级英语下册单元话题写作思路点拨和写作专练 Unit 3 Growing Up 写作思路 一、单元写作主题 Growing up / My growing up / How I grow up 主题：成长、变化、懂事、学会帮助、理解父母 二、标准三段式写作结构 1. 开头：点题——我长大了 I’m growing up day by day. I have changed a lot in the past few years. I’m not a little child anymore. 2. 中间：写2–3个变化（重点） 从这三类里选2点写： 1. 生活自理 I can look after myself. I can do housework, like cleaning and cooking. 2. 理解父母 I understand my parents better. I don’t argue with them anymore. 3. 学会担当/努力学习 I study harder than before. I know I should be responsible. 可用连接词： First,… Second,… Besides,… What’s more,… 3. 结尾：总结成长感悟 Growing up makes me happy and strong. I will keep trying to be a better person. I’m really proud of myself. 三、万能高分句型 I have changed a lot since I grew up. I used to be lazy, but now I’m hard-working. I learn to help my parents with housework. I understand love and responsibility. Growing up is a happy journey. 四、考场范文（60–80词，直接背） How I Grow Up I’m growing up and I have changed a lot. First, I can help my parents do housework now. I know they are tired. Second, I study harder than before. I don’t make them worry about me. Besides, I learn to be more patient and understand others. Growing up makes me better. I will keep trying to be a good kid. 写作专练 1．以My Experience of Growing Up为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，分享你成长中的一次经历。 要求：1.结合Unit 3核心词汇/短语（deal with、be proud of、control、not only…but also…等）； 2.运用本单元核心语法； 3.语句通顺，无超纲词汇，逻辑清晰。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你是Tom，想给你的笔友Jack写一封信，分享你的成长变化。 内容包括： (1) 你过去的样子（比如害羞、不喜欢运动）； (2) 你现在的变化（比如变得开朗、喜欢打篮球、养成阅读习惯）； (3) 你对未来的期望（比如继续保持好习惯，学习新技能）。 作文要求： (1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (2) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my growth recently. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can share your growth stories with me soon! Yours, Tom 3．在人生的道路上，谁都会遇到困难和挫折，只要勇敢地面对并且战胜它们，我们就是生活的强者。某英文网站正在开展以“Dealing with problems”为题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你曾经遇到过什么困难，你是怎样解决的，以及你解决困难后的感受。 要点： 1. What problem did you have? 2. What did you do to solve it? 3. How did you feel? 注意： 1.文章须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3.词数80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dealing with problems People always have some problems in their lives. __________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你有一个影响你成长的重要人物（如老师、家人、朋友），请写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 这个人是谁，你们之间的关系； 2. 他/她对你产生了什么影响，具体经历是什么； 3. 你从这次影响中收获了什么。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你参加了学校的“成长转折点”主题征文活动，请写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 你的成长转折点是什么（如一次比赛、一位老师的帮助等）； 2. 这个转折点发生的过程及对你的影响； 3. 你从中获得的成长感悟。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．成长中你可曾有过一种深刻情绪（如开心、难过、紧张等）？请以“Emotions in my growth”为题，讲述一下引发这种情绪的具体事例，并谈一谈你从中学到的东西或带来的改变。 注意： （1）词数80左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Emotions in my growth 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7．学习和生活的道路从来都不是一帆风顺，你一定曾因学习的问题、家人给予的压力等感到焦虑，但幸运的是你的朋友给予了你帮助和建议。假如你是李华，针对这些难忘的经历，请给你的朋友写一封感谢信。参考要点：1.曾经的压力或焦虑(成绩下降，人际关系差等)；           2.朋友给予的建议或帮助；           3.感谢；           4.…… 要求：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；       2.不能出现真实姓名和班级等信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．请以“My Growing-Up Story”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，讲述一件让你成长的事情，要求用上现在完成时、情态动词should，语句通顺、逻辑清晰。 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