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英 语
七年级下册 人教版
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Unit 2 No Rules, No Order
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How can rules help us?
Period 5 2a—3d(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.放松;休息 _______
2.建议;意见 ________
3.不快乐的 _________
4.对某人严格 ___________________
5.要求某人做某事 __________________
6.整理床铺 ______________
relax
advice
unhappy
be strict with sb
ask sb to do sth
make the bed
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】Don’t be late for school.(Don’t+动词原形)
→仿写:不要在河里游泳。
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Don’t swim in the river.
8.【教材原句】She has to walk in the hallway.(have to+动词原形)
→仿写:因为大雨,我不得不待在家里。
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I have to stay at home because of the heavy rain.
9.【教材原句】There are too many rules in my life!(there be)
→仿写:图书馆有许多人在安静地学习。
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There are many people studying quietly in the library.
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10.【教材原句】But they can help you to become a better person.[help sb (to)
do sth]
→仿写:规则帮助我们成为更好的学生。
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The rules help us (to) become better students.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Dear Susan,
I’m glad to share with you the rules I have to follow at home and school
(点明写信目的).
At home, I must finish homework on time and help with housework, like
cleaning or cooking.Also, I’m not allowed to use my phone after 9 p.m.
(介绍家庭规则)These rules teach me time management and responsibility. At
school, we have to wear uniforms every day and keep the campus
clean.Moreover, we must listen carefully in class and respect teachers.(介绍学校
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规则)Though sometimes strict, . .these rules help me focus better and build good
habits.I used to complain, but now I understand rules shape us into better people.
(表明自己对规则的看法)They make life orderly and meaningful.
What about you?What rules do you have to follow?
Yours,
Li Hua#1.5
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025浙江金华调研]不以规矩,不能成方圆。有规矩的家庭更能培养出人
格独立、德行兼优的孩子。假如你是中学生Mary,你的笔友Eric来信询问你的家
规和你对家规的看法。请你根据下面的提示给他回一封邮件。
提示问题:
(1)What can/must you do?
(2)What can’t you do?
(3)What are your ideas about these family rules?
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写作要求:
(1)包括提示中的三个要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
(3)至少80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going?____
Best wishes!
Yours,
Mary
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:家规及对家规的看法
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列#4
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Dear Eric,
How’s everything going? You asked
about my family rules. So here they are.
At home, I must finish my homework
①every day and do chores ① .I can choose
my own clothes to wear and plan some of
my free time.However, there are things I
can’t do. ② For example, I can’t stay up
late playing video games or eat junk food
① every day. ________________________________
①通过列举 finish my homework、
do chores、can’t stay up late
playing video games or eat junk
food,将家规具象化,避免空谈,
使读者对家规内容有直观感受。
②“However, there are things I
can’t do.” 中用转折词自然过渡,增
强文章连贯性,展现出作者良好的
语言驾驭能力。
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I think these rules are important ③
because they help me stay organized
③ .They also teach me to respect others’
time and effort ③ .Overall, I believe family
rules play a crucial role in shaping our
character. ③ They help us to become better
people ③ .
Best wishes!
Yours,
Mary ③从 I think these rules are
important到help me stay organized
和teach me to respect others’ time
and effort,再到family rules play a
crucial role in shaping our character
及help us to become better people
的感悟升华,情感逐渐深入,自然
流露出对家规的认可与重视。
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文章采用 “总—分—总” 结构,开篇以回应来信自然引出家规主题,起到总起作
用;中间段落具体列举必须完成作业、做家务等家规,清晰分述;结尾从主观认
知到客观影响,点明家规对塑造性格、助力成长的重要性,首尾呼应,层层递
进,整体结构严谨。
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第4阶 实战演练
创文明城市,你我都是主角。假如你是李华,你被学校评为“文明风尚好少
年”。请你根据以下提示,向同学们介绍你的文明行为,树立文明典范,号召大家
践行文明规范,共创文明城市。
内容:(1)你的爱好和特长;
(2)你的健康生活方式(如饮食、运动);
(3)你在校遵守的文明规则。
要求:(1)不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)书写工整、规范;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
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Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. It’s my honour to be a cultured
teenager. Let me introduce myself.____
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【参考范文】
Hello, boys and girls.My name’s Li Hua.It’s my honour to be a
cultured teenager.Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well.Every morning I
get up at six o’clock.At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school because
it is very healthy.I have lunch at school at 12:00.And I usually play
basketball with my friends after school.In my daily life, I always go
jogging with my friends.Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also
cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
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At school, we must arrive on time.We must wear school uniforms
every day.Although these rules are strict, I believe they are
beneficial to us.
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Value statement:Nothing can be achieved without rules.
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