摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕七年级下册“Unit 3 Keep Fit”主题,聚焦写作训练,从话题词汇(如jog, exercise)、佳句仿写(如教材原句仿写)到范文模板、真题赏析,构建从基础输入到高阶输出的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握健康主题写作。
其亮点在于以核心素养为导向,通过词汇拓展(如“work out”多义解析)提升语言能力,借助范文逻辑分析(分点论述运动重要性)培养思维品质,结合期中真题实战演练强化学习能力。教师可直接使用结构化资源提升教学效率,学生能系统提升写作技能,实现从模仿到独立创作的过渡。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 RJ
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Unit 3 Keep Fit
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How is exercise good for
us?
Period 5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.慢跑 _____
2.鼓励 ___________
3.棒球 __________
4.一次 ______
5.几乎不 _________________
6.一周两次 ______________
jog
encourage
baseball
once
hardly (ever)
twice a week
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7.锻炼 ___________________
work out/exercise
【解析】知识拓展
work out的多层含义:①锻炼身体 ②解决③计算出 ④进展顺利
8.打羽毛球 ________________
play badminton
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】I’m always full of energy after jogging.(full of)
→仿写:富含水果和蔬菜的饮食对保持健康至关重要。
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A diet full of fruits and vegetables is important for keeping in good
health.
10.【教材原句】I like skateboarding because it keeps me fit.(keep… fit)
→仿写:你应该一整天都喝大量的水来使自己保持健康。
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You should drink plenty of water throughout the day to keep yourself
fit.
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11.【教材原句】But my favourite way of keeping fit is to use an exercise app
to work out.(… way of doing sth)
→仿写:练习太极拳是保持健康的一种方式。
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Practising Tai Chi is a way of staying healthy.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Many people like sports.My favourite sport is running.(点明最喜欢的运动)
I run in the park and on the playground four times a week or more.(介绍运动
频率)I like running because it’s easy and cool. It can help me to keep healthy
and train my willpower. Besides, running is a good way to lose weight. After
running, I’m always full of energy.(说明喜欢该运动的原因)
If you want to start running, you shouldn’t run too fast at first. You can run
slowly at first and then step by step you can run faster. Be sure to wear a pair
of good sports shoes.(介绍运动建议)
Hope you can enjoy running.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025广东佛山期中]学校正在筹备下个月的篮球赛(School Basketball
Match),校英文报正在以“Let’s Enjoy Sports Together!”为题,向同学们征稿。假
设你是李华,请你根据以下英文提示,用英文写一篇小短文,向校刊投稿。
内容提示:(1)What’s your favourite sport and how often do you do it?
(2)Do you think doing sports is important? Why or why not?(至少两点)
(3)What will you do for the coming School Basketball Match?
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注意:(1)不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名;
(2)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右;作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s Enjoy Sports Together!
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. ____#1.4
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
内容要点:最喜欢的运动及运动频率,对运动的看法,为即将到来的学校篮球比
赛做什么#1.5.4
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写作框架:#1.6
Let’s Enjoy Sports
Together! 开篇点题 My favourite sport is…
How often I do it.
运动的重要性及
计划 First,…
Second,…
I will…
收尾 I am looking forward to the School
Basketball Match.
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第二步 列#1.7
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Let’s Enjoy Sports Together!
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. My favourite sport
is basketball because it’s exciting and fun. I play it
with my friends on the school playground three times
a week. My favourite way of keeping fit is also to
play basketball. ________________________________
①用序数词分点阐释运
动的重要性,从个体健
康到社会关系,逻辑由
浅入深。
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I think doing sports is very important.First ① , it
keeps us healthy and strong.Second , it helps us
relax and make new friends. For the coming School
Basketball Match, I will practise harder and cheer
for all the players. Let’s enjoy the game together!
I am looking forward to the School Basketball
Match. ③ ②practise harder、cheer
for 等短语的使用体现了
作者扎实的写作功底。
③文章最后一段体现出
作者对比赛的期盼,更
进一步展现作者对运动
的热爱和呼吁。
续表
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这篇习作主题明确,逻辑流畅。首段以“My favourite sport is basketball…”总
起,开门见山地点明个人运动偏好,并通过细节“play it with my friends… three
times a week”具象化运动习惯。中间段落分两点论述运动的重要性
(First… Second…),层次分明,观点清晰:从“强健体魄”到“放松身心、结交
朋友”,内容全面且紧扣主题。收尾巧妙,自然递进。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025山东济宁期中】假如你是李华,下周你们班要举办一次“My Healthy
Lifestyle”的英文演讲活动。请根据图片及英文提示写一篇演讲稿,介绍自己的生
活方式,并呼吁全班同学要健康生活。
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要求:(1)紧扣图片及英文提示,可适当发挥;
(2)词数80左右,演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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My Healthy Lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m very happy to share my healthy
lifestyle with all of you.____
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
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【参考范文】
My Healthy Lifestyle
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m very happy to share my
healthy lifestyle with all of you.
I do sports every day, like running and playing ping-pong. It makes
me strong and full of energy. For sleep, I always go to bed early and
get up early. And I usually read books before sleeping, which helps me
relax.For food, I often eat fruits and vegetables. They are good for my
health. I never have potato chips or coffee, as they are not healthy.
A healthy lifestyle is really important. Let’s all live healthily
and become better!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
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Value statement:Exercise shapes your body and mind.
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