摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“烹饪”主题写作展开,从话题词汇(如mix, bowl)和佳句仿写(如add sth to sth句型)导入,搭建词句积累、范文模板到实战演练的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作脉络。
其亮点在于分阶段训练提升语言能力,通过范文中First、Next等连接词运用培养思维品质,实战演练结合真实情境(如给笔友写信)增强学习能力。教师可高效利用系统资源教学,学生能提升写作逻辑与表达,落实核心素养。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 LJ
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Unit 3 What a Delicious Meal!
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What does cooking give
us?
大单元话题与写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.(使)混合 _____
2.碗 ______
3.食用油 _____
4.加热 ______
5.切碎 ________
6.将……倒入…… ___________________
mix
bowl
oil
heat
cut up
pour sth into sth
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】Add the milk and the butter to the potatoes, and mix.(add sth to
sth)
→仿写:把糖加到果汁里,尝一尝。
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Add the sugar to the juice, and taste it.
8.【教材原句】It’s a great way for me to share my love with others.
(It’s… way for sb to do sth)
→仿写:对于我来说,做美食是个好方式。
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It’s a great way for me to make delicious food.
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9.【教材原句】I still remember the days when the smell of cinnamon filled the
room with sweetness.(fill sth with sth)
→仿写:比萨饼的美味香气让厨房充满幸福。
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The delicious smell of pizza fills the kitchen with happiness.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
I’m Dick. I always like to eat a chicken sandwich (介绍喜欢吃的食
物).Here is the recipe for it (引入话题).
First, check if you have all the ingredients—two pieces of bread, some
butter,one onion, a tomato, some lettuce, three pieces of chicken and some relish
(介绍需要的食材).Then put some butter on a piece of bread (介绍放置的位
置).Next, cut up an onion and a tomato and add them to the bread (介绍需要
切和添加的食材).And then put some chicken pieces on the bread (介绍放置的
位置).You can also add some lettuce if you like (介绍另外要添加的东
西).Finally, put another piece of bread on the top (介绍最后放的东西).After
all of these, cook for a few minutes (介绍最后的步骤).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
如今有很多“美食博主”在网络上分享各种美食及做法。假如你最喜欢的一道
菜是“柠檬凤爪(Lemon Chicken Feet)”,你也想拍摄自己的美食vlog并发布在网
络上。请你根据以下提示,为你的视频写一份英语文案。80词左右。#1
制作原料
chicken feet 2 lemons 3 chillies garlic
调味品
vinegar soy sauce sugar salt
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制作步骤:
►鸡爪剪掉指甲(nails)后洗净,煮大约15分钟;
►将辣椒、大蒜切碎,柠檬切片后放入碗中,并加入醋、酱油、糖和盐;
►鸡爪放入碗中,和配料混合均匀,放入冰箱冷藏5—6小时后方可享用。
续表
How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
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时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第二人称为主
内容要点:介绍“柠檬凤爪”的制作方法,包括所需食材和制作步骤
写作框架:
总述: 直入主题,引出自己喜欢的美食并表达分享的意愿
分述: 详细介绍所需食材和制作步骤
总结: 鼓励读者尝试制作
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第二步 列
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How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet
Lemon Chicken Feet are my favourite food
and today I’d like to share my way of making
them with you! ①
To cook this tasty dish, we need to prepare
some chicken feet, 2 lemons, 3 chillies, some
garlic and some seasonings, including vinegar,
soy sauce, sugar and salt ② ________________________________
①开头直入主题,点出喜欢的
美食并表明要分享烹饪它的方
法,简洁明了。
②这个介词短语对前文提到的
seasonings进行补充说明,丰
富了内容细节。
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How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet
First ③ , cut off all the chicken nails and
wash the chicken feet.Next ③ ,cook them for
about 15 minutes.Then ③ , cut up the chillies and
garlic, and cut the lemons into thin pieces. ③在描述烹饪步骤时,运用了
First、Next、Then、After
that、Finally等连接词语,将
各个步骤清晰地串联起来,使
文章条理清晰。
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How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet
After that ③ , put them all in a large bowl
and add some seasonings.Finally ③ , put the
chicken feet in the bowl and mix them well.Oh,
there’s one more thing. Don’t forget to put the
dish in the fridge. ④ It’ll be ready in about 5—6
hours.
It’s very easy to make this dish. Do you
want to give it a try? ⑤ ④这两句话以口语化的表达自
然地补充了一个重要步骤,增
加了文章的亲切感。
⑤用简单的话语总结并发起互
动,引导读者尝试制作,使文
章更具交流性。
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这篇习作整体结构清晰,采用“总—分—总”的结构,先表明要分享烹饪方法,接
着详细阐述制作步骤,最后总结并互动。语法正确,句型结构简单易懂,连接词
语运用恰当,很好地完成了介绍烹饪方法的任务,语言表达流畅自然,适合同学
们学习和模仿。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025江西南昌期中】假如你是李辉,你的英语笔友Luther对中式菜肴很感兴
趣,来信想要了解你上周在学校烹饪社团学做的“西红柿鸡蛋面”。请你根据以下
提示,跟他说一说它的烹饪步骤。
食材准备:西红柿洗净切小块,蔬菜洗净备用。
烹饪过程:1.油入热锅,倒入西红柿翻炒,加盐少许,1分钟后加入3—4碗
热水;
2.水开后,打入鸡蛋,放入面条,3分钟后搅拌一下;
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3.放入蔬菜,再煮3分钟即可。
注意:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Luther,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese dishes. Let me tell you how to make
tomato and egg noodles.
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Yours,
Li Hui#1.4.8
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【参考范文】
Dear Luther,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese dishes.Let me tell you how
to make tomato and egg noodles.
First, wash the tomatoes and cut them into small pieces.You should
also clean the vegetables and set them aside.Then, heat some oil in a
pot and put the tomatoes into the pot to stir-fry.After
that, add some salt.After a minute, you can pour in three or four
bowls of hot water.After the water boils, put eggs into the pot and add
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noodles.You should stir them after 3 minutes.Finally, put the
vegetables in and cook for another 3 minutes.The delicious noodles are
ready.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】链接狂K
祈使句的详细讲解见狂K重点P20。
Value statement:Cooking brings us happiness and love.
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