摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕七年级下册“Unit 2 School life”单元话题与写作展开,涵盖高分词句储备、经典范文模板、高分范文赏析及实战演练四个阶段,通过话题词汇(如future、progress)和佳句仿写(如be good at...句型)衔接基础与应用,搭建从词句积累到篇章写作的学习支架。
其亮点在于分阶递进的写作训练体系,结合语言能力(词汇句型活学活用,如“get along well with”等短语应用)和思维品质(审题分析、问题解决,如实战中针对李华调查提建议),融入思维导图辅助构思,采用真题实例(如2024河北期中、2025保定期末题)。学生能提升写作逻辑与表达能力,教师可直接利用系统资源优化教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 JJ
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Unit 2 School life
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.未来n. ________
future
【解析】链接狂K
future的详细讲解见狂K重点P9。
2.进步;进展n. __________
progress
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3.参加 ______________
4.努力 ___________
5.放弃 _________
6.和……相处融洽 ________________________
take part in
work hard
give up
get along/on well with
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】You’re good at the long jump.(be good at...)
→仿写:他们擅长唱英文歌。
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They are good at singing English songs.
8.【教材原句】We all had lots of fun! (have fun)
→仿写:你昨天参观科学博物馆玩得开心吗?
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Did you have fun visiting the science museum yesterday?
9.【教材原句】... I’m always ready to help others.(be ready to do sth)
→仿写:你准备好在课堂上回答老师的问题了吗?
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Are you ready to answer the teacher’s questions in class?
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Dear Jenny,
I’d like to tell you about my favourite school day.(开门见山,引出话题)
My favourite school day is Wednesday. That’s because I like the lessons on
that day. In the morning, I have English at 8:00 and I’m good at English. Then
at 9:00 I have maths. I find it difficult but useful. After that, I have Chinese and
history. History is easy for me and my history teacher is great fun.After lunch, I
have two classes in the afternoon. From 2:30 to 3:30, I have science. Then I
have PE.I like it because I can play football. It’s my favourite sport.. .(使用时间
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状语说明一天的科目,并穿插对科目的评价) I always have fun with my
classmates.
This is my favourite school day. I’m busy but happy on that day.
(结尾点题,并说明感受)
Your friend,
Zhou Tao#1.5
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2024河北张家口期中]假设你是
Kate,你刚转到中国的一所学校读书,
你的英国朋友Jane很担心你在新学校的生
活。请你根据以下思维导图提示,用英
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右(作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
文给她写一封信,告诉她你在新学校的情况。
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Dear Jane,
Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about my new school life here. I’m
fine here and I like my school life. ______________________
Yours,
Kate
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第一步审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:结合思维导图介绍校园生活
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步列#4
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Dear Jane,
Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about my
new school life here. I’m fine here and I like my
school life ①.
School is from 8:00 a.m.to 5:30 p.m. We have four
classes in the morning and three classes in the
afternoon. My favourite day is Thursday, because I have
English and art on that day ② .These two subjects are my
favourites and I am good at③ them. But I think maths
is a little difficult. ①I like my school
life与结尾处的I like it
首尾呼应。
②because引导原因状
语从句,丰富了文章
内容。
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I have a new friend in the new school. He
often helps me with my maths ③ .We get along well with
③ each other.
I think my new school life is busy but interesting.
I like it very much.
Yours,
Kate ③短语
“help...with...”以及
本单元短语be good
at、get along well
with的使用,彰显作者
的活学活用以及扎实
的基本功。
开头阐明对校园生活的喜爱,引出作者喜欢的校园生活,从上课时间、科目、朋
友等几个方面介绍校园生活,层次分明;结尾呼应开头,是作者对忙碌而有趣的
校园生活的有感而发,引发读者的共鸣。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025河北保定期末】为了更好地了解七年级学生的生活,学校开展了一项
调研,下面是你的同伴李华的调查问卷。请你根据表格中的内容写一篇短文,描
述一下她的生活,然后就她的问题或者烦恼提出建议。
A Survey About Students’ Lives Name: Li Hua
Questions Yes No
Do you enjoy your school life? √
Do you make some good friends at school? √
Do you have a balanced diet every day? √
Do you usually go to bed before 10:00 p.m.? √
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要求:
1.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
2.词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Here is a survey about Li Hua’s life. Now let me talk about
it.______________________________
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【参考范文】
Here is a survey about Li Hua’s life.Now let me talk about it.
Li Hua enjoys her school life very much.She has a balanced diet
every day, which is good for her health.However, she hasn’t made good
friends at school yet.What’s more, she usually doesn’t go to bed
before 10:00 p.m.
For her problems, I suggest she join some clubs to meet classmates
with similar hobbies, which can help her make friends.And she should
plan her time well to finish homework earlier, so she can go to bed on
time for better rest.
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【解析】知识拓展
suggest doing sth建议做某事
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