内容正文:
英 语
六年级下册 LJ
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Unit 1 A Day in the Life
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How different are
people’s daily routines?
Period 5 2a—2b(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.起床 ________
2.上床睡觉 ___________
3.日常生活 ____________________
4.在周末 ________________
5.淋浴 _______________
6.穿衣服 _____________
get up
go to bed
daily routine/life
at/on weekends
take a shower
get dressed
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】He makes breakfast for his family and then does his homework.
(make sth for sb)
→仿写:我妈妈通常7点起床,7点半给我们做早餐。
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My mum/mother/mom usually gets up at 7:00 and makes breakfast for us at 7:30.
【解析】链接狂K
get up的详细讲解见狂K重点P2。
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8.【教材原句】Every Tuesday, I usually get up at 7:40.(do sth at+时间点)
→仿写:她总是在上午7:00吃早饭。
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She always eats/has breakfast at 7:00 a.m.
9.【教材原句】There are 18 students in my class.(there be句型)
→仿写:上学日每天有8节课。
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There are eight/8 classes a day on school days.
10.【教材原句】At 9:30, it’s time for me to go to bed.(it’s time for sb to do
sth)
→仿写:我们该上英语课了。
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It’s time for us to have the English class.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Hello, my name is Mary (自我介绍).Let me tell you something about my
daily routine on a school day(引出主题).
I usually get up at 7 o’clock in the morning. After washing my face and
brushing my teeth, I have breakfast with my family.(用After连接前后活
动) . .Then I go to school by bus.(用Then引出下一个活动) Our first class
begins at 8 o’clock. I have English, maths, and Chinese in the morning.During
the break, I talk and play with my friends.At noon, I eat lunch in the school
canteen.In the afternoon, I have music, PE, and science.PE is my favourite
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because I can play basketball with my classmates.School is over at 4:30.I go
home, do my homework, and then read books or watch TV.(按时间顺序进行列
举)
My school day is busy but happy.(在尾段进行总结)#1.2
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2024广东广州质检]李华是一名七年级的学生,以下是她的日常生活,请
根据表格内容,以“Li Hua’s Daily Life”为题写一篇介绍李华日常生活的文章,词
数80左右。
6:30 a.m. get up 4:00—4:30
p.m. take part in the school band
practice
7:00 a.m. have
breakfast 4:45 p.m. go home
7:30 a.m. go to school 6:30 p.m. have dinner
8:30 a.m.—4:00
p.m. have classes 9:00 p.m. go to bed
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第三人称
内容要点:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏表格所给信息,可适当增加细节
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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Li Hua’s Daily Life
Li Hua is a Grade 7 student. Here is her daily
routine on a school day.
She gets up at 6:30 a.m. ① every day. At 7:00
a.m., she has breakfast. Li Hua lives close to ②
school, so she always goes to school on foot ② at
7:30 a.m. She has classes from 8:30 a.m.to 4:00
p.m. ② ________________________________
①文章多次使用“do sth
at+时间点”的结构,紧扣表
格所给要点信息,表达准
确。
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Then she often takes part in ② the school band
practice. She goes home at 4:45 p.m. Li Hua
usually has dinner ② at 6:30 p.m. She sometimes
watches TV.She always goes to bed ② at 9:00 p.m.
She is busy, but ③ she has a good time every
day. ②文章中使用了多样化的
词组,条理清晰,用词准
确,同时也避免了重复。
③文章末尾进行总结,使
用but连接两个部分,层次
清晰。
本文在介绍个人日常生活情况时,使用了live close to、take part in、go to bed
等动词短语,使得文章语言丰富多样,避免了重复。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2024河南开封期末】假如你是中学生林桃,英语老师布置了一项课前作业:
向同学们介绍自己的日常生活。请你根据以下提示,完成此项作业。
写作要求:
(1)不得使用真实的姓名和校名;
(2)可适当增加细节,使内容充实;
(3)字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
(4)80词左右,开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear teachers and classmates,
It’s my honour (我的荣幸) to share my daily life with you.____
Thanks for listening!
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【参考范文】
Dear teachers and classmates,
It’s my honour to share my daily life with you.I usually get up at
six in the morning.I have breakfast at seven.After that, I study
online.I often have lunch at twelve.I have rice, vegetables and some
meat for lunch.I have a piano or violin class in the afternoon.Then I
do sport or play chess.I also do some housework.I usually do my
homework for an hour in the evening.Then I watch TV for half an hour.I
always go to bed at nine.I’m very busy but happy.
Thanks for listening!
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【解析】温馨提示
“have… for lunch”为固定用法,意为“午餐吃……”。
Value statement: To plan time is to save time.
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