摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级下册Unit 2“Amazing China”写作训练,涵盖话题词汇、佳句仿写、范文模板、真题赏析及实战演练。课堂通过“高分词句储备—经典范文模板—高分范文赏析—实战演练”四阶支架,从基础词汇(如admire, be famous for)、句型仿写(如full of, one of...)过渡到范文结构分析,构建从输入到输出的完整学习脉络。
其亮点在于分层递进的结构化训练,结合真实情境任务(如“美丽家乡我代言”介绍武汉、暑假旅行邮件),既提升语言能力(准确运用词句、连贯表达),又渗透文化意识(展现中国城市文化、美食与景点),还通过列提纲、分析范文培养思维品质(总—分—总写作结构)。学生能系统掌握写作方法,教师可直接利用资源高效开展教学。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 YL
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Unit 2 Amazing China
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment & Further
study
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.欣赏;钦佩 ________
2.艺术作品 _________
3.因……而著名 _______________
4.不论……;无论……;不管…… _____________
admire
artwork
be famous for
no matter…
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二、佳句仿写
5.【教材原句】It is a place full of history.(full of)
→仿写:这个热带花园一年四季都开满了五颜六色的花朵。
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This tropical garden is full of colorful/colourful flowers all year
round.
6.【教材原句】They include over 2,300 caves and are one of the finest examples
of ancient stone carving art.(one of…)
→仿写:西塞山是黄石最漂亮的地方之一。
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The Xisai Mountain is one of the most beautiful places in Huangshi.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Beijing—A Place You Will Never Forget
Beijing, the capital of China, lies in northern China. With a population of
about 21.9 million, it is one of the most vibrant cities in the world.(引入主题)
The city has four distinct seasons: warm springs, hot summers, cool autumns,
and cold winters. Beijing is full of amazing sights.The Great Wall, a world-
famous wonder, shows its long history.The Forbidden City, once home to
emperors, impresses visitors with its grand buildings. Don’t miss its delicious
food either. Peking Duck, crispy and tasty, is a must-try.(分别从季节、景点和美
食介绍北京特色)
With its rich culture and charm, Beijing is truly a place you’ll never forget.
(总结全文)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏镇江期末]假如你是李华,学校正在举行“美丽家乡我代言”的活
动,请从文化、美食、美景等方面为热爱中国文化的外国友人介绍武汉,让世界
了解武汉。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文来介绍武汉。
Why would you like to introduce Wuhan?
What do you know about Wuhan?
What can you do for your hometown?
Something more about Wuhan.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右 (开头、结尾已给出的词
不计入总词数)。
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My Hometown—Wuhan
There is a beautiful city by the Yangtze River. Its name is Wuhan. Today
I’m going to talk about my hometown—Wuhan.
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Welcome to Wuhan!
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
内容要点:地理位置、文化、美食、景点
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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__________________________________
My Hometown—Wuhan
There is a beautiful city by the Yangtze River. Its name
is Wuhan. Today I’m going to talk about my hometown—
Wuhan.
I’d like to introduce Wuhan because it’s a city full of
culture and energy. ① Wuhan has a long history and it is a
city that combines classical and modern elements. Wuhan is
also famous for its delicious food. Among them, the most
famous is Hot Dry Noodles. ________________________________
①用 because 引
导原因状语从
句,明确说明“介
绍武汉”的原因,
使句子有因果
逻辑。
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Welcome to taste them. Wuhan is also a good place for
travelling.There are lots of places of interest here, such as
Yellow Crane Tower, Wuhan Haichang Polar Ocean Park and
so on. ② I was born in Wuhan. I love Wuhan. I will study
hard to make contributions to building a better Wuhan when
I grow up.
Welcome to Wuhan! ②用 such as 举
例,清晰列举武
汉景点,避免信
息杂乱。
整体来看,这篇作文能围绕“家乡武汉”精准选材,用清晰的结构、准确的词汇和
语法,完整传递对家乡的认知与热爱,是一篇主题明确、表达流畅的佳作。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025江苏南京调研】“读万卷书,行万里路”,旅行越来越成为人们放松和
开阔眼界的好方法。假设你是李华,你的好友付兴发邮件询问你的暑假旅行,请
你给他回一封邮件,向他讲述你的旅行。
内容提示:(1)Where did you go?
(2)What did you see or do there?
(3)What did you learn from this experience?
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写作要求:(1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
(3)字迹工整、表达准确、条理清晰;
(4)词数不少于100。
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Dear Fu Xing,
How’s everything going?
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I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【参考范文】
Dear Fu Xing,
How’s everything going?
I’m glad to share my summer trip with you! This year, I travelled
to Guilin with my family. It’s a famous city for its beautiful
mountains and rivers.
We took a boat tour along the Li River. The clear water reflected
the green hills, which looked like a nice painting. We also climbed
Elephant Trunk Hill—its shape was so amazing that I couldn’t stop
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taking photos. At night, we walked around West Street and tried local
snacks like rice noodles.
This trip taught me a lot. Seeing the tall mountains and clear
rivers made me feel how amazing nature is. Being away from daily
routines relaxed me and filled me with energy. I realized the world is
big and full of different things, and that every trip can help us grow.
I feel refreshed and ready for the new term!
I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【解析】知识拓展
energetic adj.精力充沛的
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