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英 语
八年级下册 WY
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Unit 1 Career talks
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.富于挑战性的 _____________
2.公司 _________
3.沟通 (n.) _______________
challenging
company
communication
【解析】链接狂K
communication 的详细讲解见狂K重点P3。
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4.技能;技巧 _______
5.领导才能 ____________
6.满是……的 ___________________________
7.擅长 _______________________
8.在将来 _______________
skill
leadership
be full of/be filled with
be good at/do well in
in the future
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】It’s so nice to see you on my last day at work.(It’s so nice to
do sth)
→仿写:很高兴告诉你我未来的工作。
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It’s so nice to tell you my future job.
10.【教材原句】The past 30 years were filled with both challenges and joys.
(be filled with)
→仿写:我未来的工作充满了挑战和快乐。
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My future job is filled with challenges and joys/happiness.
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11.【教材原句】A teacher once encouraged us to try… (encourage sb to do sth)
→仿写:我的父母总是鼓励我努力学习。
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My parents always encourage me to study hard.
12.【教材原句】How fast the job market changes! (感叹句)
→仿写:我们未来的生活会多么美好啊!
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How great/wonderful our life will be in the future!
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第2阶 经典范文模板
The new career I want to introduce is the animal doctor
(开篇点题).People who do this job look after sick pets and small
animals.They . .give animals medicine and help them get better.(介绍工作内容)
With the development of pet care service, the demand for the animal doctor
is growing fast.(再次强调主题,引出下文)
To do this job well, you need to have basic knowledge of animal health and
be good at talking with pet owners.You also need patience and love for animals.
(列举工作要求)
I think this career is great, because it lets you save animals’ lives and make
pet owners happy.(段尾进行总结)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
学校正组织以“My Future Job”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下写作要点
写一篇演讲稿。
写作要点 参考短语
What a reporter
Why meet different people…
How read more books, write articles…
写作要求:1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数不少于80,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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My Future Job
Students all dream about their future jobs, so do I.____
第一步 审
体裁:说明文
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:未来工作、原因、措施等
写作结构:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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My Future Job
Students all dream about their future jobs, so do
I.My dream job is to be ① a reporter when I grow
up.The reason why ① I want to do this is that I
enjoy meeting different kinds of people and sharing
stories with others. ________________________________
①用My dream job is to
be引出主题,并用The
reason why介绍原因;
②In order to表述目的;
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In order to ② make my dream come true, I’m
going to do the following things.To begin with ③ , I
will read more books and practise writing every
day.Next ③ , I’m going to write articles and send them
to magazines and newspapers.What’s more ③ , I am
going to study in a university in Beijing after high
school. I want to work at a TV station and travel all
over the world for self-improvement.
All in all, only if I hold on to my dream can I
make it come true ④. ③用To begin with、
Next、What’s more介绍
自己的准备措施;
④用only if引导的状语从
句进行总结。
续表
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这篇习作运用了“总——分——总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,
全面介绍了自己未来工作的相关情况。文中grow up、different kinds of、 In
order to、What’s more、want to、All in all、hold on to等表明了作者灵活运用
所学知识的能力,这些短语也是文中的亮点。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025黑龙江哈尔滨三模】假定你是中学生李平,请根据该邮件内容,用英
语给Eric回复。
Hi, Li Ping,
I’m really interested in your dream job. Why did you choose it? What/Who
influenced you to make the decision? How will you achieve it? Tell me, please.
I look forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Eric
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要求:1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不要出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Ping
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【参考范文】
Dear Eric,
Thank you for asking about my dream job! I hope to become a doctor
in the future.
This idea came from my grandpa, who was a great doctor before
retirement.When I was young, I often saw him treat patients patiently,
even late at night.Once, he saved a little girl in my neighbourhood who
had a serious fever by staying with her all night.That scene made me
realise doctors can bring hope to others.
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To achieve this goal, I’m studying hard, especially in science and
maths.I also read books about medicine in my free time.During summer
vacations, I volunteer at the community clinic to watch how doctors
work.Though it’s not easy, I believe practice makes perfect.
I know being a doctor needs both knowledge and a kind heart, so
I’ll keep working hard every day! What’s your dream job?
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】知识拓展
practice makes perfect 意为“熟能生巧”。
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