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英 语
八年级下册 JJ
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Unit 1 Spring is coming!
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.唤醒;觉醒 ________
2.温暖;暖和 ________
3.节气 ____________
4.复苏 ___________________
awaken
warmth
solar term
come back to life
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5.野外考察 ______________
6.景点 _____________
7.散步 __________________
8.远足 ___________
a field trip
scenic spot
take/have a walk
go hiking
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】But in my hometown, it feels like spring nearly all year round.
(feel like)
→仿写:在我的家乡,三月的微风感觉像是春天温暖的问候。
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In my hometown, the breeze in March feels like a warm greeting from
spring.
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10.【教材原句】The weather here is neither too hot nor too cold.(neither…
nor…)
→仿写:温室里的温度对幼苗来说既不太高也不太低。
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The temperature in the greenhouse is neither too high nor too low for
seedlings.
【解析】链接狂K
“neither… nor…”的详细讲解见狂K重点P4。
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11.【教材原句】We celebrate the Festival of Colours when spring is coming.
(when引导的时间状语从句)
→仿写:当春天来临时,树叶变绿,空气变得清新。
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When spring arrives/comes, the leaves turn green and the air becomes
fresh.
12.【教材原句】We probably won’t see any flowers until May or June!
(not… until…)
→仿写:我们直到春天来临、天气转暖后才能够去山里徒步。
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We can’t go hiking in the mountains until spring arrives and the
weather warms up.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Spring in My Hometown
I like spring very much. When spring comes, everything comes back to life
and the whole world becomes warm and lively (描述季节整体特点).In my
hometown, spring feels like a colourful painting (形容春天).The weather is
neither too hot nor too cold.The leaves turn green and the flowers bloom.
(描述植物变化) The air becomes fresh.(描述空气)
People here enjoy spring a lot.Kids fly kites in the park.(描述儿童活动)
Families go for picnics. (描述家庭活动) They try to be close to nature and
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have fun.Farmers are busy in their fields (描述其他人群活动,如农民劳作),
hoping for a good harvest (表达期望).
Spring in my hometown is the most beautiful and lively season.(总结家乡
春天的特点) I love this season. Welcome to my hometown!#1.3
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
某英文报正在举行以“家乡美”为主题的征文活动,你打算以“Spring in My
Hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿,请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示:(1)What is spring like in your hometown?
(2)What do people in your hometown usually do in spring?
(3)How do you like your hometown in spring?
要求:(1)短文应包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(3)文章80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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Spring in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city in the east of Hebei Province.____
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:根据所给提示写出家乡的春天及春天的活动
写作框架:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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Spring in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city in the east of
Hebei Province.The weather in spring here is really
nice. ① When spring comes, everything comes back to
life and the climate becomes warm. The mountains
become greener and greener ② .Most flowers blossom as
the weather becomes warm ② .All of these scenes draw
a beautiful picture. ①文章开头直接点题,
描述季节的整体特点,
简洁明了地引出“家乡
的春天”这一主题。
②用“比较级+and+比较
级”和as引导的时间状
语从句体现季节变化,
语言生动形象。
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People have a lot of fun in spring. ③ They often go
for a picnic ③ with their family in the park. They
also fly kites ③ in the park. They try their best to be
close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Farmers
start to sow and hope for a good harvest.
As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown
is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope.
I love the spring in my hometown. ③通过“People have a
lot of fun in spring.”过
渡到活动描写,用go
for a picnic、fly kites
等具体行为体现普通人
的春日乐趣,内容
丰富。
本文紧扣“家乡美”的主题,语言简洁流畅,句式丰富。作者通过When spring
comes引出季节特点,随后描述自然景象,清晰具体。使用All of these scenes指
代前文的山、花等元素,避免重复。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025江苏扬州期末】春之繁华,夏之碧叶,秋之硕果,冬之静雪。四季更
迭,每一季都有它独特的韵味。 你校将开展以“My favourite season in my
hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛,假如你是 Peter,请你根据以下问题提示并适当
发挥想象,写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示:(1)What is the weather like?
(2)What does your city look like?
(3)Why do you like this season? (at least two points)
(4)What activities do people enjoy doing in this season?
(5)What do you think of your hometown in this season?
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要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My favourite season in my hometown
Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. It’s my great honour to
introduce my favourite season in my hometown here!
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That’s all. Thank you for listening!
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【参考范文】
My favourite season in my hometown
Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter.It’s my great honour to
introduce my favourite season in my hometown here!
My favourite season is autumn.The weather in autumn is neither too
hot nor too cold.It’s usually sunny and comfortable.My city looks like
a golden world.The leaves on the trees turn yellow and fall gently.I
like autumn for several reasons.Firstly, it’s the harvest season.We
can enjoy the fruits and grains.Secondly, the temperature is just right
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for outdoor activities.People enjoy going for a picnic in the park and
taking beautiful photos of the scenery.Some also like to climb
mountains and enjoy the views from the top.
I think my hometown is most charming in autumn.
That’s all.Thank you for listening!
【解析】链接狂K
several 的详细讲解见狂K重点P5。
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