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英语应用文写作讲解与练习
一、发表看法:Badminton VS rope skipping
假定你是李华,你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目倡议学生课间多进行运动,现就打羽毛球或者跳绳这两项运动哪一项更适合课间运动,面向全体学生征求意见。请你就此写一篇英文稿件,发表自己的看法。内容包括:1.你的选择;2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Badminton VS rope skipping
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段亮明观点(要点1);第二段说明理由(要点2);第三段总结。
【参考范文】
Badminton VS rope skipping
Of the two between-class physical activities, badminton gets my vote.
For one thing, it is the engaging fun that sets badminton apart. Whether in doubles or singles, the game encourages peer interaction and lifts their mood during the short break. For another, minimal space requirements and controllable intensity make badminton an ideal break-time choice. It fits right into hallways or any open area. By contrast, rope skipping is undeniably efficient, but at a cost. Repeated jumping tightens the leg muscles, which may actually affect students’ focus in the next class.
In summary, with badminton, a ten-minute break is long enough to stretch your limbs, yet short enough to avoid overexertion. Let’s grab a racket to make every break a joyful badminton moment. (122 words)
【中文翻译】
羽毛球还是跳绳
关于课间运动选择羽毛球还是跳绳,我更推荐前者。
首先,羽毛球趣味性更强。双打或对打的形式能增进同学互动,在短暂休息中放松心情。其次,羽毛球对场地限制小,走廊、空地均可进行,且运动强度可控。跳绳虽锻炼效果好,但持续跳跃容易导致腿部肌肉紧张或疲劳,反而影响下一节课的状态。
总之,课间十分钟,羽毛球既能活动筋骨又不会过度消耗体力。期待更多人拿起球拍,让每个课间都“羽”众不同。
李华
【参考范文解析】
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应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为发表看法;
(2)根据原文本特点,李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为发表看法并说明理由,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
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本文亮点
(1)gets my vote赢得我的支持:表示对某人或某事物的支持或赞同
(2)For one thing, ... For another, ...一方面,...另一方面,...
(3)It is the engaging fun that sets badminton apart. 运用强调句型,其中set ... apart意为“使...与众不同”
(4)By contrast相比较
(5)In summary总而言之
(6)is long enough to stretch your limbs, yet short enough to avoid overexertion用long enough to do和short enough to do前后形成鲜明对比
二、介绍词:非遗文化进校园活动
假定你是李华,近期你校为举办“非遗文化(Intangible Cultural Heritage)进校园”的活动,对文化长廊(Exhibition Corridor)进行了精心的设计。作为接待来自澳大利亚交换生的志愿者,请你写一篇口头介绍词来介绍长廊。内容包括:1.设计目的;2.核心展区;3.邀请参与。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段说明写作目的——介绍校园文化长廊;第二段介绍设计目的(要点1)和核心展区(要点2);第三段邀请参与(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Good morning! It is my great honor to serve as a volunteer introducing today’s Exhibition Corridor.
Designed to engage visitors in an immersive cultural experience through sight, sound, and touch, Exhibition Corridor is divided into three main sections: “Craftsmanship Workshop” features exquisite paper-cutting and embroidery; “Echoes of Opera” revives classic moments of Peking Opera and Shadow Play through illustrated texts; and “Flavors of Time” showcases traditional tools used in making local snacks. Each section comes with a QR code for you to scan and unlock a rich collection of audio stories about China’s intangible cultural heritage.
We sincerely invite you to explore the exhibits and immerse yourselves in the craftsmanship of intangible cultural heritage. May you leave with a cultural memory that echoes the soul of China. Thank you! (129 words)
【中文翻译】
大家好!我是志愿者李华,非常荣幸为大家介绍我们学校的文化长廊。
文化长廊以沉浸式体验为设计理念,融“可看”、“可听”、“可触”于一体。核心展区分为三部分:“匠心工坊”陈列着精美的剪纸与刺绣;“戏韵流芳”通过图文再现京剧与皮影戏的经典瞬间;而“食光记忆”则展示了传统小吃的制作工具。每个展区都配有二维码,扫码即可聆听非遗故事。
我们诚挚地邀请大家走进展区,沉浸式体验非遗精品的制作工艺。愿大家在这里,带走一份独属于中国的文化记忆!谢谢!
【参考范文解析】
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应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为介绍词;
(2)因文体是给澳大利亚交换生介绍校园文化长廊,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为介绍文化长廊设计目的及核心展区,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
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本文亮点
(1)engage visitors in an immersive cultural experience through sight, sound, and touch让游客通过“可看”、“可听”、“可触”方式沉浸式体验...
(2)features ... revives classic moments of ... and showcases以...为特点,复现...的经典瞬间,并展示...
(3)unlock a rich collection of audio stories about China’s intangible cultural heritage解锁一系列关于中国非遗的丰富音频故事
(4)immerse yourselves in使你们沉浸于...
(5)leave with a cultural memory that echoes the soul of China愿(你们的)这份文化记忆,与中国之魂同频共振
三、寄语:《校园无名英雄》专刊
假定你是校英文杂志主编李华,杂志近期将发行题为《校园无名英雄》的专刊。请为其写一篇寄语,内容包括:1.发行目的;2.专刊内容。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Readers,
It is my great pleasure to announce the release of our special issue, "Unsung Heroes on Campus."
Best regards,
Li Hua
Editor-in-chief
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段说明发行目的(要点1);第二段介绍专刊内容(要点2);第三段表达寄语。
【参考范文】
Dear Readers,
It is my great pleasure to announce the release of our special issue, "Unsung Heroes on Campus." This special issue is dedicated to honoring the silent guardians of our campus, the ones who contribute a lot while working in the shadows. While they may rarely find themselves in the spotlight, it is their day-to-day efforts that build the warm and orderly environment of our campus.
Through in-depth interviews and documentary photography, this issue brings you close to the unsung figures of our campus: the security guard greeting the dawn, the dorm mother guarding the night, the duty student leaving the blackboard spotless, and the classmate ready to give a helping hand. Each and every story seeks to to capture the remarkable brilliance behind these ordinary figures.
May these stories open our hearts to the everyday warmth nearby and inspire us to shine for those in need. (129 words)
Best regards,
Li Hua
Editor-in-chief
【中文翻译】
亲爱的读者们,
我很高兴地宣布我们的特刊《校园无名英雄》出版了。本期专刊旨在向那些默默奉献、鲜为人知的校园守护者致敬。他们或许从未站在聚光灯下,却用日复一日的坚守,构筑了我们温暖有序的校园生活。
我们将通过深度访谈和纪实摄影,走近清晨点亮教学楼的保安大叔、深夜守护宿舍的宿管阿姨、总是默默擦净黑板的值日生,还有那些在你需要时伸出援手的同窗。每一篇文章都试图捕捉这些平凡身影背后的不凡光芒。
愿这些故事能让我们学会发现身边的温暖,并成为他人生活中的微光。
李华主编
【参考范文解析】
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应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为寄语;
(2)因文体是主编李华介绍《校园无名英雄》专刊,且李华身份在文本末尾已经写出,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为介绍专刊的目的和内容,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
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本文亮点
(1)is dedicated to奉献,致力于
(2)while working in the shadows省略结构,=while they are working in the shadows
(3)While they may rarely find themselves in the spotlight其中while=although,find oneself in the spotlight意为“不知不觉地处于聚光灯下”
(4)it is their day-to-day efforts that运用强调句型结构
(5)the security guard greeting the dawn, the dorm mother guarding the night两个分句用greeting the dawn和guarding the night形成对比
(6)Each and every story强调每一个,突出毫无遗漏
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