Unit4写作专项：Write an ending for a story-2025-2026学年鲁教版（五四学制）七年级英语上册

鲁教（五四制）七上Unit4写作专项 Write an ending for a story 写作目标 结合本单元“讲述故事、探索故事意义、续写故事结尾”的核心目标，能根据故事开头，续写一个合理、完整的结尾，内容包括：故事冲突的解决、人物的结局、体现故事的道理，贴合故事的整体基调。 1. 能正确运用一般过去时描述故事结尾发生的动作和情节，结合一般现在时表达故事的道理或人物的常态（本单元核心语法）； 2. 能运用本单元与故事、人物动作及情感相关的词汇（如lie, promise, save, shout, smile, be afraid, be surprised）撰写结尾； 3. 能做到续写情节合理、逻辑连贯，贴合故事开头的冲突，语言通顺，准确体现故事传递的道理，适配本单元“故事教会我们什么”的核心问题。 题目解析 1. 体裁：故事续写（记叙文），要求根据给定的故事开头，补充完整结尾，需契合本单元“续写故事”的写作要求，保持故事的连贯性和完整性。 2. 人称：以第三人称为主（he/she/they/it），描述故事人物的动作、语言和情感，符合故事叙述的人称使用规范，可适当运用直接引语还原人物对话。 3. 时态：核心用一般过去时描述结尾发生的具体情节、人物动作（如said, shouted, saved），用一般现在时表达故事的道理或人物的常态（如This story tells us that...），重点掌握两种时态的正确混用。 4. 核心要求 ￮ 内容：紧扣开头的冲突（如精灵要杀死渔夫、丑小鸭被嘲笑），合理设计情节解决冲突，写出人物的结局，体现故事的道理，呼应本单元“为什么我们讲故事”的核心问题。 ￮ 格式：无严格格式要求，承接开头自然续写，可分1-2段，开头无需重复原文，直接衔接情节，结尾可点明故事道理。 ￮ 字数：80-100词，句子以简单句、并列句为主，正确使用直接引语（如He said, “...”），合理运用本单元核心短语和句型，避免语法错误。 典型例题 阅读下面的故事开头，以Write an ending for a story为题，续写一个合理的结尾。要求：情节连贯，正确使用一般过去时和一般现在时，体现故事的道理，语言通顺，格式规范。 开头：Once upon a time, a fisherman caught a bottle in his fishing net. When he opened it, a great cloud came out and became a genie! “Prepare to die!” shouted the genie. “A long time ago, I made a promise. If someone set me free, I would make them rich and powerful. But no one ever came. After years and years of waiting, I became very angry. If anyone set me free, I would kill them instead of giving them anything. So, you must die!” 要点： 1. 渔夫会对精灵说什么来拯救自己？ 2. 精灵最终会杀死渔夫吗？如果不会，渔夫是如何成功自救的？ 3. 故事的结局是什么？体现了什么道理？ 思路点拨 1. 承接冲突：首先衔接开头的冲突（精灵要杀死渔夫），写出渔夫的反应（冷静、机智），通过直接引语还原渔夫的话语，推动情节发展。 2. 解决冲突：接着设计合理的情节，让渔夫通过智慧化解危机（如反问精灵的承诺、提醒精灵遵守约定），写出精灵的态度变化（从愤怒到愧疚、妥协），体现情节的合理性。 3. 结尾点题：最后写出故事的结局（如精灵实现承诺、渔夫获得回报），用一般现在时点明故事的道理，呼应本单元“故事教会我们什么”的核心目标，让故事完整有意义。 写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：承接冲突+化解危机 写作目的：衔接开头冲突，写出渔夫的反应和话语，推动情节发展，运用一般过去时和直接引语。 必写要素：渔夫的反应 + 直接引语（自救的话语） + 精灵的态度变化 基础句式：The fisherman was not afraid. He looked at the genie calmly and said, “_______(渔夫的话).” The genie was surprised to hear that. He thought for a minute and felt ashamed. 示例：The fisherman was not afraid. He looked at the genie calmly and said, “You promised to make the person who set you free rich. Why do you want to kill me? A promise is a promise!” The genie was surprised to hear that. He thought for a minute and felt ashamed. 第二段：结局+道理 写作目的：写出故事结局，用一般现在时点明道理，呼应本单元核心目标，让故事完整有意义。 必写要素：故事结局 + 精灵的行为 + 故事道理 基础句式：The genie said sorry to the fisherman and kept his promise. He gave the fisherman a lot of gold. From this story, we know that _______(道理). It’s important to keep our promises. 示例：The genie said sorry to the fisherman and kept his promise. He gave the fisherman a lot of gold and wished him happiness. From this story, we know that wisdom can help us get out of trouble. It’s also important to keep our promises. 范文 英文 Write an ending for a story The fisherman was not afraid at all. He looked at the genie calmly and said, “You made a promise long ago: if someone set you free, you would make him rich. I set you free, but you want to kill me. Is this how you keep your promise?”（一般过去时+直接引语，本单元语法） The genie was shocked and fell silent. He realized his mistake and felt very ashamed. “You are right,” he said to the fisherman. “I should keep my promise instead of being angry.” Then the genie gave the fisherman a big box of gold.（一般过去时，本单元语法） The fisherman went home happily with the gold and lived a better life. This story tells us that wisdom is powerful and keeping promises is very important（一般现在时，点明道理，本单元核心）. 中文翻译 续写故事结尾 渔夫一点也不害怕。他平静地看着精灵说：“你很久以前许下过一个承诺：如果有人把你救出来，你就会让他变得富有。我把你救出来了，可你却想杀我，这就是你遵守承诺的方式吗？” 精灵感到很震惊，陷入了沉默。他意识到了自己的错误，感到非常愧疚。“你说得对，”他对渔夫说，“我应该遵守我的承诺，而不是发脾气。”然后精灵给了渔夫一大箱金子。 渔夫带着金子开心地回家了，过上了更好的生活。这个故事告诉我们，智慧是强大的，遵守承诺非常重要。 素材积累 短语 1. set sb free — 释放某人 2. keep a promise — 遵守承诺 3. break a promise — 违背承诺 4. fall silent — 陷入沉默 5. feel ashamed — 感到愧疚 6. get out of trouble — 摆脱困境 7. look calm — 看起来冷静 8. realize one’s mistake — 意识到自己的错误 9. live a happy life — 过着幸福的生活 10. be afraid of — 害怕 11. shout angrily — 愤怒地大喊 12. think for a minute — 想了一会儿 13. make sb rich and powerful — 让某人变得富有且有力量 14. tell the truth — 说实话 15. laugh at — 嘲笑 基础句型 基础句型 （一般过去时+一般现在时） 仿写句子 He looked at the genie calmly and said, “You should keep your promise.” She looked at the ugly duckling kindly and said, “You are beautiful too.” The genie realized his mistake and felt very ashamed. The five ducklings realized their mistake and said sorry to the ugly duckling. From this story, we know that wisdom can help us get out of trouble. From this story, we know that we should not judge others by their looks. He kept his promise and gave the fisherman a lot of gold. The lion kept his promise and let the mouse go. 好句集锦 1. The fisherman smiled and said wisely, “Anger can’t solve anything, but keeping promises can bring happiness to everyone.”（渔夫微笑着，明智地说：“愤怒解决不了任何问题，但遵守承诺能给每个人带来快乐。”） 2. The genie felt so ashamed that he bowed to the fisherman and kept his promise. He hoped to make up for his mistake.（精灵感到非常愧疚，向渔夫鞠了一躬并遵守了承诺，他希望弥补自己的错误。） 3. At last, the ugly duckling found his true home with the swans. He knew that everyone has their own beauty, and we should never laugh at others.（最后，丑小鸭和天鹅们找到了自己真正的家，他明白了每个人都有自己的美丽，我们永远不应该嘲笑别人。） 4. This story tells us that kindness and wisdom are the most valuable things in the world. They can help us overcome all difficulties.（这个故事告诉我们，善良和智慧是世界上最宝贵的东西，它们能帮助我们克服所有困难。） 谚语 1. A promise is a promise.（一言既出，驷马难追。） 2. Wisdom is better than strength.（智慧胜于力量。） 3. Don’t judge a book by its cover.（不要以貌取人。）（贴合丑小鸭故事） 4. Kindness brings kindness, and honesty brings happiness.（善有善报，诚实带来幸福。） 学生写作填空练习版 Write an ending for a story The fisherman was not afraid at all. He looked at the genie calmly and said, “_______(渔夫的话，如You promised to make the person who set you free rich. Why do you want to kill me?)” The genie was _______(感受，如shocked) and fell silent. He realized his mistake and felt very _______(感受，如ashamed). “You are right,” he said to the fisherman. “_______(精灵的话，如I should keep my promise instead of being angry).” Then the genie gave the fisherman _______(事物，如a big box of gold). The fisherman went home happily with the gold and _______(动作，如lived a better life). This story tells us that _______(道理，如wisdom is powerful and keeping promises is very important). 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