Unit1写作专项：Describing People's Activities2025-2026学年鲁教版（五四学制）英语七年级上册

鲁教（五四制）七上Unit1写作专项 Describing People's Activities 写作目标 结合本单元“探讨联结彼此的方式、描述人们正在进行的活动”的核心目标，能写一篇短文描述不同场景下人们的活动，内容包括：具体的时间、场景以及人们的各类动作。 1. 能正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作（本单元核心语法）； 2. 能运用本单元与日常活动、场景描述相关的词汇（如garden, shop, ride a bike, take photos）撰写短文； 3. 能做到语言通顺、逻辑清晰，准确描述同步发生的动作，贴合日常交际的写作场景。 题目解析 1. 体裁：记叙文（场景活动描述文），要求描述不同时间或地点人们正在进行的活动，需契合本单元“用现在进行时描述当下动作”的写作要求。 2. 人称：以第三人称（he/she/they）为主描述他人活动，可适当使用第一人称（I/we）描述自身活动，符合场景描述的人称使用规范。 3. 时态：核心用现在进行时（am/is/are + doing） 描述正在发生的动作，少量用一般现在时表达个人感受，难度适配七年级学生水平。 4. 核心要求 ￮ 内容：写清具体的时间、场景，以及不同人群的活动，体现本单元“描述当下动作、感受生活联结”的目标。 ￮ 格式：无严格格式要求，以段落式呈现，开头点明背景，正文描述活动，结尾可简单表达感受。 ￮ 字数：80-100词，句子以简单句和并列句为主，正确使用现在进行时结构。 典型例题 现在是周日上午十点，人民公园里有很多人，大家都在进行不同的活动。请你以Describing People's Activities为题，写一篇短文描述公园里人们的活动，内容需说明不同人群的具体动作，语言通顺，正确使用现在进行时。 要点： 1. 整体的时间和场景是什么？ 2. 不同的人（孩子、年轻人、老人）正在做什么？ 3. 你对这个场景的感受是什么？ 思路点拨 1. 开篇点题：首先点明具体的时间、地点，总述场景里的整体情况，开门见山引出要描述的活动主题。 2. 细节描述：接着分类描述不同人群的活动，比如孩子、年轻人、老人的不同动作，正确使用现在进行时，让描述更有条理。 3. 结尾感受：最后简单表达自己对该场景的感受，让短文内容更完整，贴合日常表达逻辑。 写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：开篇点题 写作目的：点明时间、地点，总述场景状况，呼应本单元“描述当下动作”的目标。 必写要素：时间 + 地点 + 整体场景 基础句式：It is _______(time) on Sunday. There are many people in _______(place), and they are doing different things. 示例：It is ten o’clock on Sunday morning. There are many people in People’s Park, and they are doing different interesting things. 第二段：细节描述 写作目的：描述不同人物的具体活动，正确使用现在进行时，运用本单元核心语法。 必写要素：不同人群 + 现在进行时的动作描述 基础句式：Some kids _______(action 1). Young people _______(action 2). Some old people _______(action 3). A woman _______(action 4) near the lake. 示例：Some kids are flying kites on the grass. Young people are riding bikes or running along the road. Some old people are playing chess under the tree. A woman is taking photos near the lake. 第三段：结尾感受 写作目的：表达对场景的感受，让短文更完整，贴合日常表达逻辑。 必写要素：个人感受 + 简单总结 基础句式：Everyone is happy. It’s a nice day to enjoy the park and be with others. 示例：Everyone is having a good time. It’s a warm and happy moment for people to get together here. 范文 英文 Describing People's Activities It is ten o’clock on Sunday morning. There are many people in People’s Park, and they are doing different interesting things. Some kids are flying kites on the soft grass（现在进行时，本单元语法）. Young people are riding bikes or running along the park road（现在进行时，本单元语法）. Some old people are playing chess under the big tree. A young woman is taking beautiful photos near the lake. All of them look very relaxed. Everyone is having a great time here. It’s a lovely day for people to enjoy outdoor activities and stay with each other. 中文翻译 描述人们的活动 周日上午十点，人民公园里有很多人，他们正在做各种各样有趣的事。 一些孩子在柔软的草地上放风筝，年轻人沿着公园的小路骑自行车或跑步，几位老人在大树下下棋，一位年轻的女士在湖边拍漂亮的照片。他们所有人看起来都十分放松。 每个人都在这里玩得很开心，这是人们享受户外活动、彼此相伴的美好一天。 素材积累 短语 1. fly kites — 放风筝 2. play chess — 下象棋 3. take photos — 拍照 4. ride a bike — 骑自行车 5. run along the road — 沿着路跑步 6. on the grass — 在草地上 7. under the tree — 在树下 8. have a good time — 玩得开心 9. outdoor activities — 户外活动 10. do homework — 做家庭作业 11. water the flowers — 浇花 12. walk the dog — 遛狗 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 They are doing different interesting things. We are having a great time in the park. Some kids are flying kites on the grass. Some students are reading books in the library. A young woman is taking photos near the lake. A little boy is playing with a ball near the river. Everyone is having a great time here. Everyone is enjoying the music there. 好句集锦 1. It’s a sunny morning, and people are enjoying all kinds of interesting activities in the park.（这是一个晴朗的早晨，人们正在公园里享受各种各样有趣的活动。） 2. Some children are playing games together, and their parents are talking and laughing beside them.（一些孩子在一起玩游戏，他们的父母在旁边谈笑风生。） 3. An old man is playing the erhu, and many people are listening to him carefully.（一位老人正在拉二胡，很多人在认真地听。） 4. People are doing different things, but everyone is feeling happy and relaxed in this beautiful park.（人们做着不同的事，但每个人在这座美丽的公园里都感到快乐又放松。） 谚语 1. Joy shared by all is joy doubled.（快乐与人共享，便是双倍快乐。） 2. A busy life is a happy life.（忙碌的生活是幸福的生活。） 3. Life is full of small and warm moments.（生活处处是温暖的小瞬间。） 4. Togetherness makes life more beautiful.（相伴让生活更美好。） 学生写作填空练习版 Describing People's Activities It is _______(时间，如ten o’clock) on Sunday morning. There are many people in _______(地点，如People’s Park), and they are doing different _______(形容词，如interesting) things. Some kids _______(动作1，如are flying kites) on the grass. Young people _______(动作2，如are riding bikes) along the road. Some old people _______(动作3，如are playing chess) under the tree. A woman _______(动作4，如is taking photos) near the lake. All of them look very _______(形容词，如relaxed). Everyone _______(动作，如is having a good time) here. It’s a _______(形容词，如lovely) day for people to enjoy outdoor activities and stay with each other. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $