Unit 5 写作专项：A Travel Diary- 2025-2026学年北师大版八年级英语上册

北师大版英语八年级上册 Unit 5 写作专项 A Travel Diary 一、写作目标 结合本单元“旅行、现在完成时、for/since、just/ever/never/yet/already”的核心目标，能写一篇旅行日记，内容包括：到达地点、已完成的活动、当地体验和未来计划。 1. 能正确使用现在完成时描述从过去到现在的旅行经历，并用 for/since 说明持续时间，用 just/already/never/yet 丰富表达。 2. 能运用本单元与旅行相关的词汇（如arrive in, stay in, go on a tour, taste local food）描述旅行活动。 3. 遵循“到达与初印象-已完成的活动-未来计划与感受”的三段式结构，语言生动、情感真挚，字数控制在80-120词，贴合八年级上册日常写作场景。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁：应用文（旅行日记），用于记录旅行中的所见所感，语气亲切、侧重个人体验。 2. 人称：主要使用第一人称（I, my parents and I），因为是记录个人经历。 3. 时态：核心使用现在完成时描述已完成的活动，用一般现在时描述感受，用一般将来时说明未来计划。 4. 核心要求 · 内容：写清到达的地点、已完成的活动、当地美食和景点，以及第二天的计划和整体感受。 · 格式：包含开头（到达与初印象）、正文（已完成的活动）、结尾（未来计划与感受）三部分，结构完整。 · 字数：80-120词，合理运用现在完成时和相关副词，贴合单元语法要求。 三、典型例题 你正在度假，请写一篇旅行日记，记录你的旅行经历。 要点： 1. 你和家人/朋友到达了哪里？对这个地方的初印象如何？ 2. 到目前为止，你们已经做了哪些事？品尝了哪些美食？ 3. 第二天有什么计划？你对这次旅行的整体感受是什么？ 四、思路点拨 1. 第一段（开头）：用“My parents and I arrived in Copenhagen last Sunday. It’s such a wonderful city. We’re staying in a hotel next to the railway station with an excellent view.”点明到达地点、住宿情况和初印象。 2. 第二段（正文）：用“We have already been on a bus tour of the city. We’ve also gone up the Golden Tower. We have also tasted some delicious local food.”描述已完成的活动和美食体验，使用现在完成时。 3. 第三段（结尾）：用“Tomorrow, we are going to Tivoli Gardens... I really love this trip! It has opened my eyes to many new things. I’m looking forward to more visits tomorrow.”说明第二天的计划，并表达对这次旅行的喜爱和期待。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：开头（到达与初印象） 写作目的：交代背景，点明地点和初印象。 必写要素：到达地点 + 住宿 + 初印象 基础句式：My parents and I arrived in [地点] last [星期/日期]. It’s such a [形容词] city. We’re staying in a hotel [地点描述] with an excellent view. 示例：My parents and I arrived in Copenhagen last Sunday. It’s such a wonderful city. We’re staying in a hotel next to the railway station with an excellent view. 第二段：正文（已完成的活动 + 体验） 写作目的：详细描述已做的事和体验，使用现在完成时。 必写要素：已完成的活动 + 美食/景点体验 基础句式：We have already been on [活动]. We’ve also [活动]. We have also tasted some delicious local food, like [食物]. 示例：We have already been on a bus tour of the city. We’ve also gone up the Golden Tower. We have also tasted some delicious local food, like fish. 第三段：结尾（未来计划 + 感受） 写作目的：说明计划，表达感受和期待。 必写要素：第二天计划 + 整体感受 + 期待 基础句式：Tomorrow, we are going to [计划]. I really love this trip! It has opened my eyes to many new things. I’m looking forward to more visits tomorrow. 示例：Tomorrow, we are going to Tivoli Gardens and the Viking Ship Museum. I really love this trip! It has opened my eyes to many new things. I’m looking forward to more visits tomorrow. 六、范文（中英对照 ） 3rd October My parents and I arrived in Copenhagen last Sunday. It’s such a wonderful city. We’re staying in a hotel next to the railway station with an excellent view. It’s a bit cold here, but we don’t mind. We have already been on a bus tour of the city. It was really interesting. We’ve also gone up the Golden Tower. We have also tasted some delicious local food. I particularly enjoyed the fish. Tomorrow, we are going to Tivoli Gardens, a popular park, and the Viking Ship Museum. I really love this trip! It has opened my eyes to many new things. I’m looking forward to more visits tomorrow. 中文翻译 10月3日 我和父母上周日抵达了哥本哈根。这是一座非常棒的城市。我们住在火车站旁边的一家酒店里，视野极佳。这里有点冷，但我们并不介意。 我们已经乘坐巴士游览了这座城市，非常有趣。我们还登上了金塔。我们也品尝了一些美味的当地美食，我尤其喜欢那里的鱼。 明天，我们打算去蒂沃利花园（一个很受欢迎的公园）和维京船博物馆。我真的很喜欢这次旅行！它让我见识了很多新事物。我期待明天更多的行程。 七、素材积累 短语 1. arrive in 到达（大地点） 2. stay in a hotel 住在酒店 3. go on a bus tour 乘坐巴士游览 4. go up the Golden Tower 登上金塔 5. taste local food 品尝当地美食 6. particularly enjoyed 尤其喜欢 7. look forward to 期待 8. open my eyes to many new things 让我见识了很多新事物 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 My parents and I arrived in Copenhagen last Sunday. My friends and I arrived in Beijing last Friday. We have already been on a bus tour of the city. We have already visited the Palace Museum. Tomorrow, we are going to Tivoli Gardens. Tomorrow, we are going to the Great Wall. I really love this trip! It has opened my eyes to many new things. I really love this trip! It has taught me a lot about history. 好句集锦 1. It’s such a wonderful city. We’re staying in a hotel next to the railway station with an excellent view.（这是一座非常棒的城市。我们住在火车站旁边的一家酒店里，视野极佳。） 2. We have already been on a bus tour of the city. It was really interesting.（我们已经乘坐巴士游览了这座城市，非常有趣。） 3. I really love this trip! It has opened my eyes to many new things. I’m looking forward to more visits tomorrow.（我真的很喜欢这次旅行！它让我见识了很多新事物。我期待明天更多的行程。） 谚语 1. Read ten thousand books. Travel ten thousand miles.（读万卷书，行万里路。） 2. The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page.（世界是一本书，不旅行的人只读到了一页。） 3. Travel is the best teacher.（旅行是最好的老师。） 4. To travel is to live.（旅行即是生活。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 [日期，如5th November] My friends and I arrived in [地点，如Sanya] last [星期，如Saturday]. It’s such a [形容词，如beautiful] city. We’re staying in a hotel [地点描述，如near the beach] with an excellent view. It’s [天气，sunny and warm] here, and we love it. We have already [活动，如swum in the sea]. We’ve also [活动，如tried fresh seafood]. We have also tasted some delicious local food, like [食物，如coconut juice]. Tomorrow, we are going to [计划，如visit a rainforest]. I really love this trip! It has [感受，如made me feel relaxed]. I’m looking forward to more fun tomorrow. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $