Unit 5 Travel- Writing知识点清单＆范文2025-2026学年北师大版英语八年级上册

Unit 5 Travel ⭐Writing知识点清单 一、写作核心目标 掌握旅行日记的结构与语言特点，能清晰记录旅行地点、感受、已完成的经历和未来计划，熟练运用现在完成时和be going to表将来。 二、旅行日记基础认知 1. 文体特点：以第一人称记录旅行见闻，语气亲切（像写给好友），属于记叙文 + 应用文结合的写作类型。 2. 日记格式： · 顶格写日期（Date），例：3rd October · 正文分段清晰，内容围绕旅行展开 · 无需额外称呼 / 署名，结尾自然收束 三、核心考点梳理 1. 日记结构（Focus on Structure） 段落功能 对应教材选项 写作要点 ① 旅行概况 C (general information) 说明所在地点、住宿、天气、整体感受 ② 已完成的旅行经历 A (travel experiences so far) 用 现在完成时（have/has done）描述已做的事 ③ 明日计划 B (plans for tomorrow) 用be going to 描述未来计划 ④ 整体感受 D (feelings) 表达对旅行的喜爱、收获与期待 2. 时态重点（核心语法） · 现在完成时：描述到目前为止已完成的旅行经历 结构：主语 + have/has + 过去分词 例句：We have already been on a bus tour of the city. · be going to：描述未来计划 / 打算 结构：主语 + am/is/are going to + 动词原形 例句：Tomorrow, we are going to Tivoli Gardens. 3. 语言技巧：代词 it 的用法（Focus on Language） 作用：避免重复，使行文更简洁。 例句 it 指代内容 It’s such a wonderful city. Copenhagen It was really interesting. the bus tour It is 63 metres high. the Golden Tower It has opened my eyes to many new things. this trip ⭐Writing范文 题目： 假如你是李华，刚结束在甘肃兰州的三天旅行，请你根据以下提示，写一篇旅行日记，记录你的见闻与感受。 写作要点： 1. 说明你所在的地点、天气及整体感受； 2. 描述你已经完成的旅行活动（至少 2 项）； 3. 谈谈你对此次旅行的收获与未来的旅行期待。 要求： 1. 词数：80-100 词 2. 内容完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 日记格式规范，可适当加入感官描写（如视觉、味觉）使内容更生动； 4. 必须使用现在完成时描述已完成的活动，用be going to 表达未来期待。 参考范文一 15th October I’m in Lanzhou with my family now. It’s a lovely city by the Yellow River. The weather is sunny and cool, and I’m really enjoying this trip. We have already visited the Yellow River Mother Statue and walked along the river bank. We’ve also tasted delicious Lanzhou beef noodles. It’s the most famous local food here. Tomorrow, we are going to visit Bingling Temple. I can’t wait to see the ancient art there. I really love this trip! It has opened my eyes to the history of Gansu. I’m looking forward to more fun tomorrow. 参考范文二 20th October I’m in Tianshui with my parents now. It’s a historic city in eastern Gansu. The weather is cloudy but warm, and I’m having a great time here. We have already climbed Maijishan Grottoes and seen the ancient Buddha statues. It’s amazing to see the art from thousands of years ago. We’ve also tasted sweet huiguo, a special local fruit. It smells and tastes wonderful. Tomorrow, we are going to visit Fuxi Temple. I want to learn more about the early history of China. I really love this trip! It has taught me so much about Gansu’s culture. I’m looking forward to more interesting visits tomorrow. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $