Unit 3 写作专项：An Essay on an Emotional Experience 2025-2026学年北师大版八年级英语上册

北师大版英语八年级上册 Unit 3 写作专项 An Essay on an Emotional Experience 一、写作目标 结合本单元“情感与情绪、过去进行时、when/while”的核心目标，能写一篇短文描述一次情感经历，内容包括：事件经过、当时的感受、处理方式和从中得到的启示。 1. 能正确使用过去进行时描述过去某一时刻正在进行的动作，并用 when/while 连接同时发生的事件。 2. 能运用本单元与情感相关的词汇（如sad, nervous, confident, overreact）描述感受和情绪变化。 3. 遵循“背景-事件-反思”的三段式结构，语言真诚、情感真挚，字数控制在80-120词，贴合八年级上册日常写作场景。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁：记叙文（短文），用于分享个人情感经历，语气真诚、侧重叙事与反思。 2. 人称：主要使用第一人称（I, my），因为是介绍自己的经历。 3. 时态：核心使用一般过去时叙述事件，用过去进行时描述背景动作。 4. 核心要求 · 内容：写清事件的起因、经过、当时的感受，以及如何处理情绪、从中得到的教训。 · 格式：包含开头（背景与问题）、正文（事件经过）、结尾（反思与教训）三部分，结构完整。 · 字数：80-120词，合理运用过去进行时和when/while，贴合单元语法要求。 三、典型例题 你的学校英文杂志邀请你写一篇关于一次情感经历的文章。请你写一篇短文，介绍这次经历。 要点： 1. 你想写哪种感受或情绪？ 2. 这件事是什么时候发生的？具体经过是怎样的？ 3. 你从这次经历中学到了什么？ 四、思路点拨 1. 第一段（开头）：用“I’m ... and I’m ... years old. I study hard and get good grades. However, I’m not perfect! I am too emotional.”介绍自己，并点出自己的情绪问题，引出下文。 2. 第二段（正文）：用“Last week, my best friend ... NOT ME! It upset me a lot, and I refused to talk to her.”详细描述事件经过，并用“I felt I wasn’t her best friend any more.”表达当时的感受。 3. 第三段（结尾）：用“Whenever we have a problem with friends, it’s not helpful to be emotional. The best way to solve it is to talk to them.”总结反思，点明从中学到的道理。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：开头（自我介绍 + 情绪问题） 写作目的：引出话题，交代背景。 必写要素：自我介绍 + 情绪问题 基础句式：I’m [名字] and I’m [年龄] years old. I [优点]. However, I’m not perfect! I am too [情绪问题]. Sometimes, I feel [情绪] for hours because something happened to me. 示例：I’m Lucy and I’m 14 years old. I study hard and get good grades. However, I’m not perfect! I am too emotional. Sometimes, I feel sad for hours because something happened to me. 第二段：正文（事件经过 + 感受） 写作目的：详细描述事件，表达当时的感受。 必写要素：事件经过 + 感受 + 处理方式 基础句式：Last week, my best friend [事件]. It upset me a lot, and I refused to talk to her although she tried to talk to me a few times. I felt [感受]. A few days later, I came to realise I [反思]. So, I talked to her about my feelings and she explained what had happened. 示例：Last week, my best friend Lily visited a museum with Anna, NOT ME! It upset me a lot, and I refused to talk to her although she tried to talk to me a few times. I felt I wasn’t her best friend any more. A few days later, I came to realise I overreacted. So, I talked to Lily about my feelings and she explained what had happened. 第三段：结尾（反思 + 教训） 写作目的：总结全文，点明从中学到的道理。 必写要素：反思 + 教训 基础句式：Whenever we have a problem with [对象], it’s not helpful to be [情绪]. The best way to solve it is to [方法]. 示例：Whenever we have a problem with friends, it’s not helpful to be emotional. The best way to solve it is to talk to them. 六、范文（中英对照 ） Being Too Emotional Is Not Helpful I’m Lucy and I’m 14 years old. I study hard and get good grades. However, I’m not perfect! I am too emotional. Sometimes, I feel sad for hours because something happened to me. Last week, my best friend Lily visited a museum with Anna, NOT ME! It upset me a lot, and I refused to talk to her although she tried to talk to me a few times. I felt I wasn’t her best friend any more. A few days later, I came to realise I overreacted. So, I talked to Lily about my feelings and she explained what had happened. Whenever we have a problem with friends, it’s not helpful to be emotional. The best way to solve it is to talk to them. 中文翻译 过于情绪化并无益处 我是露西，今年14岁。我学习努力，成绩优异。然而，我并非完美无缺！我太情绪化了。有时，因为发生了一些事，我会难过好几个小时。 上周，我最好的朋友莉莉和安娜去了博物馆，却没有叫我！这让我非常难过，尽管她几次尝试和我说话，我都拒绝理她。我觉得自己不再是她最好的朋友了。几天后，我意识到自己反应过度了。于是，我和莉莉谈了我的感受，她也解释了事情的经过。 每当我们和朋友之间出现问题时，情绪化是没有帮助的。解决问题的最好方法就是和他们沟通。 七、素材积累 短语 1. get good grades 取得好成绩 2. be too emotional 太情绪化 3. refuse to talk to her 拒绝和她说话 4. come to realise 逐渐意识到 5. overreact 反应过度 6. talk to her about my feelings 和她谈我的感受 7. solve the problem 解决问题 8. talk to them 和他们沟通 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 I study hard and get good grades. I exercise every day and stay healthy. Sometimes, I feel sad for hours because something happened to me. Sometimes, I feel nervous before exams because I worry about my grades. Whenever we have a problem with friends, it’s not helpful to be emotional. Whenever we have a problem with our parents, it’s helpful to talk to them. The best way to solve it is to talk to them. The best way to learn English is to practise every day. 好句集锦 1. However, I’m not perfect! I am too emotional. Sometimes, I feel sad for hours because something happened to me.（然而，我并非完美无缺！我太情绪化了。有时，因为发生了一些事，我会难过好几个小时。） 2. It upset me a lot, and I refused to talk to her although she tried to talk to me a few times.（这让我非常难过，尽管她几次尝试和我说话，我都拒绝理她。） 3. Whenever we have a problem with friends, it’s not helpful to be emotional. The best way to solve it is to talk to them.（每当我们和朋友之间出现问题时，情绪化是没有帮助的。解决问题的最好方法就是和他们沟通。） 谚语 1. Don’t let your emotions control you.（不要让情绪控制你。） 2. A problem shared is a problem halved.（问题与人分享，就解决了一半。） 3. It’s okay to not be okay.（不开心也没关系。） 4. Talk, don’t just walk away.（沟通，而不是一走了之。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 My Emotional Experience I’m [名字] and I’m [年龄] years old. I [优点，如work hard and get good grades]. However, I’m not perfect! I am too [情绪问题，如sensitive]. Sometimes, I feel [情绪，如angry] for hours because something happened to me. Last week, [事件，如my deskmate laughed at my mistake in class]. It upset me a lot, and I [行动，如refused to talk to him] although he tried to say sorry to me. I felt [感受，如I was not respected]. A few days later, I came to realise I [反思，如overreacted]. So, I [行动，如talked to him about my feelings] and he said he was really sorry. Whenever we have a problem with [对象，如classmates], it’s not helpful to be [情绪，如angry]. The best way to solve it is to [方法，如talk to them calmly]. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $