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北师大版英语七年级下 Unit4 写作专项
Introducing a Landmark
一、写作目标
结合本单元“地标建筑、be going to、形容词”的核心目标,能写一篇短文介绍一处地标,内容包括:位置、历史、特点及价值。
1. 能正确使用形容词(long, beautiful, old, famous)描述地标特点。
2. 能运用be going to表达参观计划,贴合单元语法。
3. 遵循“事实介绍-价值升华”的结构,语言简洁流畅,字数控制在80-120词,贴合七年级学生水平。
二、题目解析
1. 体裁:说明文(短文),用于介绍地标建筑,语气客观、信息清晰。
2. 人称:主要使用第三人称(it, they)描述地标,用第一人称(I)表达个人感受。
3. 时态:核心使用一般现在时介绍事实,用be going to表达未来计划。
4. 核心要求
· 内容:写清地标名称、位置、历史、尺寸、特点及价值意义。
· 格式:包含开头(点题)、正文(事实介绍)、结尾(价值升华)三部分,结构完整。
· 字数:80-120词,合理运用简单句和形容词,贴合单元语法要求。
三、典型例题
你要制作一本关于中国地标的班级书。请你写一篇短文,介绍一处你想介绍的地标,并说明原因。
要点:
1. 这处地标叫什么名字?它在哪里?
2. 它有什么历史或特点?(用形容词描述)
3. 它为什么是一处地标?它有什么价值?
四、思路点拨
1. 第一段(开头):用“Near..., you can see...”点明位置和名称,同时用形容词(modern, famous)丰富描述,开门见山。
2. 第二段(正文):详细介绍地标历史(over ... years old)、尺寸(... metres long)和特点(man-made, amazing),用形容词让描述更生动。
3. 第三段(结尾):升华地标价值,说明它是世界奇迹、必看之地,以及它作为人类伟大象征的意义,并用“be going to”表达参观计划,体现单元语法。
五、写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:开头(名称 + 位置 + 形容词)
写作目的:开门见山,交代核心信息。
必写要素:地标名称 + 位置 + 形容词描述
基础句式:Near the [形容词,如modern] city of [城市名], you can see [地标名]. It is one of the most [形容词,如famous] [材质,如man-made] buildings in the world.
示例:Near the modern city of Beijing, you can see the Great Wall. It is one of the most famous man-made buildings in the world.
第二段:正文(历史 + 尺寸 + 特点)
写作目的:详细介绍地标,用形容词丰富描述。
必写要素:历史 + 尺寸 + 特点 + 形容词
基础句式:It is over [数字] years old. It is about [尺寸] kilometres long and in some places it is over [高度] metres tall. It is very [形容词,如amazing] to walk on it.
示例:It is over 2,000 years old. It is about 8,850 kilometres long and in some places it is over 7 metres tall. It is very amazing to walk on it.
第三段:结尾(价值 + 意义 + 计划)
写作目的:升华地标价值,说明其重要性,并体现单元语法。
必写要素:价值 + 意义 + be going to 句型
基础句式:It is a must-see place in [国家]. It belongs to [国家], but it also belongs to the world. I am going to visit it one day and learn more about its history.
示例:It is a must-see place in China. It belongs to China, but it also belongs to the world. I am going to visit it one day and learn more about its long history.
六、范文(中英对照,80-120词,三段式)
Introducing a Landmark
Near the modern city of Beijing, you can see the Great Wall. It is one of the most famous man-made buildings in the world. It is a symbol of China’s long history and great culture.
It is over 2,000 years old. It is about 8,850 kilometres long and in some places it is over 7 metres tall. It is very amazing to walk on it and look at the beautiful mountains around it.
It is a must-see place in China. It belongs to China, but it also belongs to the world. I am going to visit it one day with my family and learn more about its amazing history.
中文翻译
介绍一处地标
在现代化的北京附近,你可以看到长城。它是世界上最著名的人造建筑之一,是中国悠久历史和灿烂文化的象征。
它有2000多年的历史,全长约8850公里,有些地方高度超过7米。走在上面,看着周围美丽的群山,感觉非常震撼。
长城是中国的必游之地。它属于中国,但也属于世界。我打算有一天和家人一起去参观它,更多地了解它令人惊叹的历史。
七、素材积累
好词
1. modern city 现代化城市
2. man-made buildings 人造建筑
3. long history 悠久的历史
4. great culture 灿烂的文化
5. must-see place 必游之地
6. amazing history 令人惊叹的历史
好句
1. Near the modern city of Beijing, you can see the Great Wall. It is one of the most famous man-made buildings in the world.
(在现代化的北京附近,你可以看到长城。它是世界上最著名的人造建筑之一。)
2. It is over 2,000 years old. It is about 8,850 kilometres long and in some places it is over 7 metres tall.
(它有2000多年的历史,全长约8850公里,有些地方高度超过7米。)
3. It is a must-see place in China. It belongs to China, but it also belongs to the world.
(长城是中国的必游之地。它属于中国,但也属于世界。)
谚语
1. He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.
(不到长城非好汉。)
2. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
(千里之行,始于足下。)
3. The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page.
(世界是一本书,不旅行的人只读了一页。)
4. Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance.
(伟大的事业不是靠力量,而是靠毅力完成的。)
八、学生写作填空练习版
Introducing a Landmark
Near the [形容词,如ancient] city of [城市名,如Xi'an], you can see [地标名,如the Terracotta Army]. It is one of the most [形容词,如interesting] [材质,如ancient] buildings in the world. It is a symbol of [意义,如ancient Chinese wisdom].
It is over [数字,如2,200] years old. It has about [数量,如6,000] life-size figures and in some places it is over [高度,如2] metres tall. It is very [形容词,如exciting] to look at all the different faces of the soldiers.
It is a must-see place in [国家,如China]. It belongs to [国家], but it also belongs to the world. I am going to visit it one day with my [家人/朋友,如parents] and learn more about its [形容词,如amazing] history.
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