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北师大版英语七年级下 Unit2 写作专项
Describing a Favourite Dish
一、写作目标
结合本单元“食物与健康、可数/不可数名词、It is (not) + adj. + to do”的核心目标,能写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一道菜,内容包括:菜名、食材、制作方式、味道及喜欢的理由。
1. 能正确使用食物相关词汇和可数/不可数名词描述菜肴的食材与制作。
2. 能灵活运用It is + adj. + to do句型表达饮食相关的观点,如健康、易做等。
3. 遵循“介绍-描述-评价”的逻辑结构,语言简洁流畅,字数控制在80-120词,贴合七年级学生水平。
二、题目解析
1. 体裁:说明文(短文),用于介绍个人喜爱的菜肴,语气亲切自然,侧重客观描述与主观感受结合。
2. 人称:主要使用第一人称(I, my),描述制作者动作可用第三人称(he/she)。
3. 时态:核心使用一般现在时,描述菜肴的食材、制作方式、味道和个人喜好,为习惯性、客观性表达。
4. 核心要求
· 内容:写清菜名、制作者、主要食材、简单制作步骤、味道特点,说明喜欢的理由并结合健康视角。
· 格式:包含开头(点题)、正文(详细描述)、结尾(评价与情感)三部分,结构完整。
· 字数:80-120词,合理运用简单句和少量并列句,贴合单元语法要求。
三、典型例题
本单元我们学习了健康饮食和食物相关的表达,了解了可数与不可数名词的用法。请你以 My Favourite Dish 为题,写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一道菜,内容需说明菜名、食材、制作方式、味道,以及你喜欢它的理由。
要点:
1. 你最喜欢的菜是什么?是谁经常做这道菜?
2. 这道菜用到了哪些主要食材?制作过程简单吗?
3. 这道菜的味道怎么样?它是一道健康的菜吗?
4. 你为什么喜欢这道菜肴?
四、思路点拨
1. 开篇点题:直接用“My favourite dish is...”点明菜名,说明制作者,一句话开门见山,引出下文。
2. 正文详解:先描述菜肴的主要食材(区分可数/不可数名词),再简单介绍制作步骤,接着描述味道和搭配,内容简洁不冗余。
3. 结尾总结:用It is + adj. + to do句型评价菜肴,最后说明喜欢的理由,表达喜爱之情,呼应开头。
五、写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:开头(点明菜名 + 制作者)
写作目的:开门见山,交代核心信息,引出描述对象。
必写要素:菜名 + 制作者
基础句式:My favourite dish is _______. My _______ often makes it for me, and his/her cooking is great.
第二段:正文(食材 + 制作 + 味道 + 搭配)
写作目的:详细描述菜肴,运用单元词汇和语法,丰富内容。
必写要素:主要食材 + 简单制作步骤 + 味道 + 主食搭配
基础句式:He/She uses some _______, a few _______ and a little _______ to make it. It’s easy to cook it, and it smells very nice. He/She usually serves it with a little _______, and it tastes _______.
第三段:结尾(评价 + 喜欢的理由)
写作目的:总结评价菜肴,表达主观情感,完成短文。
必写要素:句型运用 + 健康评价 + 喜爱理由
基础句式:It is _______ to eat this dish because it has fresh vegetables and protein. It doesn’t take much time to make it, so my _______ cooks it often. I love it because it tastes great and it’s full of my family’s love.
六、范文(中英对照 )
My Favourite Dish
My favourite dish is tomato and egg noodles. My mum often makes it for our family, and her cooking is always great. She uses some fresh tomatoes, a few eggs, some noodles and some salt to make it. It’s easy to cook, and it smells very nice when it’s ready. She usually adds a little green onion on top, and it tastes sweet and sour. It is healthy to eat this dish because it has fresh vegetables and protein. It doesn’t take much time to make it, so my mum cooks it for me when I’m hungry. I love it so much because it tastes great and is full of my mum’s love.
中文翻译
我最喜欢的菜是西红柿鸡蛋面。妈妈经常给我们全家做这道菜,她的厨艺一直很棒。她用一些新鲜的西红柿、几个鸡蛋、一点面条和少许盐来做。这道菜做起来很简单,出锅时闻起来特别香。她通常会在上面撒一点葱花,吃起来酸甜可口。吃这道菜很健康,因为它含有新鲜的蔬菜和蛋白质。做这道菜花不了多少时间,所以我饿的时候妈妈就会给我做。我非常喜欢它,因为它味道好极了,还充满了妈妈的爱。
七、素材积累
好词
1. favourite dish 最喜欢的菜
2. fresh tomatoes 新鲜的西红柿
3. some noodles 一点面条
4. a few eggs 几个鸡蛋
5. smell nice 闻起来香
6. taste sweet and sour 尝起来酸甜可口
7. fresh vegetables 新鲜蔬菜
8. full of love 充满爱
好句
1. My favourite dish is tomato and egg noodles. My mum often makes it for our family, and her cooking is always great.
(我最喜欢的菜是西红柿鸡蛋面。妈妈经常给我们全家做这道菜,她的厨艺一直很棒。)
2. It is healthy to eat this dish because it has fresh vegetables and protein.
(吃这道菜很健康,因为它含有新鲜的蔬菜和蛋白质。)
3. It doesn’t take much time to make it, so my mum cooks it for me when I’m hungry.
(做这道菜花不了多少时间,所以我饿的时候妈妈就会给我做。)
谚语
1. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.(一天一苹果,医生远离我。)
2. We are what we eat.(人如其食;饮食决定健康。)
3. Health is wealth.(健康就是财富。)
4. A simple diet keeps a healthy body.(清淡饮食,强身健体。)
八、学生写作填空练习版
My Favourite Dish
My favourite dish is __________(菜名,如tomato and egg rice). My __________(家人,如mum/dad) often makes it for our family, and his/her cooking is always great. He/She uses some __________(不可数/复数食材,如fresh carrots), a few __________(可数食材,如potatoes) and a little/some __________(不可数食材,如rice) to make it. It’s easy to cook it, and it smells very nice when it’s ready. He/She usually adds a little __________(食材,如salt), and it tastes __________(味道,如salty and delicious). It is __________(形容词,如healthy) to eat this dish because it has fresh vegetables and protein. It doesn’t take much time to make it, so my __________(家人) cooks it for me when I am hungry. I love it so much because it tastes great and it is full of my family’s __________(情感,如love).
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