Unit 7 The Bad Attitude 写作专项学案 -2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语九年级下册

Unit 7 The Bad Attitude 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“态度决定结果”主题，围绕老木匠因工作态度变差而自食其果的核心故事，写一篇阐释态度的重要性、描述个人态度转变经历或分享正确处事态度的短文，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“态度与工作”相关核心词汇（如attitude、retire、project、apartment、concentrate、employer、uneven、leak、ashamed、privacy等）及短语（concentrate on、take over、to the best of one’s ability、have faith in、give up、look forward to、be ashamed of等）； 2.能熟练运用“should/shouldn’t”表达建议，掌握“If only...”虚拟语气表达遗憾，正确使用“but” “however” “so” “finally”等衔接表达； 3.能按“态度主题引入→核心细节（故事解读/经历描述/态度建议）→感悟与践行”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“秉持良好态度，成就更好自我”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：主题阐释类说明文、态度转变类记叙文或建议提出类应用文，兼具思辨性与实用性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享经历、表达感受）或第三人称（解读故事、客观建议）为主； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1个核心角度（态度的意义/个人态度转变/正确态度建议）、2-3个关键细节（态度影响/转变过程/建议要点）、1个核心感悟（良好态度的价值）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，阐释准确深刻、描述真实具体或建议切实可行，语言符合九年级学生水平，体现对态度的深度思考。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“老木匠的故事深刻揭示了态度的力量——敷衍的态度只会换来遗憾的结果，而认真的态度才能收获美好” “态度是人生的方向盘，我的一次态度转变经历让我读懂了‘认真’的意义’’ “良好的态度是成功的基石，无论做人还是做事，态度都起着关键作用”），用简洁句式点明核心观点（如“态度决定行为，行为决定结果” “一时的敷衍或许能省事，但最终只会反噬自己”），用引导性语言引出下文； 2.中间：若解读故事，按“故事背景→态度转变→自食其果→核心启示”展开，结合老木匠从认真工作到敷衍了事、最终住进自己粗制滥造的房子等细节，阐释“认真态度”的重要性；若描述个人态度转变经历，聚焦“态度问题→负面影响→转变契机→积极结果”，用具体事例（如学习中从敷衍到认真、做事从浮躁到踏实）传递真实体验；若提出正确态度建议，围绕“专注做事→尊重他人→坚守初心”，用具体方法（如“做事专注不分心” “认真对待每一项任务”）支撑建议，确保可操作； 3.结尾：分享感悟（如“良好的态度是人生最宝贵的财富，它能让我们在平凡的岗位上做出不平凡的成绩，避免不必要的遗憾” “态度没有高低之分，但它能决定我们人生的高度”）或表达行动意愿（如“我会以老木匠为戒，无论做什么事都秉持认真负责的态度，不敷衍、不浮躁” “我会将良好态度的重要性分享给身边人，与大家一起以积极态度面对生活”），呼应单元“The Bad Attitude”的核心主题，传递“认真做事、端正态度”的积极态度。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：主题阐释——态度的力量（The Power of Attitude） 第一段：故事引入与核心定位 基础句式：The story of the old carpenter teaches us a valuable lesson about attitude. A bad attitude can lead to regret, while a good attitude brings positive results. 示例：What kind of attitude should we hold when doing things? The old carpenter’s experience gives us a clear answer—only a serious attitude can lead to good results. 第二段：故事解读与细节支撑 基础句式：The carpenter had worked hard all his life, but when he was about to retire, he developed a bad attitude. He thought he wouldn’t get a good reward, so he used cheap materials and didn’t concentrate on his work. Finally, he found out the house he built was for himself, and he felt deeply ashamed. 示例：The old carpenter was asked to build one last house before retiring. At first, he worked hard as usual, but soon he became lazy. He envied others living in the nice houses he built, while he could only afford a small apartment. So he bought cheap materials and didn’t concentrate on his work. When the house was finished, his boss gave him the key—this house was a reward for him. He regretted it deeply, for the floors were uneven and the roof would leak. 第三段：感悟总结与践行 基础句式：This story tells us that attitude is everything. No matter what we do, we should keep a good attitude and do our best. Only in this way can we avoid regret and achieve success. 示例：The carpenter’s regret shows that a bad attitude hurts no one but ourselves. Whether studying or working, we should be serious and responsible. We shouldn’t be lazy or perfunctory. I will remember this story and hold a good attitude towards everything. 模板二：态度转变经历——我的态度转变之旅（My Journey of Attitude Change） 第一段：经历引入与背景铺垫 基础句式：I used to have a bad attitude towards my homework—I was lazy and perfunctory. But a lesson from my teacher made me change my attitude, and it brought great changes to me. 示例：Attitude can change everything. I once was a student with a careless attitude towards study, but an experience made me realize the importance of a good attitude. 第二段：经历细节与过程描述 基础句式：At first, I always finished my homework quickly without checking, so I made many mistakes. My teacher talked to me and told me the story of the old carpenter. I realized my mistake. From then on, I concentrated on my homework, checked carefully, and tried my best to do it well. 示例：I used to be lazy when doing group projects. I always left most of the work to my teammates and didn’t take it seriously. Once, our project failed because of my carelessness. My teammate said to me: “A bad attitude will ruin the whole thing.” I felt ashamed. Then I remembered the old carpenter’s story. I decided to change. I started to take responsibility, concentrate on the work, and communicate actively with my teammates. 第三段：经历感悟与收获 基础句式：With this change, my academic performance improved a lot. This experience taught me that a good attitude is the key to success. I will keep this attitude in my future life. 示例：Our next project was a great success. This experience made me understand that a good attitude is not only responsible for others but also for ourselves. I will always hold a serious and responsible attitude towards study and work. 模板三：提出建议——秉持良好态度，成就更好自我（Hold a Good Attitude to Achieve a Better Self） 第一段：建议引入与核心意义 基础句式：A good attitude is essential in our study and life. It helps us solve problems better and achieve our goals. Here are some suggestions on holding a good attitude. 示例：Whether in study, work or daily communication, a good attitude plays an important role. To help everyone develop a good attitude, I want to share some practical suggestions. 第二段：具体建议与细节支撑 基础句式：First, we should concentrate on what we are doing. Don’t be distracted or perfunctory. Second, we should be responsible. Treat every task seriously, just like the carpenter should have done. Third, we should avoid negative emotions. When we feel unhappy, we should adjust ourselves in time. 示例：First, be serious about every task. Don’t be lazy or careless, no matter how small it is. Second, concentrate on what you are doing. Don’t think about other things when working or studying. Third, learn to reflect on yourself. If you make mistakes because of a bad attitude, apologize and correct them in time. These suggestions can help us develop a good attitude. 第三段：建议呼吁与展望 基础句式：A good attitude can bring us more opportunities and success. Let’s put these suggestions into practice and hold a good attitude towards everything. 示例：A good attitude is a treasure that benefits us for a lifetime. Let’s take the old carpenter’s regret as a warning, develop a good attitude, and strive for a better future. I believe that with a good attitude, we can overcome all difficulties. 范文 A Good Attitude Leads to Good Results The old carpenter’s story clearly shows that attitude determines the quality of our work and life. The carpenter had worked hard for the company all his life. When he was about to retire, his boss asked him to build one last house. But the carpenter developed a bad attitude—he envied others living in nice houses while he could only live in a small apartment. So he used cheap materials and didn’t concentrate on his work. When the house was finished, his boss gave him the key as a reward. The carpenter felt deeply ashamed, for the house was poorly built with uneven floors and a leaky roof. This story inspires me deeply. A bad attitude will only bring regret. In study and life, I will hold a serious and responsible attitude, try my best to do everything well, and avoid making the same mistake as the carpenter. 范文中文翻译 良好的态度带来好结果 老木匠的故事清楚地表明，态度决定着我们工作和生活的质量。 这位木匠为公司辛勤工作了一辈子。当他即将退休时，老板让他再建最后一座房子。但木匠却产生了糟糕的态度——他羡慕别人住着漂亮的房子，而自己却只能住小公寓。于是他使用廉价的材料，工作也不专心。房子建好后，老板把钥匙作为奖励送给了他。木匠深感羞愧，因为这座房子建造得很粗糙，地板不平，屋顶还会漏水。 这个故事深深启发了我。糟糕的态度只会带来遗憾。在学习和生活中，我会秉持认真负责的态度，尽最大努力做好每件事，避免重蹈木匠的覆辙。 素材积累 核心短语 concentrate on 集中注意力于 take over 占据；接管 to the best of one’s ability 尽某人最大努力 have faith in 对……有信心 give up 放弃 look forward to 期待 be ashamed of 为……感到羞愧 perfunctory attitude 敷衍的态度 serious and responsible 认真负责的 avoid mistakes 避免错误 negative emotions 负面情绪 reflect on oneself 自我反思 correct mistakes 改正错误 careless attitude 粗心的态度 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 The story of the carpenter teaches us that ________. The story of the carpenter teaches us that a good attitude is crucial for success. I used to ________, but now I ________. I used to be perfunctory in homework, but now I concentrate on it and check carefully. To hold a good attitude, we should ________ and ________. To hold a good attitude, we should be serious about tasks and avoid negative emotions. A bad attitude will ________, while a good attitude can ________. A bad attitude will lead to regret, while a good attitude can bring positive results. If only ________, the carpenter would not have ________. If only the carpenter had kept a good attitude, he would not have lived in a poorly built house. 好句集锦 1.Attitude is like a mirror—what you give is what you get. 2.A good attitude is not only a kind of quality but also a kind of ability to achieve success. 3.The worst mistake is not making mistakes, but having a bad attitude towards mistakes. 4.Seriousness is the foundation of a good attitude, and responsibility is the core of it. 谚语 1.Pride goes before a fall.（骄兵必败——警示不良态度的后果） 2.Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well.（任何值得做的事都值得做好——强调认真态度的重要性） 3.Diligence is the mother of success, and a good attitude is the father.（勤奋是成功之母，良好态度是成功之父——契合主题） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：主题阐释 The old carpenter’s story tells us the importance of a good attitude. The carpenter worked hard all his life, but when he was about to retire, he ________ (态度转变，如developed a bad attitude). He ________ (行为表现1，如used cheap materials) and didn’t concentrate on his work because he ________ (原因，如envied others living in nice houses). Finally, he found the house he built was for himself. He felt ashamed because ________ (结果，如the house was poorly built). From this story, I learn that ________ (感悟，如a good attitude leads to good results). I will ________ (行动，如hold a serious attitude towards everything) in the future. 版本二：态度转变经历 I once had a bad attitude towards ________ (事情，如group projects). I was lazy and didn’t take it seriously, which made our project fail. I felt ashamed and remembered the old carpenter’s story. I decided to change. I started to ________ (行动1，如take responsibility) and ________ (行动2，如concentrate on the work). I also communicated actively with my teammates. Finally, ________ (结果，如our next project was a great success). This experience taught me that ________ (感悟，如a good attitude is crucial). I will ________ (行动，如keep this attitude in study and life) from now on. 版本三：提出建议 A good attitude is important for our growth. Here are some useful suggestions to develop a good attitude. First, we should ________ (建议1，如be serious about every task) and not be perfunctory. Second, we need to ________ (建议2，如concentrate on what we are doing) to avoid mistakes. Third, when we make mistakes, we should ________ (建议3，如reflect on ourselves and correct them in time). Let’s take these suggestions. I believe that with a good attitude, we can ________ (好处，如achieve our goals) and become better. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $