Unit 2 写作表达升格——描写标志性动物、景物-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册五维课堂教师用书word（人教版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦标志性动物/景物说明文写作，系统梳理说明文客观性、知识性、说明性的文体特点，涵盖外表特征、生活区域、生活习性等描写维度，通过总分结合、特征说明、重点突出三种写作方法搭建支架，并提供21个核心句型储备，结合典题指导与练习任务，形成“理论-方法-实践”的完整学习链。 该资料以“语言能力”提升为核心，通过大熊猫写作实例（如过去分词作状语、让步状语从句）强化语言表达准确性，融入中国文化元素（如国宝大熊猫、喀纳斯湖）培育“文化意识”。写作方法指导（如重点突出法用比喻拟人）助力“思维品质”发展，知识储备与范文为学生提供自主学习策略，课中辅助教师高效教学，课后帮助学生查漏补缺，提升学习能力。

描写标志性动物/景物 [素养提升] 一、文体特点 描写标志性动物/景物的文章属于说明文。说明文是一种客观地介绍事物的属性、特征以及事物发生、发展过程的文章，具有客观性、知识性和说明性。描写标志性动物/景物的说明文通常从外表特征、功能设计、生活区域、生活习性和种群现状等方面介绍和说明要描写的动物/景物。 通常来说，说明文陈述的是客观事实，不需要发表个人见解，抒发个人情感，但对于目标动物/景物的外表特征和人们对其评价方面，可用一些形象、生动的语言描绘，比如lovely, cute, kind, honest, powerful, grand, practical, environmental 等。 二、写作指导(以标志性动物为例) 描写标志性动物时有以下几种写作方法可以采用： (1)总分结合法 采用总分结合法描写动物时，要注意总述与分述之间的关系。分述部分要紧紧围绕总述的内容来写，包括动物的外表、栖息地、食物来源等方面。此外，分述要有一定的顺序。 (2)特征说明法 采用特征说明法描写动物时，一般先介绍动物的某一特征，再说明该特征的作用或说明为什么会具有这样的特征。接着用同样的方式介绍动物的其他特征。 (3)重点突出法 采用重点突出法描写动物时，首先要仔细观察此动物，找出它与众不同的地方并加以描述。其次在描述动物最主要的特点时，可采用比喻、拟人等修辞手法，使重点更加突出，给读者留下深刻的印象。 三、知识储备 1．...is an animal that/ which lives in the mountains. It feeds/lives on... 2．...is known as the national treasure of China. 3．Therefore, ... can find ... easily, which they like to eat very much. 4．...is one of the rare animals in the world, which is loved by both the Chinese and the people around the world. 5．To protect the..., measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves. 6．With a wide distribution around the country, they are undoubtedly... 7．Having a population of... around the world, they are reputed to be... 8．While touring the Qinghai­Tibet Plateau, the chances are that you'll come across... 9．Almost all of them living in high mountains and preferring a quiet life, seldom do we... 10．Being cute and tender, pandas are the symbol of... 11．As is well known to us, elephants are highly social and intelligent animals. 12．Due to the destruction of natural habitat, the number of... has declined sharply. 13．It is generally...metres tall. 14．It weighs about... kilos/tons. 15. They live in... 16. They like living in groups. 17. They mainly feed on... 18. Now the number of...is decreasing. 19. Today the species is on the edge of extinction. 20. It's time for the world organization to take measures to protect them from dying out. 21. To protect the ..., we should take measures to set up some nature reserves. [典题指导] ►[写作任务] 假定你是李华，你校报社正在开展以“The Iconic Animals of China”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：动物名称、特征描述、生活区域、生活习性等。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ►[审题谋篇] 定体裁 说明文 定人称 以第三人称为主 定时态 以一般现在时为主 定要点 及结构 第一段：开门见山地点出中国标志性的动物名称，然后介绍它的外表特征和人们对它的印象； 第二段：客观描述它的生存空间和生存方式； 第三段：紧扣动物保护这个热点话题，描述动物的生存现状以及我们应该采取的保护措施。 ►[佳作展示] Regarded as a national treasure of China as well as the symbol of peace and harmony between man and nature 　[1], giant pandas are beloved by people around the world for their striking black and white coats and charming behavior. Most of them live in Southwest China, where they mainly feed on bamboos. They spend more than 12 hours eating and the rest of a day sleeping. Although they look fat and walk slowly, it is no difficult for them to climb trees.　[2] However, because of hunting, disease, the destruction of their natural habitat and so on, the number of giant pandas in the wild has fallen sharply.The good news is that the government has taken effective measures to protect them and their habitat. [名师点评] 本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，符合说明文的写作要求。文章层次清晰，逻辑分明，介绍了中国的标志性动物大熊猫的地理分布、生活习性及现状。 [1]画线部分为过去分词短语作状语，regard 与其逻辑主语giant pandas 之间为动宾关系。 [2]本句为主从复合句，Although 在此引导让步状语从句，主句为“it is＋adj.＋for sb.＋动词不定式”结构。 [学以致用] 假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Tom被中国新疆的喀纳斯湖的美景吸引，想来喀纳斯湖旅游，发邮件向你询问有关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.合适的交通工具； 2.合适的时间(6月份或9月份)及原因； 3.需要带的东西。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：喀纳斯湖Kanas Lake 阿尔泰 Altay [参考范文] Dear Tom， I'm glad to know that you like the beauty of Kanas Lake and want to go there. Welcome to China. The scenery of Kanas Lake is indeed beautiful. It is in the northwest of China and it is very far. You can first take a plane to Altay and then take a bus to Kanas Lake, which can save time. In order to avoid the crowded travellers you'd better go there in June or in September. If you go there in June, you can enjoy green hills and green water. If you go there in September, you can enjoy golden leaves and amazing weather. Because during the two periods it is a bit cold, you need take a warm coat. Besides, you can taste the local delicious food. Looking forward to your coming. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $