内容正文:
想象类作文
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一、文体特点
想象类作文是一种创造型写作,属于开放式作文的一种。想象类作文不但考查考生的语言能力,也从很大程度上考查考生的思维能力。此类作文一般会给考生一定的素材或主题,属于提纲类作文的范畴。
二、写作指导
要写好想象类作文,应做到以下几点:
1.观察生活,熟悉生活。想象不是胡编乱造,而要基于实际生活。只有熟悉生活,仔细地观察生活,才能有想象的原材料。
2.明确中心思想,展开想象。动笔写想象类作文之前要先明确中心思想,即写作目的。在这个基础上列出提纲,写出段落主题句。写主题句时要注意:一个段落只能有一个主题句;主题句必须精练、具体化;尽可能选择恰当、高级的词语进行概括。
3.想象美好,立意深刻。想象类作文必须要有一个积极的中心思想。如果只是编造一个热闹离奇的故事,想象就失去了意义。
4.前后照应,符合逻辑。不管想象的空间有多大,都要做到符合逻辑,条理清晰,这对于写好此类文章尤其重要。
5.语言规范,表达地道。选用自己熟悉的词汇和句型写作。
三、知识必备
常用表达句式
1.开头部分
It is really difficult for me to make predictions about the future.
The future life is beyond imagination.
Welcome to the future by the Time Machine.
It's possible/probable/likely that...
I often dream about...
2.主体部分
With the development of science..., our life will surely be...
In the future more and more...will appear.
People will lead a carefree life.
The living environment will be cleaner and more satisfactory.
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for their holiday, and some scientists will live under the sea.
Every day we can ask the robot to do the housework, cook and so on.
If we can only get 3 hours of sleep a day, we will need a sleeping machine.
This kind of machine is programmed and controlled by a computer. Once you press the button it will...
3.结尾部分
This is the life that I am looking forward to.
...will come true sooner or later.
What an amazing trip to...!
[典题指导]
►[写作任务]
你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“未来的新型城市”的英语讨论活动。请根据下列要点,发挥自己的想象力,用英语写一篇发言稿。
1.新型城市产生的原因;
2.新型城市的运作模式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. I'm glad to share my view on “the new city in the future”.
Thank you!
►[审题谋篇]
本篇书面表达形式上是一篇发言稿,内容上要求描述未来的新型城市,属于想象类作文,故时态应以一般将来时为主。另外,作为发言稿,应使用较为正式的语言。
文章
主体第一部分阐述新型城市产生的原因
(如海平面上升、土地稀缺等)第二部分介绍其运作模式第三部分展望未来
►[佳作展示]
Good morning, everyone. I'm glad to share my view on “the new city in the future.”
As a result of the rising sea level caused by global warming [1]and exploding population, our cities are becoming too crowded. Therefore, I've come up with the idea of constructing floating cities on the sea to solve the problem.
The floating city will be located on a manmade island, which will be almost entirely covered by plants . [2]Besides, a huge tower in the city center will act both as the workplace and housing for the citizens, so that people will not need to travel to work any more [3]. What's more, the city will use solar, wind, and wave energy to keep it functioning [4] and use its large gardens to supply its citizens with food.
I believe it will come true with the development of science and technology and people's consistent hard work.
Thank you!
[名师点评]
本文是一篇想象类作文,语言流畅,想象合理,涵盖了所有写作要点。除此之外,一些高级词语、结构及句式的使用使文章更加出彩。
[1]过去分词短语作后置定语。
[2]which引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词island。
[3]so that引导的目的状语从句。
[4]“keep+宾语+宾补”结构。
[学以致用]
你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“我的时光机器”的英语故事分享活动。请根据以下要点,发挥自己的想象力,用英语写一篇小故事。
要点如下:
1.时光机器的样子与功能;
2.你乘坐时光机去了哪里,发生了什么,感受如何?
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
My time machine looks like a crystal ball with two buttons. One can lead to the prehistoric period and the other one can lead to the future.
One day, after I pressed the button to the future, the time machine gave out colourful rays, and carried me into the time tunnel. Overwhelmed with excitement and nervousness, I closed my eyes tightly and held my hands firmly. I wondered what the future city would look like.
When I opened my eyes, I arrived in a brandnew floating city, located on a manmade island, which was almost entirely covered in the vegetation. In the city, many strange carriagelike small planes were floating above the ground. When I drove one to visit the city, I felt I went through a beautiful garden. There was a huge tower in the city centre acting both as work place and housing for its citizens. The city used solar, wind and wave power to keep it functioning and used its large gardens to supply food. In this city where robots were easy to see everywhere, people were working busily at a rapid pace and AI, of course, became helpful assistants. After hanging around the city for several hours, the time machine transported me back to reality.
It sounds a little fancy but in my opinion, with high technology developing, our society will become more and more intelligent.
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