内容正文:
城市/城镇介绍
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一、文体特点
城市/城镇是我们生活的场所,学生们对它们很熟悉,对所在城市/城镇的了解可以增加学生的自豪感,学生应该努力推荐自己所在的城市/城镇,让读者了解它们的优点。
二、语言特点
城镇介绍类的文章一般以现在时为主,通常使用第三人称。在介绍城镇时,描写语言一定要准确、具体、细致,介绍用语要地道,可适当使用较高级的复合句,尽量做到简单明了,清晰有序。
三、结构特点
第一段——总体介绍。
第二段——具体介绍。
(1)地理位置
(2)面积
(3)人口
(4)气候
(5)著名之处
第三段——总结
四、知识储备
1.常用词汇
(1)border接壤
(2)location位置
(3)be known as/for作为/因为……而著名
(4)beautiful scenery美丽风景
(5)spring all the year round四季如春
(6)have a population of有……人口
(7)have/cover an area of面积为
(8)be located in/be situated in.../lie in...位于……
(9)tourist attraction旅游景点
(10)economy has been developing rapidly
经济迅速发展
(11)convenient transportation交通便利
(12)historical site古迹
2.常用句型
(1)It is a big and modern city with a population of...
这是一座现代大都市,人口……
(2)It used to be a small town, where people made a living by...
它曾是一座小镇,人们以……而谋生。
(3)Located in/on/among...,the city/town is...
坐落于……,这个城市/城镇……
(4)People love the city, and they will make it a better place.
人们喜欢这座城市,他们将把它建成一个更好的地方。
(5)It has developed very fast in the past years, more and more people come here to seek opportunities.
在过去的几年里,它发展迅速,越来越多的人来此寻求机遇。
(6)There are many tourist attractions here; lots of people come here for holidays.
这里有很多旅游景点;很多人来此度假。
(7)I have been living in the city since I was small. I witnessed all the things that happened in this city.
小时候起我一直住在这座城市,目击了所发生的一切事情。
(8)All of these are good for people's communication. The city's change reflects people keep pace with time.
所有这些有利于人际交往,这座城市的变化反映了人们与时俱进的精神。
3.写作模板
I live in 1. ________ , which is a city located 2. ________ .
It covers/has a total area of 3. ________ square kilometres with a population of 4. ________ . It has many worldfamous places of interest, such as 5. ________ and ________ . People in ________ can enjoy typical tropical climate, which is so pleasant that every year, many tourists come here to enjoy the beautiful scenery, among which 6. ________ is the most popular.
I like my hometown very much. Welcome to my hometown.
1.名称 2.位置 3.面积 4.人口 5.名胜
6.著名景点
[典题指导]
◆[写作任务]
假如你的家乡是山西太原,请根据要点介绍太原的基本情况。包括太原的城市概况(位置、气候、面积、人口),以及特色等。
内容包括:
1.面积:约7000平方公里;
2.人口:约435万;
提示词:山西面食Shanxi pasta
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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◆[写作指导]
1.写作分析
第一段:指出要介绍的城市——太原。
第二段:介绍太原的城市概况(位置、气候、面积、人口)以及特色。
第三段:介绍自己生活在太原的感受。
2.词汇和句型
面积为:have an area of
各种各样的:a variety of
独特的位置和食物:the unique position and food
不但……而且……:not only... but also...
3.范文赏读
I have been living in Taiyuan, which has a long history, since I was born.
Taiyuan is the capital of Shanxi, whose climate is pleasant. It has an area of about 7, 000 square kilometres. And it has a population of about 4.35 million. There is a variety of delicious food in Taiyuan, among which the most famous is Shanxi pasta.
I like living in Taiyuan not only for the unique position and food but also for the friendly people. Welcome to Taiyuan.
◆[结构点评]
本文使用一般现在时,人称为第一人称,文章段落层次分明。
第一段:引出话题。第二段:详细介绍太原的城市概况。第三段:表达自己对家乡的热爱。
◆[语言点评]
①which引导的非限制性定语从句介绍太原的气候。
②there be句式介绍城市特色。
③among which引导的非限制性定语从句介绍太原的美食。
④not only... but also...介绍太原吸引人之处。
[跟踪训练]
假定你是李华。你的笔友Peter要到你所在城市的一所大学学习中文,他来信询问这个城市的有关情况。请写一封回信,要点如下:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍城市情况(气候、交通、饮食等);
3.愿意帮助,鼓励进步。
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Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to know you will come to study here. Welcome to our city!
Here is something you want to know. The city is famous for its mild weather, neither too hot nor too cold. The average temperature is about 20℃. The transportation is very convenient. We are lucky to have varieties of choices such as taking a bus or a taxi, riding a bicycle or taking the underground railway. As for the food, I dare say it is international, varying from local snacks to the tastes all over the world.
I'm sure this city won't let you disappointed and you will definitely lead a happy life here. If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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