内容正文:
书信
[素养提升]
一、文体特点
书信属于应用文,包括自荐信、邀请信、投诉信、感谢信、介绍信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信等。写给编辑的信属于书信的一种。书信内容要具体明确,必须将需要传达的信息表达清楚,以免对方产生误解。语言要有礼貌且谦虚。
二、结构特点
此类文章分为五部分
(1)信头:写信人的姓名和地址要写在右上角,收信人的姓名和地址要写在左上角。有时此部分可省略。
(2)称呼:一般用Dear Editor。
(3)正文:信件的主要内容。首先提出问题,然后分析问题并作决定,接下来写出自己的具体行动,最后表明希望看到的改变后的结果并礼貌地结束全文。
(4)信尾客套语:Sincerely/Truly yours,Yours sincerely/truly,Yours等。一般写在信的右下角或左下角。
(5)签名:一般写在客套语的下面。
三、知识储备
常用表达句式
I didn't feel...
我感觉不……
I have difficulty/trouble(in)doing.../with...
我在……方面有困难。
I made up my mind to.../(was) determined to/decided to...
我下定决心/决心/决定……
I realised that...
我意识到……
I stopped...
我停止了……
I feel more...
我感觉更加……
I get...through...
我通过……变得……
[典题指导]
►[写作任务]
假定你是李华,你校英语校报编辑正在就“Healthy lifestyle”这一主题面向全体学生征稿。请你根据以下内容给编辑写一封信。
写作要点:
1.指出不良习惯:熬夜玩手机;
2.作出决定;
3.提出具体行动;
4.表达预期结果。
注意:1.要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
►[审题谋篇]
这是一封给编辑写的书信,围绕“Healthy lifestyle”主题,面向全体学生征稿,从内容上看本文应包括四个主要内容;本文宜用一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时,第一部分:介绍不良习惯,及造成的后果。第二部分:作出决定,改掉不良习惯。第三部分:制定具体措施。第四部分:坚定信心,定能成功。
►[佳作展示]
Dear_Editor,
I'm troubled by a serious problem. Recently I have been very sleepy in class and have had no energy to do anything,which has greatly affected my health and study. After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always relaxed by staying up playing phone games. As a result, I lacked energy and passion in the daytime. But now I have made up my mind to change this situation. I will arrange the time of using mobile phone reasonably. Instead, I will read some relaxing books and take a warm bath before going to bed, which may help me get a sound sleep. I believe I will become energetic again and enjoy my study and life as before.
Best_wishes.
Yours,
Li_Hua
►[名师点评]
本文要点齐全,结构完整,层次清晰,句式多样,词汇丰富:
(1)本文使用了较高级的复杂句(含which引导的定语从句)。
(2)本文使用了宾语从句。
(3)greatly affected,lacked energy,reasonably,a sound sleep,energetic等词汇使用比较高档。
(4)as a result,instead,等过渡词汇的使用使句子连贯流畅。
[学以致用]
假设你是李华。最近,杂志Healthy Life就中学生的生活方式进行征稿。请你给编辑发一封电子邮件投稿,包括以下内容:
(1)过去你的生活方式以及问题所在;
(2)你做出改变的方法;
(3)最后的结果。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
Dear Editor,
Here I would like to share my story with you. As my study stress grew, there was a time when I couldn't sleep at night. Worst of all, I started smoking and became addicted.
One day, I suddenly became aware that if left unchecked,my bad habits would make me fail. Therefore, I decided to change myself. Whenever I wanted to smoke, I chose to play basketball instead. Besides, I got up early to take exercise every day.
Now, there is no doubt that I am in high spirits,concentrating on my study.
Yours,
Li Hua
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